[My 10th And Final Story] Darkness Never Dies

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  1. TheUndeadBrave

    TheUndeadBrave Life's too short, make the most of it!

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    Hi guys! Really sorry for the delay. You see, I've been terribly depressed and upset lately due to school. Been quite lonely lately. But hey, I'm back guys :)
    Also, it will be my birthday on the 3rd of July, so please say happy birthday to me on my profile pic when it is the 3rd. Every comment means so much to me since I've been lonely lately. ^-^
    Characters With Major Roles:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @Sven007
    @TwageTomato
    @Snakehammer19
    Characters With Minor Roles:
    @Katy_
    @TheHarryzx
    @TheUndeadBrave

    @SandyTheDog
    @Kryokin
    @BlabDaFish
    Characters Mentioned:
    @CaptainJackVald
    Enjoy ^-^

    Chapter 10 - The Wrath
    The ground suddenly shook and vibrated. I thought it was an earthquake.
    "Oh what now?" Blab complained.
    The vibration continued. My feet suddenly went cold.
    "Oh lord..." Harry gasped.
    I looked at him, then stared at where he was looking.
    And I couldn't speak.
    A giant portal, almost as high as the mountain spawned out of no where. The wind started to blow faster.
    A massive foot then stepped out of the portal, crushing some pine trees.
    When the foot stepped onto the ground, the ground shook stronger, making us almost not able to move.
    An arm then came out. It was pale white and had large claws.
    Birds quickly rushed into the sky, away from the beast. I heard them cry with fear.
    The other foot then stepped out. Half of the beast was exposed.
    The beast had a white robe, slightly ripped at the bottom. The sleeves were also ripped with splatters of blood.
    The other arm then was exposed, revealing the whole beast.
    The hair was blonde and short. It's eyes were red with a black, oval pupil in the middle. I noticed the other features, but I couldn't recognise him.
    But Harry seemed to recognise him immediately.
    "That stinking pirate! Agggh!" He grunted.
    "I don't seem to recognise it..." Blab said while looking bemused with her head slightly tilted.
    "Can't you see? Captain Jack turned SnakeHammer into a monster!" Harry shouted.
    I looked at the beast again, and it WAS SnakeHammer.

    The other Gods rushed out of the portal. They all looked quite proud of Captain Jack's creation.
    Sandy whimpered and sat next to my leg.
    "That blasted monster... turning innocent humans to monsters!" Kry hissed.
    "To be honest, he looks more handsome." Katy commented.
    I turned to her, giving her a look.
    She shrugged and continued to stare at SnakeHammer.
    SnakeHammer then slowly turned its body towards us.
    He took one step forward. The Gods then charged towards us.
    We rushed right back into the forest, past all the trees and the bushes.
    I suddenly froze for 30 seconds. When we were released, Sandy looked like he was about to faint.
    Harry held Sandy and placed him over the shoulder.
    "Where do we go? SnakeHammer would be able to see us from miles away!" Kry cried.
    "Wait..." Sandy whispered.
    He started to sniff the air. He suddenly raised his eyes.
    "A cave... with humans in it... it is close, but hidden." He explained.
    "But where the heck is it?" Kry hissed.
    Sandy closed his eyes and dropped his head.
    Time froze again. This time for 40 seconds. When we were released again, we hurried to find the cave Sandy can sense.
    The ground then slowly shook again. SnakeHammer was close...

    "Hey! I think I found some sort of cave!" I heard Blab call.
    We rushed to her. However I stopped when I saw Katy just standing there, doing nothing.
    "Come on!" I shouted.
    She didn't move.
    I grabbed her arm and rushed to Blab.
    There was a cave, but it had big boulders in the way, too large to move.
    I tried to push a boulder, but the weight and size was too much.
    I shook my head to the others, which made them disappointed.
    Suddenly, I heard a sound, like something large rolling.
    I turned around, and Harry was PUSHING the boulder.
    I thought my eyes were broken, but there he was, pushing a boulder as heavy as gold.
    He even lifted it up and threw it against a tree.
    He sighed and pointed at the opening.
    We ran in. In the distance it was pitch black.
    When Harry came in, he gave Sandy to Blab and pushed another boulder at the entrance.
    When the boulder was in position, only small rays of light was able to come in.

    "Who's that? Freeze, or I'll eat your face!"
    We froze and gasped, bemused and scared.
    I still couldn't see anything, so I couldn't see who was in front of us.
    A burst of light rushed into my sight. I thought something exploded, but once my eyes settled, there was light, and 3 men stood in front of us.
    I saw a fire, hover over the palm of one of them.
    "Ah! Lads!" Blab cheered.
    She rushed to one of them and hugged them, almost making their eyes pop.
    Then I realised who they were, and I lifted a great smile on my face.
    Twage, Agent S and Undead stood there, looking quite... rotten.
    "Geez, what have you three been up to?" Kry asked, looking disgusted.
    "Uhh... we were abused and slaughtered by Captain Jack..." Twage sighed.
    "Also... who's this lad?" Agent S pointed at Harry.
    "He was originally Finn. Now he's Harry." Katy explained.
    I looked at Undead, sighing at the corner of the cave.
    I walked over to him. He didn't bother to lift his head up.
    "Undead, did you teleport us when we were in danger?" I asked.
    The others looked at me.
    "Remember? In the tower that we destroyed using grenades?" I explained.
    "Ooooh..." They all said, almost groaning.
    "Yeah... that was me... I knew you were in danger. so I quickly teleported you exactly 100 metres away from the harm." He explained.
    Suddenly, I heard a small squeak, like a small cry.

    I looked at the boulders at the entrance, and it looked like a yellow mouse, trying to squeeze inside.
    "Awwww, look. A dog." Twage giggled.
    Agent S slapped Twage due to his stupidity.
    The mouse then hopped out.
    "Oh. Hi Pikachu." Harry said awkwardly.
    Blab rushed to the back of the cave.
    "Ahh! It might sting me with it's cheeks!" She cried.
    "Blab, I think your mistaking a mouse with a bee. How could a mouse sting-"
    Small lightning zaps then sprung around it's red cheeks. It growled.
    "Oh..." Undead gulped.
    Pikachu crawled closer, looking at each of us.
    It froze, looking at Agent S. More lightning zapped out of it's cheeks.
    "That's the Pikachu that belongs to SnakeHammer... he must've left him due to the monstrocity that has corrupted his whole body." Harry explained.
    Pikachu hissed and crawled closer to Agent S.
    "Hey little guy..." Agent S said in a soft voice.
    Pikachu froze and narrowed it's eyes.
    "Don't worry... I won't hurt you." Agent S said.
    He held his hand out. Pikachu remained still.
    Agent S quickly dug into his pocket and grabbed a small piece of a tomato in the palm of his hand.
    Twage tried to grab the piece, but Sandy bit Twage's hand to stop him.
    I thought Pikachu was too hard to convince. I thought he'd just attack him.
    But then Pikachu crawled towards his hand.

    It crawled slowly, taking one step at a time.
    It sniffed the pieces of tomato's. It slowly chewed and nibbled.
    When it swallowed, it rushed up his arm, onto his shoulder.
    Agent S smiled and tried to pat Pikachu.
    But that just electrocuted him, making him drop to the ground.
    "Heh... good mouse... heh..." He giggled.
    "I think they'll get along just fine." Undead chuckled.
    To Be Continued...
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  3. TheUndeadBrave

    TheUndeadBrave Life's too short, make the most of it!

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    Great chapter Lousie, keep 'em comin!
     
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    Sorry ya'll for the long wait... I seriously had a mind blank for what this chapter should be, so it is a bit shorter than usual.
    Also, school holidays has just started for me, so I'll be able to post chapters more regularly.
    Characters With Major Roles:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @Snakehammer19
    @Katy_
    @BlabDaFish
    @CaptainJackVald

    Characters With Minor Roles:
    @Sven007
    @TwageTomato
    @TheHarryzx
    @TheUndeadBrave

    @SandyTheDog
    @Kryokin
    Enjoy ^-^

    Chapter 11 - The Betrayal
    A roar vibrated the air and feared our minds.
    "SnakeHammer is venturing closer towards us. We must go out and fight the beast!" Katy commanded.
    "Fight it? Look at it! It's as big as the mountain! And I'm about to faint again!" Sandy complained.
    "I know it's weakness," Harry said.
    "I remember Captain Jack doing experiments on us Gods to try and make us large. I remember him saying that if this works, then it will be invincible, unless the face was harmed." He explained.
    "Why the face. Why not in between its legs?" Twage complained.
    "Because all the energy inserted into the victim is right in the brain. If we could burn and crack the brain, it would die."
    Pikachu whimpered.
    "I don't think Pikachu is ready for its past owner to die..." Agent S said as he tickled Pikachu's chin.
    "I know a better way!" Katy said as she jumped in front of Harry.
    "Oh really? What's your suggestion, cupcake?" Kry hissed.
    Katy gave him a look.
    "Gentlemen... and ladies. I've studied Captain Jack for longer! The core of this monster is right in it's chest, where the heart sits! Once the heart has been damaged, the dark energy would flow out and return the victim back to it's normal size... not killing it!" Katy cheered as she clapped her hands.
    "That's not true... the heart isn't what-"
    "Oh, hush little boy!" Katy slapped Harry.
    "Hey, keep it easy. Now enough debating. Is it the heart or the brain?" Undead asked.
    None of us answered. Harry and Katy looked at each other.

