Unfinished poem.

Discussion in 'General Discussion / Real life stuff' started by nthi, Dec 18, 2014.

  1. nthi

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    This is a poem I was going to give to someone but I just never finished it.
    I know, it's really horrible, but whatever, I'm gonna say it anyway.

    Biodome.
    We met in a game so brutal,
    Where you kill people and backstab, it's cruel.
    Even though I died so early on,
    I thought to myself, and hit respawn.

    I thought you were so smart, cool, and kind.
    I asked you to truce, and you didn't mind.
    As I got stabbed, I told you I was a pro.
    After I clicked respawn, I needed to go.

    One day when I was on survival,
    I was waiting on a friend's arrival.
    I looked in chat and saw that you messaged me,
    I was about to reply, but I ran into a tree.


    And that's all I have so far. I will most likely not finish this, as for I don't need the person it's for to read it.

    I hope they know it's for them.
     
    Last edited: Dec 19, 2014
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  2. Xandalf

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    This. Is. Amazing.
     
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    Ninjaman Goodbye letter in info page

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    DIS IS AMOOZIN
    Just a little mistake right there :P
     
  4. nthi

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    Oh my gosh. Thanks and I didn't notice that at all xD
     
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