New Story!: War 3.0 (Need Characters)

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  1. Sanadz

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    I would love to be apart of this magnificent story, if you could find a good spot for me :D
     
  2. Sanadz

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    I would be enjoying my evil part as a Evil God, if that is fine... ;3
     
  3. JFMULI

    JFMULI Greenest cactus of the world

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    I want to be in, evil/good everything is ok :)
     
  4. IAMINACTIVEBYE

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    Yay! Chapter 4 is here!
    Also, heres a new list of new characters that I'll need, and I will also tell you what they will do and their personality under it's name!:
    Slave Keeper:
    The slave keeper captures us, but then he/she becomes good. He/She is quite shy though and not really confident...
    2 Evil King/Queens Assistants: @JFMULI
    The assistant will help the evil king/queen such as spying on LossCity and other things. The assistants is quite clever and smart, and a genius when hiding.
    Mage/Witch: @Sanadz
    Makes spells and potions for the evil king. You can decide if you want to be called a witch or mage. The Mage/Witch is very creepy though...

    Each chapter if i need more characters, I'll just keep making a list of characters with their personalitys and why their in the story.
    Tell me which character you want to be! :D
    Characters:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @MappyTurtle
    @ItsStartheFox
    @Rilakkumaloverr
    @Shadow_Riolu
    @tisha070703
    @ProCraftz
    New Characters!:
    @hammiestar
    @Bfrizz
    @ItsRiley44
    Enjoy ;)
    Chapter 4 - Our First Quest
    "You think you scare me?" Mappy shouted. "Map, please do not fight. the village hates it, people will then think your from the Evil City, so watch your mouth please." Fox said. Mappy just grunted. Rilakkum, looked up. "Bla-Black Smm-ith, If-If we help you, wi-will you he-help me free Tis-Tisha?" Rilakkum choked. I facepalmed extra hard, almost felt like what she said was a hour long. "Yes." ProCraft said. Rilakkum then changed. Instead of being a baby, she was like a soilder. She stood up. "YAAAAHOOOOOOOOOOOO!" She screamed. "Alright, so you agree to help me save this city and destroy Evil City?" ProCraft asked. "But will we get Tisha out BEFORE we destroy the evil city?" I asked. "Very likely we can... but" Pro stopped. I frowned, hoping he won't say anything bad. "If we don't get her out in time, she will die." My jaws went wide open. And once Rilakkum heard that, she went back to being a baby, sucking her thumb. "Anyway, What i need is about 200 pieces of iron." He said. Now I was seriously worried. "two-two... hun-hundred... iron?" I repeated. He nodded. I just sat next to Rilakkum, and i sucked my thumb as well, shivering. Mappy just facepalmed her head. "You only have 2 days to do this." He said. Mappy dragged us along as we went to another cave. "Nothing like having a borring adventure with 2 stupid babies..." Mappy mumbled.
    I finally snapped out of it when Mappy slapped me, which made me go a bit mad. Mappy as slapped Rilakkum. We walked down the cave, while Rilakkum was holding a torch. When we reached bedrock, we only got about 52 iron ore. "This might be harder then I thought." I said. "Does that mean we can't free my sis-sister?" Rilakkum mumbled. I really don;'t want her to be a baby again, so i just said "We will , I promise." And that seemed to make Rilakkum more confident. "TISHA! HERE WE COME!" She said.
    Meanwhile, back at Evil City. Shadow, the king of Evil City heard his 3 knights come to him. "Sir, we have been spying on LossCity like you told us to, and aparntly those 3 girls who went to our city are going to make a missile and throw it at US!" A knight said. "Grr..." Shadow said. "They are on their way go down a cave getting iron to make the missile." Another knight said. "GRRRRRRAARG!" Shadow shouted, and he threwing a table at the wall. "Sir, calm down." A knight said. "Hammie, BFrizz and Riley, you are smart right?" Shadow giggled. "Why... Yes sir." BeFrizz squaked. "Are you smart enough to make a cave full of iron with tnt under it?" Shadow said. "Uhh... I think?" Riley said. "Here's what I'm going to do." Shadow said, he whipsered in all of the knights ears, and the knights understood what they have to do. And the knights threw their enderpearls out of the city, off to LossCity.
    Meanwhile , back at the cave, we kept mining and mining, but all we found were like 3 pieces of coal. "We'll never find iron!" I shouted. I heard some footsteps... and some enderpearl sounds. "What was that?" I froze, and so did Mappy and Rilakkum. Then suddenly the ender pearl sounds and footstep sounds were gone. "Must be endermen lost." Mappy said. I dug one more time, and this time it was a room FULL of iron. "GUYS GUYS! COME HERE!" I shouted. But before i ran right at the iron, mappy stopped me. "This is a trap..." Mappy said. But then Rilakkum busted through, and stepped on a preasure plate by accident before she mined the iron. And i heard some tnt get ready to blow up...
    To Be Continued...
    Please ignore any wrong spellings marks! :D
    Thanks for reading ;)
     
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  5. Cat1843Halo

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    Honorable knight Cat1843Halo here may i join in :D
     
  6. Sanadz

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    Can I be the Evil King/Mage please?
     
