My 1st story: The legend untold.

Inspired by the story's of @LouiseXminerX!

This story is about surviving, friendship, love, and much more.

Starring:​

@svenjongejan2
@LouiseXminerX
@ItsJerry
@ItsHarry
@MrDeathWilliam
@RobyNub1337
@KateVampire
@XenonHD
If you wanna be part of the story, just ask @svenjongejan2

Have fun!

Chapter 1: The crash
Svens View

It was January the 14th when it all hapenend.
Louise, Jerry, Harry, William, Robby and me, Sven, boarded a flight to Santiago.
What they didn't know was this: they got on the wrong flight!
They needed to go to New York. While boarding the plane, Jerry and Harry said together: ''Im so fartcited''
They are used to make funny jokes, but they dont take it to the limit.
We entered the plane, Jerry and Harry in the back of the plane, Willy and Robby infront, and Louise and me in the middle. The gate closed and the airline showed us the safetyvideo. Roby heard from the cockpit they they could takeoff at any moment. "Clear for takeoff" We all got pushed in out seat because of the G-Forces the Boeing 747 gave. Meanwhile in the air we heared the pilot speaking. ''Welcome onboard the flight to Santiago, this flight will take 12 hours and 30 minutes, enjoy the flight, and if you ahve any questions, ask them to the flight attendant.'' I was confused. ''Louise, we are going to New York, right?'' "I think we boarded the wrong flight, we are now going to Santiago.'' In the front of the plane, William and Roby are also confused. ''Roby, we boarded the wrong plane!'' ''Lets just see what happens when we land...''
8 hours later we we're flying over the Amazon. KABOOM. An explosion was heard from the left engine. We saw a huge hole 2 seats before Louise and me. I then realised this: we almost died. While smoke fills the cabin, the plane started to descend. I saw the forest beneath us. We we're going to die. That was what everyone was thinking of us. We heard another explosion, the right engine also exploded. I said this to Louise. ''If we survive, we need to-,'' The plane crashed. I flew to the front of the plane and i was falling, falling into heaven...

TWO HOURS LATER


I feeled pain. Am i in the hell? Did i do something bad? No, i didn't. The pain was from the injury's i got when i crashed. I saw other survivors. I was asking myself what i was doing here, and who i am. Someone runned at me, asking if im oke. Who was he? "Sven, are you oke!?" ''Who are you, where am i!? Then he said ''Dont you remember me, im Jerry, we survived a planecrash, Roby, Louise, Harry and me survived a planecrash!'' I looked around me and saw a giant wreckage of a plane. "How did this happen? "I dont know, follow me, i will bring you to the others." As i followed Jerry, i heard a scream. ''AHHHHHHHHHH, MY DARLING!" I runned to her. I said ''Is someone wounded" "My darling is wounded, please, help me!" I searched for a first aid kit. While i was searching, i was counting the survivors. 3. 6. 7. We have at the moment 7 survivors, and one of them is slowly dying if we dont do nothing...
When i found a first aid kit in the wreckage of the plane, i runned as fast as i can to the victim.
I saw a giant wound and put a bandage around it. I asked ''Whats your name" She said "Im Kate, and this is Xenon, and you are?" "I dont remember who i am, i slammed my head against a wall..." Jerry runned towards me "There you are, i lost you after we heard that scream." Jerry looks at Xenon and lifts him up. "We need to take him to the others, maybe they know what to do with him!" I got dizzy. I felt hungry. I was having a feeling that i almost cant resist, i wanted to runaway from this hell. But then i thought: I cant do this to the others that love me. When we arrived at the others, i got hugged by Louise. "THANKS GOD YOU'RE ALIVE!" I pushed her off me and said "Do i need to know you?" Jerry then said that i lost my memory. The dark was coming, so we did build a little shelter from the wreckage of the plane... I've builded a small bed from leaves, and then i realised this: Where is William!?

To be continued!
If you see some grammar errors, please correct me, i hope you liked the 1st chapter of the story!
If you wanna join, just ask me, i will keep editing this thread to continue till the last chapter...
Enjoy!
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OOooO the end is kinda scary :o anyway very nice I'm waiting to the part 2 :D Thanks for including me in this amazing sotry c:

 

Dont forget to tell Xenon =3

 

Thank you so much for including me in the story, it was great!
Too bad I won't see the rest of the chapters till 30th of Janaury.
But as soon as I come back, I promise I'll read all the chapters no matter how long it takes!
I'll miss you, cya!

