The G-LitC.he - Book 1 Part 3

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  1. Trollestia

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    At first, it was all happening very slowly. But it sped up, very quickly. Soon, minecraft days turned to years. The world was going insane. Players everywhere tried to leave, or escape, but it was no use. G-L.C had removed all commands possible, and only he/she had the power to do anything. The admins on the other hand, had been quiet...A little too quiet, in fact. Players began to lose hope, and many began attempts at committing suicide, such as drowning themselves in lava or starving themselves to death. There was no hope. It was all just lost. Lost forever, in the world they had used to once play in. Have fun in. Love in. Live in.
    At this point, death was a gift.

    "Is it ready?"
    "Yes."
    "Good...Are you sure it will work?"
    "Yes, I am very certain it shall."
    "Alright. Is it possible for us to multiply these?"
    "No. We only have 23. But it will be enough to get all of the staff."
    "So...We save the most important players?"
    "..Yes, the donators especially...I am afraid there shall not be enough for the members..."

    *On the other side of the room*

    "What's the player count say?!"
    "991. 991 Players remain!"
    "Good! Signal all of the staff to come here at once!"
    "Will do."

    "Wait a second..."
    "What?"
    "Wait! Weren't the ranks removed?!"
    "You're...Right..! But.....I think we can...Remember the staff, right?!"
    "Yes, I think so.."
    "But..We never talked to the donators, so..."
    "Maybe we just grab our closest friends?"
    "No..That would not be fair."

    "Daorack!"
    "What?!"
    "The signals are being blocked! I think we need to move NOW!"
    "WHAT?! NOW?!!"
    "YES! We need to go NOW!!! Or else G-L.C is going to take the bracelets!"

    Dao begins to ready her loudest voice, and begins to speak in a serious tone.

    "EVERYONE, EQUIP YOUR BRACELETS!"
    "Okay!" "Alright!"
    "WE NEED TO MOVE NOW, SOMEONE TAKE THE REST OF THE REMAINING BRACELETS AND GO SEARCH FOR THE PLAYERS WE NEED!"
    "But WHAT players do we NEED?!"
    "I DONT KNOW, BUT GO! LOOK FOR THE PLAYERS THAT WILL HELP US!
    ..LOOK FOR STRONG PLAYERS! PLAYERS THAT CAN HELP US STOP G-L.C!"

    Magical pauses for a moment, and finally shouts back.

    "I-.....ALRIGHT!"

    She runs and climbs down an escape ladder, leading to an underground mineshaft railroad. She sits in the cart placed on the rails, and switches a lever on a wall connected to the rails by redstone. She had luckily gotten a backpack to carry the bracelets because of the BackPacks mod, and they arent even slowing her one bit. 18 Bracelets left. Right. It is increasingly getting darker in the mine, and that is a probable sign that it is nighttime. It seems that G-L.C had installed a realistic lighting mod, so right now it is basically pitch black. Although it is hard to see, Magical can still tell her bracelet is no different from the others.
    rsz_yes.png -I just noticed Magical has the same skin as me XD

    These bracelets possess a strange power, that can hide you from admins..Once these bracelets are worn, G-L.C can not track them, and has to find them manually. By him/herself. This is a massive advantage, as G-L.C relies a lot on on the tracking mods that were installed. G-L.C is not used to finding players without help of a command, so therefor anyone wearing these bracelets is fine...At least until they are found.

    She can hear explosions as she drives down the rails. It must be getting messy back at that lab that she, Dao, DWG, and Ncecal were in. The best hopes she has at this point, is that they are alright.

    ...Hopefully...

    *Some time Later*
    The cart stopped, along with the rails. A dead end. Where had she even been going in the first place? Maybe this ride was completely useless? ...

    ...Magical thought for a while, and began to mine. Upwards. The ride had been long enough, and at this point she was probably far enough from where the explosions and the lab was located.
    "5 hours should be enough...I hope..."

    She kept mining..And mining...Until she hit something...Not diamond nor gold...something..strange.

    *Somewhere Else*

    "Is that it?"
    "Yes..I think so."
    "Find any diamonds or whatever?"
    "Nah, something way better."
    "What"
    "I found a potato"
    "Oooh, a potato. Great. That should be enough to last us another hour...I hope.."
    "Man, your math ain't that sleek. I think this potato can barely last 10 minutes."
    "Yeah..Well I found 5 melons. Is that any better?"
    "Yeah, probably."
    "Soo....Uh...Found any good bayce yet?"
    "AAaahhh, no, base. Say it with me. BAAAAAAasssseeeeee."
    "You're such a Grammar nazi..."
    "Come on, you should know how to say it for like, since you started preschool dude."

