[9th Story] The Rise Of The Devil

Yeah. As you can see the wait between chapters has increased. But don't worry! Once my homework and stuff has calmed down, I'll try and create more chapters more regularly c:
Also thanks for the support guys. It's make me so much better. High school is really tough... but I'll still in one piece!

Characters With Major Roles:
@Elfon (Elisa)
@Kryokin (Kry)
@Sven007 (Agent S)
@TwageTomato (Twage)
@BrakeCrake (Brake)
@SandyTheDog (Sandy)
Characters Mentioned:
@BlabDaFish
Enjoy ^-^

Chapter 8 - The Grave
My mind couldn't stay in one place with everyone screaming and sobbing.
I looked at every corner of my mind for an answer, but none seemed acceptable.
I typed some random letters and numbers.
"CODE INCORRECT." The machine called.
I kept putting in random letters again.
"CODE INCORRECT."
My hands were shaking as I heard the repeated words:
"CODE INCORRECT."
"PATIENT DEAD IN 3 MINUTES"
I slammed my hands on the machine, about to sob.
"Elisa, think! Just think!" Kry shouted.
"I'm trying!"
I could hear Sandy howling in the background.
But then, something clicked.

Something deep in my mind behind all my memories seemed to shine.
This one word seemed important... behind all things.
I went deeper, trying to reach that word.
"PATIENT DEAD IN 40 SECONDS"
I could feel the sweat roll down my head.
I felt the word come closer...
Then I saw the word and realized that was the code.
"10. 9. 8." The machine called.
I quickly tapped my fingers on the letters...
"3...2..."
I pressed the final letter and pressed enter.
"CODE CORRECT. SHUTTING DOWN GAS AND RELEASING PATIENT."
The door opened. Sandy rushed inside.
"Brake! Brake! Can you hear me?" I heard Sandy call.

Everyone rushed inside.
Brake laid on the ground, not breathing. Not moving.
Agent S laid his hand on his back.
"He's okay. If he took one more breath of that gas then he would've been done." Agent S explained.
I took a great sigh while whipping the sweat off my head.
"Elisa... what was the code?" Kry questioned.
"It... it was..." I tried to remember what the code was.
"Louise." I answered.
"Louise? Pfff. What kind of code is that? If I could program the code, it would've been 'Tomato.' " Twage giggled.
"But... she's dead, right Kry?" Agent S questioned.
Kry seemed blank and seemed pale.
"I... I think..." Kry whispered.
"The remaining humans on earth found her body and took it here in Feeo. Her grave is back in Neo, right?" Twage explained.
"That's what I heard... we need to go there and check the grave. If her body is not there... either she's alive or someone took it." Kry said.
"But... I was told that no human could survive a drop from 300 feet. It would've broken all of her bones. Plus no food or water down there if she did survive. They had to get a helicopter to find her body." Sandy explained.
"What about the body of the darkness?" I questioned.
"They couldn't find it. It could've been buried deep under the ground after all the earthquakes happened on Earth." Agent S explained.
"Do you guys remember which way Neo is?" Twage questioned.

I remembered being there with Brake... I thought hard trying to remember what was around it...
"I think I remember. It was near when we finally found each other and when I found Sandy. Let's go."
We headed out of the place with Brake on Sandy's back.
We arrived at the place where we met Sandy and I also noticed the place where Blab attacked Brake and I.
"Blab attacked you here huh? We should've never trusted her..." Kry commented.
"I knew something was up with her anyway." Twage also commented.
Then I noticed something past the green textures.
I ran forward past all the plants.
"This... this isn't Neo... is it?" I gasped.
The rest came to see the view.
"It's... it's all burnt down." Kry gasped.
Then I remembered the attack of the demons...
"The demons attacked here... they destroyed all the buildings, and most likely all the humans here." I explained.
"We have to find any survivors that could tell us what happened and lead us to Louise's grave, unless that got destroyed." Agent S said.
Then I noticed something crawling.
"I think I see a demon." I called as I got my sword out.
We walked forward while prepared.
"That ain't a demon... that's a survivor!" Sandy gasped.

We ran forward, helping the survivor.
One of it's legs were eaten with it's bone sticking out...
"Who are you? Wait... Kry? Agent S? Twage? You... *cough*... you returned?" It called with a croaky voice.
"What happened here? What are the rest of the citizens." Kry questioned.
"We... We all got attacked by some evil demons... it ate my family... and destroyed my home..." It was starting to sob.
"Do you know where the grave of Louise is?" Twage asked.
"It's... it's past that building..." He slowly pointed at a building with broken glass.
His hand then laid back down and his eyes closed.
"Don't die on me dammit!" Agent S shouted.
No response.
"GOD DAMMIT!" Kry punched his fist at a window of the building, which made the window shatter.
Twage tried to use some spells to resurrect him, but none would cure him.
"We can't help him. We must find the grave and get answers." Sandy interrupted.
We quickly rushed passed the building and noticed some graves there.
Right at the back of all the graves was a shiny one with many flowers.