 

Cya

 

Chapter 2: Lost in the woods
Starring:
@svenjongejan2
@LouiseXminerX
@ItsJerry
@ItsHarry
@MrDeathWilliam
@RobyNub1337
@KateVampire
@XenonHD

Williams View


I woke up, not knowing where i am. I survived a plane crash, but now i am in the middle of nowhere. I saw smoke from a distance. I tried to walk, but it only hurted. I needed to rest. I heard voices, a lot of voices that we're saying things like Oomba Doomba or Burot Durot repeatedly with a low voice. I saw them walking my way, and i didn't know what to do, and also what they are going to do... They gathered around me and they suddenly lifted me up like, a 'hero'. But why, i dont know. They brought me to a camp, while i kept saying: "What are you doing!?" or "Let me go!" But it seems like they dont speak English... As they put me down on a bed made of leaves, they gave me food. A special treatment, but why, i dont know. Am i like biological food that first treat me fine, and afterwards, they remove tr from treat...
Anyways, as i got treated like a god, a woman walked towards me. She said things i didn't understand. Thats why i also didn't know if i should be feared or calm. Then she started to talk English, she asked things like "What happenend?" and "Are you with others?''
Then she suddenly said to the others this "Moga plyrtem hioqpol William havoclop'' Two mans walked towards and me, and pushed me off my chair. I smashed into the ground with such a force. I think i even broke my nose!. They lifted me up and brought me to a pillar where they tied me really tight. It hurted... as HELL. I tried to get the rope of me, but it only maked it tighter. I was scared and afraid. I closed my eyes and fell asleep, not knowing they we're going to sacrifice me to their gods...



Roby's view

I woke up and saw smoke, and it wasn't from the plane! I waked the others up to tell that there is some smoke in the distance. "Maybe it could be William sending an S.O.S. message, we need to get there ASAP!" Everyone woke up, Sven with a grumpy face. Harry then said ''First we need to search for food, im starving" Everyone got into the forest searching for food. Sven got a rabbit, Louise got some berry's, Jerry and Harry got banana's, Kate found a lake with clean water(Xenon needed to rest) And all i found was some wood that can come in handy. Then i heard someone screaming for help! it was William! I screamed back ''KEEP SCREAMING, THEN I KNOW WHICH DIRECTION I CAN GO!'' As i followed the sound, i avoided some traps. I saw more smoke how closer i got to William. Then houses appeared infront of my eyes. And in the middle there was like a townsquare. WITL WILLIAM TIED TO A PILLAR ALMOST BURNING TO DEATH! I runned towards William trying to unbound him from the ropes. But then people we're running at me with spears in their hands. I whispered something in his ear. "William, please distract them for me, then i can unbound you!'' William was thinking what he could do. Then he got it! "EVERYONE, boys and girls, mans and womans! That is the God od Justice who came to rescue me! It is Robyiana!" A woman then translated it into their language and they stopped holding their spears at me "Thank you for listening, and i got one last thing to say, ADIOS!" William runned away, i followed him. "Willy, WAIT, you dont know where our 'shelter' is, so follow me!" I leaded William to the camp at the wreckage. When we arrived everyone was relieved we we're oke. As we we're having lunch, a storm was coming out way. "Guys, i think we need to hide if we dont wanna be wet!'' Louise was right, 3 minutes later the storm came over and i got into bed, having a jet lag, i was falling asleep slowly dreaming about how it is home.


To be continued!

If you see some grammar errors, please correct me, i hope you liked the 1st chapter of the story!
If you wanna join, just ask me, i will keep editing this thread to continue till the last chapter...
Enjoy!​

 

Nice story. Can I be added?