    "GUYS LOOK!!!"
    "Wuwah?!??!!" "What is it?!"
    "I FOUND THIS!!!"

    Nether and Polardrago both excitedly, and hurriedly ran to Rilakkuma. They exchanged looks.

    "Umm...What is this?"
    "Its a hat!"
    "What?"
    "Here, let me show you what it does"
    "Uh-"

    Rilakkuma waves the hat in front of Polar's face, and elegantly if not like a ballerina, begins dancing around while doing tricks with the hat.

    "Uh..What kind of a haett is that?"
    "HAT."
    "Okay, hat.."

    "Oh, its a...
    Actually, I dont know. *:o*"
    "Huh..It looks weird..."
    "Yeah.."
    "Try putting it on instead of dancing with it"
    "Okay"

    While in an attempt to put the hat on, Rilakkuma slaps herself with it by accident.
    "AAWOOWOWOWOWOWOOWWOWOOWOWHHHHH"
    "WHAT JUST HAPPENED"
    "OWOWOOWOWOWWOOWOW"
    "YOU HAVE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME
    YOU DID NOT JUST SLAP YOURSELF WITH A HAT"
    "i did *:(*"
    "OH, whatever,"

    Everyone begins to cheerfully laugh in humor, nearly half forgetting that they were looking for food, to survive another day. They had been foraging for food, now that their base was destroyed, and had almost starved to death one day, if it wasn't for the pixelmon "Magikarp" that they had slain that had attempted to kill them, they would be dead already of starvation. This might as well be the last, if not nearly last, time that they all would laugh...together. Their stomachs are squeezing themselves because of indigestion of lack of food, and now their stomachs are barely the size of a baby's fist. It it only a miracle they are alive right now.
    ...But they are mainly alive, because they work together. As a team.

    "Um...Rila?"
    "Yeah, Nether?"
    "I'm kind of...scared..I dont know if we can live any longer than this..."

    "Nether, come on. You've been through harder times than we have. There's a higher chance of US dying than you, so you don't have to worry. Besides, We still haven't checked all of the remains of the houses yet. There's like, 600 more to go! Right?"
    "Yeah, but..I'm getting tired of this.."
    "Nether..."

    "Guys, I hear something..."
    "I hear rain.."

    "Smells like blood..."
    "Oh no."
    "Guys...Look...Out there......."
    Everyone looks out at the edge of the mountain, and see a red droppy liquid flying down from the sky. Something they had yet to see. In immediate response, they run inside a half-griefed house with no walls, but a floating, strong ceiling. The Hell mod has been installed. And now, the real pain begins. The world has truly, turned into hell.
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  2. Trollestia

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    I will be honest, I was not sure whether or not to release this part..It just doesn't feel as good as any of the other ones to me. I think I am missing something, and my brain keeps pooping out the good ideas into forgotten memories. :(

    Overrall,
    Can someone please critique this? I want to improve. thanks.
     
    Last edited: Jul 21, 2014
  3. Rila

    Rila Pyro is top bae

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    ERMEHGERD
    IM IN THIS.
    MAKE MORE.
    P.S.
    ITS FAB. STILL FAB.
     
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    Thanks :)
     
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  5. John_0696

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    this is really good Lidia :D id love to see more
     
  6. _Magical

    _Magical Pokémon trainer

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    ItsWilly Ex Co-Owner Donator

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    Nice. Then @Magical_Sparklez finds her baby MrDeathWilliam and it's a very cute moment. Then they cry and whatever and willy joins magical on this adventure. <3 ahah
     
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  8. Rila

    Rila Pyro is top bae

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    what is happening
     
  9. DiamondCraft

    DiamondCraft The Lord of Oreos

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    Add me too! I would greatly appreciate it! Like, I was separated and cast out, and you guys just find me on the ground. c:

    Really nice story I am already getting into it! I really love it!
     
  10. ItsOrie

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    I cry everytime..
     
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  11. Trollestia

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    in a bad way / good way?
     
  12. Emeritus_IV

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    wow.. this is an awesome story so far. :o do you think I could be in it?
     
  13. Trollestia

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    One more person that asks to be in this story is one step closer for me to stop this story.
    IT IS annoying. I will not add you if you ask. Stop.
     
  14. ItsOrie

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    both Trollestia.. both.. (ultimate plot twist)
     
  15. jerkboy2006

    jerkboy2006 Lord of the slimes. c:

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    Woah! These stories are amazing! Like and follow ;D
     
  16. DiamondCraft

    DiamondCraft The Lord of Oreos

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    Oh, sorry, I really am. I didn't mean to get you annoyed or something, I just thought this was a really nice story, and so I could be part of it. it's fine though.

    Sorry, once again.