My first story: Ticking Timebomb.

So well. I was thinking of making my own storys, but each chapter is a new quest.
As this is the first one, I'll be making it two chapters.
Every saturday there will be a new story.
So I hope you enjoy!
Starring:
@Sven007
@LouiseXminerX
@CaptainJackValdy
@Safoya

Ticking Timebomb 1/2.​

Logbook. London. 1/2/2015.
My name is Sv... Let's just call me Agent S for now... I'm an agent from the double 0 program from the MI6.
Now I have some enemies, like Captain Jack... But I also have some good friends, like Louise. And this is one of my missions I once had...
I was in London. James (007) was sitting next to me. I asked if he wanted some coffee... But no, he needed to go to Egypt for some kind of mission in the great pyramids. So as I walked to the coffe machine to get some coffee for myself I felt something shaking. It was my "cell phone". I grabbed it and saw that I was being called by Louise.
She said: "Agent S, we need you ASAP here at the top floor of the MI6 building!" Beep. She hung up.
I rushed to the MI6 building thinking why I needed to come. Was it an attack? Or a bomb? I would see it any minute because I reached the building. I openend the doors and all I could see was smoke. Luckily my orientation was pretty good, so I knew where the stairs where located. My feet were running so fast that they almost broke. I reached the stairs and almost fell trhough a giant massive hole. I couldn't go any further. The smoke was slowly filling my lungs. But I didn't know. I coughed very much... Then I came in the section where I never came. I tried to close the doors to prevent smoke from coming in... But I only prevented it from coming out... But again, I didn't know that. I then saw a fire. I runned as fast as I could. Only to see Captain Jack... I said; "Freeze! Captain Jack! It's to late to flee! Hands on your back now!" He laughed and then dissapeared into the smoke. I followed him, trying to hear his footsteps... But I lost him. I suddenly heard someone scream! "HELP ME, HELP! *cough* HELP ME!" When I reached the source of the scream I saw a girl... It was Louise! She was tied up, with a time bomb. I unbound here when I heard shots in the background! Someone could be hurt! I looked at the timer and said to Louise: "Here, I'll give you this knife, I guess you can free yourself! I need to check whats going on!" So I got out of the room and left Louise behind. When I come in the other room I saw a person lying on the ground. I checked the heartbeat of the person and saw that the blood was still flowing! I checked where she was shot. I saw a giant hole in her leg and tried to drag her out of the building. But I couldn't go on. I inhaled to much smoke. I slowly blacked out...

To be continued!

(It's actually W.I.P. but I didn't have much time left. So I'll go on tomorow! -Sven)

 

Lel wot


I'm a terrorist :3 Not bad for the first try!

 

Nice job ;) I could see that the name 'Agent S' was from my story, heh heh. Can't wait to see more chapters!

 

So well guys, promise broken...​

I didn't finish it because a major problem... It wasn't good! And now you might be thinking that the story was good. Yes, it may be good. But I didn't enjoy writing it. I'm more a person who likes to read instead of writing. So I'm sorry if I dissapointed you.
So if you like reading yourself... Read the story's of @LouiseXminerX ! I'll bet you'll enjoy it!

-Sven007

07

 

Oh you're a dead man walking...
(Just Kidding, but still sad :()