 

Bad or good guy? (you have the name for a bad guy, i also need one)

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Nuuuu not again

M8 in Turkish my name is womenator don't make me be a bad guy plz ifan

 

KK, i will create a nice role for you =3

 

Yay, ty ^,^

Btw 400 messages

 

Chapter 3: Captured
Starring:
@svenjongejan2
@LouiseXminerX
@ItsJerry
@ItsHarry
@MrDeathWilliam
@RobyNub1337
@KateVampire
@XenonHD

New charachter: @kadinator

Louises view


''Stop, DONT DO IT! It was my fault, not theirs! Stop, please. DONT DO IT! GET AWAY FROM THEM.'' I then heard another voice that wasn't in this room. "Wake up little sweatheart, Jerry and i created a nice breakfast for all of us." My eyes openend slowly when Harry waked me up. "God damn, thank you for saving me from this horribible nightmare i had.'' Was that the right response, i dont wanna scare them... I smelled then my favourite food: Pancakes! I quickly put some clothes on and rushed to the 'table' we made. It was just a carpet. Everyone was awake, except Sven. He turned so grumpy the last time. We talked about lots of things, like NYC. How it was there. Then Xenon said "Remember that song, wrecking ball? That was so hilarious. I mean, who licks a frikking HAMMER!?" My answer to that was this "Our plane got wrecked by a wreckingbaalllllll, We didn't reach New York at all! All i wanted was to shop at a mall! But we chose the wrong flight, to Santiago!''Everyone started laughing, except Sven. All he did was giving of a little growl. "Sven, why are you so grumpy!? Atleast make some fun with us!" I think that was over the limit, since he said "Im gonna take a swim, bye guys..." Then he walked away in the direction of the lake. ''I dont think he likes it in here, u think noone of us does, but we are still having fun together, right?" Everyone said yes to the question of Roby. Then i realised i still didn't eat a pancake, and there where only two left! I inmediatly grabbed a pancake, but then i was asking myself, how did they made this thing!? "So guys, how did you make the pancake?" Harry answered to that question. "We found some chickens and a cow. Chickens give eggs, cows give milk. And we got flower by making it ourselfs!" I grabbed my next pancake. I said with mouth full: "These are delicious!!!!!!!" Then i heard someone screaming, maybe a survivor that got a coma from the crash and now woke up. But i did know this voice, it was Sven! "Guys, that scream, it was from Sven! We need to look if he is oke!'' ''Wait, you heard him scream, i heard nothing, weird..." Aaaarrrgghhh, sometimes Jerry can be so stupid, i swear i heard someone scream! ''Guys, im going to check whats wrong, someone wanna come with me?" William lifted his hand. "Let's go" But then Sven came running to us saying some words. I first didn't understand him. ''R.. Aw.." Raw? As he came closer i could finally hear him clear. "Run away, danger is coming!'' I didn't know what was happening, untill... "You're surrounded, dont move, or get a bullet through your head!" Like soldiers jumped out of the bushes and the wreckage of the plane... "Who is you're leader!?" It was a voice of a woman. Nobody answered. "Seems like you guys don't have a leader. HANDS BEHIND YOUR BACK!" I did what they asked, i was scared, very scared. ''Nr.3 and Nr. 7, put them in the handcuffs!" Two guys - from i guessed between 25 and 30 - walked towards me and the others. ''Bring them to the choppers, and also take their stuff, we might find something in there." As we walked across the lake, Sven tried to punch a guy in the private place, but it horribly failed. ''May i ask a question Random Guys That Suddenly Surrounded Us?" Dont be so dumb Roby, you already know the answer to your question, NO! But then the guy leading Roby to the chappers said: "Only 1 question!'' ''What are you going to do with us!?'' The guy looked at Miss Leader and she used bodylanguage, No. "You will see...'' Then the choppers where in sight. They we're black. Black as the night. There we're three of them. Each chopper has place for 3 hostages. I got put into a chopper with Kate, but there was already another guy. Kate asked to him: "Captured to?" The guy didn't answer. "Im Louise, thats Kate, and you are?" He answered as the choppers got started. "Im Kadinator." I think he is kinda shy. Thats why i didn't talk to him that much. The choppers flew away, to destination unknown.

