I am back! (first YT editor? Please read the post!)

Hey guys, it's Mythxc! I have made a return to the JerryAndHarry community! Yes, I may have a past with all the stuff, ahem, staff would know. I have struck to my word with saying that I will change to Jerry and I truly have. I am sorry once again. Anyways, that's not the point. Ever since I started playing J&H years ago, I always noticed that not a single UK YT rank ever came on, so I want to change that! I am an aspiring editor, wanting to bring joy to all the people I meet! Here's my first ever submition and please, enjoy!

This server has never had any YT ranks who do content like I do (that I know of), I can bring unique content to the server!



*PLEASE NOTE, THE VIDEO IS NOT IN BAD QUALITY, IT IS JUST RENDERED IN 25FPS. I WANTED TO TRY SOMETHING NEW. JUST CLEARING THAT UP*

Oh also, credit to my man @Cheezipoofs for recording the clips. Love ya <3

 

Here's some feedback.

• Your text falls off the screen, and is too far to the left.

This is an easy fix, just crop it correctly.

Other than that, it's a pretty good edit. I'm counting out any FPS/quality problems because you've already mentioned them.

 

I had to deal with it, because Matt didn't use a camera mod so it was really hard to make it look nice haha.

 

Also, another problem.

The intro is kind of redundant.

It starts off with the original intro saying Jerry and Harry, and then it says the same thing on the other part.

 

That was meant to happen. Since I am a cod editor, I am used to doing it. It was intentinal and there was supposed to be a third, cine, but I had to rush this eith only tw0.

 

I like it, it's a good start.

I'd recommend that you fix the text issue as was said before, it seems to far over to the left side.
I'd also try making something more original, as it repeats Jerry and Harry.

Other than that I'd say it's fine, nice work.

 

Will do in my next edit!

 

Yeah, not much else to say other than the text being a small amount to the left, I took a look at your channel, the no idea video was dope( you could make a gret mem out of it) your cinematics on COD are dope too, good work on your editing overall.

 

<3

 

<3

 

@ItsJerry

 

Holy shit, thanks man. Much more to come!

 

This is kind of what I was thinking.

 

Your other content (other than this video) is good except for 2 things.
1. You say Mythic presents after Mythic is in our faces. You just need it once. We aren't goldfish.
2. The text doesn't fit. Don't have it to the right. At least have it centered.