I rushed to that grave and read the words on it.
"Here lies the Light, known to be the savior of all."
"Any of you got shovels?" I questioned.
They just shrugged their shoulders.
"Well I can dig. So allow me..." Sandy volunteered.
Twage held Brake's body as Sandy prepared to dig.
He stabbed his claws deep in the dirt, then dragging it behind him.
He kept repeating the process, making the hole deeper and deeper.
"I found the coffin!" He called.
We dragged it out and wiped the dirt off the top.
"Everyone, stay back. Please allow me." Kry said.
We took a couple of steps back.
He slowly lifted up the lid.
"Oh lord..." He gasped.

We thought this was the indication to see what's inside.
"I don't remember her having a beard." Twage said.
The body seemed to be someone with a beard and pirate hat with a black robe.
"That's her? Louise is a pirate including a beard?" I questioned.
"That is NOT her! This body is the darkness!" Kry shouted.
"So if that's not the body of the light... does that mean she could still be alive?" Sandy gasped.
"I don't understand. They said they did find Louise's body and did bury it. Why is the body of the darkness here?" Agent S said.
"Because we found the body of the darkness instead."
We turned around immediately to see who called.
We realized that Brake has awoken in Twage's arms.
"Are you okay?" Twage questioned.
"I'm fine. But I think it's time to say the truth." He said.
"Listen. We found the body of the darkness instead. The body of the light was not found. I was the only one to find the body, but to avoid any worry or stress, I told everyone that the body of the light was found instead. I even named the grave 'The Light'. But I knew someone would come and see the true body under the grave. Right after I buried the body, I saw the light with my very own eyes, walk away on the hills. I never saw her again. Which means..."
"She could be ALIVE?!" Kry gasped.
"Indeed." Brake nodded.
"But... how could she survive..." Twage gasped.
"Remember? She still had demon blood inside of her. You know, the evil blood that controlled her. Maybe the powers inside of the demon blood made her survive the fall!" Agent S explained.

"So if we find her, she could end the darkness once and for all!" Twage cheered.
"But... she was never able to take the demon blood out of her. So if she's still alive, she maybe still half a demon. You must be able to remove the demon blood inside of her in order to end the darkness before the demon blood replaces all of her normal blood, turning her to the dark side." Brake explained.
"Just one quick question though..." Sandy said.
"Exactly WHERE can we find her?" Sandy questioned.
"You'll need to find clues. I heard that Blab knows where she could be." Brake said.
"Blab? Why BLAB?" Twage shouted.

"She might have to do with the disappearance of Louise..." Brake explained.
To Be Continued...
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P.S. If you're wondering who was actually in the grave, it's @CaptainJackValdy . He has stared in many of my stories, including the 8th one. So if you want to know what happened to him, feel free to read my other stories!
Thanks For Reading!!! :D

 

Gg, I love how my story kind of interacted with yours the fact that you [Spoiler Alert] are alive in my story. :)



But wait... I am inside that coffin... Which means I'm dead which kind of isn't the case o-o could you like make the body be fake or something because the fact the real me is inside of that thing kind of breaks the logic of my story. But overall it's good, keep going :)

 

We'll talk about it in a convo. I don't want to spoil either of our stories in public :P

 

What? I didn't want to kill you ;-;
I BLAME KENNY (づ◕ل͜◕)づ
Kenny threw Louise on a table and flipped it. (づ◕ل͜◕)づ

 

Kenny. Omfg

 

Kenny is always to blame (づ◕ل͜◕)づ

 

Sorry I haven't been commenting lately. Cool chapter btw!

 

TEACH ME HOW TO WRITE

TEACH ME

 

Okay, so here's the plan.
Once the story ends, I'll post on my profile after 1 or 2 weeks and say if I'm creating a new story or not. If I say I will make a story, then I'll set a date which will be when the story releases. If I say I can't, then I probably won't create a new story for a very long time. When the holidays come, I might create a new story.

