My 4th Story: Soulless Powers

Awesome as usual m8.

 

Going very well :)

 

Another great chapter, as usual!

 

Believe it or not, but we have only about 4 or 3 chapters left.
Once again thanks so much for the nice comments that make me just love making stories more.
When I come back on the cruise, which is about the 30th on this month there's a good chance I'll make another story, but since school will be starting, I may not make a chapter everyday.
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@QueenAngel32
@Katy9078
@Ninjaman4646
@John_0696
@nala
@TheUndeadBrave
@TheBlackHamood
@Casper
@kadinator
@MappyTurtle
@Sarahhh
@Jnitz
@Pacers4Life
Enjoy ^_^

Chapter 13 - The Real Enemy
As Mappy, BlackHamood, Casper, Sarah and Pacer entered the cave Pacer owned, as soon as they entered they noticed a iron door. "That must be where you kept your powers all along!" Mappy cheered. "No! It's not-" "Quiet pip squeak!" Casper shouted. It had some code on the edge of it saying 'H T S R Y P G A M S B H Y O P Y F I I S M S A M B T Y. "Open the door!" BlackHamood demanded. When Pacer leaned against the door, he said some secret sentence that must have been the answer to the code. As the iron doors openned, there were glass windows and dark steams hovering around. "They must be powers!" Sarah realised.
"Sarah, kill him." BlackHamood demanded. Sarah got her knife. "This is all my brothers!" He shouted. "Your brother?" Mappy wondered. "Kadin. My evil brother. He look's like me but he's more evil. He's been trying to capture all the powers in the world so he can kill every human so he can keep earth as his own and turn it into hell." Pacer explained. When he breathed heavily, Mappy and Sarah looked at each other.
Meanwhile, we reached back home and I noticed a red tall cave in the forest. "Was that cave there before?" I wondered. Red steam kept flowing out of it. I ran into it, while Katy, QueenAngel and Undead followed me. When I hid behind a rock, I heard crazy laughter. When I peeked over the rock, someone familiar was there. "I, Kadin the ruler of evil has captured all the hidden powers of earth! Soon these powers will crush everyone and create the world I always wanted!" He laughed. "Kadin?" I wondered. Katy and QueenAngel went behind me, when Undead stepped on a rock accidently. Kadin rapidly turned around, filling his eyes with anger. "RUN YOU FOOLS!" He shot ice out of his hands, almost freezing Undead. He froze the rock we were behind and it broke into tiny ice shards.
As we ran for the exit he turned into a wolf, grabbing Katy. "KATY!" QueenAngel cried. I grabbed Katy's hands to free her, but Kadin was about to enter his teeth into Katy. As I pulled her extra hard, she quickly escaped, making Kadin instead bite the ground. "GRR!" Kadin shouted. Then he turned back to normal, and instead grew wings. "LOOK OUT!" John shouted when he peeked through my backpack. When I looked back I ducked before Kadin could grab me.
As we ran out of the cave, Kadin stopped. "I will turn into a T Rex one day and destroy every single creature. Be prepared Louise, death is coming!" He shouted. Then the cave disappeared in less then a second. Mappy, BlackHamood, Casper, Sarah and Pacer then arrived into a boat. "We found out who's the real enemy." Mappy explained. "We did too!" Katy said. "We've got to take the powers away from him." Sarah said. "But how..." Katy sighed. "Maybe if we tell him it's our birthday he would give us the powers as a birthday gift!" Undead ringed in his idea. "How about we give him fake powers that don't work and pretend its much stronger then the others and we can trade it for the real powers!" QueenAngel suggested. "These idea's won't work. He's too smart for those, we need something that would confuse him." I said. We all were thinking for a minute, until I got a plan.
I whispered to everyone, telling them who's doing what. As we all knew what to do, we rested and waited for the morning. However, I couldn't sleep, because there was one trouble that kept hovering around in my mind: What if he turn's into a T Rex in the morning?
To Be Continued...
Only 3 chapters left, which mean's I won't need any characters. Sorry ;-;
The reason why the story couldn't be longer is because I'm worried that I won't have enough time to finish it before the cruise.
And since I go on the cruise on the 16th, your probably wondering why I can't do 6 more chapters instead. Well I might have to not make a chapter for 1 or 2 days or I might be really busy, so I think 3 more chapters would be fine.
Sorry if this story was a bit short, but I hope you are enjoying it so far.
Thanks For Reading!!! :D
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It's good as always c;

 

Plz tell me there's and ending where I turn out good xP. Anyway loving this story.

