My 4th Story: Soulless Powers

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Happy New Year everyone :D
Hopefully 2015 will be awesome ^_^
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@QueenAngel32
@Katy9078
@Ninjaman4646
@John_0696
@TheUndeadBrave
@TheBlackHamood
New Characters:
@Casper
Enjoy! :D

Chapter 5 - More Powers
"Please, don't call the police!" I cried. "I will you dirty rat." Naleax shouted. "Please!" I held my hands infront of me, but something strange happened. A burt of ice shot at her. "What?" I was confused. "Maybe that's another power." John realised. "I'M ELSA!!!" I cheered. But I did not realise Naleax was sneezing all over the place. "Thats it! *sneeze* I am *sneeze* calling the po- *sneeze* police!" She sneezed. We got her phone out and quickly called the police. "NOOO!" I cried. When she put her phone back in her pocket, she smiled. "They'll be here any minute!" She cheered. "Who?" Undead wondered. Suddenly, police cars surrounded me. They grabbed me and tied me up. "You'll be thrown into the water and drown due to your monstrosity." The police said. John kept running around in my backpack, panicking. Suddenly, people started to crowd me, confused. I could see Katy and QueenAngel in the distance. "Let her go! She has done nothing!" They cried. But Nalaex appeared right behind them. "She's a monster. Notice how strange she has been?" She said. "No! I know her! She's not monster!" Katy cried.
The police dragged me to a bridge. "Rest in peace, monster." The police whispered, then he dropped me into the water.
I was unconsious. Until my legs felt strange. I opened my eyes, and my legs joined together into a fin. John came out in a small astronaut suit. "I packed one just incase." John said. "This is sweet!" I cheered.
Suddenly, I saw a cave in the distance, and it looked so weird...
I realised it was the same cave I saw Ninjaman, but before I could enter it, someone grabbed me from behind. "HEY!" I shouted.
But then the stranger punched me, making me faint.
John was still in my backpack, frightened.
As I finally openned my eyes, a girl came up to my face. "WHERE IS HE?" She shouted. "What?" I wondered. She slapped me. "Now now Casper, let the girl speak." That voice seemed familar, and when it came closer, I realised BlackHamood was there. "I was just about to enter NinjaMan's cave until your friend Casper there interrupted!" I shouted. "Show us then." BlackHamood smiled.
I swimmed to where I dropped, but the cave wasn't there. "It must have disappeared again." John wondered. "What's this? A little mice in your backpack?" Casper wondered. She dived her hand into my backpack, fishing out John. "Hi..." He said awkwardly. "This is your friend?" BlackHamood laughed. Casper threw him into the sand. "JOHN!" I cried. Suddenly, BlackHamood held a dark, shadowy sword infront of my face. "Listen. You have 2 days left to find that damn NinjaMan. If not, then I'll kill you and send you to hell, understand?" He shouted. I nodded while afraid.
Then as soon as I blinked, they disappeared. "How do we get out of here?" I wondered. John finally got out, wiping the sand off his tounge. "Maybe use your ice powers?" John said. "Good idea." I agreed. I waved my hands up, and a ladder of ice was made. "Come on, we have got to find Ninjaman before it's too late." I cried. John hopped into my backpack and we went up the ladder
To Be Continued...
This chapter might have been a bit more longer, but it is because it's 2015 ^_^
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I think you made me a girl (I'm a boy xD).

 

*dies*
I always get the genders wrong...
Sorry xD

 

Heh its alright. xD

 

Just to let you know: exactly 2 weeks until I go on a cruise :D
I'm going to be gone for 2 weeks though, to Fiji ^_^
Anyway, Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@QueenAngel32
@Katy9078
@Ninjaman4646
@John_0696
@TheUndeadBrave
@TheBlackHamood
@Casper
New Character!:
@kadinator
Please enjoy :)