Characters With Major Roles:
@Elfon (Elisa)
@Kryokin (Kry)
@Sven007 (Agent S)
Characters With Minor Roles:
@TwageTomato (Twage)
@SandyTheDog (Sandy)
@BrakeCrake (Brake)
Characters Mentioned:
@BlabDaFish
And a new character awakens...
Enjoy ^-^

Chapter 9 - The Foul Death
"Do you know where Blab is?" Kry questioned while desperate for an answer.
He raised his hand, pointing in a direction.
We noticed the hills with no trees or bushes. Just sprouts of grass leaded the path.
Brake slowly got up while interrupting Twage's help.
He started to cough a bit and his skin seemed quite pale.
"Are you sure you're okay? You seem quite unwell." Twage questioned.
"I'm fine... *cough*. I'm just a bit exhausted from explaining for a couple of minutes... quite tired too." He explained while trying to avoid coughing.
"I think I have deja vu..." Sandy whispered while staring at the distance.
"What do you mean?" Agent S questioned.
"The hill seems familiar... Ah! Of course! That was the hill that Brake and I went on a long time ago. It was also the location when we both got separated... It's possible that the hills still have evil strangers lurking around." Sandy explained.
"Don't worry. We'll be as safe as a bucket!" Twage cheered.

We exited the zone and headed towards the hills.
I quickly turned around to see if everyone was close by, but then I discovered Brake at the bottom of the hill.
I looked back at the rest and decided to leave them to help Brake.
I noticed Brake looked more tired then before.
"Hey, do you need a hand?" I questioned.
"I'm... *cough*... I'm fine... It's just... *cough*... It's sort of hot..." He coughed with a soft voice.
"Has the gas harmed you a lot?"
"No... no... the gas *gasp* didn't harm me... arg... that much. D-Don't worry about me..."
It was obvious that something was up with him, but I didn't want to push him.
"Just try to catch up, okay?"
I walked back up to the hill and caught up with the others.
"I can sort of smell a mysterious kind of danger... we should split up to find it and see what it is before it could do some serious harm." Sandy commanded.
"What about Brake?" I gasped.
Everyone turned around and noticed Brake metres away from us.
"How about we just split up into 2 groups. Twage, Brake and I will be in one group, while the rest are in another group." Sandy added.
Once said, we all agreed with no complaints and headed in opposite directions.

"This 'danger' that Sandy smells seems suspicious... Blab would probably be in a base right now, not having a little stroll on a random hill." Kry argued.
"Well if it's not Blab or Louise, then what is it." Agent S questioned.
"That's what we're trying to find out you block head." Kry shouted.
"Jeez... you've been a lot more grumpier ever since Louise died... I mean went missing."
Kry just looked down, frustrated and stressed.
"I know you're mad at Louise for I guess... faking her death. But we'll find her and everything will be alright." Agent S said as he laid his hand on his shoulder.
"I'm fine." He pushed Agent S's hand off his shoulder.
"Just concentrate on finding this danger." Kry commanded.

After roaming around, not a single sprinkle of danger was found. Not even a single tree too. It was just grass and little puffs of clouds.
"What if Sandy isn't trustworthy as well..." Kry sighed.
"Yeah... w-wait! Hold the phone or whatever your holding." Agent S gasped.
He seemed to have discovered some needed information right at the back of his mind.
"I remember..."
"Remember how I was in a different, fake world with all these fake clones of you?"
"I don't remember..." Kry said.
"Let me explain again... I was in a different world made by Captain J- ... the darkness. Everyone in that world was made up. You were included and also Louise. Sandy was in it too. At the end, I learned that the world was fake and all the people there were also just people dressed up and acting... but what if Sandy was actually real? What if he wasn't just a fake when I was in that world." Agent S explained.
"That's quite confusing... but I think I remember that you told me this before." Kry responded.
"If you met Sandy in your world, then do you know some information about him?" I questioned.
"Well... Sandy was Louise's owner..." Agent S answered.
"WHAT?" Kry gasped.
"You mean... Sandy was Louise's real original owner? Before Brake?" Kry added.
"Yeah." Agent S nodded.
"That mean's... Sandy may have important information about her... maybe..."
"Maybe he also knows the location of her!" Kry gasped.
Suddenly, a bright, blinding light shined right at the corner of my eye.

"Jeez! What was that?" Kry shouted.
The light then calmed down, making it visible.
"Could that be the danger?" Agent S gasped.
We slowly walked forward to not alarm the danger.
"What is THIS?" Kry gasped.
Some kind of weapon was in the ground with a bright, red gem on it.
"I remember this weapon... yes... I remember it clearly." Kry said.
"That's the weapon the darkness used... why is it here though?" Kry added.
"Maybe it could teleport like the golden axe?" I said.
The weapon seemed suspicious. I had to check it.
I held my hand out about to hold it.
"STOP!"
But my fingers were already gripped around it.
I looked at the red gem on top of it, and it started to shine brightly... in less then a second.
It blinded my view, and all I could see was bright red textures.
"I heard your the new devil..."