    Another roar shook the cave. Tiny pebbles knocked down from the ceiling.
    "Not enough time to figure out what the bullseye is! This place is going to crash right on top of us!" Blab screamed.
    Harry pushed the boulder at the entrance out of the way. We all rushed out.
    Once we were out, we saw SnakeHammers face above the trees in the distance.
    He noticed us and marched forward.
    The Gods hopped on top of the trees, charging towards us too.
    Twage was about to charge forward, but Agent S stopped him.
    SnakeHammer was right in front of us, and also the Gods.
    Captain Jack then stepped forward in front of the Gods and SnakeHammer.
    "Why, good morning lads." He grinned, showing his rotten teeth.
    No one said a thing.
    He frowned and threw his cigar away.
    "Behold... SnakeHammer 2.0! Such a beautiful beast." He cheered, as he stared at SnakeHammer.
    "Okay... that's enough talking from me. Hurry up and kill them." He said.
    When that commented was stated, Twage shot a fireball right at SnakeHammer's head.
    He took a step backwards, but managed to keep his balance.
    The Gods shot their spells at us, but Undead created a shield, protecting all of us.
    "Aim for the head!" Harry cried.
    "No, you blockheads! The heart!" Katy shouted.
    We were all confused, wondering where to attack.
    Pikachu threw a ball of electric and thunder at the chest of SnakeHammer.
    That attack made SnakeHammer look more stressed in pain.
    "Aiming for his heart seems to be giving more damage!" Katy exclaimed.
    "But didn't Harry say that the head should give more damage?" Blab asked.
    Katy gave her a mean look. Blab sniffed.

    So we aimed for the chest. Arrows, spells and electric kept hitting the chest, but SnakeHammer was still capable of standing.
    "By the way, do you like my new bow I made?" Agent S giggled.
    "Yeah whatever, it's pretty. Just keep using it to shoot the beast!" Kry shouted.
    The shield around us was starting to break, as the Gods continued to shoot their powers at us.
    "When will that stupid shield break! I'm starting to run out of arrows!" Arrow shouted.
    "Just keep attacking. It will break soon!" Crystal commented.
    Robo charged at the shield then smacked it's hammer right on top of it.
    Shards of purple glass then dropped on top of us.
    "The shield is down! Take cover!" Undead cried.
    Suddenly, dust and smoke rushed in our faces. I was blinded and couldn't see where the others were.
    When the dust cleared, everyone was grabbed by a floating glove, floating above Mystery.
    The left glove then punched me right in the gut, which made me fly right into a tree.
    I fell on to the ground. My stomach felt like it had just been shot.
    I looked up, and Blab was the only one who was free.
    The glove then tried to charge at her, too. But she then picked up a spear, left on the ground and stabbed it, right in the middle thinger of the glove.
    The glove shook it's hand and scrunched up it's fist.
    It then grabbed Blab and shot right into the air, in front of SnakeHammer.
    "Mystery, what are you doing with her?" I heard Melody say to Mystery.
    "I'm going to make her then make the glove smack her right into the ground, so deep that she will suffocate in the dirt..." Mystery explained.
    I gasped and tried to get up, but my arms felt weak and my legs felt broken. All I could do was watch the horror.

    The glove was then just above the height of SnakeHammer. Blab was still being held in the fist.
    The glove then pointed at the ground and was about to fall straight into the ground.
    But Blab jumped out of the fingers, towards the forehead of SnakeHammer, and STABBED the forehead with her spear.
    SnakeHammer screamed. I heard Pikachu gasp and Sandy bark.
    Blab continued to dangle from the spear, about to loose her grip.
    SnakeHammer wobbled forward and backwards. I prayed that he'd fall backwards, because if he fell forward, I would be crushed.
    He took a step back, then slowly fell towards the ground.
    The ground created one giant shake, almost making the tress fall.
    Once the ground settled, the glove let go of my friends.
    Sandy helped me get up and we rushed towards where SnakeHammer landed.
    When we arrived at the scene, SnakeHammer was on the ground, normal sized but blood rapidly rushed out of his forehead.
    Blab was next to him, still gripped onto the spear that was stabbed in the ground.
    We rushed to Blab and held her up. She opened her eyes and let out a big grin.
    "I told you guys that his forehead was his weakness!" Harry cheered.
    Blab sighed and was strong enough to stand up.

    Suddenly, blood sprayed out of her chest onto our clothes.
    A sharp, steel tip pointed out of her chest.
    The tip was pulled out, and her back then splashed with blood too.
    She fell on the ground
    and stopped breathing.

    We all gasped. Undead held her and tried to cover his wounds.
    He pressed his ear on his chest.
    When he looked at us, he shook his head.
    I covered my mouth, filled with shock.
    We were all stunned. Almost frozen.
    Sandy walked towards Blab's lifeless body. He sniffed her and began to whimper.
    Agent S and Twage started to cry, while Kry started to curse.
    Harry hooked his arms around me and started to sob and complain, saying that he should've killed the giant himself.
    I kept repeating to him that is isn't his fault.
    With the sore mood, small tears started to dribble down from my face.
    I looked up, and Katy stood there, with a spear
    with blood covered in it.

    "You... you DID that?" I shouted.
    "Of course I did you blockheads. Didn't you realise I was working for Captain Jack? She ruined his dreams and hopes! So I ruined hers too." Katy explained.
    My jaw dropped low. Sandy and Pikachu growled.
    "How DARE you! We trusted you! We even helped you!" Kry shouted, spitting all over the place.
    She giggled.
    The Gods arrived and saw the scene. They raised their eyebrows.
    "Woah Katy. Looks like you aren't very useless after all." Squidling realised.
    "Of course I ain't useless. I know all their weaknesses now." Katy smirked.
    "YOU MONSTER!" I cried.
    I pushed Harry off and charged towards her.
    However, Robo smacked me with his hammer, making me flop to the ground.
    I struggled to keep my head up. They all stared at me with great grins.
    But Katy had the biggest grin of all.
    Someone pulled me back towards the group, away from them.
    Captain Jack then came and clapped slowly.
    "Wonderful... just wonderful!" He cheered.
    He put his hand on Katy's shoulder.
    "I... I must say. My granddaughter did a great job, didn't she?" He laughed.
    "Granddaughter?" Harry gasped.
    He then laughed and looked at Katy.
    "Why of course! Ha ha ha. Anyway... that's enough for today. I'll see you lads later... also, beware of the dragon." He winked.
    "D-Dragon? What?" Agent S gulped.
    Captain Jack then opened a portal behind the Gods.

    Captain Jack picked SnakeHammer up and marched towards the portal.
    Pikachu charged after him, growling and about to shoot thunder at them.
    Crystal however then spawned a giant ice wall, blocking Pikachu.
    When the ice wall shattered, they were all gone.
    Pikachu let out one final cry, almost sounding like him calling to SnakeHammer.
    To Be Continued...
    Sorry for the sadish chapter... umm here's come cookies to help you all.
    Really sorry Blab for making you go, but thank you so much for participating in my story! We will all remember your role deeply.
    Let me know your thoughts with your comments below, with also a lovely like too :)
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    Alright... This is indeed a very sad chapter... :(
     
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    Sad that Blab had to be killed off :(

    Still a good chapter
     
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    Thank you for having included me for this long. While I'm leaving this website, I still appreciate it.
    Nice chapter.
     
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    I've been active for how long, and yet I'm still a member of Louise's stories, albeit a minor one at this point. For that, Louise, I thank you. You show great loyalty even in the face of others abandoning everyone, and I commend you for that. I'm glad that I'll be around in your final story in spite of the fact that I've been inactive for the entire duration of it. Again, thank you Louise.
     
