My 4th Story: Soulless Powers

Put me in please!

 

Thanks so much for all the nice comments ^_^
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@QueenAngel32
@Katy9078
@Ninjaman4646
@John_0696
@nalaex
@TheUndeadBrave
@TheBlackHamood
@Casper
@kadinator
@MappyTurtle
New Characters:
@Sarahhh
Enjoy ^_^

Chapter 9 - Another Grand Power
As I entered the water, I became a mermaid and we leaned again the cave's wall to see what was going on in there.
I could see NinjaMan, looking like he was in pain, but then he corner his eye, and he almost zapped a purple lightning at me. "HEY!" I shouted. "LEAVE! NOW!" NinjaMan shouting. We all quickly went back to shore, turning me back into a wolf. "Why is he so angry?" I wondered. "I can answer that." A girl appeared behind us. "I'm Sarah, I can tell you anything about this power of yours." She explained. "Can you tell us why pickles are so big?" Undead asked. "He he, maybe later, but I'll tell you about your powers first, Louise." Sarah said.
"1000s of years ago, earth was full of peace, until a wicked old man known as The Shadow Enemy came and cursed everyone turning them into mermaids and wolves and angels, and making them have ice powers, and many more.
A faithful man known as NinjaMan then took a risk and placed everyones power into his hands.
He hid into his cave for years, and knew he had to give away his power to someone he can trust before he die's due to the powers are getting stronger. I guess he thought you are the one who can have the powers, so he gave them to you, but I'm not sure why he want's them back..." Sarah took a huge deep breath. "Now can you tell me about pickles?" Undead said. "Ok fine" Sarah giggled. When Sarah was waffling about pickles with Undead dribbling, Mappy seemed confused. "Why you? Why not me!" Mappy shouted. "Ask NinjaMan!" I sighed. "Let's just say maybe NinjaMan is a wizard, he used the powers to search for someone that has pride to have such great powers." John suggested. "I'm pride!" Mappy shouted. Suddenly, someone grabbed me from behind. "I HATE YOU! YOUR STEALING EVERYONE FROM ME!" Nalaex shouted. "Let go!" I screamed. She punched me in the head, when suddenly, I grew large, grew huge teeth.
Before everyone in town was screaming, I became a T Rex. I roared. "HOLY SMOKES! A GIANT PICKLE!" Undead screamed. Nalaex seemed speechless. I couldn't control my anger, so I stepped on Nalaex by accident, which made her as squashed as a pancake.
Kadin, still behind a coconut tree heard what Sarah said and me as a giant T Rex, so he quickly hurried into the sea while a diving suit, into the cave.
"I think I need you to take someone's power..." Kadin sneered. NinjaMan turned around, with his eyes blazing with excitement.
He rushed out of the sea, placing his hands together.
I felt dizzy. I saw Ninjaman, looking like he was stealing my energy, then I suddenly hit the ground, shaking a quarter of the earth like an earthquake.
I woke up. Mappy, Undead, Tiny John and Sarah stared at me. "What?" I sighed. "LOUISE!" Katy shouted. Without looking, I realised it was Katy. I thought I was still in my T Rex form or my wolf form, so I quickly dived into the sea. But my legs didn't become fins. I fell down into the sea, feeling that death has arrived.
To Be Continued...
@Jnitz , please don't worry, you'll be in the next chapter
Thanks for all the nice comments that have encouraged me to make a chapter everyday since I don't want all of you waiting for a chapter...
Please leave your feedback below and if you want to be in the story just ask ^_^
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Funny thing is I don't even like pickles.

 

OMG! IT'S PICKLEZILLA!!

 

Ok today I'm going to do something a bit different, so not a chapter today (sorry) But instead I'm going to show you what I look like in the 5 different forms (I might add more forms in the story though.)
I'm sorry if I'm a bad drawer, but atleast you know what I look like in the story.