The red textures started to fade, and someone was in the distance.
"Who are you? What is happening?" I questioned.
"Let me tell you sweetheart. The darkness chose you, but apparently someone else also chooses you."
None of it's explanations seemed understandable.
"In other words... I want you to be the new devil."
It came closer, and I saw it's face.
It held out it's hand.
I tried to reach out, but it turns out, my hands were stuck, perhaps tied.
"I am Captain Jack. Previously known as the darkness."
He showed his golden teeth while taking out a cigar.
"The... the darkness... your spawning all these demons on this planet?" I questioned.
"No. I'm dead. Didn't you see the grave? This is a illusion, but I still exist in your mind. Get used to it." He explained.
He walked around me while still smoking the cigar.
"Once the darkness or light fades away, it chooses a replacement. Here's the deal: You be the new darkness, and I'll be a good little master. That includes, killing Kry, Agent S, Twage and the rest and also finding the demon."
"The demon?" I asked.
"The one responsible for all these demons." He added.
"But... I don't even know where the demon is or who it is." I said.
"Then it's your turn to find out who it is. Once you find the demon, you end it." It explained.
"End it? But your the darkness, right? Why do you want me to destroy someone who is doing what you did in the past? Don't you want the demon to do this?" I gasped.
"When you find it's real identity... then you'll understand." He smiled when he looked at me.
"I'll see you around... Elisa..." He said, then started to laugh uncontrollably.
Then everything faded away, and a bright texture then covered my view.

"GOD DAMMIT!"
Something was pushing my stomach. I opened my eyes, but as soon as I did, a great force pushed my cheek.
I started to cough and spit while rubbing my cheek.
I looked up, and noticed Kry standing on me.
"Okay Kry, that's enough."
I saw Agent S then grab his arms, pulling him off me.
I stood up and saw Kry with so much sweat on him and anger.
"What happened..." I questioned.
"You held the rod... you held the weapon of the DARKNESS!" He shouted.
"And exactly what is the bad thing about that?" I argued.
"Whoever holds it may receive demon blood due to the darkness previously having this. Now it vanished right after you went unconscious." Agent S explained in a calm voice.
"In other words... you might turn into a DEMON! You might replace the darkness's place! You might be the new DARKNESS!"
Kry was going crazy, in fact he started to sob and shout.
"I'm... I'm sorry..." I apologized in a nervous voice.
He continued to sob.
"Maybe you should go..." Agent S said as he looked up with a serious face.
"Go? But..."
"Just GO! You've started enough trouble already. LEAVE!" Kry screamed.
I took a couple of steps backwards, while staring at the two of them.
A little tear was released...
I turned around, and sprinted.
I didn't look back. I didn't take a break.
My life is about to fade into darkness...
To Be Continued...
Even though your dead @CaptainJackValdy , there was still a opportunity of you returning!
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Nice Chapter!
I hope I won't die :c

 

Lol, nice interference with my story but was it only Elisa who saw me or everyone including Sven did?


Anyway, Gud Chap :)

 

Only Elisa. Near the end, it will explain why she was the only one to see you.
Basically in Krys, Agent S and Twage's view, as soon as she held the rod, she went unconscious and the rod vanished. Thanks for asking ^.^

 

Amazing chapter! Teach me your ways of writing, seriously. I love it!
PLOT TWIST, BLAB IS THE ONE SPAWNIG ALL THE DEMONS OMG

 

We are now half way through the story and we have reached over 50 replies! :D Thanks for your support even if the wait between chapters is getting longer.

Characters With Major Roles:
@Elfon (Elisa)
@BlabDaFish (Blab)
@SandyTheDog (Sandy)
Characters With Minor Roles:
@CaptainJackValdy
@TwageTomato (Twage)
@BrakeCrake (Brake)
@Sven007 (Agent S)
@Kryokin (Kry)
Enjoy ^-^

Chapter 10 - The Rise Of The Devil
Every heartbeat I heard made my memories transform into nightmares.
I didn't care that my feet were sore or my heart was about to explode, I just wanted to run as far as I could go.
But my foot was caught.
My chest was brought forward and I was smashed to the ground.
I looked behind me, and my foot was being grabbed.
Muddy, sharp claws wrapped around my shoe and started to pull.
I tried to grab onto something, but nothing in my view seemed strong enough to hold me.
I felt the mud slide against my chest.
Then one of my legs was in the hole... then the other...
"ARRRRGG!"
Now one of my legs was stabbed with pain.
I could feel the creature's teeth, dig into my skin.
I thought that this would be the end of me, being eaten by some kind of mole.

