Hope at worlds end (IJAH Fanfiction)

The I'm in space! thing was from another game xD, amazing story you wrote there tho!

 

Wow, i cant believe you guys like the story :D makes me happy that you guys enjoy it. ^_^ ill make as good as possible!

 

ifna.

nice job :D you should be a novelist

 

Chapter 4 :D with the help of @Heatdude Da Waffle, We worked together and made this chapter for your entertainment!
enjoy! ^-^

"Knock knock knock!" Dwg looked over the corner of his chair at the front door. "Come in!" He said, putting down his book and getting up to walk over. When the door opened, the person standing there looked deformed and wretched. "Who are.... DAORACK?!" He screamed, running over and slinging Daorack's arm over his shoulder. Looking over his chest and arms Dwg realized he was bleeding all over. "What happened to you?! Who am I kidding, that's not what matters right now. LILA!" He screamed up the stairs. "WHAT?!" He heard a voice respond. "GET DOWN HERE!"
"Uh, Dwg, what are you talking about?" President Bacon said in the chat.
"Wait, what?"
"You're screaming about getting down here...?"
"GOSH DANG IT WRONG CHAT!!" Dwg looked up the stairs again. "LILA GET DOWN HERE, IT'S IMPORTANT!" He screamed.
"FINE!" A door slammed and a moment later Lila appeared at the top of the stairs. "WHAT DO YOU- Oh god, what is that hideous thing?!" Lila said, staring at the body Dwg was carrying around.
"That thing you're referring to is Daorack." Dwg said. "And he needs help NOW." Dwg said, turning away from Lila and walking over to the couch.
As he carefully laid Daorack down on the couch, Lila rushed past him to get into the kitchen. "Damn it Dwg, now I look like the writers anti-feminist, "get into the kitchen." Like, come on!" She said, looking through the cabinets for medicine. "Let's see here.... band-aids, yes. Oil, Yes. Donuts... um.... YES." She looked through each cabinet until you found it. "YES!" She said, grabbing all the things and running back into the living room.
"Here, give him this." She said, holding out an instant healing potion and some shimmering golden apples. Dwg nodded and took them from her as she rushed back into the kitchen to get the rest of the stuff. Dwg turned back to Daorack and nudged him. One eye slowly opened to a squint. "Hey buddy." Dwg said, as he took some wet paper towels and band-aids from Lila. He started dabbing the wounds that covered Daorack's body. "Man, what happened to you. Who could have done this..." Dwg's head suddenly looked up, flashing back to his memory of the battle field after the fight. Dead or wounded bodies lay everywhere, some with many holes in them, a few with weapons still impaled in their body.

"Dwg... Dwggggg!" Suddenly snapping back to reality, Dwg looked over to see Lila shaking him. "What's the matter, help!" She said, going back to applying band-aids and washing off blood. Dwg stared for a moment then shook his head. I need to be more focused.... He thought, going back to helping Daorack. But none of the bodies from there were even close to this bad...