Just ignore the bad drawing. Well now atleast you have an idea about the story, soooo yeah ^_^
Maybe some nice feedback wouldn't have to make me think this is terrible.
I did notice that in my last chapter, @TheUndeadBrave called me a giant pickle, so you expect me green when I'm a T-rex form, but um... he doesn't know the different between green and red, k?
But please no hate, next chapter coming tomorrow or possibly the day after.

 

Fek im a bad guy. Can't wait for next chapter keep them coming!

 

Before you read this chapter, your probably thinking I'm not dead since why the hell is there another chapter?
Well maybe this chapter is about me in heaven.
Just read and you'll find out ;)
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@QueenAngel32
@Katy9078
@Ninjaman4646
@John_0696
@nala
@TheUndeadBrave
@TheBlackHamood
@Casper
@kadinator
@MappyTurtle
@Sarahhh
New Character:
@Jnitz
Enjoy ^_^
And hooray for Chapter 10!

Chapter 10 - Death?
As I landed on the ocean floor, something grabbed me, then I felt the sand under my hands.
As I finally woke up, with everyone's face all shocked around me, I was confused. "Am I dead?" I wondered. "No..." Undead said.
I stood up. "I thought I died in the ocean..." I said. Then, someone appeared behind me. "I'm Jnitz, the one who saved you. I'm not on your side nor your enemies. I'm here to research about you, Louise." He explained. My eyes grew large with confusion. "Farewell, my only hint to you is to stay alive." Then he ran off. "Um." I mumbled.
Then, I saw Nala, near the streets. I rushed to her. "You know what, I kind of think your powers are cool... Can you maybe make a ice pony for me?" Nala asked. "Sure Nalaex" I said. "Don't call me that, I'm not Nala." She explained.
As I held my hands infront to create a ice pony, nothing happened. "Umm... Create a ice pony!" I demanded. I held my hands out again, but nothing happened. "Just cause I was mean to you before doesn't mean you have to be mean to me!" Nala shouted. "I don't understand..." I wondered. "FINE! We can be enemies for as long as you want Louise!" Nala then quickly marched to the super markets.
I saw Katy and QueenAngel, on the beach, walking. "I can't keep this power away from them anymore!" I shouted. "LOUISE! WAIT" John shouted. I ignored him and went to the girls.
"I thought you don't want to see us anymore..." QueenAngel sighed. "No! I need to show you something." I said. The sun suddenly went down, I waited until I could turn into my wolf form, but nothing happened.
I waited for about 10 minutes, but not a single thing happened. "What is it?" Katy wondered. "Umm... Mappy throw me up in the air!" I demanded. She grabbed my legs and then threw them up, but my wings did not grow. Then I fell on my face on the sand. "... Undead punch me!" I shouted. "Why? I don't like hurting people..." Undead whined. "JUST DO IT!" I shouted. He then punched me really hard in the face. I got ready to turn into a T Rex, but once again, nothing happened. "What?" I mumbled. "Okay, your getting more weird. If you don't want to be friends with us anymore, fine. Come on Katy." QueenAngel sighed. Katy followed her, while she kept looking back at me with a sad face.
"NinjaMan must have taken your powers away..." Sarah explained.
"But why?" I wondered. "Because of a dark soul of evil." Suddenly, Jnitz appeared again.
"Some dark force is controlling him. Possibly using him to take your powers then give it to this mad person." Jnitz explained.
"We've got to find NinjaMan!" Mappy shouted. "But he's dangerous! Sarah shouted.
I didn't have a choice. I ran to the nearest forest, while everyone ran after me.
To Be Continued...
We're possibly half way through the story already o.o
Time flies by, doesn't it? ^_^
Anyway, please leave your feedback below, also a like too to show your support
and fell free to ask to be in the story below, Just hopefully not too many people is in the story or it would be chaos.
But I'll let you know when I don't need anymore characters. Possibly 5 more people would be fine.
Thanks For Reading!!! :D​

 

Just for fun, i added a 6th form :) @LouiseXminerX


sorry it looks sloppy, i was drawing this while sick :c

 

Oh wow, that looks amazing :O
Thanks so much, it looks awesome ^_^
And I wonder what would happen if this was in Mod Mayhem O.O
That would be interesting ;)

 

Funny thing is I am color blind.

