Ju-On: The Grudge. (My Own Version)(Fictional)

The Grudge describes a curse which is born repeatedly from victim to victim.
Ju-On (Also known as Kayako Saeki) died In 2004.
Why?
She was married, and she had a journal she kept all her life.
She wrote about the guy she was madly in love with before she got married.
Her husband had extreme anger issues, and when he reads it.
He murders his family. His wife, Kayako, becomes an Onryo.
While Takeo (Kayako's wife) goes into rage in the street at night, a trashbag moves behind him.
Kayako, as an Onryo, comes out from the trashbag and kills him.

1989 January 3. ​

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Hitoshi
Hitoshi was Invited by her boss for lunch, she accepts it. When she was calling her boyfriend, she hears a death rattle coming from the bathroom. She excuses herself and hangs up the phone, she then investigates the bathroom. As she opens the door she sees black goo on the wall.

She then cleans it for 2 hours, she then notices she is late for her lunch to discuss business with her boss.
After riding to his house, she knocks on the door, no answer.
She knocks again, and the same, no answer.
A big knock from inside the house hits the door, which scares her.

She then opens the door, only to see it a big mess and dark.
She steps a foot inside, and the door closes behind her. She struggles to open it, but fails.
She then explores the house, then sees a little boy. She asks for his name, "Toshio" was his reply.
(Toshio Is Kayako's and Takeo's son.)
After that, Hitoshi goes upstairs and leaves the boy drawing strange things.
She sees a cat (Which Is named Mar, owned by the Saeki family), the cat usually forewarns any intruders their impending doom, and at sometimes, it might attack an intruder with her/his extremely sharp fangs.

The cat hisses at her, but didn't scare Hitoshi. Then pale, dead white, hands grabbed the cat. (Hands belonged to Kayako) Hitoshi falls back, and runs to the stairs, Toshio then makes cat noises. It is revealed that the cat can only hiss, and the boy can make cat noises.
She runs to the door, tries to open it, she tries to break the window, but fails.
Then she sees Kayako crawling down from the stairs, covered by blood.
Kayako had long black hair, dead white skin and she was an Onryo, a vengeful spirit that is visible and human-like.
Hitoshi then is filled with fear as she sees Kayako crawling, then Kayako gets closer, Hitoshi screams in terror.
Kayako then subdues her with her hair (Her hair can extend).
Then, the screen... went.... BLACK.

Kayako
Kayako was a normal woman. She was married with someone who cared about her so much.
She was walking down the street once, and sees Kobayashi (Her crush back in college days).
She writes down In her Journal this:
"I saw him today, I was happy. I was in love with him again, and I'd do anything to be with him.
She leaves her journal while she goes to check on Toshio, but Takeo went to the attic and saw her Journal.

He was in uncontrollable rage.
Kayako saw him, and ran away.
Takeo then broke her knee, forcing her to crawl down the stairs.
After she reaches the end of the stairs, Takeo grabs her hair, he then snaps her neck into a 90 degree angle and puts her in a trashbag and pulls her into the attic.
Kayako was still alive, but paralyzed.
He then stabs her multiple times. He then drowns his son, Toshio (A witness to the murder) with his pet cat, Mar.
Takeo then goes into rage into the street, he then sat down .. the trashbag behind him moved, and emerged into kayako as an Onryo, and kills Takeo.
Now the ghosts of the Saeki family will kill anyone stepping into their house.
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I'll do the rest tomorrow as I am tired today. It's 12 AM.
Bye.

 

Uh.. Cool?

 

I'm so confused... what did I just read?

 

Welcome to the internet.
I guess i'm the only one who saw the movie then..

 

You're not the only one @Xadidax
That movie gives me the nightmares when I was a child. Seriously creep me out whenever I watch the movie. Even in school, I tried to avoid any kid who looks like that kid in the movie. XD