 

Can i also get a role in the story?

PS, this story is awesome

 

Great chapter! Can't wait for the next 3.

 

I may need ideas for the next story ;)
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@QueenAngel32
@Katy9078
@Ninjaman4646
@John_0696
@nala
@TheUndeadBrave
@TheBlackHamood
@Casper
@kadinator
@MappyTurtle
@Sarahhh
@Jnitz
@Pacers4Life
New Character:
@svenjongejan2
Yes, I was kind enough to put you in the story :)
But it's going to be extremely hard to put more people in the story since there's so many already.
But anyway, Enjoy :D

Chapter 14 - The Chance
As I woke up half awake, I saw a reindeer sniffing me. I jumped with shock. The rest woke up. "Aww, a little reindeer." Katy said in a squeaky voice. "What's it doing here?" John wondered. The reindeer pointed in a direction then ran. "It's showing us something, come on!" I said.
As we finally caught up with it, we saw a huge cave, twice the size of a T Rex. "Let's call the reindeer Sven!" QueenAngel suggested. We all agreed. "You know the plan, right?" I said.
BlackHamood dressed up like some old wizard, with a case with fake steam. "Why do I have to do this..." He mumbled. "Beware! This power contain's evilness and curse! The one who is the most evil shall take this power!" He said in a crackly voice. Kadin went outside. "What kind of power is this?" Kadin shouted. "Ehmm... A legendary power! Where you turn into a God!" He shouted. "Hmm... Sounds interesting." He thought for a moment. "Come if you want the power, come" BlackHamood stepped back a couple of times, making Kadin exit the cave. Then, me, Katy , QueenAngel and Pacer entered the cave. We saw the iron door, so Pacer tried to unlock the code. As the door's opened, there were 5 powers at the back. "That must be Mermaid mode, Wolf mode, Angel mode, Ice mode and T Rex mode!" QueenAngel cheered. I quickly got a knife and created a hole through the glass, big enough to fit my arm in. I grabbed all the powers, then suddenly they went through my arm.
I felt the powers growing inside of me. Then, I felt just like when I had my powers. "Woooow..." Pacer said. "How much for this power?" Kadin asked. "Umm... Ehmm..." BlackHamood started to panic. "Wait, I know that voice..." Kadin realised. He turned around and zapped a purple electric straight at us, but Sven jumped making him get electrocuted. "SVEN!" I cried. Sarah then quickly carried him into the forest, doing whatever she can to heal him.
Then Mappy and Undead charged into Kadin without him noticing, making him fall to the ground. We all then escaped into the forest just before he woke up. "GRRR..." He shouted.
"That was close!" I sighed. "He ain't doing very well..." Sarah sighed. Sven wasn't breathing. "We need to defeat Kadin tonight so he can turn back to normal, then he can give us one of his powers to heal him. If we fail too, poor little Sven here may... have a grave." Sarah looked down. "Louise, how about we all try and attack Kadin, and if he hurts you, you can then turn into a T Rex!" Casper suggested.
We all agreed, then when night fell I turned into a wolf. Everyone seemed amazed. "Well goodnight, don't get hair all over me Louise." Mappy laughed. When everyone slept, I went out of the forest staring into the moon. I sighed. Then I noticed someone coming. I turned around and it was Nala with bandages all over here. "You stepped on me you know..." She sighed. "Oh, sorry." I said. "Listen, I'll help you tomorrow with your little battle with Kadin, but I'll only help you at the right time, okay?" She said. "Right time?" I wondered. "I see people coming, you should hid in the forest since you are a wolf." She said. Then she ran." Wait!" I cried. I zoomed back into the forest, back where everyone was sleeping.
I noticed BlackHamood giggling, probably dreaming, so I fell asleep, but turn's out he was wide awake.
To Be Continued...
Can't you believe it? 2 more chapters before the story finishes...
Leave your feedback below, but if you want to be in the story, I'll try my best to fit you in the story.
After Chapter 15 however I cannot accept any more characters, so if you want to be in the story, then quickly comment now.
Thanks For Reading!!! :D​

 

Uhh, can I get a return? xD

 

Things are getting intense!

