Need some opinions c:

that's a very nice drawing. my only feedback would be to fix the area around the chest because it looks a little unruly. otherwise, the shading is really beautiful and the colors are very well blended. 10/10
also, i prefer the first version of the drawing.

 

I like this new one, but like @Stellarite said, the chest does look a bit "off". Good luck! :)

 

Thank you both. c:

 

Nice effects! I like this one better :D