A story (Cause YoLo)

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  1. CaptainJackValdy

    CaptainJackValdy I got a plan to save the server, just have faith

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    So... I've been working on that thing for a little while, Louise said it wasn't so bad so... YoLo. The story is a little bit gory (not the mortal Kombat way, like a lot less gory than that) and if the chapter I made is a little too gory in my opinion, I'll make you vote for if I write the original chapter, or I softly change it into something....not inhumane. The first 3 chapters, none of the forums will be in but after the third one, I may add a few of you. Hopefully it doesn't fail like the other ones. YoLo!

    A Big Bad Rock.

    Chapter 1, where the main character gets kidnapped

    Planet Earth. The planet that was once known as 'home' for the many who lived on it. But that was the past and the future changed it. Due to pollution, the lakes dried out and turned into giant craters, the forests became deserts, the towns were destroyed, the human population almost extinct because most of the humans became psychopaths. They could murder anyone and not care and because the story takes place in 2056, these psychopaths had claimed futuristic weapons and armor which made the situation even worse. Here's the definition of "getting hot in the sun".

    This planet was now filled with bandits (people that murder others for fun and joy), looters (People that kill weak and collect their stuff, then share it between them) and Fortune Hunters (People that look for ancient military hideouts which contain very valuable equipment that some people would pay a very good price for). The population of the Earth reduced a lot because of these insane people. Luckily though, some normal people still live on this hell of a planet, and Ender is one of them.

    Ender is from a rich family, this is the main reason he ain't one of these murderers. In fact, Ender has supply of food and water, he isn't starving. He has an armored futuristic camping car equipped with 4 automatic short caliber cannons that are like mini-guns that look for the closest target then shoot, two on one side of the camping car, other two on the other. He never stood on one place for long time, only for rest or eat, he was afraid of people, he was always driving forward towards the "better place" that his parents were always talking about. They believed that one day, this "Rock" will become a good place like before.

    This day, at the end of the summer, at the very dusty morning, while Ender was driving towards the "better place", a group of looter hunters were hunting a dog. It sure seems crazy to eat a pet but when you're starving, crazy ideas always come to your head. While chasing the dog with a spear, the looter came on the road on the which Ender was driving and accidentally smashed the hunter... To death. After smashing him with the front of the camping car, Ender was really scared! His heart was beating with fright. He felt like lightning had hit him from the sky and shocked him. His life never planned to go this far. He was frightened and excited at the same time. He have done something he never even took a second to think about.

    The dead looter's friends came along. They came closer to their dead buddy with a sad look on their faces. Ender felt a little sad too, he never meant to kill that looter, even if he's probably a very terrible person. All of the looters were wearing white t-shirts with a skull drawn on it, it was the looters' brand. The sad looters lay down on their knees crying. "This blind car-driving scumbag killed him!!!" Screamed one of them pointing at Ender with his laser rifle. "Kill that damn bastard!!!" After these words, a lot of laser shots started flying around in the camping car, the windows were broken and his furniture has got holes inside. Ender panicked. He quickly started the engine and started to drive away. He didn't want to use the cannons to kill more of them. He wasn't like them. He was also very impressed by the way they insulted him, Blind car-driving scumbag... Not pleasant, but impressive... For looters.

    While driving away in a camping car, a cluster of cars was chasing after him. The drivers kept screaming "Shoot the ugly meathead!!!" and the passengers kept shooting the Windows. Luckily for Ender, the cars couldn't catch him and camping car's walls were solid enough to ricochet the laser shots back at the looters. Ender was scared. He never was in a conflict which could very easily be his last. His heart was beating and his fingers kept twitching. However, he was kind of glad of being in that situation, he kind of wanted a little adventure.

    Some time later, the looters were still chasing Ender, his camping car was a lot faster than his pursuers because of the V12 motor that the camping car had, while the looters' cars only had V8. The chase continued for a quite long time, Ender, even if he was scared, was a little tired of looking in the back to check if his pursuers were still there, so he stopped to look back for a short while, but during this short while, Ender noticed an another car that was driving near the camping car's door to his left. This car had something particular, first, it was red while all the other cars were brown with fire drawn on them. Second, this car was the first to even reach the door, while the other cars were just following in the back.

    A little while later, the driver of the red car has pressed a green button on which was written "AUTOPILOT", has taken a laser rifle and started climbing towards the camping car's door. Ender, still nervous, remembered of the cannons and started thinking of how stupid the looters were, they didn't notice the cannons on top of the camping car! Ender has pressed one blue button and after pressing it, a board with some more buttons showed up. Ender pressed the red one and this activated the cannons.

    The cannons quickly pointed towards the looters in the red car, the looters inside that car braced and used the car's floor as a weak shield, except the driver who had jumped to the door and broke it, he dropped his laser rifle while jumping though. The looter was now inside of the camping car. Inside, he saw an old small bed on which Ender slept, a table and a metallic box. The looter, without thinking, opened the box and has found a large iron axe, and came towards the driver's seat on which Ender was. When he came close enough, he swung the axe, he was trying to hit Ender but Ender reacted very quickly and dodged by jumping away from the seat, instead of hitting Ender, he hit the button board which deactivated the cannons and made the other looters come in. Some of the passengers of the red car died after the cannons shot, which made the job of surviving a lot easier...ish.

