Posting the rest of my story on this thread.

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  1. bunniesunday

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    Part 19:

    When they arrived at Lobby, Bai started raging again.
    “This...portal...does...NOT LEAD US TO FREAKING SURVIVAL!” He yelled so loudly all of the soldiers covered their ears, half developed an instant headache and a quarter fainted.
    “What are you doing?! You fools don't know how to handle portals?!” He screamed.
    Unfortunately for him, all of the soldiers had fainted by then.
    “Useless fools,” Bai facepalmed.
    “Master, don't get mad. Survival might be impossible to get to, but at least we can try. Who knows, it might be possible,” Gthang said.
    Looking at the unconscious soldiers, Bai announced,
    “We are going into Survival. But we don't know how, so try as many ways as possible.”
    “Hey!” One of the soldiers exclaimed. “This fence at Survival has been broken into.”
    Upon examining the fence, Bai said,
    “I think I know where they went! Go through the portal.
    “How is it even possible?”
    “Simple! Pull the fence and it will come off, or else go chop it!” Bai screeched.
    Two soldiers, Mappy and EpicTNT, pulled the fence. It came off but they fell down on the floor.

    Meanwhile in Survival...
    “I've already seen what the soldier uniform looks like. In order to make them normal you need to punch a button at the back of their suit,” Hiedenn said. Then he turned invisible.
    “I think Bai is coming!” Hiedenn yelled, although no one could see him.
    Sure enough, they spotted Bai. He didn't see them, however.
    “I smell intruders in here...” Bai growled. He looked at the tree where everyone was hiding, and frowned. He accidentally sent an axe flying towards it and the tree fell down, revealing everyone.
    “Oh crap.”
    “We're screwed.”
    “So you were here all along! I knew it had to be somewhere nearby thanks to someone's aura,” Bai said, glaring at Hai.
    “ATTACK!” Harry yelled.
    Everyone jumped off the tree, and headed for the Soldiers.
    Before the battle, they had already planned the strategy.

    *Flashback*
    “Ok,” said Harry.
    “Group 1-Bunnie, Claire, Hubble, Demon, Finn, Budderlover, Marco, Leandro, Rigby, Spicy, Pineapple, Hamp, Rainbow and Eagless. You go attack the soldiers.
    Group 2-Perc, Soultan, Spencer, JJ, Brock, Paul, Vince, Colin, Pieman, Infinity, Cactus, Kick, Mrc, Puncake, Gallade and Sera. Go fight the soldiers as well.
    Group 3-Gabe, Maca, Spyke, Poof, Athens, Lidia, Yomc, Blockman, Clemens, Wolf, Winx, Ivan, Albino, Roc, Shadow, Annett, Taco, Booz, Fighter and Zombieman. Take on the soldiers.
    Group 4-Army, Rosebud, Dmuds, Vic, Ezio, RG, cdude, Ape, Nyan, Chris, Bacon, John, Ben, Alex, Jbro, Bluejeans, Turd, Pyro, Joey, Pwnage, Crimzon, Heat, Mheljean, Nick, Char, Ryfi, Slam, Paar, Pastel and Teddie. Go fight the soldiers.
    Group 5-Arcoz, Mlmll, Borezz, Nex, Dire, Awezome, SoWant, Jin, Kris, Fazz, MFS, Ssun, Magical, Tree, Low, Flare, Jc, Skeptic, Mega, doodlies, vsoup and Deadly. Attack the soldiers but you can aid Group 6 in attacking Gthang and Jerry if you want.
    Group 6-DWG, Noc, Homie, Nce, NES, Pk, Radeon, Mira, Misfit, Bob and Kev. Attack Gthang and Jerry.
    Group 7 will be the 6 of us (Harry, Potato, Hai, Saul, Dao and Xenon). We will attack Bai. What about you, Hiedenn?”
    “I'm staying in the tree because I can't let Bai know I betrayed him, but I will help if you are in trouble.”
    *End*

