A Story I'm Making - The 8 Gods Of Hell

Wait, is my story offending you? ;-;

 

Can i be in the next part
name : stephanie

 

Sure! So you want to be a villian?
If so, what powers do you want? :D
(Example: Extremely fast, can turn into animals, fire abilitys, etc.

 

villain
ability to make people my slaves by looking at them and invisible arm/vectors (like a diclonius)
like this
(they can rip peoples heads off , push me in the air and can fight people and stuff)

 

Alright! You will probably be in Chapter 7 and possibly in Chapter 6 too, please be patient, thanks :p
EDIT: I shall call you Jento The Slave Hunter!

 

what my vectors can do (OP)

 

mightmare?
Just being grammar nazi ^^

 

Cool

 

Can i be in it? :3
Name: Hammie
Power: Rainbows :3

 

I'll be in it.

Name: NightShroud
Power: Darkness. I can melt into shadows, travel with the shadows, and radiate fear so intense, it will give you a heart attack, or make you go insane. I can also make anything appear out of darkness and hallucinations.

(Also, I want to be able to be so huge I can eat planets, kind of like, Galactus, but I think that's too overpowered, please correct me if I am wrong)

I want to be the main villain. Thank you! Excellent story so far!

 

Cake_Squid, Lord of the Squids :D

 

Hero
bcuz pvp is mi life

 

Nice story. :)

 

Hmm... I don't know if rainbows will work, sorry ;-;
Maybe something else like water or fire?

Awesome! So you are the main villian behind all these gods :P
You are Lord Nightshroud!!!

Sure thing, but PLEEAAASEEE be patient though, so many people are villians ;-;
You are... Cake Squid the Squid Overlord!!!

Sure! You will turn up soon ^_^
Thank you all for asking to be in my story, so many people wanna be in it

Thank you ^_^

 

Wow, so many people wanna be in my story :O
Anyway, enjoy my new part!
Characters So Far:
@Katy9078
@Oreo_Pug
@Rilakkumaloverr
@GoobyHasAnOpinion
New Character!:
@galladepow
WARNING, I KINDA DID MENTION BLOOD IN THE END! SO IF YOU DON'T LIKE VIOLENCE, DON'T READ!

Chapter 4 - The Horror Of Music
The music was about to crush my ears. Then suddenly i saw some old instrument on the floor. It looked like some werid shaped harp that was black. So i played it, but suddenly it made Gooby go CRAZY! "ARRG! WHY DIDN'T I PUT THAT AWAY!" Gooby shouted. I looked at my harp. I felt so amazed. "Louise! That must be Gooby's ultimate weapon, but he must have forgotten to put it away!" Oreo explained. I kept playing it. For some reason, the music didn't affect me. I thought that the person who plays the instrument doesn't get hurt. But then suddenly i looked at Katy and Oreo, and they were in pain! I dropped my instrument and i helped them get up. "Don't worry about us! Just... ARRRG" Katy suddenly screamed. I turned around, Gooby was playing on the instrument i played. I covered my ears. I ran straight up the Gooby and i pushed him. "Arg!" He screamed. He then got a tiny werid looking flute from his pocket, then played it. I felt so tired. Then suddenly i remembered what Oreo said to me; "Gooby will also make you fall to sleep and make you stuck in a nightmare forever!" My eyes were wide open. I covered my ears as much as i could. I turned around, and Katy and Oreo were already asleep. I saw them wiggle around, struggling to get out of their nightmare. "Heh ha ha!" Gooby laughed. I charged at him, but as soon as i pushed him, i fell asleep.
Gooby looked at us, with a huge smile on his face. "Hah!" He laughed. But then he tripped over his flute he dropped, and the flute suddenly broke.
I suddenly woke up breathing as fast as i could. Katy and Oreo seemed to be awake too. "No... NO!" He screamed. Oreo then suddenly threw an instrument at him. He slipped, and fell real hard on the ground. He stood up, a bit wobbly though. I got my ice sword out i got from Rilakkum, I charge at him. "NO!" He shouted, he took out a intrument, and when he played it, wind crushed the area. I looked behind me, and i wasn't so far away to fall off the cliff into the void.
I was about to fall off the cliff, then suddenly a portal appeared behind Gooby, and Rilakkum came out! She punched Gooby on the head real hard, he was unconsious! Rilakkum was breathing like mad. "Rilakkum, your alive!" Katy cheered. "I senced you were in danger." She explained. I looked at Gooby, who was on the ground. Then suddenly, an grey orb appeared. It surronded me and Katy, and then, an instrument was in our hands! "Awesome! Let's try it!" Katy cheered. "No! It might hurt us! Try it when we have to fight the next boss." Oreo shouted. Then suddenly Gooby came back to life. He was an angel too! "Rilakkum... Oh my goodness!" Gooby screamed as he saw Rilakkum. They hugged. "Lets get you home." Rilakkum said. They then openned a portal, and went inside. "Oh no..." Oreo panicked. Katy and I were confused. "2 days has passed. We must move quickly!" Oreo said. "2 days already? WHAT!" Katy screamed. "Well lets hurry! Oreo open up the portal to our next god!" I shouted. Oreo openned the portal, and we went inside.
As we went inside, dead bodies were lying on the floor. I swallowed while sweating. I looked up, a guy was sitting on some throne with arrows and blood on it, wiping its bow with a towel. He then suddenly got his bow out in a split second, and shot Katy on the shoulder. "ARGG!" Katy shouted. "Do you even know I'm Galla the Bow Champ idoits?! You will be headshotted in less then 2 seconds!" He shouted.
TO BE CONTINUED...
2 more villians needed! Hurry or you will miss out which will be sad ;-;
Thanks for reading!!! :D
Quick note: Please just IGNORE any wrong spellings, i type so fast i don't even check if my work is okay, sorry ;-;
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(Sorry for triple post D:)
Maybe thats a bit too op...
And by the way, maybe you should have just typed what you could do instead of showing the video, cause there are HEAPS of blood in it D:
i'm scared ;-;

 

Great story Louise
Keep it up c:

 

just do the arms part not the slave part :) and nerf it a bit

 

My reaction to chapter 4:
get rekt katy, stay down :3

 

You should add me to it Louise :3

Hope chu remember me xD