Luna: Story

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  1. Whizzer

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    Chapter 1


    I wake up. I have no memory. I see I’m in a small room. I try to talk, but my throat is hoarse and nothing comes out. I get up. I am unbalanced and dizzy. I manage to stay up and start walking forward. I don’t know why, but I have a feeling like I have to go there. I see a door. I open it and walk out. I don’t know why, but this new place looks familiar. It’s a town…but it looks abandoned. All I see is the sun. That’s until people come out of the falling-apart houses. They stare, nervously. The town is small. It seems after a few minutes of walking, I am out of the town. It’s dark. There is no sun. It’s all is the darkness of night. The coolness makes me smile. I have a memory. A night. I was sitting alone in the night watching the moon. Then it spoke to me. It told me, that I was the one to come to reign. I didn’t understand the memory at all. I lay down staring at the moon. That’s when I am grabbed.

    The man says, “ Who are you?”

    I try to reply. I can’t talk though. My throat is too hoarse. I try to speak again this time I manage to.

    “Water.”

    He walks forward not once letting go of my arm. As we walk forward he grabs tighter and tighter. I dare not cry either. He hands a bottle of water. I drink all of it.

    He asks once again, “Who are you?”

    I reply, “ I don’t know.” “I’ll ask once again, who are you?”

    “I...don’t...know, you have to believe me.”

    “Are you… one of them?”

    “What are they?”

    “Who. They are a group of humans with magic inside of them. They are misunderstood though. Many people want them dead. I should know, I am one.”

    “Show me.”

    I hadn’t even realized I said this, but I did want to see this.

    He closes his eyes. I see swirls of light and color. The lightshow stops and I see him. He looks different though. He is wearing armor.
    To Be Continued...​

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    Very good work I like it
     
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    Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!
     
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    LolNope. If I had one, it'd most likely be "SmolSkel"
    Man... dem writing skillz doe!
     
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