    When the battle started, Demon sneaked up behind a soldier. There was indeed a button. He punched it, the soldier fell down and he returned to normal.
    “Rockor!! :D”
    “Hey Demon! Can I help you in taking down these weird people in armour?”
    “Sure! By the way, these are a hacker's soldiers, who are players, like you and I.”
    Group 1 took down 20 more soldiers.
    Group 2, 3 and 4 took down a total of 450, leaving 408.
    As they were about to continue attacking, that was when disaster struck.
    A figure was swinging on a vine. It headed straight for Yomc but Spicy pushed him to the floor. While it wasn't looking, Nyan flew up to it and cut the vine.
    It then landed face-first to the floor. Everyone gasped as soon as they saw who it was.
     
  2. bunniesunday

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    Note: I'm sorry for my lack of effort in battle scenes. I'm just not good at writing that part, only good at picturing it. That's why it has poor quality.

    Part 20 (aka second last part)

    “HIEDENN!!”
    “So you were a betrayer all along?!” Pk yelled at him, wanting to throw his sword.
    “Yes, yes. I am indeed a betrayer. Looks like you have 1 more to attack now.”
    “Hey Harry,” Hai whispered.
    “How do we take the 4 of them down?”
    “Demon, come here.”
    “Yes?”
    “Explain to Hai how you took down Kev.”
    “Well um...you have to keep attacking it until it faints, then a few minutes later it will wake up as a normal player,” Demon said.

    “Very well,” Hiedenn said. “Time to resume the battle.”
    The other 408 soldiers, Hiedenn, Gthang, Jerry and Bai got ready.
    Taking down the soldiers were easier said than done.
    “How did they become so tough this time?!” Flare complained.
    “So I guess we have to hit them on the head now?” Low said, in reply to Flare. He then hit one of the soldiers on the head with a rubber hammer. It worked and the soldier turned back to normal. “Hey, it's Animoes!” Flare said.
    Soon, 402 other soldiers were taken down, leaving 6 of them. They were the higher ranked soldiers, Kuzon, Mcc, Pribe, Mappy, EpicTNT and Sefex.
    “872 down, 10 to go,” Harry muttered. “CHARGE!”
    Everyone dashed for the soldiers. However they were different. They could not be hit on the head or smacked on the back. They needed to faint in order to turn back to normal. However while everyone else was fighting the soldiers, DWG, Noc, Homie, Nce, NES, Pk, Radeon, Misfit, Mira, Bob, Kev, Harry, Potato, Hai, Saul, Dao and Xenon were trapped in an invisible barrier with Hiedenn, Gthang, Jerry and Bai.
    “PK!! CAN YOU HEAR ME?!” Arcoz yelled from outside. Without warning, Sefex pushed him to the ground. Just then, he felt a tap on his soldier. It was Borezz.
    “Hey dude,” he said, then knocked Sefex off.
    “Yo Arcoz, you alright?”
    “Yep.”
    As soon as Sefex got up, something hit him, hard. He fainted.
    “1 down 5 to go!” yelled Mheljean. He happened to be near them.
    Mappy and Bluejeans were wrestling each other. The two had been at it for the past 10 minutes. Mappy looked like she was about to pass out, but Bluejeans still looked okay.
    After another minute, Mappy passed out.
    “Another one down!” Bluejeans yelled.
    Booz, Gallade, Ganja and Clemens attacked EpicTNT. However he had tons of TNT with him!
    “Ha! Take this!” He yelled, and threw the TNT at them.
    “Knock them at him with your swords!” Ganja commanded.
    Every single TNT was countered, and they blew up when they reached EpicTNT.
    “3 more to go,” Gallade said as he high-fived the other three.
    Pribe was throwing stones at Magical, Tree, Low, Flare and Jc. Everyone was doing fine avoiding them, but it only seemed to make Pribe more furious.
    “Hey Flare! Send out your Pikachu to shock him,” Tree whispered to Flare.
    “Alright. Go Pikachu!”
    The Pikachu got out of its Pokeball.
    “Pikachu, use Thunderbolt!”
    “Pi...ka...CHUUUUUUUUUU!” The Pikachu sent a thunderbolt towards Pribe. He was shocked and fainted soon after.
    “4 down!!” Magical yelled.
    Bunnie, Claire, Hubble, Demon, Athens, Lidia, Albino and Roc were fighting with Mcc.
    However this soldier was so speedy, no one could catch him. That was when Demon started getting the effect again. He turned into the 12-block high Enderman, and glared at Mcc. Mcc got terrified, and raced off. Demon pointed his lightsaber at him. Now Mcc was on the ground, but looked perfectly normal.
    “Five down!” Demon said as he was going back to normal.
    But the greatest challenge of all was Kuzon.
    “How are we gonna take him down?” Army asked.
    “Hello! We are here to help you!”
    “Mappy! EpicTNT! Mcc! Sefex and Pribe!”
    “Hey dude!” Mcc yelled at Kuzon. “This is a 878-vs-1 battle!”
    “Whatever, come at me bro,” Kuzon said, folding his arms.