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    I'm terribly sorry to make you go :(
    I promise you, I didn't make you leave just because you were leaving this website.
    I just wanted to try and make some twists and turns to keep the story entertaining and keep people reading on. Don't worry, throughout the story you will still be mentioned a couple of times tho c:
    Aww, it's okay :) You see, your character is really important in this story because you are pretty much the humor in it and probably the most lovable character ^.^
    I also thank you for requesting to be a character in the very first place, otherwise, you'd probably not be in this story and this story would probably not be so funny which draws people away.

    Characters With Major Roles:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @TheUndeadBrave
    @SandyTheDog
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    @Katy_
    @BlabDaFish
    @CaptainJackVald
    Enjoy ^-^

    Chapter 12 - Sore
    The mood was immediately sore and cold after hours of Blab's death.
    Sandy and Undead still remained next to Blab's body.
    I walked towards them. Sandy crawled towards me and started to rub his fur on my leg.
    Undead continued to stare at Blab's lifeless body. He lowered his head as I pet him on the shoulder.
    "I should've been aware of the darkness in Katy... I should've ended her when she stood there... but I did nothing..." He whimpered.
    "It wasn't your fault. It was none of our faults. We did the best we could." I said.
    "Seeing someone get stabbed in my eyes... it horrors my memories deeply." Sandy sighed.
    Sandy then sat next to Undead and looked down.
    I walked to the rest of the group, standing near the trees.
    They were all down. Not a single smile rose when I walked towards them.
    "Just why would Katy do this... we treated her like family..." Kry scrunched up his fist.
    "She's probably my second most hated being!" Twage hissed.
    "Who's third?" Agent S asked.
    "I don't know... probably a rotten tomato I ate a couple of months ago..." He shrugged.
    I walked to Harry, who was alone sitting on a stump.
    I sat on the stump next to him. He looked at me for a second.
    "Aye, you did the best you could lad." He smiled.
    He looked forward, staring at something.
    "Pikachu has sat there for hours. Not moved a muscle." He sighed.
    "...SnakeHammer really was his true bud. But now Captain Jack's darkness has wrapped him fully." He continued.
    I hopped off the stump and walked slowly towards Pikachu.

    I kneeled down next to him and stared forward with him.
    At the corner of my eye, I noticed him looking at me.
    I looked at him and his eyes were narrowed, almost mad.
    "You okay?" I asked.
    He then resumed staring forward.
    I tried to pat his back, but as soon as my finger touched his fur, he growled.
    "Hey, I know you're really close to SnakeHammer. Don't worry, I promise to not to kill him, but we may have to harm him a bit so he could escape Captain Jack." I explained.
    I heard him take a deep breath.

    Suddenly, I couldn't move. I thought I'd faint.
    After a minute I was able to move again. I heard everyone else take a great breath.
    "Time is escaping... we must find the cause for this." Harry said.
    "How?! We don't know where it's coming from, Captain Jack and his new brat is now somewhere, and one of our group members died!" Kry shouted.
    I tried to think of any hints Captain Jack gave us that may relate to the escape of time...
    Then something clicked in my mind.
    A quote from Captain Jack right after the death of Blab...
    ''I'll see you lads later... also, beware of the dragon."'
    "Dragon..." I whispered.
    Pikachu looked at me. He titled his head.
    "Dragon!" I repeated louder.
    Everyone looked at me.
    "It must be... a dragon..." I said.
    Harry jumped up, looking like he could yell.
    "Yes! I remember Captain Jack saying something about a dragon that can control time! That must be it!" Harry cheered.
    "One problem mate... where exactly is this dragon? It might be located on the other side of this planet!" Agent S complained.
    "A moon is where it's located..." Undead softly answered.
    I looked up, and close to the red sun was a light blue moon, just next to the clouds.

    "It must be..." I murmured.
    "One problem... how do we get from here to there?" Sandy asked.
    "Oh, how about we go to the bird zoo and get a bird!" Kry said cheerfully.
    "Hey, that sounds fun..." Twage smiled.
    "We're getting a space ship, you blockhead!" Kry shouted.
    We looked at each other, wondering if anyone owns a spaceship.
    "Exactly who has a space ship though... and I doubt this dumb planet has one." Agent S sighed.
    "Deep under the depths of soil and rock is an ancient rocket ship. Small and old but just big enough to fit as all in and enough fuel to get us from here to the moon." Undead answered.
    "Hold up, how can you know everything?" Twage complained.
    "Because I've been here before. Remember? We traveled back in time and now we're slowly traveling back to the present, which was when the fall of the universe is happening when Louise resurrected Captain Jack." Undead explained.
    "You did? Why the heck did you-"
    "It's a long story... heh." I shrugged, interrupting Harry.

    "Alright so how do we go underground. Your claws aren't strong enough to dig for that long." I said to Sandy.
    "I know how to get there." Undead said.
    "Arg why can't I know the solution to everything instead of you!" Twage complained.
    "Because you still haven't received your brain yet..." Agent S sighed.
    So we all got up and followed Undead, but just before I did, Sandy was still behind.
    I walked to him, confused by why he isn't following us, but that when I realized that he was still close to the body of Blab.
    "We have to leave her here, Sandy." I sighed.
    "But... we can't!" He exclaimed.
    "She'll be safe here... I promise," I whispered.
    He looked at me for a second, then followed the rest of the group.
    I then rejoined with the group.

    We walked for hours. Soon the clouds rolled in and the sun fell, bringing the blue moon up.
    "Undeeeaad." Twage groaned.
    "I'm tired... we take a break already?" Twage continued to groan.
    "We're almost there. Just a couple more steps." He said.
    After a few minutes, we finally stopped.
    "This is the spot." He exclaimed.
    I looked around. There was no hole in the ground or anything. It was just a large field with puffs of grass on the ground.
    "Are you sure?" Agent S asked.
    "Yes." Undead said.
    "Are you REALLY sure?" Twage also asked.
    "Yes..." Undead said, sounding slightly annoyed.
    "Are you-"
    "Yes! I am 100% sure that this is the exact spot!" He shouted, interrupting what I could say.
    I looked around one more time. I still wasn't sure if he was 100% correct.
    "So... where's the space ship exactly?" Harry asked.
    Undead looked at Pikachu.
    Pikachu hopped of Agent S shoulder and stood in front of Undead.
    He spread his legs a part and looked up.
    "Pika..."
    "CHUUU!" Pikachu shouted.
    The clouds thundered and roared, then a lightning landed right in front of Pikachu.
    Blinding lights flashed in my eyes.
    I covered my eyes, avoiding the lightning. I kept hearing thunder and roaring.
    After minutes of the continuous thunder, it stopped.
    I opened my eyes, and a giant CRACK was in front of Pikachu.
    The crack was kilo metres wide, almost reaching the end of how far our eyes can see.

    "Well... there you have it. Who's first?" Undead said.
    I gulped. Just looking at the crack made me have shivers down my spine.
    "Uh... ladies first!" Twage said as he pushed my forward.
    I stood at the cliff of the crack. I looked down.
    It was pitch black.
    "So wait, are you saying I have to JUMP?" I gasped.
    "Yeah. Don't worry, you'll be safe." Undead said.
    "What? How do you know? I might land in lava instead!" I argued.
    "Down there is water! If you just jump then hold perfectly still and land in the water with your feet, you'll be safe." He explained.
    I turned around. Everyone took a step back looking worried.
    I looked at the crack in front of me again.
    "I'll jump with her, too."
    I quickly turned around. Sandy was in front of everyone and he slowly walked towards me.
    "Okay. you make sure she lands safely." Undead commanded.
    Sandy nodded.
    I looked and him and smiled.
    I looked at the crack one more time.
    I took a deep breath.