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John rushed forward at Reetu, grabbing a fire extinguisher off the wall on the way. "I WILL FREE YOU, HARRY!" He screamed, jumping in the air. As he started to descend, he whipped the extinguisher over his head, swinging it at Reetu. Right before it hit, Reetu summoned a sword out of nowhere, pulling it up so quickly that it looked like a blur. "FSSSSSSSSSS..." John dropped the extinguisher and jumped back to join the group. The gas slowly covered the part of the hall he and Reetu had just been standing in. "COME OUT OF THERE AND FIGHT ME!" John yelled.
"Oh, I'll save you for later. You're quite fun." Reetu said from inside the mist created by the gas.
"But for now, I'll play with you."
"Was it just me, or did that sound like it was more than one person..." Claire said, backing up a step.
Suddenly ten human-shaped creatures burst out of the mist, charging at the group.
"Get read guys!" Hubble yelled, pulling out a metal bar he had grabbed off the wall on their way up. John jumped forward, punching one of the creatures dead on in the face. "Hah!" He said, smiling at the indent his fist had left. A smile crept around the corners of his hands on the creatures face. John felt the face suddenly turn solid, almost as if it was stone. "Uh, guys, help!" He said, looking over at the others. His eyes widened in terror, seeing that the same thing was happening to them. Another one rushed around the corner and grabbed onto Johns other arm. Slowly both of their bodies started to ooze onto his arms, as if they were made of goo. "What's going on!" Hubble yelled.
"I can't breanisdmsaid-" Claire was cut short as one of the creatures started spreading down his through.
"No, Claire...." John slowly started losing conciseness as the creatures choked him. "No...."
Just as everything started to fade, a dark blade shot by right in front of his face. His eyes shot back open, seeing a dark sword impaled in the face of the creature in front of him. It's grip starting to loosen, John saw his chance. Jumping in the air, John kicked out and drop kicked the creature to the ground. The other one quickly let go, springing backward to avoid getting hit. John turned to the left to see who his savior was. "How did you-"
"If you thought a few cuts and a cast were going to keep me from helping you guys, you've got another thing coming." Demon said, smiling at John.
"And thing thing would be me." Saul said, walking around the corner.
Hubble looked over to see that Clair was free as well. The last remaining creature started to back away slowly in fear as the other five walked towards it. "Wait... NO! Please don't kill me!" It screamed, a scratchy voice spewing from it's mouth. "Fine, then talk!" Shadow said, lunging forward with his good leg and holding his sword at the creatures neck. "Now, if you know what's good for you, you're going to answer everything we ask you. Got that?" Demon said, glaring into the creatures empty eye sockets. It quickly nodded, making sure to to touch the blade. "Good, now, let's start with this: Where are Jerry and Willy..."


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In the hospital room, william tried opening the door to harrys room, Locked. Jerry was sitting on a chair and healed himself with the nearby first aid kit that was sitting on the counter. "you gonna be alright? willy said helping jerry up out of the chair, "Yeah im gonna be fine just a few cuts and bruises, thanks willy i really appreciate it." jerry said putting the last bandage on his arm. "Now what has Gotten into harry?? first he has insane panic attacks, then he thinks hes reetu again and now hes destroying everything he sees." William then pondered for a second then snapped his fingers "I think i know why!" william exclaimed. "it may be because of this Unicron guy he mentioned in one of his panic attacks!" Jerry looked at william with confusion and said "Wait whoa whoa, Who the hell is Unicron? is he a hacker? a virus? or some dumbass who made harry insane?" william kept thinking about it some more, "I dont know who he may be but one thing is certain, this guy is baaaad news." jerry then sat down again. "alright then, once someone comes save us, ill look into this "unicron" guy. he may just be one of the guys from that corporation thing 2 years ago..."

To be continued! How is our story so far to you guys?

 

veddy güd

 

Wow. I almost get killed. Just like Kirito.

 

It's an honor to inspire this story. Really.
:D

 

Which chapter was this?

 

it was edited :) Btw its me John im just sawpping with Yomc for swap day

anyways back on topic, chapter 5 will be released tomorrow or so. stay tuned :D

 

Chapter 5!! :D written by me and @Heatdude Da Waffle ! sorry for the delay in the story, im having kind of a writers block and trying my best to coem up with new parts of the story. anyways enjoy our new installment of hope at worlds end!


Daorack slowly opened his eyes. He started to sit up, but as a he did a searing pain went up his back and he fell back down. "Oh, you're up! Stay down man, your in pretty bad shape." NES said while patching up Daorack's leg. "Ugh... where am I?" Daorack asked weakly.
"Your back here at the moderator headquarters, we're trying to save the server from the angry players causing a riot down in Peaceful district. Bluejeans now thinks shes Reiuan as well, and we are thinking up a way to stop her and get the original Bluejeans back." Nes continued, filling Daorack in on the stuff he'd missed, including the battle with the rioters in the peaceful district.
Daorack sat up but then grabbed his lower stomach in pain. "The peaceful district riots... its gotten worse than that. Criminals from factions district made a deal with them... and now they're planning on storming The staff capital." Dwg turned around in panic. "WHAT!? Oooohhh this is not good, not good at all..." Dwg got up from his chair and walked over to a radio station. He turned on the radio station by turning dials and pressing buttons. "What are you doing??" Misfit said as she ran over to Dwg, "I'm going to send an emergency signal to Jerry! We can't let the faction district criminals take over the kingdom! Ocram! send a message through Morse code to the national guard! Tell them to be on high alert for any attackers that come near the district!" Dwg commanded while adjusting the antennas on the signal transmitter. "Roger that!" Ocram said. running over to the Morse code table. He started typing out the first ever message to National guard in the history of Jerry and Harry's leadership, Translating to a warning: Civil rebellion en route to staff district. All personnel on high alert. Be ready for the worst.