Also, another great chapter Louise!! This story is really good!

 

Can I be added ^-^

 

Chapter 11, yaay ^_^
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@QueenAngel32
@Katy9078
@Ninjaman4646
@John_0696
@nala
@TheUndeadBrave
@TheBlackHamood
@Casper
@kadinator
@MappyTurtle
@Sarahhh
@Jnitz
New Character:
@Pacers4Life
Enjoy ^_^

Chapter 11 - Not What It Seems
As I rushed past the tree's and bushes, I past by a cave. I took some steps back and I saw it. As I sneaked in, NinjaMan seemed to be in alot of pain. "Grrr.... ARRG!" He cried. A purple steam went inside of him, turning his eyes red. "Oh crap..." I said in my mind.
Everyone then went behind me, when Undead fell over. Ninjaman turned around less then a second. "He he he... I'll rule the world! THE WORLD!" He shouted. "Snap out of it!" I cried.
He shot ice missiles at me, but they just missed me. He then turned into the wolf when the moon came up. "He is the one who stole your powers!" Sarah cried.
We ran out of the cave when suddenly it disappeared. "We've got to stop him." Mappy said. We all agreed, accept for me. "Didn't you hear what Jnitz said? He said a dark power is controlling him, so we need to find out who is doing it." I explained. "We don't have time to see who it is! We need to kill him to restore peace to the world." Mappy shouted.
I sighed. "Well I'm going to find out who it is." I shouted.
I marched out of the forest, while John peeked out of my backpack. "You can't leave them!" He shouted. "If they ain't going to listen to be, then so be it." I sighed.
I saw Katy and QueenAngel, and that's when I had an idea. I rushed to them, and said "Please come with me! I need your help." They looked at each other. "I don't know..." QueenAngel sighed. "QueenAngel, do you want to still be friends with Louise or not?" Katy shouted. QueenAngel looked down. "Alright, let's go." She said.
As I looked in the distance, a small island was there, and 2 figures appeared on it. I knew exactly who they were.
"I have a boat if you want to go there." QueenAngel asked. I nodded. About 20 minutes later, she brought a boat with her. We pushed it into the sea and hopped in.
As I looked back, I could see Mappy, Undead and Sarah, scared and worried, calling my name. I wanted to tell them I was here, but I was too far away for them to hear.
As we arrived at the island, BlackHamood and Casper was there. I grabbed Katy's and QueenAngels hand and hid behind a bush.
I saw someone near them, looking like they were controlling them. "I, the legendary ka- I mean Pacer, will steal everyone's power! HE HE HE!" The person shouted. BlackHamood were shouting in pain, aswell as Casper. "What are you doing!" I hopped out of the bush.
Suddenly, Pacer seemed frightened and hid behind a bush.
"Are you okay?" Katy looked at BlackHamood while QueenAngel was helping Casper to get up. "Who are you? Louise? How did you get here!" BlackHamood shouted. "Give me your powers!" He shouted. "Powers?" Katy wondered. "Yes! NinjaMan chose her to have powers! GIVE IT!" BlackHamood seemed crazy. "I... don't have them anymore." I sighed. "Pacer must have stolen your powers!" Casper said. "That person who was trying to get our powers, but you stopped him." He explained.
"Louise, is it true you had powers once?" QueenAngel asked. I looked down, wondering what to say.
To Be Continued...
I'm not sure if I need more characters because it's really hard to fit everyone in.
If you want to be in the story ask below and I'll try my best to let you in the story.
Leave your feedback below, no hate or anything and we're about half way through the story, ohh, exciting ^_^
Thanks For Reading!!! :D​

 

Amazing, like always! =)

 

This is great :)

 

Awesome!

 

Wow awesome!!!

 

I love being the comedy relief!