    I leaped forward with Sandy next to me.
    I kept my arms close to my body and my legs together.
    Then I fell into the darkness.
    And after a couple of seconds, it was pitch black and I couldn't feel the air rush past me anymore.
    To Be Continued...
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    Hey guys! Little announcement for you all.
    When this story finishes, I might continue to make stories on this website, but shorter ones that are around 5 chapters long or only 1 chapter long. These shorter stories, however won't be related to this series though and will be focused on more realistic genres.
    Characters With Major Roles:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @SandyTheDog
    @pikachu
    @Snakehammer19
    @Katy_
    @CaptainJackVald
    @Sven007

    Characters With Minor Roles:
    @TheUndeadBrave
    @TwageTomato
    @TheHarryzx
    @Kryokin
    Enjoy ^-^

    Chapter 13 - The Ship
    I felt cold and damp while my ears felt clogged.
    I tried to open my eyes, but they felt sore and blocked.
    My nose was blocked too. All I could smell was salty water.
    When I finally opened my eyes, Sandy was sitting there, and also Pikachu who was standing on his back.
    I held my forehead gently. I pushed myself against a wall.
    "You almost drowned..." Sandy sighed.
    "I... I did?" I gasped.
    "Once you hit the water, you went unconscious. I had to drag you out. Pikachu helped too." He explained.
    "Pika..." Pikachu sighed, lowering his ears.
    Sandy laid down on his belly. He looked awfully tired.
    "Where's... the others?" I asked.
    "I don't know. They may have landed somewhere else... but I don't know where." He said.
    I slowly got up. My muscles felt stiff and numb, but I managed to stand.
    I examined the view. There was only a glimpse of light. All I could see was rocky walls and a large pond in front of me with large spikes hanging from the ceiling and from the ground.
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    "Quite an interesting cave..." I commented.
    Sandy nodded.
    "Anyway, the cave keeps going behind your back. We may have to follow the path." Sandy explained.
    I turned around, the cave looked like it kept going forever.
    "Well... this might be a long walk..." Sandy commented.

    "Sandy? Pikachu? Where'd you go!" I screamed.
    My view was blinded. It was just pitch black.
    I thought Sandy and Pikachu were already ahead of me.
    I felt something press against my leg.
    "Huh?" I gasped as I turned around.
    "Louise? Was that your leg?" He asked.
    I sighed and answered with yes.
    "I don't think we can keep going... we'll probably lose each other or fall off a cliff," I explained.
    "True... but how will we get out of this cave and find the others?" Sandy questioned.
    "Pika!" Pikachu shouted.
    "What is it?" Sandy asked.
    "Pika Pika!"
    Suddenly, a warm light lit up in the distance.
    I saw shadows of some humans.
    It was definitely Kry, Agent S, Twage, Harry, and Undead.
    "Guys! We're over here! It's Louise!" I called.
    "And Sandy!" Sandy called.
    "Pikachu!" Pikachu also called.
    I continued to wave and shout. The shadows on the wall came closer.
    But that's when I realised that it wasn't them...
    It was Captain Jack, Katy, and the Gods.

    A burst of lightning zapped right past us.
    I fell on my knees, staying down.
    "G'day lads. Nice to see you here!" Captain Jack laughed.
    "Can you just give us a break?!" Sandy shouted.
    "You've still got 7 more worlds to go through pal." He giggled.
    I looked at Pikachu, who was crawling forward.
    "Pikachu, stay away from them!" Sandy cried.
    But Pikachu kept getting closer.
    That's when I saw SnakeHammer there, also looking at Pikachu.
    "Pika?" Pikachu gasped.
    SnakeHammer held his hand in front of Pikachu.
    I thought Pikachu was going to join him again.
    But just when Pikachu could hop onto his hand, he slapped Pikachu against the wall.
    "Disgusting little creature..." SnakeHammer hissed.
    The look in Pikachu's eyes looked shattered.
    He looked so betrayed.
    He laid against the wall, not moving but silently sobbing.
    "Anyway... Katy, will you do the honours and kill them?" Captain Jack asked.
    "With pleasure, my lord." She giggled.
    She grabbed the spear off her belt and aimed at me.
    "Hey, what about us?" One of the Gods yapped.
    "Yeah. You made us for a reason, dummy."
    "Allllllright... you can join in the fun too." Captain Jack groaned.
    The Gods then prepared their weapons and spells.
    Katy stepped forward. She threw the spear towards me.
    As soon as the spear touched me, it was pitch black.

    I gasped as I starting breathing fast.
    Sweat dribbled down my face while my limbs felt shaky.
    "Take it easy. You're okay." Someone said.
    I looked to my right, and Agent S was there, kneeling down with some bandages.
    "What the... where..."
    "You hit the water, hard. Right on your back. Sandy helped you out and we helped you cover your wounds. You're okay." Agent S explained.
    I sighed and touched my forehead.
    "Is she doing okay?" Kry asked.
    "Yeah... just a bit scared." Agent S answered.
    "Hey, you okay?" Kry then looked at me.
    "I... uhh... think so..." I gulped.
    "Just put a bandage around her arm, then she should be good," Kry said to Agent S.
    Agent S nodded and wrapped a long, silky bandage around my arm.
    "I had a dream while I was unconscious," I explained.
    He looked up at me for a second then continued to concentrate on the bandage.
    "What was the dream about?" He asked.
    "Like... I was with Sandy and Pikachu and we were near the Gods and Captain Jack... also Katy. I felt so weak... while they all were so powerful... Arg why didn't I do anything!" I began to shout as I scrunched up my fist.
    "It's a dream. Anything can happen. One time I had a dream where Twage was choking on a tomato. I didn't even bother to help because I was laughing so much." He began to chuckle.
    "Hey, that's not funny!" I heard Twage shout.
    I examined my view for the first time. Everyone was here. They were all sitting on rocks or leaning against the wall.
    But someone was missing.
    "H-Hey! Where's Sandy and Pikachu?" I gasped.
    Agent S looked around once he finished with the bandage.

    "They were right here... they were! Undead, where'd they go?" He gasped.
    "Remember? We told them to go look for the ship." Undead explained.
    "Alone?! It's been like, an hour and they still haven't returned!" Agent S began to panic.
    Undead shrugged and looked the other way.
    I remembered the dream I just had... how they might have encountered Captain Jack, Katy, and the Gods.
    "We have to go and find them, Captain Jack and the Gods may have- Ahhh!" I gasped when I tried to get up.
    I immediately dropped to the ground. My legs were too weak to stand...
    "Harry, she's too weak. You have to carry her." Agent S said.
    "Come on dude, why me?" Harry complained.
    "I don't care who helps me, just help me now! We must get to Sandy and Pikachu!" I shouted.
    Harry began to hesitate, but finally came and picked me up.
    "Alright lads... forward!" Twage commanded.

    For once I was glad that my leg was weak because everyone else had to walk for about an hour.
    However, Harry looked like he was about to collapse, and I was worried that he would fall right on top of me.
    "Uh, so how much longer will we walk for?" I questioned.
    "Until we find the others." Undead explains.
    "But what if we're walking AWAY from the others?" I complained.
    "I can sense they are close... just keep going." He said.
    After a couple more minutes, the cave started to curve.
    When we turned left, an ancient door stood there.
    "Now what?" Twage sighed.
    "There are all these symbols on the door and also 6 buttons. Perhaps we have to insert some kind of code." Kry explained.
    "Why don't we just smash through it?" Twage suggested.
    "No. The buttons may also open something else too..." Undead explained.
    Harry placed me on a rock and started looking around.
    Everyone else also looked around for clues.
    I sat there silently. I picked up a small rock to try and entertain myself.
    I was about to throw it until I noticed some scratches on it.
    I looked at the scratches. They were straight while two scratches were diagonal.
    I continued to examine the scratches until I realise they were roman numerals...
    "Does anyone understand roman numerals?" I asked.
    "Nope, but why?" Twage asked as he continued to shuffle around.
    "I found a rock... it might show how to get through the door."
    Twage held the rock and looked at the scratches too. He called everyone over to try and read the scratches.
    "I failed maths in school, so I don't know what these are." Agent S said.
    "I think I can work it out," Harry suggested.

    "I remember reading about it a long, long time ago. I might just remember what these mean."
    Harry held the rock and looked at the scratches.
    "Okay... so that single scratch must mean 1... while the two scratches is... 11? Not, it must be 2... and..."
    He continued to figure out all the numbers. He was able to figure out 3 of the numbers, except for the last one.
    "Okay, so the first 3 numbers is 2, 1 and 4. But this last one... hmm. Just why are these two scratches diagonal." He asked.
    "So wait... so it looks like a V?" I asked.
    He nodded and continue to stare at the scratches.
    "V... V is... 5!" I cheered.
    "Yes, but there is also another scratch in front of it. So 5 plus 1... it's 6! The order is 2, 1, 4 and 5!" Harry gasped.
    "Wow. I probably didn't even know that when I was 5 years old." Twage commented.
    "Alright, so push the second button... then the first one..."
    We pushed all the buttons in its order. The door then shifted open, and I heard the ground slowly shake.
    Then the floor in the large cave in front of us started to crack open.
    And a giant space ship slowly appeared from the ground.
    Once the whole shift was on the ground, it stopped, and at the back of the ship opened.
    Harry picked me up and was about to run for it until Undead stopped us.
    "We must wait for Sandy and Pikachu." He explained.
    "But where are they?" Agent S sobbed.
    He pointed near the ship.
    And there they were, Sandy and Pikachu.
    "Sand-"
    Undead covered Twage's mouth before he could shout.
    "But look who else is here..." Undead said.
    He pointed at the other side of the cave, and Captain Jack, Katy and the Gods were also there.