"SQEEEEEE!"
My foot was free!
I looked at my leg when it was finally released.
Some bite marks were on it... but I seemed fine.
I looked up, and someone was standing there.
"Why did you help me?" I questioned.
"Because I know your the darkness." Blab said.
"Huh?"
Blab came closer, staring in my eyes.
"Your eyes... their turning red." She whispered.
"Yes... you are the darkness... the light, hope and happiness inside of you has been captured by the darkness. Your only one step away from being a true devil... a true shadow form." She explained.
"But... my friends... they'll then be my foes. Their too powerful for me." I said.
"If you come with me, then I can make you more powerful then light itself." She smiled.
I looked down, wondering if I should agree.
"I'll never be the d-"
A high pitched noise, flashed in and out in my ears, making my vision flash.
"Elisa... you can't run from the darkness... it's in you."
I could hear Captain Jack's voice, ringing in my head.
"Stop... I won't... be the-"
"Join my granddaughter and the demon... and be the darkness... heh heh heh." He chuckled.
The flashing noise and lights calmed down.
"Well..." She started to show her teeth.
"Wait... Captain Jack is your grandfather?" I questioned.
"Yes... I followed his footsteps to being a true devil... but he knows that you can truly be the darkness... so do you accept?"
I looked around, then sighed admitting that I had no choice.
"Fine."

"Excellent. We must move quickly before any enemies come. Come to the base and you'll see your master." She cheered.
I followed her through the trees. The further the went, the more the green started to fade to purple.
Trees with no leaves and claw branches sticking out scattered around the area with also rotten grass feeling like glass whenever I stepped on them.
"We're here." She pointed.
A giant red fortress stood tall in my view, with demons all over it.
We walked towards it, and some demons started to come near me.
"Hissssss..." Blab hissed.
"Huh?" I questioned.
"Let me handle this..." She whispered.
I stared at one of the demons, looking at Blab.
"Hush Ka... Haaa..." It started to speak.
I was amazed that the demons could actually speak a language.
"Hisssss Ka Tell Heh..." Blab whispered.
The demon then looked at me, then wandered away.
"What did you tell it?" I asked.
"I told it that your one of them." She smiled.
"I'm going to be turned into a demon, like them?! With mutated bodies, red blinding skin and horns on my head?" I gasped.
"No. You will looked exactly the same, but with only slightly changes." She said.
I sighed and we continued to walk into the fortress.

We made it to the hallway and someone was standing there showing its back.
It was wearing a long, black robe covering it's whole body. It also seemed to be holding a rod.
"Master, I have brought the darkness to you." Blab bowed down.
It turned its head only a bit to the right.
"Excellent..."
It's voice was soft but intimidating. It was serious and quite croaky.
"Elisa... it is time for you to fully be the darkness..." It whispered.
"Wh-What is the procedure to becoming one?" I questioned in a nervous voice.
"You will be frozen in a tube, freezing all your organs and blood even though your still alive. We will safely spread demon blood through your skin, and in a week, you'll act and feel like the darkness." Blab explained.
I felt nervous about being frozen for quite a while. I was thinking about declining.
"Don't even think about declining..." I heard Captain Jack whisper in my mind.
"If you decline, you'll be turned into those starving, weak demons outside. You'll have no choice... Heh heh heh." Captain Jack giggled.
So, I nodded my head and was headed to the place where I'll be frozen.

The iron door slowly opened, and I entered a chilly, cool room with a tube made of glass at the back of the room.
"I'm guessing this is where I get frozen... right?" I asked.
Blab nodded.
I noticed that the guy with the black robe wasn't here.
"Where is your master?" I questioned.
"My master is busy, so I'll have to turn you into the darkness myself." She said.
I slowly walked towards the tube and was forced to enter it.
Blab went to a machine next to it with all these controls.
Then after a couple of minutes, the door closed.
"Don't worry... the darkness will probably make you kill all your friends. So no need to worry." She giggled.
"Wait WHAT?" I gasped.
She slammed the door, and I started to feel cold.
Then my skin started to feel like ice, and my breath was shaking.
"Say cheese..." Captain Jack whispered.
Then, everything froze. I couldn't think, speak or move. I was frozen.

Sandy's Perspective:
"WHY did you say that to her?" Twage shouted.
"I don't know... I got mad." Kry sighed.
"The demon will probably capture her and turn HER into the darkness!" Twage hissed.
"But she already had some darkness in her after she picked up the rod!" Kry argued.
"But WE could've cured her. Now she's missing." Agent S shouted.
Then Kry was out of things to say.
"Why don't we just... *cough*... Find her... and cure her... *gasp*." Brake said softly.
"Well from our view, your not the one saving her." Agent S said.
"Wait..."
Kry turned towards me. I took a couple of steps back.
"The demon was your master, right?" Kry questioned.
I nodded.
"You will go and get Elisa." He commanded.
"WHAT?" I shouted.
"I can't! I only have 4 legs for walking, not for carrying. She's probably heavy..."
"Maybe we could go and get her." Agent S suggested.
"Alright. Sandy, you stay here with Brake, while we go and get-"
"Arrrg..."
I looked at Brake, and he looked so pale like a sheet of paper.
"Brake... are you alright?" Twage asked.
"I'm... fine..."
Then he fell forward and the last breath was drawn.
"Sweet mother of tomatos and lord!" Twage gasped.