    Meanwhile in the barrier...
    “Look here,” Bai growled. “As soon as they're done battling that soldier, we'll release you and get rid of the barrier.”
    “But how would we know when they're done?!” DWG yelled. His hands and legs were tied up, and so were the rest.

    Outside...
    “Everyone ready?!” Jin yelled. “Okay...START!”
    Everyone dashed at Kuzon. He was, however, very tough to beat.
    Finn noticed something on his wrist.
    “There is a medal! Like the one Pineapple and Magical had before! But it looks impossible to remove.”
    Suddenly, something flashed through Claire's mind.

    *Flashback*
    Part 3 Flashbacks:

    “Hey Spiiicyy! Wanna eat this chilli?” Hubble danced around, holding a chilli in his hand. Everyone started laughing.

    Maca held a pineapple in front of Pineapple's face, hoping to hypnotise him. It worked!

    Suddenly, Mira threw a cooked chicken in Hamp's face and he started panicking.
    “What he needs is a little scare!” Saul concluded.
    Everyone started playing pranks on Zombie Hamp. The more mischievous ones like Demon put an explosive beside Hamp that went 'WHAT THE FU- BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM' when triggered.
    *End*

    “What about this?” Claire threw a huge cooked fish at Kuzon's face. Nothing happened.

    “I know! I know!” Hubble added. He was holding some candy.
    “Hey Kuzon! Want some candyyy?” He said while dancing. Everyone started laughing out loud but...
    Nothing happened.

    “Demon! Where are you going?!”
    “You'll see.”
    Demon placed an explosive beside Kuzon. A few seconds later, it went 'WHAT THE FU- BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM'
    Kuzon seemed slightly terrified.
    “I think it worked! Look, the medal is getting loose.”
    Vince then walked up to Kuzon. He held a Coke can.
    “Hey Kuzon!” Vince opened the Coke can, then Coke splashed onto Kuzon's face. The medal got more loose.
    “We just need to play all sorts of pranks,” Albino concluded. “Let's do it!”
    Everyone played a ton of pranks, and the medal dropped off. Kuzon turned back to normal!
    “Barrier opened,” Hiedenn muttered.
    Everyone was instantly untied. Now they had to face the last 4...and most dangerous.
     