    "We have to quickly grab them and then get into the ship!" Kry gasped.
    Suddenly, time stopped again for a minute. While I was frozen, I noticed Captain Jack and his group still moving...
    Once we unfroze, everyone else told each other how Captain Jack were moving.
    "How come when we were frozen, they were able to keep moving!" Kry complained.
    "I don't know! Why don't you ask them?" Twage said.
    "Guys, hush!" Harry hissed.
    We watched Captain Jack's group walk towards the ship.
    Then they noticed Sandy and Pikachu and walked towards them.
    SnakeHammer shot a lightning near them, making them kneel onto the floor.
    Then I remembered my dream... how Pikachu would then get slapped by SnakeHammer and then Sandy and I would get killed...
    "Twage, spawn a fireball, but don't throw it yet..." I whispered.
    "G'day lads! Nice to see you here!" Captain Jack laughed.
    "Can you just give us a break?!" Sandy shouted.
    "You've still got 7 more worlds to go through pal." He giggled.
    Pikachu then slowly crawled towards SnakeHammer.
    SnakeHammer held his hand out.
    Right before Pikachu could hop on his hand, I shouted.
    "NOW!" I shouted.
    Twage shot the fire ball straight at Captain Jack.
    But the fire ball hit the wall instead.
    "Twage! You were that close!" I argued.
    "Hey, I'm not good at aiming, alright?" Twage shouted.
    Captain Jack saw us and commanded the Gods to attack us.
    We quickly ducked for cover.

    I then noticed Pikachu, spawning small bolts of lightning around it's cheek.
    "Pika... CHUU!" He screamed.
    Massive bolts of lightning then zapped the Gods, except for SnakeHammer, Captain Jack and Katy.
    They screamed then fell to the ground.
    Katy grabbed Pikachu and tried to choke him.
    Agent S ran to Katy and punched her.
    Pikachu jumped on Agent S shoulder and sighed.
    Kry then ran towards Captain Jack and punched him in the jaw.
    I'm pretty sure I also saw a tooth fly out of his mouth.
    "Always wanted to do that!" Kry chuckled.
    "In the ship! Go!" Undead commanded.
    Harry then rushed towards the ship with everyone else.
    Everyone ran up the platform that leads to the ship until I heard a gun shot.
    Harry stopped, and I noticed at the corner of my eye Captain Jack on the ground, with a pistol in his hand.
    He shot twice, missing the first time but then hitting Harry's shoulder.
    He immediately dropped me, making me tumble down the platform, onto the ground.
    I ducked when I heard another gunshot.
    The platform then started to rise. I grabbed onto the platform tightly.
    I dangled from edge of the platform that continued to close. I looked up and noticed how my arms would snap off if I kept dangling from the edge.
    The others inside noticed me and quickly rushed towards me.
    They pulled me up, just before the platform could snap my feet off.
    Once I was inside, I took a deep breath.
    Kry and Agent S rushed to the front of the ship and sat down and began to press and switch many buttons.
    "Welcome aboard Kry and Agent S airlines. We recommend you to sit in your seats at all time. We hope you enjoy the uhh... 1-week? Yeah, the 1-week flight towards the moon. Have a good day ladies and gentlemen." Agent S said calmly in the speakers.
    The ship started to lift. Once the ship lifted the ceiling of the cave also started to open.
    Once the ceiling was open, the ship blasted into the air, past the surface, and above the clouds.
    To Be Continued...
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    Hi. So the school holidays are just about to end. So some chapters may take longer to be posted.
    Characters With Major Roles:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @SandyTheDog
    @Pikachu
    @Snakehammer19
    @Katy_
    @CaptainJackVald
    Characters With Minor Roles:
    @TheUndeadBrave
    @Sven007
    @TwageTomato
    @TheHarryzx
    @Kryokin
    Characters Mentioned:
    @BlabDaFish
    Enjoy ^-^

    Chapter 14 - The Wrath Of The Dragon
    Agent S laid me on a bed. I sighed with relief.
    "Did you get shot? Did you get hurt?" He kept asking.
    I kept saying I was fine. He then walked to Harry.
    I heard then talk softly. Harry sounded stressed though due to the wound in his shoulder.
    Sandy then walked to me and placed both of his paws on the edge of the bed.
    "You know, this ship is a bit small, don't you think?" He chuckled.
    "Yeah..." I softly chuckled.
    It was small. There were only 3 parts to the ship. The front was where two pilots would sit, the middle only had 2 beds and 4 seats next to it, then at the back is the storage and exit.
    "By the way, nice timing when you told Twage when to shoot the fireball. Too bad his aim was broken." He said.
    "Oh give it a rest!" I heard Twage hiss.
    "Yeah... Umm, I had a drea-"
    "Gooood morning... wait is it evening? Afternoon? Ah nevermind. Anyway good whatever it is. Just to let you know that there is now 167 hours and 55 minutes until we reach the moon. I know this announcement was pointless, but all well. Anyway, enjoy the ride." Agent S announced on the speakers, interrupting what I could say.
    "Sorry, what did you say?" Sandy asked.
    "Nevermind." I sighed.
    He left me and wandered around the ship.

    Two days past. My leg is pretty much healed now.
    I am able to walk around now. Really great to finally put some use to these limbs.
    "Good... whatever. Um Louise, could you come to the front of the ship please? Thanks." I heard Kry call on the speakers.
    The door shifted open. I walked inside, almost getting squished by the two seats due to the lack of space in here.
    "Check it out. Can you see that small dot in the distance." Agent S pointed.
    I looked closely, and I was just able to see it.
    "That's our destination. Only a couple more days to go." Kry commented.
    Time froze again for two minutes. I breathed heavily once time resumed.
    "Hopefully we can get there in time..." Kry sighed.
    The door shifted open. Before I could exit, Pikachu hopped in and leaped onto Agent S's shoulder.
    "Hey buddy! Do you like the view?" Agent S said cheerfully.
    "Pikachu!" Pikachu said happily.
    I walked to the windows near the side next to where Undead and Twage were sitting.
    "Like the view?" Undead asked.
    I nodded and continued to examine every single detail of the darkness.
    "I can sense the Dragon's wrath... its growing stronger." Undead sighed.
    "Dr-Dragon? What dragon?" Twage gasped.
    "Arg your memory is a bloody pickle. That is the source of time escaping according to Captain Jack." Harry explained.
    "Oh... Dragons are cool though. Do we have to like, kill it?" Twage questioned.
    "Depends if it's the mind doing it, or Captain Jack that's commanding it to do it." Undead explained.
    I walked to the bed and sat there, wondering if Blab would've liked the view.

    Four days past. Only 24 hours left until we reach our destination.
    I stared at the window. The blue moon was now bigger. I was able to see the small craters on it.
    "Do you think... Blab would've liked this view?" I asked, wondering if Blab could hear me.
    "Yeah... I remember her saying how she'd always love to go to space just to stare at the stars..." Twage sighed.
    "Arg, if we saved her, she would've been here!" Undead punched the wall.
    "Hey, for goodness sake Undead. It ain't your fault." Sandy shouted.
    "But we were so close! She did so much for us!" Undead continued to complain.
    I looked to my left. I tried to imagine Blab there, staring at the view with a sparkle in her eyes.
    But I couldn't imagine it. For some reason, the image of her was gone. I couldn't remember her face anymore.
    I scrunched up my fist, feeling a sprinkle of anger.
    "That Katy is so going to die tonight." Undead hissed.
    "Kill her? Hey, now that's a bit edgy." Twage commented.
    "I don't care! We're going to kill her!" Undead shouted.
    I've never seen so much anger in a pair of eyes before. I've never seen him contain so much wrath inside of him.
    Usually, he'd be the one telling us to calm down. He'd be the reason why we're calm. But the death of Blab has shattered him lately.
    I don't think there is a way to fix his anger.
    Then a small tear flooded up his eyes.
    He rushed to the back of the ship where the storage was.
    Very faintly, I heard him sob.
    My heart felt sore. Twage looked worried, too.
    I looked around. Everyone else was silent, sore due to Undead's feeling.
    "I'll go in there and try to calm him down." Sandy said.
    The door shifted open and Sandy entered.
    I heard pounding on the wall. Now Undead was shouting.
    I heard Sandy's faint, soft voice trying to comfort him, but Undead just raised his voice louder.