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  9. Sanadz

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  10. Rila

    Rila Pyro is top bae

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    wai u do dis maipe </3
     
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    Can I be something

    xD idek the roles

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    Rila Pyro is top bae

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  14. JFMULI

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    I could be the mage :P

    I'm green and a bit creepy >: )
    Buuut... sanadaz was earlier so if that isn't posible I want to be a evil king/queen assistant since I'm clever and smart as well :)
     
  15. IAMINACTIVEBYE

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    Yay! Chapter 5 ^_^
    Remember to leave suggestions, idea's, ways to improve the story or what you think about it!
    And here's another thing: suggest more characters to be chosen.
    But please don't just make the character so you can be it, just tell me a character i should add with a reason why. This character should not just be for you, its for everyone :) The character must also have a reason why it should be added, if its eather makes the story more interesting or the story better or longer.
    Thanks!
    Characters:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @MappyTurtle
    @ItsStartheFox
    @Rilakkumaloverr
    @Shadow_Riolu
    @tisha070703
    @ProCraftz
    @hammiestar
    @Bfrizz
    @ItsRiley44
    New Character:
    @Sanadz
    Enjoy!
    Chapter 5 - The Mage
    I ran out of the tunnel I made, and so did Mappy and Rilakkum. As soon as we got out, the tnt blew the whole place up, with all the iron gone. I put a mean look on Rilakkum, and she just made a weak smile. "We could have got heaps of iron in no time until SOMEONE ruined it..." I said. I heard Rilakkum sniffing. "I mean like, this little quest would have been so easy. Now this village is going to be destroyed because of SOMEONE in our group..." Mappy shouted. Rilakkum's eyes were like making a waterfall. "This is all your fault.." I said, and Rilakkum pretty much changed... in a bad way.
    "GRRRAAARG!" Rilakkum shouted. She was no werid baby now, she was like turning into a werewolf. "I'M LEAVING YOU TWO! YOU RAT HOLES! I'LL NEVER SEE YOU AGAIN!" Rilakkum shouted, and she ran as fast as she could out of the cave. "Baaah, what use is she anyway?" I chuckled, but Mappy seemed serious. "Would happens if Shadow will use her to destroy the village..." Mappy said. I suddenly frowned. "RILAKKUM! COME BACK! WE'RE SORRY!" I shouted, but Rilakkum was already gone.
    Meanwhile, at Evil City, Shadow was mad. "You mean they SURVIVED?" He shouted. "Yes your majesty." ItsRiley shivered. "All well! We all make mistakes! Don't we fella's?" Bfrizz joyed. ItsRiley and hammie's worried face then went into a great smile. "Yeah! Like remember the time Shadow boogers, when he thought they were jelly beans?" Hammie said. "ENOUGH! How dare you talk about my secret that happened to me 2 years ago?" He roared. "We're sorry... sir." The knights said. "By the way sir, Louise, Mappy and Rilakkum are going to get 200 iron any minute now. Anyway to stop them?" ItsRiley asked. "No need to worry children!" A crackly witch-voice echoed through the lair. "Sanadz... I thought you were on vacation." Shadow said. Then some creepy old mage appeared from the dark. "My vacation finished sir! I heard some pesky kids are ruining your plan?" He crackled. "Sanadz, my dear mage. Just leave it to me." Shadow sneered. Shadow really did hate Sanadz, he was the one who made him eat snots that looked like jelly beans. "Shadow, I've CHANGED! I'm not a stupid ye old child! I've RE BORNED!" Sanadz crackled more. "Oh jeez Mage, your so good at making lies. YOUR ON VACATION AGAIN FOR 2 YEARS!" Shadow roared. "King... We'll just leave you 2 to fight..." Hammie said, and the 3 knights zoomed out of the lair. "Shadow my dear, I've went to mage and witch university. Kind of like a Harry Potter school. And now I know how to make one of the kiddies into our KNIGHT!" Sanadz said. Then Shadow's annoyed looking faced turned into a evil smile. "Show me what you got, mage" Shadow said.
    Meanwhile, Rilakkum kept running as far away from the village. "Tisha is going to die, my friends hate me! Oh my terrible life!" She screamed. Suddenly, some werid purple wind wizzed around her.
    Back at evil city, the mage was making a evil spell on Rilakkum, making her the most evil person of all that could kill anyone... Including Louise and Mappy.
    The wind went inside of Rilakkum. She went unconsious. Then 5 minutes later, her eyes openned, and they were purple. "Must destroy Louise and Mappy... Must destroy Louise and Mappy..." Rilakkum defeated.
    TO BE CONTINUED...

    Please ignore any wrong spelling marks!
    Thanks For Reading! :D​
     
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  16. hammiestar

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    You make such cool stories!:)
     
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    Your such a good writer
     
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    Wow, these are awesome, keep up the good work Louise c:
     
  19. Nacho_Cheeseman

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    Can I be
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  20. Nacho_Cheeseman

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    Anything would be fine with me