    When Ender saw more looters coming from the door, he quickly rushed towards the metallic box and pulled a rifle out. He never expected to need to use it in these circumstances. This rifle had a scope which made Ender more accurate and gave the looters less chances to dodge the shot. The next wave of looters that came in was equipped with melee weapons, which gave Ender an advantage. However that didn't help Ender because he too nervous to shoot.

    After getting on the nerve to do it, Ender shot two of the looters that came in, but then he noticed that no one was driving and that the camping car was driving by itself. He rushed towards the driver's seat but it was too late, the camping car smashed into a giant rock and Ender got projected from the front window, the window broke and Ender hit his head onto the dusty ground and fell unconscious.

    After he woke up, his camping car was burning, all of his stuff, food, water, weapons were in the looters' cars, the ones that didn't do much in this chase, Ender's legs were attached to one of the cars and he was dragged through the desert extremely fast, it was not the most pleasant thing that had happened to him because there was sand that came in his hair and eyes and his feet hurt a lot too. He no longer wanted any adventures. "Where are you guys carrying me?" Asked Ender. "You'll see, kiddo, you'll see..."

    After they finally arrived their destination which was a looters' camp, Ender's feet bled because of the rope. The camp was formed of four small houses in which the looters slept and ate and kept their treasures and of a long building where the cars were. The car which dragged Ender stopped. All these murdering people that lived at this camp were looking at him and talking about a "new toy to play with". One of these looters came to Ender and cut the rope attached to the car and to Ender's feet, Ender suddenly felt a lot better because the rope finally released him. The looter that freed Ender grabbed him by his hair, that was painful, even more painful than being dragged through the desert with his feet attached to the car. Then the looter pushed him on the ground, Ender's face on the sand and said "Welcome to paradise". The looter smiled and then kicked Ender in the back.

    Hopefully you enjoyed, if you did, I'll put more. :3
    Thx for reading.
     
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    CaptainJackValdy I got a plan to save the server, just have faith

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    Because I still believe in myself. The next chapter is a little too gory in my opinion, I write the gory version or change it a bit? Write it down below.


    Chapter 2 - Where the main character survives a bandit assault

    After being kicked several times in the back and being humiliated in front of every looter in the camp, Ender found out more about the "new toy to play with". In fact, this toy which Ender should be will be used as a slave in this camp. Ender will do all the dirty work, he will clean the cars, will clean up bathrooms, mop the blood from the trucks etc.

    The looter that freed him was showing him the camp and telling him what his next duties will be and when they will start. "You starting today, my buddy, but first I'll show you your boss" said the looter. "The boss?" asked Ender. "The boss." Answered the looter. Ender and his guide came to the second of the four houses.

    There was no difference between them, all the houses looked the same and had the same purpose. All of the four houses were standing on four large metallic poles. The houses themselves, were not standing on the ground, they were standing on those poles. To get inside of one of the houses, you had to climb a wooden ladder that was between the four poles, when you climbed on top, you had to enter through a trap door. The houses were made out of wood, these constructions were really not solid.

    When the two men came closer to the ladder, the looter made Ender climb first to avoid giving Ender a chance to escape. Even if he would be given a chance, Ender wouldn't run. Almost all of the looters were equipped with rifles and these who weren't were carrying melee weapons like swords, axes and golf clubs. He'd rather clean some trash than losing his arms or get his head cut off.

    He opened the trap door but someone inside of the house stepped on the trap door shutting it down. Ender didn't even have time to react, this trap door hit his head and made him fall off the ladder on the dusty ground. After he landed, his guide looter started kicking sand in Ender's face calling him weak. Ender got a little mad. "Who are you calling weak, huh?". He immediately stood up trying not to show his pain and started climbing up the ladder. Fast. But this time, when he got to the trap door, he opened it quickly and roughly.

    After opening the trap door, he got a small image of what was inside. He saw boxes around the place and a table in the middle with papers on it. The looter inside of the house got scared of the sudden trap door open and screamed, but a second later, he closed his mouth thinking that no one heard him. However, there were three more looters in that house so thinking that no one heard him was dumb. After realizing that it was his "toy" that entered the house, he quickly became mad. Not only he got scared of something in public, but also, he got scared by just his toy!

    The mad looter waited for Ender to climb in and when he climbed in the house, the looter punched his nose. Ender fell on the scratchy floor. His nose bled. A few seconds later, the looter guide showed up as well. When he got inside, he got surprised to see Ender on the floor. But he lost interest very quickly, he didn't care a lot about toys. "I guess you met your new toy." Said the looter guide. "Not the best of toys we have of course but can resist a couple of..." He couldn't finish became the looter that got scared shut him up.