 

@LouiseXminerX Thank you for putting me in, i love my role as much as the story =3

 

I love this. Thanks for adding me By the way,

 

He he. no problem!

No problem :)
If you didn't know, the next chapter is going to be the last chapter, so remember to probably be online tomorrow or the day after to check out the final chapter ^_^
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@QueenAngel32
@Katy9078
@Ninjaman4646
@John_0696
@nala
@TheUndeadBrave
@TheBlackHamood
@Casper
@kadinator
@MappyTurtle
@Sarahhh
@Jnitz
@Pacers4Life
@svenjongejan2
This chapter is probably a little big bigger then the others,
But anyway, Enjoy ^_^

Chapter 15 - The Battle
As we woke up, I realised Jnitz, standing in the distance. As I walked closer to him, I turned back to human. "Louise, Kadin has turned into a T Rex and is ruining town, trying to find you. You must defeat it before it could wipe out the whole town." Jnitz explained. I nodded, then I looked at the others that were sleeping. "WEEEEEEEEEEZ!" I screamed in my super squeaky voice, waking everyone up. "Guys, it's time." I smiled.
As we entered the town, it looked liked a dump, then I saw a huge T Rex, stepping on every single building. "Okay everyone... CHARGE!" I shouted. We all charged at the T Rex. Mappy quickly climbed Kadin the T Rex onto it's back, trying to command it what to do, but Kadin just kept shaking, making her fall into a garbage can. Katy tried to stomped on its foot, but he just stepped on her. Undead tried to break its leg with a pickle, but he just got stepped on too.
Everyone was unconscious, and I was the only one left. Kadin grabbed me, and threw me at a building. Then my legs grew, a huge tail appeared, then I turned into a T Rex. We wrestled, then I pushed him on a building, making him roar. As he pushed me, I tripped and fell on a truck, which made me turn back to normal.
I used my hands and zapped ice at his legs, making him not able to walk. Then I grew angel wings and slapped him 10 times, but the ice then disappeared and he grabbed me again and threw me all the way to the sea, which turned me into a mermaid. He then marched to the sea, trying to stomp me, but since my fins were powerful, I was always one step ahead of him. But suddenly he launched his hand at me again, making him grab me. Then he blew some weird red electric at the sun, then it turned into a blood moon, making me transform into a new form.
Then, I quickly escaped the hand and saw my reflection in the sea. I saw a red wolf, twice as fast as a normal wolf and twice as powerful and strong as a normal wolf. As I pounced at his belly, I bit it, trying to rip the flesh out, but then he slapped me, making me fall to the ground.
When everyone finally woke up, Sarah quickly zoomed into the forest, checking on Sven. Then she came out shouting "Quick! His heart is starting to stop!" I didn't know what to do, then suddenly he froze. I looked behind, and it was NinjaMan, with his sword backstabbing him on the back.
"NinjaMan!" We all cheered. Everyone crowded him. Kadin then turned to human, and looked a bit more friendly. "What... What happened?" He wondered. "Kadin, please heal this reindeer! We wouldn't be here with him!" Katy cried. "Why of course." Kadin replied. Then, he gave a healing power to NinjaMan, which made him heal Sven. Then Sven came running out with joy, and licked all of us. "I can't keep these powers, Louise I think you diserve them." He explained. Then, all five powers floated to me, but BlackHamood pushed me, making him get the powers. "HA HA! FOOLS! I WAS JUST USING YOU! CASPER! ITS TIME!" He shouted. Since the blood moon was still on, he then turned into a blood wolf, but had red eyes. "His powers are twice as strong as yours Louise, your only option is to run." Jnitz explained, appearing out of no where. We all ran, while BlackHamood chased us. "BlackHamood, we should destroy the world first so they can starve to death." Casper explained. "Good idea..." He said with a monster voice. He then charged into the city, chasing people.
When we all catched our breath, we all got worried. "I knew they were going to betray us..." Mappy shouted. Everyone sighed. "Louise, maybe we should train." John suggested. "Good idea!" I realised. John explained everyone what to do.
I turned into a wolf then everyone wrestled me.
Suddenly, the sun finally appeared turning me back to normal. But when night came, we were all exhausted. "I think that's enough training for today." I sighed. "Well get some rest and get ready for tomorrow." John explained. We all then rested.
In the morning, I was the first to wake up, but I noticed Pacer running towards me. Sven also woke up. "Louise! *breathe* BlackHamood has *Wheeze* wiped out earth!" He shouted. I hopped on Sven, making him run out of the forest, and this is what it looked like:

To Be Continued...
Can you find Mappy's van? :o
I cannot add any more people to the story, sorry ;-;
Just a reminder: 4 more days until I go on my cruise :o
Leave your feedback below, and remember to be online tomorrow or the day after for the FINAL CHAPTER!
Thanks For Reading!!! :D​

 

I found Mappy's van <:

 

So I'm good? Woohoo!
Can I move to there? McDonald burgers are cheaper.

 

Can't wait for the last chapter!

Btw, thanks for putting me in your last couple stories!

 

Guess what? FINAL CHAPTER
I still can't believe it, but anyway, please enjoy.
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@QueenAngel32
@Katy9078
@Ninjaman4646
@John_0696
@nala
@TheUndeadBrave
@TheBlackHamood
@Casper
@kadinator
@MappyTurtle
@Sarahhh
@Jnitz
@Pacers4Life
@svenjongejan2
Please enjoy, remember to like and post feedback.
I will think about creating a new story after the cruise.

Final Chapter - The World's Last Hope
As I stared into the horror, I just couldn't believe it. When the rest woke up and came to see what I was looking at, Undead fainted. "This can't be..." Sarah said. "According to my laptop, half of the world is destroyed. Half of the population of people is also gone. If we don't protect the other half of earth, the earth would explode making earth gone." Jnitz explained, appearing out of no where behind me. "Those foot prints must be BlackHamoods." Katy pointed. "Guys, I have a plan." I said.
Everyone went everywhere finding pieces of metal on the ground, when I saw a little teddy bear on the ground. Mappy also found her van. "Hey, it still has candy in it!" Mappy realised. Suddenly, my stomach began to growl, and everyone also felt hungry. "Mappy, can we have the candy?" QueenAngel asked. "There's only about 12, which means one of us can't have it." Mappy sighed. I looked at the ground. "You guys can have the candy, but keep looking for metal, I'm going to find more food." I said.
As I walked, I started to get more hungry, suddenly the moon came up and I turned into a wolf. Suddenly, I couldn't control myself, and I stared at everyone, looking for flesh. "Hisss..." I hissed. I walked slowly to sven, who was confused and frightenned. "Louise?" Katy wondered. John hopped out of my backpack. "Louise! Snap out of it!" John shouted. He pulled my ear, but I grabbed him and licked him, but the taste felt raw, so I threw him away. "We've got to find food!" Kadin cried. We all split it, but when I was about to bite on Undead who was still unconscious, who smelt terrible, so I skipped him.
Pacer then found a huge box, and found 100s of pieces of metal. He got his super glue, glueing them together, and created and small little plane. "Everyone! Hop on!" He shouted. Everyone heard his voice and quickly rushed into the plane. "What about Louise?" John cried. "We're just going to have to leave her..." Sarah sighed. "NO!" Katy said. She jumped out of the plane before the plane took off. I stared at her, licking my lips. "Louise. This isn't you! I'll give you food! Just please..." She sighed. I suddenly fell down, breathing heavily. Katy quickly got her backpack, trying to find just 1 piece of food that can save me. She found some rotten meat that looked poisoned. But that caught my eye and I gobbled it up. I then could control myself. "What happened?" I sighed. "Your friends left you cause you were out of control. We've got to go to the other half of earth to find them." She said. I saw Sven then come to me, licking me. "Let's go." I said. Katy climbed on Sven and Sven ran, and I ran too, since I was super fast when I was a wolf.
Meanwhile, the gang in the plane felt worried. "Maybe she ate Katy!" QueenAngel cried. "I just don't feel right leaving her..." John looked down. "Would you prefer to get eaten by a giant wolf or leave alive?" Sarah asked. "I just hope she's al right." John said. Mappy also felt worried, and she felt mad. "THAT'S IT!" Mappy pushed Pacer out of the way, and she drove the plane and turned it around. "I know she's in trouble, everyone hold tight!" Mappy said.
As we ran, I felt a bit sick. "The meat..." Katy said. "The what?" "Before you turned back to normal, you ate some rotten poisoned meat." Katy explained. "Ohh, crap." I said.
