My First Render

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  1. blok

    blok Donator

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    Hey guys so this is my first render. I used two rigs in blender. Tell me what you think and how I can improve, thanks!

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    @Denisvenom9 teach me
     
  2. Denisvenom9

    Denisvenom9 》Faction Veteran《,

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    Even thought I am not good or anything here is some tips:

    • Don't make the background white
    • Change the angel a bit
    • The sword doesn't have a angel
    • Your body is literally straight
    • You kind of croped the sword
    • Your hands are kind of wavy
    • One hand has some graphics issues
    If you skype me I'll teach you.


    Anyways it's very good for the first time.
     
  3. TheBlackHamood

    TheBlackHamood Feel Pain, Accept Pain, Know Pain

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    As a render dud, lemme answer this
    • White background is perfect
    • Angel is good
    • Sword might be 2D
    • Cropping is like scaling in the 3D world m8
    • It's called bending
    • It's a problem with the rig
     
  4. blok

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    Thanks!
     
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    LeEpix An Amazing Person

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    Angle*
     
  6. blok

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    Doesn't matter :P