It would help if you also told what specifically isn't good about the intro and what he/she could improve.
I shall take your advice. What could be improved: 1. Use Better Intro Making Programs. (Cinema 4D, Blender. AE, Etc.) 2. Look into more intro-like fonts. 3. Get a better sync. (Idk how to describe it. But most good intros have a sync) I might edit more if i wanna.