A soldier read the code and reported to a person with black hair with stripes across one side wearing a tuxedo named Commander Yomc. "Sir! There's an incoming emergency code sent from staff district!"
Yomc turned around, smiling. "Well, then what're we waiting for? Let's get this show on the road."

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"Where are Jerry and Willy?!" Demon said louder than before, holding the blade closer to the creature. "They-They're up on the 3rd floor locked in Reetus Hospital room! Its heavily guarded by other mind controlled humans! Please, just don't hurt me!" the creature sputtered out. Demon stood up, putting his sword back into the holster on his back. "Alright, you bought some time for now..."
Demon turned around and nodded at the others. "Let's get a move on."
The group of teens readied their weapons and advanced towards the stairs to get up to Jerry and Willy. Just then the creature jumped up and lunged towards Claire to grab her, but John quickly turned around and knocked out the creature with his Air bender attack. The doors opened to the hospital lobby, where the ER hallway they had been in was attached to. There lay dead bodies of nurses, doctors, and patients, blood splattered all over the walls as if a bomb had gone off. "Oh my god..." Hubble said in horror as he walked through the severed body parts and blood. "It's like the time that king was ruling over us..." John said as he held up his Diamond sword remaining alert. "But we cant let this stand in our way of saving Jerry and Willy. Come on, the elevators are just up ahead." The teens moved forward cautiously, when all of a sudden a mind controlled nurse walked the corner carrying a large sharp spear made of some type of negative energy. "Intruder! Prepare to die!" The guard yelled and raised up her spear. John was the first to react, as he ran and tried to smack the spear out of her hands, but she was fast and kneed John right in the stomach, and the impact made him fly back into a wall and fall down in pain, struggling for breath with the wind knocked out of him. "Saul, get to Jerry! Don't let them get you!" Claire said while holding back the guard with her god spear, "Got it Claire! I'll be back before you know it!" Saul then spread his wings and flew out the entrance of the building. Demon pulled out his euclidator and sliced the spear straight in half. The guard then charged at Demon, engaging in a fist fight with Demon. Demon dodged each swing then at the most precise moment managed to block one of the guards fists by swinging his left leg up to knock it aside, and then jumped and spun, using his right leg to kick the guard in the head, knocking her unconscious. Suddenly the alarm sounded, and more and more guards swarmed into the lobby. "We got a whole lot of fight coming our way!" John said readying his sword as he stood back up. "Lets take these guys on, FOR ASUNAAAA!" Demon said running towards the guards. "You think those rioters made him a bit crazy?" John said to Hubble. "Nah, that's just him. Either way, we need all the crazy we can get right now, right?" hubble said jokingly. They smiled at each other and turned towards the guards. "Now let's do this." Hubble said, pushing off towards the guards, John just on his heels. "We WILL save you, Jerry and Willy!"

to be continued!

 

Like true SAO fashion.
*claps*
Btw, when does the Master Sword make an appearance?

 

MASTER SWORD?
Totally forgot you had that equipped. I'll look forward to seeing the Blade of Evil's Bane.

 

I always thought it was the Blade of Bane's Evil. .-.
But, how would a sword give Bane his evil?

 

Im gonna get to work on chapter 6 in a little while, i still got to brainstorm ideas and stuff for it..

 

since yourr avatar was kirito, i wanted to make you kind of like him in the story :)

 

That reminds me so much of ff7's intro scene :O
Anyways nice story, I like it! :D

 

CHapter 6 may be here by Either tuesday or Wednesday so all of you Stay tuned to this thread! ^_^

 

I see, a crossover fan fiction. It's IJAH, Transformers, and Portal, I think. What made you write this story?

Anyway, some advice. Please refrain from using walls of text. It's very confusing. Add more detail and actions. If this took you only around 30 minutes, I also advise you to spend more time proofreading it.