Chapter 6 - 1 Day Left
As we went to shore, suddenly my fins separated, creating two legs. "Night time is coming, you might turn into a wolf again." John realised. The sun was about to go down, when I noticed QueenAngel and Katy, In shock. "I thought you drowned!" QueenAngel cried. "Umm... I'm quite a good swimmer." I said. "How could you swim with those ropes tied around you though?" Katy asked. I forgot about the ropes. "When the transformed, maybe the power took away the ropes." John said. "Um, who said that?" Katy asked. John realised his mistake, so he buried into my backpack again. "Umm, Undead did." I pointed at Undead, sniffing the sand. "Oh hai Louise, thought you died." Undead seemed confused. "You know..." I whispered to him. "I transformed into a mermaid." His eyes grew big. Then, the sun fell. "Uhh, got to go!" I cried. Katy and QueenAngel shouted at me to come back, but I quickly went into the toilets, before I turned into a wolf.
"Do I have to avoid my friends everytime?" I wondered. John hopped out of my backpack and enlarged. "Ok, plan B. you have about 36 hours left until those 2 people kill us, do you know where Ninjaman could be?" John asked. I was thinking for quite a while.
Meanwhile, in a dark forest, BlackHamood and Casper appeared. "Do we have to sleep here?" Casper sighed. "Nonsence my angel, this is perfect!" BlackHamood laughed. "I'm a BOY! Are you really that dumb?" Casper shouted. BlackHamood went silent. "Nevermind, That girl and that teenie mice has only got 36 hours left, until I can finally steal their power." BlackHamood explain. "What happens if they find Ninjaman before tomorrow midnight?" Casper asks. "Then we'll get Ninjaman's powers AND those kiddies!" Blackhamood laughed.
I finally thought of an idea, when suddenly someone was knocking on the door. I openned the door slowly, and I saw some person there. "Good day Ms Wolf, I am known as Kadin. Can I have your powers please?" Kadin asked kindly. "Wha-what?" I seemed confused. "Why?" I asked. "Cause your powers are too dangerious! Now come here." Kadin snapped. "I'm fine with these powers... it's quite fun." I explained. "All well, now COME!" Kadin shouted. I pounced at him, making him fall into the sand, and then I ran. "Come back here!" He shouted.
I kept running all night. When sunset came, I was exhausted. "What the... *cough* who was that... *breathe* guy?" I sighed. John hopped out of the backpack. "Have we lost that guy though?" He asked. I nodded. "Possibly someone who's friend with... BlackHamood." John explained.
"We've got to find Ninjaman! We've only got 1 day left." I cried.
Suddenly, I tuned back to human, when Katy and QueenAngel found me. "I'm quite busy at the moment! Got to go!" I shouted. "No you don't!" Katy screamed. They grabbed me. "Hey! Let me go." I screamed. "Why do you keep running away from us! Are you keeping a secret?" QueenAngel cried. I kept squealing and wiggling, but they were quite strong.
I didn't have a choice, but when I opened my mouth, something happened.
To Be Continued...
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*Turns out to be the good guy like a berderse. XD*

 

In chapter 5 and 6 my name isn't in the list of characters that are in the story

 

Great story Louise!!

My character is confusing but i like it.

 

I'm so sorry, Sometimes I do have a bad memory...
But anyway, hai, Chapter 7 is here, yay.
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@QueenAngel32
@Katy9078
@Ninjaman4646
@John_0696
@nalaex I FINALLY DIDN'T FORGET! :D
@TheUndeadBrave
@TheBlackHamood
@Casper
@kadinator
New Character!:
@MappyTurtle
Enjoooy ^_^

Chapter 7 - The 3rd And Last
Someone grabbed me from behind, and it let go of me, I saw me buddy Mappy. "Haaaaaaaaaaai. Where have you been? I missed you, Wanna play Tf2?" Mappy kept repeating. "Su-sure! Bye QueenAngel and Katy!" I cheered. When I looked back, they has serious faces on me.
As I entered Mappy's house, I was still nervous. "Hey um Mappy, I know your a great friend, so can you keep a secret just between us?" I asked. "If it's about Chicken, den no." Mappy sighed. "No it's not chicken, its something else." I held my hands up, and I made a ice scroll. Mappy seemed surprised. She held it while her hands were freezing cold, and she read out: 'I have magical powers like turning into a wolf at night, turning into a mermaid when I enter water and also have ice powers. I might have more powers but I need your help to find someone for me' She seemed surprised, but excited. "Woooow, Can you make me a ice chicken?" Mappy asked. "Nevermind that, we have got to go!" I shouted.
I grabbed her hand and left the house, I also remembered something. I hid behind a building, while Mappy was still repeating words. "Like, I can finally ride you at NIGHT! That would be so cool, Star would be so jelly and stuff." Mappy cheered. "And uh, this is John." I replied, John nervously hopped out of the bag, enlarging. "Hai." John sighed. "Wooow, you have a pet mice!" Mappy's eyes grew huge. I facepalmed. John quickly became tiny and climbed my legs, into my backpack. "Anyway, have you seen any caves around here?" I asked. "I have seen one on a mountain, come on." Mappy said.
As hours past, we reached a tall mountain and climbed the top of it. John peeked out of my backpack, going crazy. "1 HOUR LEFT!!!" He shouted. "What?" I screamed "Okay where's the cave?" I screamed. "It's here... wait where did it go?" Mappy seemed confused. "We'll need to go to the top, it will take 30 minutes to get up there." Mappy sighed. I nodded while sweating.
As we reached the top, there was no cave in sight. Suddenly, someone came behind me and grabbed me. "Hey! Let go of her!" Mappy screamed. On the corner of my eye, it was Kadin. "Give me your powers... NOW!" Kadin shouted. "NEVER!" I screamed.
Then, he threw me off the mountain. "NOOO!" Mappy screamed.
The air ran past me. I closed my eyes, hoping this would end quickly, when suddenly something grew on my back.
I was suddenly floating. On the corner of my eye, huge 2 angel wings were on my back.
"HOLY SHRIMP!" John screamed. I couldn't believe it. I flew up into the sky, back on the mountain. "Wow... I'm jelly." Mappy sighed. "I just saw a cave appear on the other mountain!" John pointed. I could see it.
I grabbed Mappy and I flew onto the other cave.
As we entered the cave, NinjaMan was standing there. "Louise! Thank goodness your here!" NinjaMan cried. Suddenly, two figures at the entrance appeared, and they seemed familiar...
To Be Continued...
Thanks for the nice comments ^_^
I just hope this story won't become forgotten when I go on my cruise...
Anyway, I noticed I have done a chapter about everyday. If I keep making a chapter everyday, then its possible that this story might finish before I go on my cruise.
Remember to comment below if you want to be in the story aswell ^_^
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Is et me and me and black? I3i