    A day passed, only 30 minutes left until we reach the moon.
    Undead was silent as he sat on the seat.
    I wasn't sure if I'd go to him and talk to him, but his wrath scared me.
    It scared me. For once I feared him. I was worried that the anger of the darkness would consume him. I feared that the death of Blab would corrupt him forever.
    I went to the front of the ship to keep Undead off my mind.
    "Look at that mama!" Agent S gasped.
    The moon now covered the whole screen. The craters seem huge. Almost twice as large as the ship.
    "By the way, I heard shouting and crying yesterday. What was that about?" Kry asked.
    "Undead... he's shattered by Blab's death." I sighed.
    "Hmm... yes, I have noticed a slight mood change in him ever since Blab died." Kry explained.
    "Slight? You mean a HUGE mood change. I've never heard him angrier." Agent S exclaimed.
    "Pika pika!" Pikachu exclaimed, sounding like he's agreeing with Agent S.
    "See? Even Pikachu noticed a change in him."
    "But now he's calm, so maybe the mood change has healed.
    "Don't be ridiculous! He's still upset and shattered!"
    "Pika!"
    "But listen! He's calmed down now!"
    They continued to complain. I exited the room and looked at Undead.
    Then the ship laid still.
    "We landed!" Harry cheered.
    I heard the back of the ship open.

    We were about to open the door, until Undead stopped us.
    Immediately, I felt myself shiver. I thought he'd shout more.
    "There is no air on this moon... we need suits." He explained, softly.
    Then the walls of the ship then opened, and a dozen suits then were shown.
    I grabbed one and put one on.
    The problem with these helmets is now I could smell my breath, which wasn't very pleasant.
    But I couldn't imagine what Twage's breath would smell like.
    "Wow! These helmets smell just like tomatos!" He exclaimed.
    "That's your breath, Twage..." Harry sighed.
    Kry, Agent S and Pikachu then came in and took some suits.
    There were two mini suits too for Pikachu and Sandy, which were so adorable.
    There were walkie talkies too on the side of the suit. So when we get out we'd be able to hear each other.
    The door then opened. the platform lowered.
    I rushed out, excited and cheerful.
    But the view was slightly... boring.

    All there were was craters. Maybe some pebbles too on the ground.
    "Huh. Thought this would be more I don't know... thrilling?" I commented.
    The others agreed. We hopped around on the moon, looking for the Dragon or Captain Jack.
    I paused. A slight shake shivered the floor beneath me.
    The others paused. The ground shook more.
    "Oh... my gosh." Agent S gasped.
    A giant dragon head slowly lifted in the distance.
    The body was then exposed. Then the legs.
    It's eyes were red. Red lightning spazzed around it's body.
    "Umm... I have second thoughts about this." Harry gasped.
    Harry rushed back into the ship.
    That was the indication for ALL of us to rush back inside.
    We quickly went inside and closed the door.
    "Oh my gosh, did you see the size of that thing?"
    "How are we going to destroy THAT!"
    "But we destroyed SnakeHammer, that was well... half of that size!"
    "But Blab did that! She knew what to do!"
    Everyone was freaking out.
    Suddenly, the ship started to lift.
    It tilted to the side. I slipped and fell against the wall. Everyone else fell and laid on top of me.
    I looked at the window, and I saw a large hand hold the ship.
    And we were right next to the eye of the dragon.
    The ship was then flung.

    I was then shoved onto the ceiling. The ship kept spinning and spinning. I thought my head would explode.
    Everyone was screaming and gasping. But I felt like I was going to faint.
    Then I was dragged down to the exit of the ship.
    I held onto the door, but I was about to loose my grip.
    The platorm below then opened.
    A large explosion rang my ears.
    Then, darkness filled my view instantly.
    To Be Continued...
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    Anyways, awesome chapter as always Louise.
    You really are great at writing stories!
     
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    @CaptainJackVald
    @TheUndeadBrave
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    Chapter 15 - Melting Time
    All that remained was a continuous high pitched scream, ringing in my head.
    And very faintly, the sound stopped.
    My eyelids slowly rose.
    I was on the ground. My vision was blurry. I could hardly see.
    I closed my eyes again. I thought I was going to faint again.
    I opened my eyes again, My vision was slightly cleared, but I closed them again.
    One more time...
    I slowly opened my eyes, and my vision was clear.
    An infinite patch of grey dust and craters was set in front of me, going on for miles.
    But a different colour sprung faintly.
    A red and orange colour, and a very dark grey above it.
    I slowly lifted myself up. I examined the colours.
    That's when it struck me: there was a fire on the ship that I was just in.
    I quickly tried to push me up, but I couldn't move.
    My muscles felt broken. I wriggled and squirmed to try and move, but I just couldn't get myself up.
    Suddenly, I felt a push on my back.
    My back slowly pushed forward. I looked to my right, and Pikachu sat there, grinning.
    "Pikachu..." I whispered.
    "Pika?" It titled its head.
    "Help me get to the ship... please..."
    "Pika pika."
    "Please..."
    He stared at me. He waddled to my side nad pushed it.

    I laid on my belly and crawled forward, pushing my body forward with my arms.
    It took almost a hour to get there, but we finally made it.
    "Pika! Pika pika! Pikachu..." Pikachu screamed.
    Fire danced and grew around the ship. Large chunks of metal laid on the ground.
    "Sandy! Ah! Undead! Say something! Harry?!" I called.
    "Pika Pikaaaa!" Pikachu also cried.
    I heard a small groan. Like someone stressed in pain...
    "Kry! Gosh dangit! Agent S? Twage, scream or something!" I screamed.
    The back of the ship was jammed closed.
    Electric sparked around Pikachu. But I stopped him.
    "No, don't attack it! You might kill them!" I cried.
    "Pika..." He sighed.
    Suddenly, something was rising above the ship.
    I looked closer, and the head of the Dragon was heading towards us.
    "Run..." I whispered.
    "Pika?"
    "Run!" I cried.
    Pikachu charged forward away from the ship.
    I slowly got on my feet. I shifted away from the ship.
    I turned around when I heard the stomping stop.
    The Dragon reached the ship. It sniffed it and took a deep breath.
    "PIKA!" Pikachu screamed.
    But it was too late.

    The Dragon blew a large flame from it's mouth, melting the ship.
    The fire was so hot, I began to sweat even though I was around 20 metres away from it.
    The metal melted to the ground.
    "Ah, they could be in there! They'll be burned alive!" I screamed.
    Suddenly, the ship then exploded. Dust and stone hit my face.
    I stood straight and concentrated through the smoke.
    A faint purple colour appeared out of the grey.
    The smoke cleared. A purple, transparent dome stood there in the middle of the wreckage.
    And in the dome was the others.
    I let out a huge grin. Pikachu cheered.
    But my smile didn't last long.

    The dragon roared and prepared another flame.
    "This shield can't stand much longer!" I heard Undead shout.
    "Well I can't shoot anything at him cause this dang shield is in the way!" Twage cried.
    "Pika... chu!" Pikachu shouted.
    A large lightning bolt rushed past me on my side, straight in the dragon's mouth.
    It cried and took a couple of steps back.
    The others saw the opportunity and ran towards us.
    Agent S rushed towards me and hugged me; which surprised.
    "Oh my gosh, you don't realise how scared I am!" He cried.
    "You're always scared..." Harry sighed.
    "Oh my lord, how did you escape?" He continued to cry.
    "Umm... not sure." I said.
    The Dragon roared again. Then beside the dragon were some people beside it.
    "What great timing. Captain Fart, the slaves and the demon." Kry moaned.
    They walked right in front of us. SnakeHammer spit on Harry's head.
    Agent S held Pikachu tight so he could go near SnakeHammer.
    "Good day lads." Captain Jack smiled.
    I tried to look away, but he grabbed my chin and turned it towards his eyes.
    "Oh, show some respect, woman." Katy hissed.
    I felt extra stiff when I realised Katy was also here.
    "You don't know how long I've been waiting to kill you and slaughter you and your slaves..." He whispered.
    He let go of my chin. I spit on his cigar he was about to use.
    "Hmmf. Alright. Gods take a step back." He commanded.
    The Gods took a couple steps back.
    "Aim your attacks..." He said.
    "Dragon... FREEZE!" Captain Jack commanded.
    And time froze.
    The Dragon roared like it was in pain.
    The Gods then threw their attacks.
    Just before their spells could hit us, time was resumed, and we ducked onto the ground.
    "What the- what happened?" Katy gasped.