  3. The_Demonstar01

    The_Demonstar01 k-on most moe anime 2017

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    Cliffhanger alert! Gj so far :D I wanna have a item called the Milennium Puzzle and a card that summons Dark Magician. (Btw, It's a Yu-Gi-Oh card. :P)
     
  4. PyromancerMagic

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    I said nothing...aww ;-;
     
  5. bunniesunday

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    I actually already finished writing the story...so can I put it in the sequel?
    You will in the next part :D

    Not releasing Part 21 today cause I planned to release it on Christmas (aka tomorrow)
     
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    i don't play this game anymore yet i'm still here why do you ask, i don't know either
    I'm fine with that. :)
     
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    I liek part 19. I'm in it :D
     
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    Can I be like, so amazing in the next part, *Maybe take everyone to skyblock 3 to party?* ;) *By sb3, I mean my island :D*
     
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    YOU CAN't HIT ME WITH MY OWN TNT!!!! I CAN DEFLECT THEM BACK AT YOU!
    loljk haha thanks for putting me in there!
     
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    Would you mind me writing my own story and posting it on the forums?
     
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    :D
    Mhm...okay :D but can I put it in le sequel?
    Lol :D you're welcome
    Of course I don't mind :)
     
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    Merry Christmas everyone! Here is the last part, as promised.
    I suddenly got a TON of ideas and was able to finish Parts 19 and 20. And there are 21 Parts because 20 was too long.


    Part 21a (aka Last Part):

    “There are 996 of you, and 4 of us. Even though we are outnumbered, I can bet my life that we would be the winners,” Jerry said.
    “There is no escape from this battle!” Gthang warned.
    “I wonder how long this will take,” Hiedenn muttered.
    “I'M GETTING TIRED OF WAITING! The 3 of you, GO ATTACK!” Bai yelled.
    Hiedenn landed in front of the Staff and Ex-Staff. This time, he was holding a dark-coloured book. His sunglasses were gone but his eyes were red in colour.
    “Harry! What book is that?” Homie asked.
    “It looks like the Book of Death. It can perform many nasty tricks, so be careful.”
    “Stand behind me!” Dao commanded.
    Everyone stood behind Dao. He drew out his katana and dashed straight for Hiedenn. As he was doing that, he sent out shurikens to destroy a few pages of the book.
    The shurikens took a few pages with them, but Hiedenn sent Dao flying backwards. Xenon caught the katana, and Potato managed to get its cover.
    Just then, Misfit had a great idea.
    “I know!” she whispered. “I'll mimic Bai's voice to tell Hiedenn to drop the book, then we will take it and destroy it!”
    “Great idea,” DWG said.
    “Hey Hiedenn! Go drop that book! You need to fight with weapons already!” Misfit called out in Bai's voice.
    “Fine.”
    As soon as Hiedenn dropped the book, Nce waited for the right timing to get it.
    As soon as he got it, he ran back.
    “Can someone burn this? Athens, come here!”
    “Yes Nce?”
    “Start a fire, and we will burn this book. If anything goes wrong, Awezome will use his Mudkip and extinguish the fire, alright?”
    “Can't we use this book?” Pwnage questioned.
    “No, only they can use it. We can't, even if Hiedenn reverts back to normal, it's worthless.”
    “Okay then.”
    Athens set fire on the book. The smoke was greenish-blue.
    Taking this chance, Low smacked Hiedenn on the head with his rubber hammer and Hiedenn fainted.
    Meanwhile, the rest were fighting Gthang.
    “This dude is so strong!” Animoes complained.
    Just then, someone walked up to them.
    “Hiedenn?”
    He looked perfectly normal, and his sunglasses weren't damaged anymore, his eye colour had also reverted back to original.
    He was holding a bow and a sword.
    “You need to defeat Gthang by making a hole in his cloak, however he is incredibly strong and hard to catch,” he advised.
    As soon as Hiedenn said that, the archers started to fire large amounts of arrows at Gthang. Gthang didn't attack, but dodged the arrows. A few landed on his knees but most fell on the floor.
    They kept firing the arrows, and by the time everyone was exhausted, Gthang started slowing down a lot due to the arrows. When he was distracted by Maca and Sef chasing after EpicTNT, Hiedenn shot his cloak. The arrow poked through it and Gthang fell down. The cloak and shoes slowly disappeared, and so did his weapon.
    “Where am I,” Gthang muttered.
    “Hey dude! You're back!” DWG exclaimed. “You've been with Bai for the past 12 parts,”
    “Oh my god, did you just break the fourth wall?!” Homie, Gthang and Hiedenn yelled.
    “...Yes...”
    “Come on! We still have to defeat Jerry and Bai,” Mappy said.
    “Jerry looks tough, but Bai's harder to defeat,” Dao remarked.
    “Harry, any idea how to defeat Jerry?”
    “We can't fart, it isn't effective against him...I know! Shadow, throw music discs at Jerry!”
    “On it!”