    "You did your job. Now go, have the rest of the day off" said the looter that shut the guide up. "You three lazy scumbags too." After he said this, the three other looters inside of the house followed the guide. Ender quickly realized that this looter was his boss and their leader. Wasn't very hard to guess, they listened to his orders, he's the first to "play with the toy" and including his white t-shirt with the skull drawn on it, he was wearing a cowboy hat. "Stand up." said the leader of the looters.

    Ender, seeing no much of choice, stood up. He was a little scared of what's gonna happen to him, since clearly the leader didn't like him a lot. He was a little scared, but Ender didn't show it. He wanted the looters to know that he has a soul too and that he ain't just an item. "You little coward, humiliating me in front of my workers. How the Hell dare you?! HOW THE HELL DARE YOU?! From now on you're a lifeless item that WE WILL USE!!!" shouted the leader. The more the leader shouted, the more Ender got scared of what his life will be if nothing magical happens.

    "Do you understand what I'm saying? From now on, you don't exist. No one will come see you" Ender didn't really care about that, he had no one who would visit him anyway. "No one will tell you stories tonight, no one will change your diapers if you crap in your damn pants! And every time you do something like you just did to me, I'll cut your fingers one by one...myself." This time, Ender just couldn't hide his fears. His eyes were all round, his lips were moving from one side to another and his hands were shaking.

    "But, since you're a newbie here, I'll give you something easy." Said the leader switching his mad face to a smiley face. "Perhaps, you could open that red box and give me what's inside of it." Ender, unsure of what just happened approached the red box, it was a very small box, seemed like just an apple can fit in it. He took the box, put it on the table and opened it. Inside of it, there was a small blue shiny cube made out of diamond. On one of side of this cube, there was a hole in which only something skinnier than a pencil can fit.

    "Isn't it beautiful?" Asked the leader. "Sure." Answered calmly Ender. "Do you know what it is?" Asked the leader. "No, should ?" asked Ender. "If you want some big cash, then yes." Said the looter. "Because this... is the pyrosis project. And it's gonna lead us... To that military hideout which contains the rarest of the flamethrowers...and then I probably won't need you anymore and I'll probably kill y'all" the last three words had frightened Ender. Not that he was scared of getting killed, but the fact that he chose THESE words to complete such a phrase.

    However, he was very interested in that project. He might earn so much money by selling those! But, it may just never happen, pyrosis project or not, he was a prisoner of the looters.

    "So... What's my next task?" Asked Ender, sad. "Dude, I like you already!" Shouted the looter happily "Didn't even have the time to finish his first job, already goes for a second one! Eh, I guess you can just..." Before the looter could even finish, him and Ender heard one of the four houses explode to pieces! "What the hell was that?" Asked Ender, surprised and scared at the same time. "Hell should I know?!" Shouted the looter.

    A few seconds later, he noticed a small group of 3 trucks and 10 vehicles in which there were people equipped with laser rifles. They started to shoot everyone around while laughing at the same time. "Damn bandits... Will kill you for no good damn reason other than for fun." Said the leader looter. "If I would be you, kiddo, I would leave this place now." Ender listened. The leader took the pyrosis project and left the house through the trap door. Ender followed him.

    He didn't know what else to do. Bandits were bulldozing their way through the camp and he didn't want to be the next person to be bulldozed. The bandits were wearing brown jackets which were bulletproof against the melee weapons, but couldn't resist a laser. They were wearing this for several reasons, but mainly because of the fights in the arenas. The leader of the looters tried to run away but one of the bandits shot him in the back. Ender's heart started beating loud after he realized that the bandit that just killed that looter, is pointing his gun at him. His entire life just passed in front of him and this is the way it ends...right? Of course not! My story would be too boring if he died here.

    The bandit pointed at him and started pulling the trigger, slowly. Ender thought he had heard his last heart beat. To his relief, the laser rifle had run out of ammo. "Dammit!" Screamed the bandit and threw the rifle on the ground kicking it. Ender, catching his breath, has seen looter cars leaving the camp from the giant house, gathering resources.

    He was about to run after the cars but he quickly noticed the pyrosis project in the leader's hands. He rushed towards the looter leader, took the cube out of his cold dead hands and took a flare gun that the leader of the looters had. It wasn't a flare gun like you know right now, instead of shooting fireworks, it shot explosive bullets that explode in contact with anything.

    After taking these two important items, he noticed an another bandit behind him. This one had an axe. Ender quickly pulled out the flare gun and pointed it at the bandit. "Don't make me do this!" The bandit seemed not to care and rushed to Ender. Ender pulled the trigger because of reflex and the explosive shell quickly got inside of the bandit's body. A few seconds later, the bandit exploded to a million of pieces. This was very gross! Ender didn't want to smell this blood anymore so he rushed to the cars, but he soon realized that it was too late and that all the looter cars lucky enough have evacuated. Seeing no other choice, Ender started running away from the camp into the desert. Where no shall find him. Where he won't find anyone.

    Ender felt a lot more cruel than he was before. He had murdered a person, and didn't care from now on. He was becoming one of those animals.



    Well, duh... Why would anyone read this, huh? Locking. Thanks those that actually took time to read.
     
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