Suddenly, after running all night, the sun went up, and I went back to normal. Then, I spotted a plane. "There she is!" Undead cried. The plane went down, and I was so happy. "Louise, are you okay?" John asked. "I'm fine, let's go to the other half of earth now." I said. "Bad news." Jnitz then appeared again. "As soon as we arrive there, a quarter of earth is left, if the plane could go a bit faster, we can just arrive their before earth becomes a quarter." He explained. Then he ran off. "Let's go." I said.
Pacer quickly increased the plane speed. It took a day but we finally made it to the other half of earth, and it looked worst. I saw a huge T Rex in the distance with Casper on it, and I knew that was BlackHamood. "Okay everyone, get ready to charge at him." Pacer said.
The plane landed, and we all ran to the T Rex. I grew wings and I slapped it 20 times, before it slapped me. I fell to the ground, and the T Rex then held his hands in front of me, making a ice cage. Undead got his pickle that was as hard as a rock and broke the ice cage. I flew again up in the sky, but BlackHamood also grew wings and flew up. It punched me to the ground. Then I turned into a T Rex, but he was twice the size of me even when I was a T Rex. I pushed him to a building, but he pushed me and I tripped and slammed onto the ground, turning me back to human.
The rest of the gang kept punching his legs, trying to make him trip, but it just stomped on them all. Then, a huge flood came, and my friends quickly went back to the plane. The water flowed the plane away. They were screaming. I turned into a mermaid and punched his legs, but he stomped on me aswell, turning me into a human. I couldn't breathe, and before I drowned, I heard a shout. "LOUISE!" The voice seemed familiar, and it was like Nala's voice. She threw some weird steam at me, then I grew twice the size of the T Rex. I grew demon wings, and T Rex's tail and my eyes turned red. "The Kaiju form in the strongest form in the whole universe, use it wisely Louise!" Nala shouted.
When I punched BlackHamood, it was so powerful, he slammed into a building and fell. I stomped on him, making him roar. "Get up!" Casper screamed. Suddenly, I felt sick. When the others saw me, Katy screamed. "The meat... it's poisoning her!"
I fell to the ground, feeling terrible. NinjaMan saw me, and he swam across the water. "HEAL!" He shouted. Then he burst a pink flame at me, and I felt much better, but I couldn't get up. The water then finally stopped, so my friends helped me get up. As I got up, I blew a huge red flame at him, crushing him. He finally turned back to normal, but he ran away. I grabbed him before he escaped, then I threw him into a garbage can.
Then I held my hands together up in the sky. The sky finally turned blue, the floor was clean. All of earth was finally complete. I then returned back to human, and I felt so incredible. "Louise! That was sick!" Mappy said. "You were like a god!" Sarah cheered. "Actually she was a god pickle." Undead said. I saw Nala walk slowly to me. I hugged her. "Without you, earth would have been destroyed." I whispered. Then I shook NinjaMan's hand, incredibly fast. "And thanks for making this a adventure." I said. Everyone cheered. "Louise, I may need your powers back..." He sighed. "But..." I said. "Louise, it's time for a normal life again." John laughed. NinjaMan held his hands infront of me, taking all the powers I had out of me, and made John big instead of him small. I saw BlackHamood come out of the trash can food all over him. "Eww..." BlackHamood shouted. Casper also came.
"But no one will forget what you have done." Sarah said. "I may not see you again, but farewell." NinjaMan waved. We all waved then he disappeared, and so did BlackHamood and Casper. "So... now what?" I realised.
We all visited the museum, and I entered a strange looking room that looked like it was just made. Right at the back, I saw a statue of me, and said:
Hero.
The End.
This might be not the best ending since I sorta did rush it since I was super busy.
But I hope you enjoyed Soulless Power, my 4th story.
I wanna thank everyone who was in the story.
I'll miss you all when I go on my cruise on the 16th ;-;
Thank You For Reading
~LouiseXminerX
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First to see last chapter!

 

You've done a good job writing this story! c;