[OITC] Spawn

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  2. I like it, it's good.

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  3. I think you should add more details/improvements.

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  4. No... I don't like it.

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  5. I hate it! You're a terrible builder!

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  1. 7heSw4gCr4ft666

    7heSw4gCr4ft666 boiling despayeeto

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    Minigame: OITC (One in the chamber)

    Description of map: This is the spawn for OITC. Never gets harder to explain. :3

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    Bird's eye view.

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    What it should look like when you spawn.

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    Ranked leaderboard. (CBB to do signs)

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    Joining board. (CBB to do signs)

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    Small treehouse.

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    Do you spot something odd about the tree? (it's not shown on the picture, lol)

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    King of the ladder.

    Credits: Me.
     
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    Smg Retired | Also known as 'Phaithful' Donator

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    Looks great, but one problem comes to mind.

    Overall design.

    Look at the [Oitc] lobby we have now. It's purely fantastic. And I honestly mean no offense with my next statement. This lobby seems underbuilt compared to the one we have now.

    Now, there are ways to fix this. Some could be make the lobby bigger. Add more things to explore, to see, to jump on.

    If you can find the time to make the map more, "exciting" then I would surely support this build.
     
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    Like said above, this lobby seems extremely minimalist compared to any of the previous OITC lobbies.
     
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    Okay, I'll get to it. Thanks for le suggestioné
     
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    No problem :)
     
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    What do YOU think is good? I mean, I'm about to make a hill surrounding the whole thing :P
     
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    What I would say with the current design..

    A Candy-land like structure, with bright designs. What you have now is a great start, and you should expand it. Mke mountains/hills/trees that are all bright colored and beautiful. I suggest use clay blocks. And another thing, what I really like in a build is when the biome changes, so try to make part of it a snow Candy-land like structure.

    You don't have to go by my exact thoughts, but it could be a start.
     
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    So I could make like a really vibrant hill surrounding the whole thing, and at the top I can have such things. (It's not gonna be as high af, just as high so people can be bothered to climb it)
     
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    OITC is more of a warish type, thing. I don't think the "Candyland" theme fits it... I mean, it's a good build, but this is more of like.. not an OITC type spawn. This is just my opinion, so don't take it harmful.

    I do like the clay uses and all, it's more of a Craft roulette type spawn in my mind. But, I also think it should be expanded.
     
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    Yeah, I don't like candyland either. But I'm already expanding it, it'll take a couple of days or so.
     
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    The only reason I really suggested the candy land idea was because the spawn you have now would go great with it. And yes I do agree on the thought of it not being a great fit for OITC.
     
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    One of the main reasons why I made it in lal sorts of colours is to make it look more colourful, not to make it so people start to lick their screens.



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    Well, what I said was only a minor suggestion.
     
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