Story: The Ponies, the Zebra, and the Human

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  1. PyromancerMagic

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    Hehe, of course you incorporate My Little Pony. So predictable. xD
    Anyway, nice story, and sorry for ignoring it before. ^-^
    You have pretty good writing skills. :)
     
  4. PyromancerMagic

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    It is that predictable, isn't it xD

    Really, what sparked the idea of adding a human into this (which is a crossover most would disaprove of...at least, I would xD) was the guns. Think about it, you add a human with these hand-held (or in their case, mouth-held) guns, and you have the upper hand xD (And there's also the realization through reading the original Fallout: Equestria that the ponies don't use the scopes or iron sites...)

    The ignoring I really didn't mind, I just found it somewhat amusing. You have nothing to apologize for :P

    Ty :D
     
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    fabulous.
    sho fabulous.
    maekz mi wanna cri in joy.
     
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    Wow, this is amazing. Better than anything I can do. O_o
     
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    Great job, Pyro!
    You actually have great writing skills :)
    Continue the story, let's see some more!
     
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    Wow, thanks guys.

    Trust me, any story before this was terrible. I actually tried to go for a long, descriptive chapter, which is something i've failed so many times to do xD

    But really, this means a lot :D
     
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    gl hf, and try holding your breath while reading the whole thing (don't you dare respond saying you did or I will kill you, because you know you didn't).

    If you read the second chapter, please tell me you got the reference I hid in there xD
     
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    Yay. Another Human-Pony writer :3

    10/10 bc Human-Pony interaction is best interaction.
     
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    I still somewhat disapprove of the "Human-Pony" thing, but while thinking about this one night, it was all too tempting xD
     
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