 

Umm... pardon?

 

Dang auto correect, I meant to say "Is it me or am I back?" I'm on my phone btw. XD

 

Hai ^_^ Welcome to Chapter 8
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@QueenAngel32
@Katy9078
@Ninjaman4646
@John_0696
@nalaex
@TheUndeadBrave
@TheBlackHamood
@Casper
@kadinator
@MappyTurtle
Enjoy :)

Chapter 8 - Keeping Powers
As the figures came closer, I realised it was BlackHamood and Casper. "Thank you for finding Ninjaman in 2 days and 23 hours. Now excuse me." BlackHamood said. He pushed me out of the way and walked slowly to Ninjaman. He grabbed him on the throat and held him up. "Return me those powers!" He shouted. "Hey! Knock it off!" I shouted. "Louise, you have to stop him before he chokes to death!" John screamed.
Suddenly the moonlight appeared into the cave, and I turned into a wolf. I charged at BlackHamood, making him fall to the ground.
Casper was about to grab me from behind, but Mappy slapped her. "NU!" She shouted.
"We will get your powers Louise, and you'll go to your grave! You HEAR ME?" He shouted. Then they disappeared. "Louise, we need to talk." NinjaMan said seriously.
"Your powers is putting me in danger, I will have to take them away from you. They are also putting you in danger as well." He sighed. "This power is making my life more... exciting and is not putting me in danger its helping me" I explained. "I know it's hard to believe, but it's not making the world normal. People are frightened, confused and police are still looking for you." He explained. "Please, just let me keep it!" I cried. "I'm sorry..." NinjaMan sighed. "... NO! I don't care what you say! I'm keeping it!" I shouted. "Louise, I don't think shouting at him will make it better..." John sighed.
I ran off and my angel wings grew. I grabbed Mappy and I went to the beach. Mappy seemed confused. "Is he the one who gave you the powers?" Mappy wondered. "I think..." I sighed. Suddenly, I said Katy and QueenAngel, depressed walking on the beach. "Um, hi Katy and QueenAngel." I howled. "You just blew your cover!" John sighed.
"Do I know you?" QueenAngel said while staring at me. "That voice seems familiar..." Katy wondered. "Um." I mumbled. "You can talk?" QueenAngel screamed. "Her hair also look's like..." Katy was about to blow my cover. So I ducked under Mappy, making her ride me while I ran.
"That was close." I breathed. "That was awesome! Can we do that again?" Mappy cheered. I saw Undead run into me. "There you are little puppy!" Undead cheered. "I just don't understand why NinjaMan wants to take my powers away..." I sighed.
"Maybe we should investigate." John suggested. "I saw a cave appear in the water." Undead pointed. "Come on, we have got to see what's going on, we have got to spy on him." I said. "But if he see's you, you would drown since being a mermaid is apart of your powers." John said.
"Oh yeah, I found some like diving suits with helmets for 3 of us." John said holding tiny diving suits. "But there so... tiny, like my pickle!" Undead said. "Oh, hold on." John then hopped out of my backpack and became large, while the diving suits also became large. "There." He gave them all to each other.
"If I drown, you'll have to save me, got it?" I said. They nodded. However, I did not realise Kadin was behind a coconut tree, spying on us...
To Be Continued...
We could possibly be half way through the story :o
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Thanks For Reading!!! :D​

 

Dafuq why am I a power whore ._.

 

xD

 

Hey! My pickle happens to be pretty big.

Spoiler

The "Big Papa" one is there just because I thought it was funny when I found it."]

Other than that, the story is coming along great!

 

Your story is going really well c;

 

Omg this is so good :o

Can I be in it? :3