    I saw the Dragon. It roared and stomped.
    Then I noticed something around its neck. It was a very dark grey thing, almost as dark as it's black, scaly skin.
    Some kind of chain was around its neck, with a small, light blue eye in the middle.
    Light blue lightning then sprung from the eye and struck the Dragon.
    It roared and cried.
    Captain Jack was holding a button with a light blue button on it.
    That's when I realised that the Dragon was the slave. He was torturing it to control time.
    "Why did it just resume time like that. Pathetic beast." Captain Jack hissed.
    I quickly grabbed the remote. I threw it on the ground and stomped on it.
    "Hah." I giggled.
    "The Dragon can now be free!" Twage cheered.
    But Captain Jack still had that stupid smile on him.
    "Did you just...heh... realise what you have done? Ha ha ha! Oh my gosh, your stupidity is just... oh gosh." He laughed.
    "You just broke the remote! Now the Dragon is in infinite pain!" Katy giggled.
    "Typical humans. Always making mistakes." SnakeHammer giggled.
    The rest of the Gods also laughed.
    I noticed infinite lightning now coming out of the eye on the chain, continuing to shock the Dragon.
    "If the Dragon dies... time will be extinct forever... the entire universe, every single planet will freeze and remain like that for eternity!" Undead gasped.
    "We must destroy that weird chain around it's neck!" I commanded.
    "Oh, I don't think so. Gods; attack!" Katy commanded.
    The Gods then threw spells at us.
    Ice shards, ear crushing music, arrows, baby squids, floating gloves, a giant robot with a hammer and a giant lightning bolt rushing towards us.
    However, Twage quickly spawned a giant fireball, swallowing all their attacks except for the lightning bolt and Robo.

    The lightning bolt shot Pikachu. However, he seemed unharmed.
    Pikachu then growled and spawned a giant lightning bolt from the sky, about to crash the Gods.
    But a giant squid then spawned and stood above the Gods, saving them from the lightning bolt.
    "Cruel people... using their powers as slaves, like you Squidling! At least I cared for my dolphins!" Harry shouted.
    "Oh give it a rest. I can use my squids for anything! Besides, you don't even have anymore dolphins!" Squidling argued.
    Robo then tried to swing his hammer at us, but Undead quickly spawned a shield.
    Robo kept swinging his hammer, creating cracks on the shield.
    The shield broke, and his hammer was about to squish us.
    Luckily, Sandy leaped and chomped the hammer out of Robo's hands.
    He then slammed the hammer right at Robo's stomach, making him fall back at where the Gods were standing.
    I pat Sandy's head and held the hammer.
    Arrow then aimed and shot a large arrow towards me.
    I held the hammer in front of me for protection.

    The arrow deflected off the hammer, towards the Dragon.
    "If it stabs the Dragon in the chest, it'll die!" Undead gasped.
    The arrow looked like it was aiming for the chest.
    I held my breath. We all froze, hoping that it will survive.
    The arrow did hit it. But it wasn't the Dragon it hit;
    It was the chain around it's neck.
    It shot right into the eye of the chain.
    The lightning stopped. The chain broke free and dropped to the ground.
    "You stupid blockhead!" Crystal slapped Arrow.
    The rest of the Gods then kept punching and kicking Arrow.
    "This is why I never liked being with them." Harry commented.
    "ENOUGH!" Captain Jack shouted.
    They froze and looked at Captain Jack.
    "You pathetic little mice. You're all going to get whipped when we get back to our base. Now get us out of here Captain Jack, before the Dragon could bite our legs off." Katy hissed.
    Captain Jack spawned a portal and they walked in the portal, before the Dragon could stomp on them.

    The Dragon looked at us. It bowed down, lowing its head, looking like a way of thanks.
    A large purple portal opened up beside it.
    It then turned around and walked away, waving it's tail side to side.
    I sighed with relief.
    "That's three worlds down. Three down, seven more to go." Sandy said.
    I walked towards the portal.
    I was about to enter it, but I paused.
    I looked up at the millions of stars in the eternal darkness.
    "Keep watching over us, Blab." I whispered.
    And then I took a step forward into the portal.
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    Hi. Um I haven't really been in the brightest mood lately. So please excuse my tears and frowns.
    Any support would really help thanks.
    Characters With Major Roles:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @SandyTheDog

    @Katy_
    @CaptainJackVald
    @Snakehammer19
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    @Kryokin
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    Chapter 16 - Calls Of The Full Moon
    I landed right on my stomach, which was quite unpleasant.
    I coughed a few times and rubbed my eyes.
    Before I could stand up though, more weight was put on my back.
    "Ech... Get off..." I coughed.
    "Ops. Sorry." I heard Twage apologise.
    I felt the weight lift from my back.
    I quickly lifted my head and took a deep breath.
    I coughed more and rubbed my face which was covered in a soft, ticklish material.
    Agent S helped me get up.
    I examined my surroundings. Everyone had exited the portal and stood beside me.
    My view was a beach. Particles of sand stretched to astounding measures while the aqua waves crawled forward. The sun that was about to vanish reflected a ginger, warm light onto the sea, creating a red reflection, like the sea was covered with blood. Shells were scattered across the sand with many different shapes and sizes. Some were chipped and broken while some were in perfect forms, laying on the soft ground.
    The sky seemed warm with a mix of orange and yellow. The sky away from the sun was mixed with purple and black.
    I could smell the saltiness of the sea in front and hear the brushing of the waves and trees. I could still taste the bland, stale taste of the sand on my tongue when Twage was on top of me.
    "Quite a view..." Harry commented.
    I nodded in agreement. The sun slowly dived into the eternal sea.
    "I must say, this world is a lot more better than the other chaotic worlds." Kry also commented.
    Near the edge of the sea was a stretch of land, with a cave in it with light inside of it.
    "What's that light in the cave?" I pointed.
    They looked at the cave.
    "Don't know... should be check it out?" Sandy asked.
    I walked closer to where the water could reach and where the rocks laid.
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    "Yeah. Let's go in it. There might be treasure in it!" Twage gasped.
    "We don't need treasure, you donk!" Agent S slapped Twage.
    Twage was about to punch Agent S, but Pikachu electricuted him before he could do so.
    "Stop acting so childish. If we are going in that cave, then we need you three to help." Undead told Agent S, Twage and Pikachu.
    Agent S sighed while Twage remained on the ground.

    "The water is too rough to cross. Not only that, but dangerous creatures may lurk under the waters." Kry explained.
    Pikachu hopped of Agent S's shoulder and stood on a rock that stood above the water.
    "Pika... CHU!" He screamed.
    Lightning shot from it's body and aimed for the lump of rock on the wall near the cave.
    The lump of rock then slid against the wall, making pieces of rock fall off and landed on the water near the cave.
    A large splash sprayed on our faces.
    I whipped the tears and noticed large rocks on the ground, leading to the cave.
    Agent S patted Pikachu as he returned to his shoulder.
    "Just don't slip and keep leaping forward to each rock." Undead said.
    The rocks placed on the water were slightly seperated, so we did have to leap forward in order to reach each rock.
    Sandy went first. Since he had extra limbs to balance on, he had no trouble on getting on the first rock.
    He leaped forward onto the other rock. He continued to leap forward onto each rock, until he reached the inside of the cave.
    Everyone went across except for me and Harry, who was last.
    Before I could leap on the first rock, Harry looked quite stressed.
    "You okay?" I asked.
    "No... I'm uhh... I have a fear of the ocean you see..." He shivered.
    "What? But you like dolphins, right? So you must like the ocean too then."
    "No..." He shook his head.
    He stared at the ground and let out a huge breath.
    "Yo Louise, hurry up and get here!" I heard Kry shout.
    "You see... I loved dolphins because they guided me through the ocean... they protected the waves and tears of the sea. But now that my rod is gone that spawns the dolphins, I'm alone... and without their support, I'm not match to the sea." He explained.
    I thought for a couple of seconds, wondering what I could do to help.
    "You just stay here. We'll be back soon. Just look out for Captain Jack, Katy and the Gods." I commanded.
    His frown slightly lifted and nodded.