 

So many nice comments, thank you so much ;-;
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@QueenAngel32
@Katy9078
@Ninjaman4646
@John_0696
@nala
@TheUndeadBrave
@TheBlackHamood
@Casper
@kadinator
@MappyTurtle
@Sarahhh
@Jnitz
@Pacers4Life
I'm not quite sure if I need more characters, but if you really want to be in the story, then I'll try my best to fit you in :)
Enjoy ^_^

Chapter 12 - The Truth And Split
Back at the forest, Mappy, Undead and Sarah finally got out. "I can't believe she just left us..." Sarah sighed. "How about we sing a song?" Undead suggested. Mappy faced palmed. "OOOOO... I have lots of pickles, very yummy and sweet. I love em very much, I just can't control de heat." While Undead kept yodelling, Mappy and Sarah thought of a plan. "That island look's suspicious." Mappy whispered. "Also there's a cave just like NinjaMan's over there. We should check it out. Louise could be there too." Sarah said. "OOOOOOOO!" Undead did a huge yodel. Mappy grabbed his mouth. "If you don't be quiet, I won't give you a pickle, okay?" Mappy hissed. "Mmmf" Undead tried to say. Mappy let go of him, making him fall. They saw a spare boat at the shore. They hopped in it and sailed to the island.
I looked down, sweating. "Louise..." Katy sighed. "Yes. I just didn't want to tell you because you might think I'm a monster." I said. "Oh come on! Being a wolf and mermaid? That's sweet!" QueenAngel cheered. "Didn't you say you turn into a wolf at night?" Katy stared at the night sky. I realised I didn't have my powers. "Ninjaman took them away. Someone is controlling him." I explained. "Pacer must be the one, come on." I said. "But." BlackHamood hissed. I did not realise Hamood was right behind me. "If you bring him to me, I'll give you your powers back, okay?" He hissed. "Fine." I mumbled. As we zoomed off, Katy noticed something. "Are cave's suppost to be blue?" Katy wondered. When I saw Katy, I saw a huge blue cave, almost as tall as a T Rex. As we entered, I saw Pacer, on the ground. "Woah! Are you okay?" I rushed to him, shaking him. As he woke up, he seemed confused. "Who are you? Where's my brother?" He shouted. "Come." I said. I grabbed him to Hamood. "You..." Casper hissed. "Me what? Who are you?" he gulped. "You know who we are! Give us... I mean, give her your powers!" BlackHamood shouted. "What? You've got it all wrong!" He screamed. "Somethings not right..." QueenAngel thought.
"Louise!" I heard a shout. I looked at the sea, and I saw Mappy, Sarah and Undead. "You guys okay?" I asked. "We're fine. Who's this fellow?" Mappy wondered. "I think its a pickle!" Undead suggested. "He's the one who stole our powers and Louise's!" Casper shouted. "Give them now, or death will come." Sarah shouted. "Stop! No!" Pacer screamed. Sarah got a knife out. She got ready to stab him, but then a shout was heard. "STOP! It's not him!" I looked up, and I saw Jnitz on a tall hill.
"Oh come on, it's got to be him." Mappy sighed. "I have to agree with him." Katy said. "I don't think it's him eather." QueenAngel sighed.
"I think he's the nicest, must adorable pickle I have ever seen." Undead said. "No, it's got to be him! He stole my powers!" Undead shouted. "Umm..." Pacer gulped. "Fine! You find out who the real theif is while we take Pacer with us to find proof he is the enemy!" Casper shouted. "Fine!" QueenAngel snapped. We split up. Mappy, Sarah, Casper, BlackHamood and Pacer went into the forest, while me, QueenAngel, Katy and Undead went on the boat.
"This can't be happening..." I sighed.
To Be Continued...
Thanks so much for all the nice comments, it makes me happier making these chapters ^_^
Please leave your feedback below.
If you want to be in the story, just comment below and I'll try and fit you in.
Reminder: 1 more week until I go on a cruise for 2 weeks :o
Thanks For Reading!!! :D​

 

This is a cool story :)
Good job

 

Great story! =)