Separate names with a comma.
Avoid being repetitive in both names and verbs. I wouldn't call this part much of a chapter, it only consists of Snecto talking to his AI.
I think you're honest with your opinions here. I want to see how I do.
You might want to work on the proportion of the legs, especially the left leg.
I still don't understand why you haven't taken my advice...
Congratulations, but you could refrain from double posting.
I see, a crossover fan fiction. It's IJAH, Transformers, and Portal, I think. What made you write this story? Anyway, some advice. Please refrain...
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All I can say: It's a very nice song. This is the first song you ever wrote, right? It's nice, compared to many others. The repeating chord...
I'm sure Jerry and Harry are fixing it. But think about this: would this rant solve the problem that is affecting Survival Games? It takes patience.
I'm pointing out my honest opinion.
I went on Google and read the creepypasta. It was a bit astonishing for me, but it's most likely a hoax. Even though some people are actually...
Was it really necessary to post here? Yes, it may be the only way of answering, but here is what I believe should have been done....
The colour of your chat does not really matter. Did you really have to make a thread about this? Yes, we do have choices of text, for example:...