    I leaped across the sea on the rocks that were laid out.
    I made it with the others that looked concerned.
    "Why isn't Harry coming?" Sandy asked.
    "He um... he can't make it across." I said.
    "Why though?"
    "Personal reasons I guess."
    They looked at me for a second then walked forward.
    The ceiling dribbled on our heads while small tiny ponds rested next to the walls of the cave.
    "I'm worried that the ceiling would then collaspe due to how much water it's producing." Sandy said.
    "Pika Pika?" Pikachu said, tilting it's head.
    "I don't know. Water makes my fur itch." Sandy said.
    The cave started to get darker the further we ventured forward, so Twage spawned a small fire in the palm of his hand.
    The walls on the cave started to show small paintings.
    I stopped and looked at one.
    It had a wolf, standing on a hill with a moon behind it while light shined around it.
    Another painting had a mermaid under the sea with fish around it.
    The last painting had a person, holding a flame in it's hand while the trees and bushes around it were engulfed with flames.
    "Weird... I wonder what these paintings mean." Undead wondered out loud.
    "Maybe it's about these ancient Gods that people used to believe that protected the land. A ruler of the sea, a ruler of the night and ruler of... chaos? I don't know." Agent S suggested.
    "Good suggestion, but no." Undead answered.
    "What do you mean no?" Sandy asked.
    "I know what these paintings mean... but I'll let you all see for yourselves."
    "Ehm, okay..."
    A chill went down my spine. What could simply be in Undead's mind?

    Then, the cave started to light up near the end.
    I paused, stopping everyone behind me.
    A small pillar stood there with three symbols on each side of it: A moon, water and fire.
    On top of the pillar was an orb, with three colours on each side of it: grey, blue and red.
    I took small steps forward. I looked around the orb and pillar.
    I held my hand near the orb, wondering how smooth it would feel when I touched it.
    It's shape was engaging me to feel it. I try to resist, but the shine on the top of it.
    But when my finger tip touching it, I instantly blacked out.

    I heard calls for my name.
    "Please... wake me up..." I murmured.
    "Just wake me up..." I kept murmuring
    I tried to open my eyes, but it felt like they were superglued together.
    Slowly, eyelids rised.
    Sandy was right in my face, licking my face.
    "Hey ya'll, she's awake!" Sandy called.
    Everyone then charged towards me, and asked me multiple questions all at once.
    "Easy fellas. Give her some space." Sandy said.
    They gave me some space while Sandy sniffed my face.
    "What... what happened..." I asked as I touched my forehead.
    "You just fell to the ground while the orb like, just entered you. Like, it just entered inside of you. Do you feel any different? Any pain?" Kry asked.
    "Uhh... no... a little confused maybe, but I don't feel any pain." I answered.
    He sighed and walked to the pillar.
    "These symbols and those paintings... they must explain something about that orb." He said.
    "Should we get out of here? Harry is still waiting." Twage suggested.
    Undead helped me get up. I felt a little wobbly and maybe sick, but I refused for anymore assistance.

    The others were ahead of me in the cave. I was metres back.
    I shifted forward slowly, but I felt like I was going to faint.
    Sandy then noticed me and rushed towards me.
    "Are you okay? You're as pale as a piece of paper." He said.
    "I'm fine. Just go." I said.
    "I don't think you're fine..." He shook his head.
    I refused to speak. He returned to the others ahead.
    I finally caught up with them when they stood at the exit of the cave.
    "Okay. Louise, would you like to hop on the rocks first?" Kry asked without looking.
    "Umm..." I groaned.
    He looked at me, and noticed me hunched back we my arm around my stomach.
    "Uhh are you okay?" Twage asked.
    "I... I don't know." I said.
    "Maybe someone should carry her when they hop of the rocks." Undead suggested.
    "No no, I'm fine." I said as I shoved past them all.
    I noticed the moon, glowing like a firefly. It was a full moon. It looked so large.
    Suddenly, a shock of pain entered my mind.
    I landed on my knees, grasping for air.
    Everyone behind me kept gasping and shouting.
    I looked at my hands they were shaking.
    My nail were growing and grew sharp while grey fur grew on the hands and arm.
    I crawled forward to the water. I looked at the reflection, and noticed more grey hair growing around my face as my teeth grew.

    I grabbed my forehead. The pain wouldn't stop.
    I screamed and cried, until my mind clicked.
    I leaped on the rocks and rushed past Harry, who's mouth was as big as a cookie and his eyes looked like they could pop out.
    I rushed to the grass, into the spruce forest.
    I kept running, not stopping even when my legs felt like they were going to fall off.
    Finally, I stopped when I reached a small lake.
    I didn't know why I ran. I didn't know what was happening to me.
    I walked slowly to the lake.
    I was going to drink some water, until my reflection was in the way.
    My face was covered in fur. My ears were shifted to the top of my head and were pointy. I noticed my teeth sticking out of my mouth and how my mouth and nose was stretched more forward then the rest of my face.
    I noticed my body. My clothes was ripped due to the change of my position. Fur covered the rest of my body too. I was standing on my arms and legs. I no longer had hands, they were paws. And I also grew a large, bushy tail.
    That's when it hit me:
    I was a wolf.

    "How... how could this..." I gasped.
    I heard speaking. I hid behind a tree.
    I didn't want my friends to look at my hidious face.
    I saw a group of people walking. I thought it was them, but then I realised it wasn't.
    It was Captain Jack, Katy and the Gods.
    "If only if you idioits killed them as soon as you saw them in the other world!" Katy complained.
    "Hey, quit complaining, chump! Those dumbys are stronger then you think!" Melody shouted.
    "But are they stronger then us?" SnakeHammer argued.
    They paused and looked at each other.
    "Exactly! We're stronger then them, so quit your poor self esteem and just keep your eyes peeled." SnakeHammer hissed.
    "Good little Snakey. Hopefully you also find your pet rat, too." Katy giggled.
    "Rat? You mean Pikachu? No... I don't want him anymore. I have you guys, right?" SnakeHammer cheered.
    Everyone else agreed.
    Captain Jack paused and sniffed the air.
    "Some familiar smell has sprung up..." Captain Jack sniffed.
    I saw his face look at me.
    I quickly stood near the tree without looking at them.
    I held my breath.
    "Mystery, I told you to take a shower, dammit!" Captain Jack shouted.
    "Apologises... master." Mystery said softly.
    "Maybe my little squid can find them!" Squidling giggled.
    He started to chuckle chaoticly as he spawned a small squid.
    "Find them peepsqueeks, Squilly!" Squidling laughed.
    I kept standing without looking at them. I stood on my hind legs.
    But it was difficult due to my posture.
    Then the squid was staring at me and opened its teeth under it's tenticles.

    I landed on my front legs and leaped forward.
    I bit it's head. It was squishy, which made me uncomfortable.
    I shook it's body then threw it at a tree.
    "What was that?" Arrow said.
    I turned around, and they were all looking at me.
    I froze, wondering if they'll attack me if I try to escape.
    "Just a dumb wolf..." Captain Jack sighed.
    "It does seem... familiar... what is it wearing?" Katy asked.
    I quickly rushed forward away from them.
    "Ahhh, doesn't matter what it's wearing. Anyway, FORWARD!" SnakeHammer shouted.
    "No need to shout... jeez." Crystal hissed.

    I stopped when I knew I was away from them for good.
    I caught my breath for a second and wondered how bad being a wolf would be. My friends would think I'm evil and-
    Wait. No. I realised that with this disguise, the enemies won't recognise me for a short time.
    I wondered for a second if being a wolf would benefit the team.
    "Louise?"
    I gasped and quickly hid behind a tree.
    "Go away... don't look at me..." I murmured.
    "Wow..." I heard it say.
    I looked to my left, and Sandy stood there staring at me.
    "Oh... it's just you." I sighed.
    "Wow... you look different as a creature similar to me." He said.
    He scratched his ears with his hind legs.
    "It's nice to see another creature like me. I do feel quite odd or out of place whenever I with a large group of humans." He explained.
    "The others are looking for you. We should go back and-"
    "No! Don't-" I hissed.
    He looked at me.
    "I... I can't return looking like this! I look like a monster Captain Jack made!" I gasped.
    "You look fine." He sighed.
    But I wouldn't budge to move.
    "Listen, how about to sleep here then go to them in the morning. How about that?" He suggested.
    "Okay..." I said nervously.
    "In the morning though we have to go to them. Okay?"
    "Fine..." I sighed as I rolled my eyes.
    He then laid on his belly and closed his eyes.
    I did the same, feeling quite odd since I've never slept like this.
    I lowered my head onto the ground and closed my eyes.

    "Don't worry Louise..." I thought I heard Blab whisper to me in my dream.
    To Be Continued...
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