A J&H Server Creepypasta

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  1. PhantomStar

    PhantomStar Zzzzz... Donator

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    Second Creepypasta I've written. By my attitude the past little while, you may or may not have seen this coming. :p

    Anyways, here we go:

    It was like any normal day: I was in front of my computer, playing Minecraft, as I usually do. I logged into my favorite server, JerryandHarry, where I was a regular and well-known member. When I connected, my character spawned in the middle of the lobby. I pressed the Tab button to see who was on.

    Nobody I knew was currently connected, except for Wolfy. I greeted him with my usual message, "WOLLLFYYYYYY". He didn't answer. I figured he was afk and decided to just run around at the spawn for a while.
    It was only a few minutes before I was disconnected. I thought I must have timed out, as I do often, but then the message loaded up:

    Disconnected by Server
    You were kicked for We'll talk about this on Steam.
    Was that what Wolf was doing? Kicking me? Sure enough, that question was answered moments after I asked it.
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    With that, Wolf went offline without another word. I tried connecting to the server again, but I was shown another dirt screen, telling me I was banned for 10 days. Since I myself had done nothing wrong, I made a Ban Appeal.

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    An hour later, I got a reply from Saul.
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    I accepted these terms and went to sleep for the night. The next afternoon, I was able to connect to the server again.

    The hub loaded up around me, and I pressed tab once more.


    Saul, Wolfy, Shadow, Eli and John were online. I greeted John first. It took him a few seconds to respond, but when he did, he did it in a private message.
    "I can't believe you'd do something like that, Star. I have literally no words."
    I responded back to him, trying to explain that it wasn't me, he replied again, "I don't trust you anymore. At all. Don't talk to me."
    I greeted Eli in he same way I always do: "ELIIIIIIIII". He didn't say anything at all, and continued jumping on the leaves in the lobby. I could tell he was deliberately trying to ignore me.
    Next, I said hello to Shadow. He typed his next message in the public chat, "Go away, Star. You've scarred everybody on this server enough. That was dark, especially for you."

    I didn't bother saying my hellos to anybody else. I thought for a while, and decided to go to OITC and play a few rounds to take my mind off of things. Saul and Wolfy went with me; Saul wasn't kidding when he said I was on probation. I clicked on an empty room in an attempt to join.
    "You are temporarily denied from performing that command."
    Saul explained this: "We can't always monitor you if you're in the game rooms, so I'm afraid you aren't allowed to join OITC, HC, MF or SG until further notice." I sighed and decided to go on TS instead.
    Wolf and Caity were in the TS lobby as well. Caity spoke first, "Star, I can't believe you'd do that. I respected you. Consider that respect gone." I simply sighed, and scrolled down to see the user channels. The only one that caught my interest was "Cobra's Channel of Dang Ol" which Roc, John, Davy, and Cobra were in. I asked Roc for the pass, but he simply said "Hell no." and closed the chat window. I knew I wasn't going to get accepted into any other channels, so I got off Teamspeak.

    Since I knew the people on the server obviously didn't want me around at the moment, I got off of that as well. I decided to start a singleplayer world. A world all to myself, nobody to tell me yes, nobody to tell me no. At that point, it was bliss.

    The bliss didn't last long at all. Out of nowhere, I got a message in my side bar: "Local game hosted on port 255421". I didn't press anything, nor did I have a system set up to automatically do it. I restarted my world, and the message didn't show up again. I breathed in relief.

    I found a place in the world to settle down and build my shelter. It was pretty nice considering my usual building skill, and I was proud of myself. It became dark, and since I had used all my wool to make carpets, I decided to simply craft a wooden sword and stay up for the night.

    Another message appeared on the sidebar. "_Starlight13_ joined the game". I tried not to pay any mind to it, dismissing it as another glitch...but it bugged me. I continued playing in my world normally for the rest of the afternoon into the evening, and went to bed early as I was tired.

    The next day, I woke up to find Minecraft already opened, and paused. I unpaused and saw that the house I built had been destroyed, and that I had been killed.
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    I pressed respawn, which would take me to my original spawn point in the world. There was somebody there waiting for me.

    It looked like my first fox skin...but, faded. And with a purple hue. I closed the world, and decided I might as well go to J&H again to see if anybody decided to forgive and forget.

    The server was completely empty. I thought for a second that the lobby just crashed again or something and I wasn't kicked, but I saw another figure behind me.
    It was the same one I saw in my survival world. Following my every move. The figure stayed close behind me, and continued copying me. I changed servers; no use. The same thing happened. It was only when I joined Peaceful that things changed.
    I spawned in the middle of my old party hall, and noticed the figure standing across from me. It turned around, and started placing down signs. The combination of me being scared and curious prevented me from exiting the game...it motioned for me to read the signs. I obeyed.

    "I see you've chosen a path of light." "All light burns out eventually." "You may think you're innocent now, but I'll catch up to you." "You can't run from yourself."

    I was then disconnected from the server.

    I don't know if you guys will believe me. In fact, I expect you guys to stop at nothing to disprove me.
    But I think that that figure was right.
    You can't hide from what you'll become.
     
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  2. wpbogdan

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    wow, this is awesome
     
  3. Vince

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    You've met with a terrible fate, haven't you?
     
  4. Xadidax

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    Omg
    That's so awesome!

    ily
     
  5. Gooby

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    That ending was really deep o_o
    rad.
     
  6. FabulousBen

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    Deep ending o-o you need to update your OptiFine too
     
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  7. Shadow_Folf

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    This, is called a creepypasta. Most other creepypastas I see every now and then that aren't renowned, are normally bad. In fact, I may make one myself. Heh.
     
  8. Emeritus_IV

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    Wow. this is awesome, you should continue doing this O-O
     
  9. BlueChuckian

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    Wow, that was amazing!
    Was this based on a true story?
     
  10. ImJustMrpie

    ImJustMrpie Farewell

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    Awesome Story Star :D
     
  11. John_0696

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    Wow star, your a pretty good writer :D
     
  12. sebastiann

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    This is really good, Star :) So rad
    Keep up the good work
     
  13. Miner

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    Ehm...
    Didn't scare me.