PVP Edit #3

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  1. SellZy

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    Enjoy!
     
    SellZy, Apr 4, 2016
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  2. plainwhitex

    plainwhitex Call me Plain.

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    Nice edit! Some minor suggestions if you're interested:
    1. Maybe get some more cinematic shots then just the one.
    2. Less shake on the text and maybe a diffrent font (I would recommend a font called "beech").
    Other than that it flowed pretty well overall and keep it up!
     
    plainwhitex, Apr 4, 2016
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  3. SellZy

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    Thank you for the tips! I'll work on it. :)
     
    SellZy, Apr 5, 2016
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  4. Bilbo

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    DOPE nice i like it
     
    Bilbo, Apr 5, 2016
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  5. j0sef

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    Super clean edit. The font looks a lil goofy but other than that, straight fire.
     
    j0sef, Apr 5, 2016
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  6. Denisvenom9

    Denisvenom9 》Faction Veteran《,

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    if u want I can teach u how to PvP, I'm number 9th on kohi for the debuff kit (last season).
     
    Denisvenom9, Apr 6, 2016
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  7. Mocosloco

    Mocosloco forehead is brown egg

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    1v1 me
     
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  8. knife

    knife 》Faction Veteran《 ~Jag [God] Donator

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    The best part was 0:21
    I think you should make it longer
     
    knife, Apr 6, 2016
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  9. SellZy

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    Nah, i'm fine, ty.
    Funny enough, 21 seconds took me 3 hours to edit. :p
     
    SellZy, Apr 6, 2016
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  10. Wheatley

    Wheatley Shrek

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    lol you're bad at pvp, but sick edit m8
     
    Wheatley, Apr 6, 2016
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