To be continued!
If you see some grammar errors, please correct me, i hope you liked the 1st chapter of the story!
If you wanna join, just ask me, i will keep editing this thread to continue till the last chapter...
Enjoy!​

 

Can i be addead too ?
I like to be the bad dude !!?!?!?
muwahahwwahhawhhawhahwhahshhdwhahdhs*coughs*muawawawamuawawaw

 

Chapter 4: The Legend
Starring:
@svenjongejan2
@LouiseXminerX
@MrDeathWilliam
@RobyNub1337
@ItsJerry
@ItsHarry
@XenonHD
@KateVampire
@kadinator
NEW CHARACHTER: @Slevin​

Xenons view
"I still can't believe we got captured!" I was in a chopper with William and Sven. I heard Sven making grumpy noises. Don't know why. ''So Mr. Pilot, why dont you tell us where you are taking us!" I looked at William, Sven did the same. Sven said: "Like he is going to answer. If we wait, we will see where he takes us." Then something came in my head. I wishpered it to the others. "What if we take over the cockpit, he is alone, we are with 3." William liked the idea. But Sven, he just shakes with his hands. Oh yeah, we have handcuffs. But its made of iron, if we bunk it against his head... "Oh yeah, let's not forget that he has some weapons." Im so dumb, Sven seems smart. "Psss, William. We need to tell Sven what he was going to do, what hes personality was." "You think so? What if he doesn't believe us?'' Thats a good point. Sven gets angry very fast, or atleast this Sven does. "You know what. Nevermind. I see your point." I looked out of the window and saw mountains. I think this are the Andes. We we're starting to descend. But the weird thing is, we couldn't land anywhere... But then a 'secret entrace' openend in one of the mountains. As we flew in, i saw jails with other people. Are we getting smuggled? As slaves? As we flew deeper into the mountain, we landed. "Get out now!" "Easy dude, im going out!" When i saw Kate, i runned towards her. But there also was someone elso. As i reached Kate, i tried to hug here, but i forgot my handcuffs, just like her. Then all the guards flew out of the room with the choppers. Suspicious. Then i heard like a spray. It smelled sweet, very sweet. I was feeling very drowsy and i fell asleep. When i woke up, i was caught in a cage. I was the second one to wake up. Jerry also woke up. "Jerry, are you oke!?'' "Luckily i am, lets wake the others." I first waked up Kate, when she openend her eyes, i said ''Wub Wub'', and runned towards Willy and Sven. Everyone woke up, except someone i don't know. I tried to wake him up. Louise and Kate said who he was. "that's Kadinator, but he likes to be called Kadin." Kadin woke up, not knowing where he is or who we are. "Hai, im Xenon, and i heard that you are Kadin, right?" "Yes i am Kadin. But i also dont know where i am." Then we heard some footsteps. I saw a guy, he was tall, brown hair, blue eyes, white shirt. "Welcome to Mt.Stark. I am Slevin, and you guys are important. IM-POR-TANT!" Slevin, where do i know that name from? I swear i heard it somewhere. "Guards, open the jail. And you guys, follow me." As we walked towards a cave, i finally could hug Kate. Harry was like, scared. Just like Jerry. Louise seems to be calm. William didn't talk that much, even tho we where allowed to. Roby was looking around, asking some question to Slevin, since Slevin said you may ask anything you want. Sven was walked in the back, as normal as new Sven. And Kate and Me where telling each other jokes about this place. We reached a cave. Slevin stopped. "Oke, this is our destination, if you are scared of the dark, then be scared, since i have a lantern!" We walked 10 minutes into the cave and then he stopped again. ''See that? those pictures?" Wow, i saw wall pictures. My ears started to hurt of the pressure in the mountain. "Look, 8 boys and girls crashed with an iron bird in the forest, and 1 of them was lost in the forest.'' It just got out of Kates mouth. "Are we supposed to be that?'' "Yes you are, and Kadin is that person that was lost in the forest..."

To be continued!
If you see some grammar errors, please correct me, i hope you liked the 1st chapter of the story!
If you wanna join, just ask me, i will keep editing this thread to continue till the last chapter...
Enjoy!
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Me please c:

 

Me
? :(

 

I have a role for you, but thats 2 chapters later... Anyways, today there is gonna be a new chapter. So stay tuned.

 

Thx <3

 

Love this, you should keep continuing this series <3

 

I'm so unpatient right now :D When is the other chapter coming????? I am soo curios