bello! i made my first manga today:D i hope you like it: i made the picture with my mobile, its a bit blue and it looks like he has a flat head.. :p
It look good for a start. You said its supposed to be in a manga style, so I would do research on body proportions and sharing , to make it look realistic. The face looks fine to me, but the head shape looks a bit off
I wish I could draw .-. Im in Art class and I am a horrible drawer. N' your drawing is amazing dude. I like the way you made the eyes :3