A 'small' story.

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  1. Durske

    Durske The Dolphinator

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    I had to write a story for school and I thought ''Why not share it with the community in J&H?''
    So here it is:
    Thank you @_LeoTheBlack_ with helping me at some parts in the story.

    My Story.


    Hi! You are probably wondering who’s saying all this.

    I’m the storyteller.

    Storyteller:

    You’re probably wondering what the story is about.

    Well, that’s the reason why I’m here.

    The story is about a girl and a boy they both will tell their own story without knowing how it will end. So now the girl will tell her story.

    Emma’s Story:

    Hi, I’m a 14 year old girl. I’ll tell some stuff about myself. I like to play games but I play them rarely. I like to read and hate school. Not really the school itself but the people inside. I get bullied. So yeah that’s the reason why I hate school. So, I broke up with my boyfriend a few days ago. His name is Jake. He hitted me a lot. He still does when he sees me. Each night I go to the park and cry.

    Well that’s my story I guess.

    Storyteller:

    So.. we learned some stuff about Emma. But let’s listen to the boy, Alex.

    Alex’s Story:

    Hey. My name’s Alex. I don’t talk very often. When I talk I try to talk with short sentences. I play games a lot. It helps me think. I don’t go to my school anymore because I get bullied.. I only go when I have exams or tests. Because I get bullied I made myself think that I’m out of shape. So I workout each day. That’s all I’m saying. I’m going back to being quiet.

    Storyteller:

    Well, that’s a bit weird. Anyway he forgot to say that he cries in the same park. He also has a lot of scars. Mostly of cutting himself because he was getting bullied.

    But Emma and Alex never met before. You can already guess what this story is about.

    Emma:

    My parents are mad at me because I didn’t go to school so that’s why I’m in the park.


    Alex:

    They bully me outside the school now too. I’m going to the park.

    Storyteller:

    That was a very obvious hint about the story.

    Alex:

    Who’s that girl..? I never saw her before.. I wish that it would stop raining.. My mind is weird.. Get out of my mind!

    Storyteller:

    Right..

    Alex:

    I’m going to talk to her..


    Alex: Hi… What’s wrong… if I may ask?

    Emma: I just met you.. But I need somebody to talk to.. So I guess I’ll tell you. My parents are mad at me because I didn’t go to school.

    Alex: Why didn’t you go to school?

    Emma: I get bullied..

    Alex: I understand.. I have the same problem..

    Emma: What’s your name..?

    Alex: Alex.. Yours?

    Emma: Emma.

    Alex: It’s cold.. So here..

    Alex gave his jacket to Emma and she weared it.

    Emma: Thanks.. You’re nice.. You don’t often meet boys like you.. At 2 am..

    Alex: Yeah.. It’s kind of weird.


    Storyteller:

    Oooh isn’t that cute..? Sitting next to each other in the park.. Even if I saw it for the second time. But let’s go forward in the story.. So 2 days later. Emma’s parents found out about Alex and they became mad. Mostly her dad of course. Her mom was quiet and didn’t know what to say.

    So they’re sitting on the couch in Emma’s house.

    Emma’s dad: You’re not allowed to have a relationship with Alex.

    Alex is silent.

    Emma: What…? Why!?

    Emma’s dad: He’s too dangerous. And we can’t trust him.. You met him at 2 am!

    Alex wants to talk but doesn’t.

    Emma:Bu-

    Emma’s dad: No! You’re not going to date him.

    Alex: I’m very trustable sir. I will treat your daughter like a princess. I’ll be there for her each day, each night. Each year.

    Emma’s dad: Leave our house Alex.. Now!

    Alex: Emma.. Is this what you really want?

    Emma: I’ll be fine…

    Alex leaves the house with tears in his eyes.

    Emma: I hate you dad!

    Emma runs to her room and starts to cry.


    Storyteller:

    The story changed unexpected didn’t it?

    We all thought they will have a happy life. Instead they aren’t allowed to talk to each other.

    Alex didn’t leave his house for days.

    Emma tried to forget Alex. She dated a different boy as a replacement.

    So like a replacement-Alex.

    So let’s go to Emma’s life. Since Alex is in his house all day.

    Emma:

    Don’t be mad at me. I’m just trying to forget Alex. I can’t date him further. Because if I do. My parents will keep me away from him. They’ll most likely move to a different place.

    So this is my boyfriend’s name: Mitch.

    Storyteller:

    So now you know the name of her new boyfriend. You’re probably wondering why I’m still continuing. That’s because SPOILER ALERT they’ll meet again. So let’s skip like. 2 weeks. Alex is still in his house. But he suddenly hears somebody crying in front of his house. It was Emma but he didn’t know that yet. Alex was ignoring the sound and kept on playing his game. But after 1 hour of hearing somebody cry. He just had to go downstairs and ask what’s wrong. So he did.

    Alex runs downstairs and opens his door and sees Emma crying.

    Alex: Emma! What are you doing here..? What’s wrong..?

    Emma looks at Alex with tears in her eyes.

    Alex sits down next to her and tries to comfort her.

    Alex: Please tell me what’s wrong..?

    Emma doesn’t talk and they sit next to each other for 1 hour.