Twage knelled down and felt his back.
"He's been bitten by a demon. Which means he could turn into a demon himself!" Twage gasped.
Agent S screamed like a girl and fainted.
"Are you kidding me? Look we've lost enough people already. There has to be a magic spell you have that can cure him, right?" Kry questioned with frustration.
"I can... but the process is long and is very hard, which means I need you two to help. Which means..."
Twage then looked at me. I knew what he was going to say.
"Fine. I'll get Elisa while you help Brake. I think I can sort of smell her anyway since she does smell like pickles." I said.
I started to sniff the air, and I did notice a little sense.
I followed the sense and headed towards the forest.
Then the area started to fade into darkness...
"Ewww... why is there a dead demon there? All well..." I said with disgust.
The trees were just trunks with sticks and the grass was just brown, rotten french fries across the ground.
Then something tall stood in my way...
Something way taller then the trees... or probably bigger then all of the trees combined.
"Damn. How long did it take for THIS to get built." I gasped while staring at a giant, red fortress.
I noticed all the demons wandering around while sniffing the ground or licking the building.

The entrance seemed clear, so I slowly crawled towards it, making minimal sound as possible...
The huge gate was right in front of me, so I took a step forward and-
"ARRRRG!" I gasped.
Something sharp dug into my back.
I looked behind me and noticed a brown, half eaten demon chewing on my back and also licking it.
"GET OFF ME!"
I kicked the demon to the ground and quickly ran inside to escape all the demons.
'I really hope that bite didn't give me any diseases or something...' I thought.
But right as that thought was put to rest, I felt sore.
Then my muscles started to feel sloppy.
"No no no!" I gasped.
I tried to crawl forward to escape what was happening to me.
But then my front legs fell to the ground, and my vision started to turn black.
"Arg..." I groaned while breathing softly.
The world around me faded into darkness...

A Couple Days Later...
I woke up immediately, gasping and panting.
I seemed to be in a cage, but the gap between the bars were big enough for me to squeeze through.
So I poked my head out, then my front legs, and then my tail.
"Whoever designed these cages are idoits." I laughed.
"Wait... how LONG was I in there for?" I gasped.
I knew I might not have much time left.
I zoomed out of the room and I seemed to be in the same hallway that I was in before.
I ran forward and noticed a dark room with hardly any light.
Then I felt a small breeze coming from my right.
I noticed a iron door.
"Elisa!" I gasped.
The door seemed to be half open.
When I went inside, I noticed the room being quite chilly...
Then I saw Elisa trapped in ice in a tube.
"ELISA!" I shouted.
I ran towards her and pushed my paws on the glass.
I noticed tubes connected to her arms and legs, inserting something inside of her.

"What are YOU doing here?"
I was startled with the booming voice out of no where.
I saw who it was... and memories popped in my head.
"M-Master!" I gasped with excitement.
"Why are you here." It hissed.
"You captured my friend master... may I please take her-"
"I told you to NEVER come back!"
"B-But master..."
"I never even LOVED YOU!"
Those words broke my heart, and I thought all my bones broke as well.
"Demon... I have a new master now... more thoughtful and powerful then you." I hissed.
"No human is stronger then me. Now leave before I rip you open."
I showed my sharp teeth and took a couple of steps backwards...
I jumped on a machine with all these buttons without releasing all my limbs were on top of many buttons.
The tubes from Elisa escaped from her and the ice around her melted and the door swinged open.
"No!" Demon shouted.
I quickly got Elisa on my back.
Demon then held out it's rod.

"I will give you one more chance... put her back in the tube or I'll transport you to another dimension." It warned.
"Your not my master, so I won't ever listen to you again..." I hissed.
"Then I have no choice."
Red wind swirled around the red gem on top of the rod, then it zapped to the wall next to me.
The wall then started to widened, and a giant, black hole appeared and started to suck me in.
"Farewell." It smiled.
And before you knew it, Elisa and I were inside of the hole.