    -End of Part I-


    2 Parts because this Part is too LONG LOL xD
     
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    Part 21b



    Shadow ran forward, then Harry followed him behind for backup.
    He started throwing music discs at Jerry, but he seemed to be able to dodge most of them.
    “How can this be?! None missed when I threw them at Bob!” Shadow exclaimed.
    Just then, Jerry swooped and flew straight for Harry. With a knife in his hand.
    Claire knew what she was going to happen, and yelled, “NO!!”
    The red eyed, clothing torn, fierce flying monster suddenly stopped in its tracks. It's eyes became blue again, and it fell to the floor. “Harry, is that really you?” Jerry asked as his wings disappeared.
    “Jerry! How I missed you!” Harry said, then ran to hug his brother.
    “Now we only have Bai left. Any idea how to defeat him?” Pyro asked.
    “So I heard Bai hates cheese?” Hai taunted, staring at Bai. He then took out his cheese gun and fired at Bai. The cheese stuck onto his feet, making Bai slow down quite a bit.
    Gabe suddenly found a hole that lead to the void, but he knew that when the time was right, that was when he would do it.
    Dire sent a flamethrower at Bai, and Sef hit Bai with a Blaze Rod.
    Bai looked a bit weaker than before, but suddenly he broke free from the cheese. Hai fired his cheese gun again, but this time at his sunglasses. Bai started walking into trees, tripping over stones and logs.
    By the time his vision was cleared, he already had a fair number of injuries. Just then, Gabe stood in front of him.

    Gabe took a deep breath, then....
    “THIS...IS...SPARTAAAAAAAAAAAAA!” He yelled as he kicked Bai down the hole.

    There was a moment of silence.
    “We...did it!” Everyone yelled. The Meatballs gave each other a group hug, the Ex-Staff and Staff high-fived each other and the rest started dancing.
    Just then, Bai flew up from the hole.
    “Oh fu*k...”
    “How did he not die?”
    “Everyone, listen! I'm not Bai, I am...” Bai then took off his mask.
    “HAI?!”
    “Yes, the Hai you are with is a robot.”
    “Oh. My. God.” Demon fainted for real this time.
    “No one knew about the plot, except for Jerry, Gthang and Hiedenn.”
    “You didn't tell me as well, but never mind,” Harry said.
    “Guys! I'm throwing a party next week! For all of you! You managed to defeat us, and this is your reward!” Jerry announced.
    “HOORAY!!”

    -The End! :)-

    Hi guys! Bunnie here. As some of you know, this story was made in June/July. Because I did Parts 1-12 before September, the quality is worse. I'd also like to thank all of you because some of the ideas were inspired by you guys! And yes, Demon and I DID make Friendship Resort on Creative 3.
    I really enjoyed writing the story!
    Watch out for my next story/sequel titled: The Great Adventure! :D
     
  15. MrDavyJones

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    Man I can see you being the next Diary of a wimpy kid author :3
     
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    Really? Athens burned the book? Shouldn't a Pyro have done that? *cough* me *cough*
     
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    no Athens definitely should've xD
     
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    Was I part of the gthang distraction? :D
     
  19. bunniesunday

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    Lol? xd

    ?

    Yep, Maca and Sef were chasing after you