    Emma: I had a boyfriend.. I used him to forget you.. But he was sending me disgusting pictures. And right when he send me one of those pictures I asked him if he could come to my house.. So he did.. I wanted to break up with him but he thought something else. So when I opened the door he immediately kissed me.. I kept pushing him away and tried to tell him that I wanted to break up with him. After 5 minutes I finally was able to say it. But he became violent and hitted me and kept kissing me. When my dad came home he just wanted to hit Mitch but Mitch ran away.. My dad grounded me but I sneaked out.. I need somebody to talk to..

    Alex: I’m always here for you.. I promise you. I will beat him up.. So he knows how you felt when he hitted you..

    Emma and Alex stayed up sitting in front of Alex’s house until 3 am.

    Storyteller:

    Well.. Like I said. They’ll meet again. It may not be in a happy way. But I won’t spoil anymore.

    Alex decides to try and convince Emma’s parents.

    Storyteller:

    They both want to be with each other. So Alex goes to her parents. Of course at the next day because you don’t go to somebodies house at 3 am.

    Alex goes to Emma’s house with Emma to try to convince her parents.

    Emma’s dad: Alex.. I thought I said that I don’t want to see you here again.

    Alex: I know. But I’m here trying to convince you so we can date. We both love each other a lot.

    Emma’s dad: Fine. You can try. But if you fail. I want you out of here and I never want to see you again.

    Alex: I’ll tell you some stories about my life. And how I got my scars. To show you. I’m trustable. Because I didn’t get my scars by being dangerous. I got them by being sensitive. Because I get bullied in school. A lot. It made me insecure. So now you’ll probably say it’s bull**** to cut yourself just because you get bullied. That’s because you don’t know my life that well. I’m a sensitive boy and also very shy. I’ve never really done something bad. I’ve always respected people. I listen to them, and when they ask me to do something. I do it, without any problems.

    Emma’s dad: You-

    Alex: Please let me finish. I know how to cook. I can easily clean. Like I said a few weeks ago. I will treat your daughter like a princess.

    Emma’s dad: You got one week. One week to prove that you’re the right person for my daughter.


    Storyteller:

    He has 1 week. Maybe he actually did it. That he proved that he was the right person. Who knows…? Except for me. Let’s skip that 1 week. It’s just full of sitting in the park and that stuff anyways… Why am I here again? You have to tell the story.Right.. Do I even get something for this? Of course. O- Is it still typing? So.. one week has passed.. Let’s go to the day where Alex is in the same room as Emma’s dad. Emma isn’t there because her dad wanted her to leave the room.
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    Durske The Dolphinator

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    Emma’s dad: One week has passed.. You proved yourself. But I think you’re not the right one for her.. So I want you to leave and never come back..

    Alex left the room with tears in his eyes and looked at Emma for 5 seconds.. Then ran out of her house.

    Emma: Dad.. What did you say to him!?

    Emma’s dad: I told him that he wasn’t the right one. So I ‘asked’ him to leave.

    Emma: But you said that he proved himself.. You told me he was allowed to stay!

    Emma’s dad: I changed my mind.

    Emma ran to her mom and cried. Her mom was hugging her.

    Emma’s mom: It’ll be fine. Your dad is just overprotective. But when you’re 18 you can meet Alex. Then you won’t have any problems with your dad. Because then you’re a big girl. Then you can do everything yourself.

    Emma: I know, but it’s going to take so long.

    Storyteller:

    Oh god, this is just a long conversation with comforting stuff. Let’s just skip forward.

    And make a huge jump in time. 4 years later. Emma texted Alex to meet her in the park when they’re both 18. Now. They’re both 18. Her dad still doesn’t allow them to date. But now she’s 18 so she can do whatever she wants to do.

    Alex is in the park waiting for Emma to come.

    Emma entered the park at 1 am.

    Alex was still waiting for her. But he became sadder each hour.

    Alex saw Emma at the lake. So Alex ran to Emma and hugged her.

    Alex: I missed you..

    Emma: I missed you too.. We’ve waited so long.. We can finally be together..

    Storyteller:

    Well, what a happy end.. Did I seriously say all this for ANOTHER happy ending?! Just read the story or you won’t get your money. Fine.

    When they both met each other again, And they started to live together. They knew at that time that they were meant to be with each other. So they lived a happy life. I want my money now! I’ll write a check. Just read the last line. Fine, THE END.
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  3. Enderbrine

    Enderbrine うちはサスケ

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    *Claps* Nice Story :D
     
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    Durske The Dolphinator

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    Thank you. :p
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  5. PenguinHook

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    Nice story, very long, I was expecting Emma to think that Alex was ugly or something and leave him because she changed.
     
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    Durske The Dolphinator

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    Lool. I could've done that. I'm most likely planning on writing another story. This time, a sad ending. But the same Storyteller. ;P
    Edit: This time for no reason. Maybe I can get a extra grade out of it. ;)
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  7. UnicLeo

    UnicLeo A Skyblock 2 player Donator

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    Your Welcome Durske lol :D
     
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    Durske The Dolphinator

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    Okay, I'm bored. If you have a idea for a story. PM me it, I'll write one and post it in a new thread or if you don't want that I'll post it in the conversation. Of course with the same Storyteller.
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  9. DiamondCraft

    DiamondCraft The Lord of Oreos

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    Nice story, just some grammar mistakes here and there, but it's a very nice story overall.
     
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    UnicLeo A Skyblock 2 player Donator

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    Ok Sure :)
     
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