To Be Continued...
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Really nice! I don't want to become a demon :(

 

This chapter is a reference to one of my previous stories. Can you guess which one? ^-^

Characters With Major Roles:
@Elfon (Elisa)
@SandyTheDog (Sandy)
@TwageTomato (Twage)
Characters With Minor Roles:
@BrakeCrake (Brake)
@CaptainJackValdy
@Sven007 (Agent S)
@Kryokin (Kry)
@BlabDaFish
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Chapter 11 - Welcome To Hell
I gasped, grasping for air.
All I could remember was being with Elisa, then getting sucked into...
Now I remember. My master has betrayed me once again.
When I started thinking of that, that's when I realized something was missing.
"Elisa?" I called.
I paused for a couple of seconds, but not a response.
I got on my feet and looked around.
Red textures covered my view. I remember this place.
I remembered the lava streaming slowly down in directions, and helpless, mutated demons roaming around on foot and in the air.
"I know this place. Yes, I've been here." I realized.
The smell even triggered a memory. The smell of rotten, roasting bodies, perhaps the flesh melting in the lava.
"This is Hell... right?" I gasped.
Once I said that, it was clear. We were in Hell.
While taking a moment to examine every little detail in the view, I noticed someone on the ground.
It was still and lifeless. Perhaps dead.
I was about to turn around and look for Elisa, but before I did, I realized who that person is.
"ELISA!" I shouted.
I ran towards her and pushed her on her back.
I laid my ear in her chest.
Soft, powerless beats echoed in my ears.
"I promise you... that I'll keep you safe... because your my master. Don't you die on me." I whispered.
I thought I saw her show a little smile once I told her that, but it could've just been my imagination.

Elisa's Perspective:
"So... my journey towards the darkness was interrupted?" I questioned.
"Indeed. By one of your friends... also known as your new enemy." He said.
"Exactly who is this enemy may I ask?"
"The creature with four legs and brown patterns." He threw his cigar on the ground with frustration.
"Sandy you mean? The one who used to be the demon's pet?"
He nodded and put his hands in his pocket.
"Captain Jack, I cannot kill him. My connection towards him is too strong. How do I overcome this?" I questioned.
"He has been harmed, and soon he will be weak and tired due to a bite from a demon. If you make him avoid any healing towards him, then you'll be strong enough to kill him." He explained.
"Yes... M-"
My mind clicked. WHAT was I doing?
"What am I thinking! Of course I won't kill him. The darkness... the demon blood... arg is controlling my mind!" I shouted.
His smile dropped and picked up his cigar.
"I thought being the darkness would make my worries go away. But now it's creating new ones!" I argued.
He grabbed his dagger out of his belt and held it towards my neck.
I held still and didn't say a word.
He then lowered his weapon and returned it to his belt.
"I'll be patient with you. You just need more time for the demon blood to spread and infect the rest of your normal blood. Now I'll let you go for once, but I will warn you that if you don't join me, Blab and the demon, then you shall be killed." He explained.
I sighed and closed my eyes, letting him return me back to the real world.

I waited until it was silent, then I slowly opened my eyes.
I felt weak and sick while the pain spread across my body.
I looked down, and I seemed to be on someones back.
The creature carrying me was running, using all it's energy to get to it's destination.
Before I could ask who this creature was, my stomach became sore, creating a swirling pain.
"Arrg..." I groaned.
The creature immediately stopped, then looked at me.
"Elisa! Your awake!" It cheered.
I knew that face, and soon I knew who's body this was.
"Yeah... where are we..." I whispered.
"Well... we're in Hell. Which is quite bad. But hey, the view is quite nice... especially seeing it for the second time." Sandy said about to day dream.
"Second time you say? You mean you've been here before?" I asked.
"Indeed. I remember being with Agent S and other people as well. Happened a very long time ago and I remember that I couldn't speak back then, but I had a strong power inside of me but I just can't remember what it was. Maybe I might find out later." He explained.
I hopped off his back and stretched my limbs.
"So... this is your home?" I questioned.
He stared at me then looked down.
"I... I guess. My original home. I just roamed around here with no owner, until demon found me. Then my master disappeared, and so Brake took care of me, then demon came back but kicked me out, then I'm with you. Quite a confusing history for me." He chuckled.
I did a small chuckle as well to light the mood before he could feel depressed about his past.

"Ahhh!"
I heard someone scream in pain.
I looked around to check who was in the danger.
But then I realized it was my friend right in front of me who appeared to be in danger.
"Sandy! Are you hurt? Have you been harmed?" I questioned with worry.
He was on the ground, grunting in pain.
"Arg. I'm- I'm fine..." He said.
Obviously that was a lie.
Then I remembered what Captain Jack explained to me...
"You were bitten from a demon... right?"
He didn't answer, perhaps avoiding the truth.
He slowly got on his legs, then he seemed fine.
"Let's just focus on survival." He smiled.
I smiled back, but just sighed. I was quite worried about him.

