My 1st Story: Stay Inside

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  1. Lastboy11

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    @Lastboy11, age: 14
    @Slayer2546 age: 16
    @MariaPlaysMC age: 14
    @Katy9078 age: 15
    @LouiseXminerX age: 14 (Because she inspired me)
    I will take requests to add
    characters! ;)

    CHAPTER 1


    "KEEP YOUR CHILDREN INSIDE!" The reporter boomed to the cameras. "Ugh, because mom watched this, we aren't aloud to go too the movies!" Last moaned. "We should sneak out." Maria said, everyone looked at her because that was the last thing she would do. Maria had straight A's in school, her parents trusted her and she never, EVER, would do something like sneaking out. "What if we get caught?" Asked Slayer. "It's better then being stuck in a two story 8x8 meter house!" Katy snapped. At that moment, Louise walked in, she had popcorn and popsicles. "Suprise!" She yelled. Let's turn of this crap and watch Naruto!" Last yelled, he felt proud that he came up with the idea. Just as he got the remote in his hand, the brick smashed the window and landed on the night stand, crushing it. Katy and Louise screamed. "Holly frick!" Slayer yelled. Last walked up to the brick, he noticed that there was a piece of paper on it. Last brought the paper to his friends. They all read it. There were only six words on the whole paper: "You are one of the missing" just as the group was going to say it was a stupid prank. There was a crash and a scream, coming from the bedroom! The five friends ran over to the bedroom were Last's mother was. What they found, still haunts them too this day. Last's mom, dead, a thin line of blood running out of her mouth. Then Slayer realized something, "Guys..." Slayer said, trembling. "her eyes, they are missing."
     
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    Also! Guys, if you want to be added, just ask tag Lastboy11 with this format
    Forum name:
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    Age (In the story):
     
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  3. Casper

    Casper Durpz pls.

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    Hey! That's a great story you got! May I be added?
    Forum Name: Casper
    Nickname: Casper
    Age: 13
    Thanks! @Lastboy11
     
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    Sure! (Your hair is just awesome btw)
     
  5. Katy_

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    Nice Story!
    Can't for more!
    Nice hair btw =)
     
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    If you're talking about my avatar that isn't me xD
    If you're talking about Casper...;)
     
  7. Katy_

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    D'oh! xD
    Go write some more!
     
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    xD Okay
     
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    @Slayer2546 age: 16
    @MariaPlaysMC age: 14
    @Katy9078 age: 15
    @LouiseXminerX age: 14 (Because she inspired me)
    New Characters:
    @Casper
    The friends stared at the lifeless body of Ms. 11.
    "I will avenge her..." Last said. "Oh that wont be too easy," a voice said from the corner of the room.
    "My mind is tricking me again." Last said, but then he new it wasn't because everyone had fainted, except Louise, who fainted, just as Slayer spotted the thing, it ran off! "SUCKERS!" Yelled the strange thing. "GO!" Yelled Last, they gave chase. Louise woke up and dashed towards the thing which was starting to look like a boy. She caught up with the boy and said "YOU'RE MINE RUNT!" Louise snatched at the dark figure, but here hand just passed right through him. "HE'S A SHADOW!" Yelled Slayer. "Well, looks like figured me out," the boy said. As Last jumped to attack the boy, he melted into the ground. "WHAT THE HELL!?" Yelled Last, "Wait, guys," said Maria, "do you see that light?" "FIRE!" Yelled Slayer, then last realized something, "Guys, why are only the houses on Cheeze Street burning?" The houses of the five friends. Louise sniffeled then sneesed. Last turned around, he stared at Louise for a few seconds, then with a scream, he pulled out his knife, and attacked Louise. "LAST!" Yelled Katy, "THAT IS NOT LOUISE!" He yelled, "LOOK!" They all stared at Louise, "I don't see anything..." Maria said. "Louise's phone is in her right pocket, she's left handed. Her hat is black, not light grey, and Louise's eye's are blue, those eyes are brown." Last said, "Heh heh heh, looks like you figured it out," "Louise" said, "you guys aren't as stupid as I thought you were." There was a poof of smoke, and the figure disapeared just then, Katy spotted the real Louise jogging towards them. "Sorry guys, I called the police and fire deparetment," she smiled, "that fire, is a goner."
     
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    YAY IM IN THE STORY!
    THANKS :D
     
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    "IT'S A SHADOW Slayer said"
    Mommy why
    HELP
    IT'S A SHADOW :O
    XDDDDD
     
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    More please =D
     
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    @Slayer2546 age: 16
    @MariaPlaysMC age: 14
    @Katy9078 age: 15
    @LouiseXminerX age: 14
    @Casper age: ?
    New Characters:
    @Sarahhh

    After the fire department came, they discovered that the fire could not be put out.
    The best they could do was place a wall of Cement around the house that so that the fire doesn't spread. Louise screamed "WHERES MY FREAKING HAMSTER!?" She yelled. "We have to go back in! We can't let Sarah burn! ;-;" Louise screamed. The group decided to split up then go into their own house. An hour later, the group met up again. (Don't even ask how they survived the fire I just couldn't figure out what to do xD).
    Last's backpack:
    A 2 meter sword.
    A Rubik's Cube.
    An extra pair of clothes.
    His Phone.
    Slayer's Pillow Case:
    A few peaces of gum.
    A bow.
    A lot of hats.
    His Phone.
    Maria's bag:
    Hair dye.
    A knife.
    Her iPod.
    A really good book.
    Katy's purse:
    A gun. (.o.)
    Her pet dog. (Boy) (Hero)
    A picture of her boyfriend.
    Louise's pockets:
    Hamster. (Girl) (Sarah)
    Her phone.
    A gun. .o.

    I'm sorry this is really short, it's 12 AM for me. I'll write more tommorow. :D
     
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    Yay!
    I get a gun and a
    picture of Marco =D
     
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  17. IAMINACTIVEBYE

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    What a great way to welcome me back from my cruise!
    Awesome story, keep making those great chapters!