Twage's Perspective:
I dug my finger deep in my nose, then I caught something.
I pulled my finger out and noticed the booger was a keeper!
"Ima call this booger Jimmy." I giggled.
"TWAGE! Not now! Brake is dang dying! I asked you a million times to cast any healing spells on him instead of playing with your boogers!" Kry shouted.
"Ok ok... Sorry. Jimmy, you can stay here." I put my little booger on the ground then walked towards Brake who was on the ground.
"Do you know anymore healing spells?" Agent S questioned.
I tried to remember anymore spells that might be effective, but known seemed to be good for the job.
"Sorry... I don't think the rest of my spells can work. If only if grandfather tomato taught me more spells..." I sighed.
The thought of grandfather tomato brought a tear to my eye.
"After some calculations and stuff, it is possible that in a couple of minutes... Brake will turn into a demon." Agent S explained.
"ARE YOU KIDDING ME!" Kry shouted as he punched a tree.
"Don't hurt Mr Tree! You could've hurt his feelings..." I whispered as I hugged Mr Tree.
"I don't care about Mr Tree, I care about Brake! I've already lost a close friend, and loosing a good assistant is also bad!" Kry shouted.
I gasped and hugged Mr Tree harder to comfort it.
"Twage, we would appreciate it... if you would STOP HUGGING THAT WOODEN PIECE OF-"
"Hush!" Kry whispered as he punched Agent S in the face.
"What the hell was that fo-"
"Shh." Kry interrupted.

By Kry's expressions, I knew he could see danger.
I prepared a powerful spell to wipe out the danger.
We slowly walked forward towards a bush, slightly shaking as leaves fell to the ground.
"...Fire." Kry commanded.
The spell was launched and bright, green ball of smoke dashed forward towards the bush.
"ARRRGG!"
Someone screamed as soon as the spell burned the bush.
When the bush burned into ashes, a girl seemed to be laying there, perhaps harmed.
I charged forward to see if the girl is alright.
But when I saw the face, I jumped back, about to cast another spell.
"WAIT Twage! You don't even know who she is!" Agent S said.
"It's Blab!" I answered.
They gasped and got their weapons.
Blab raised her head and noticed us.

"Kry? Agent S? Twage? Oh my goodness, I'm so glad- Wait what's with the weapons?" She questioned.
"Don't act all innocent. You've caused so much trouble and it's time to end it!" Agent S shouted.
"Wha-what? I was captured! Someone grabbed me, trapped me in a fortress and I was tortured like getting whipped on the back or getting burned alive! I escaped though, then I found you and then Twage tried to kill me! How did I cause any trouble?" I shouted.
"You tried to drown Brake in gas! He almost died! In fact, he's about to turn into a demon because of you!" Kry screamed.
"How did I-"
Agent S screamed... like a girl for the 21th time when he turned around.
Brake's skin started to turn red... a huge tail stuck out on his back and some horns grew out of his head.
"HISSSSS!" He hissed.
He then turned around and ran away.
"STOP HIM! NOW!" Kry commanded.
I charged forward and so did Agent S.
"How do we catch it! It's *gasp* so fast!" He said.
"I'll put a sleep spell to it if the spell hits it! Then we can catch him!" I explained.
"Great idea!" He cheered.
A light blue flame grew in my hands.
Once it was big enough, it was released, aiming for Drake.
But Drake just moved to the side, making the spell go past him.
Then he was out of our sight.
We stopped and caught our breath.
"You... *gasp*... need to work on your aiming." Agent S said softly.
Kry and Blab caught up with us.
"No no NO!" Kry shouted.
"Don't worry, we can just catch him tomorrow." I cheered, trying to calm him down.
Kry started to breathe easier, until Agent S broke him.
"Umm... that is quite impossible you see." Agent S said nervously.
"A demon's stomach is more sensitive then a humans stomach. It can only survive 10 hours without food. But demons are horrible hunters due to their clumsy limbs... so if we look for him tomorrow... he'd more likely be dead." Agent S shyly explained.
Kry turned towards Agent S. Oh no...

Kry charged straight towards Agent S, punching him right in the gut.
He fell down, sobbing and crying.
"Kry, you know it isn't his fault that Brake is about to die." I tried to make a point.
"Why why WHY!" He shouted, throwing his sword to the ground, next to Agent S.
"When the light and darkness died, I thought there's be no chaos. But due to my fricken life, everything has to go horribly. The light is unknown, the darkness is destroying us. WHAT NEXT!" He shouted.
"Also..." I whispered.
"Sandy and Elisa are missing... did I mention that?" I added.
Everyone then realized that they were missing, which caused instant panic.
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Nice! I don't want to be a DEMON :(

 

You do... all of us do...