My 7th Story Created: Dimension Corruption

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Chapter 6 - The World Of Chaos
Then one more thing came out of it.
It's got to be my friends, but who is the last one who fell down...
"That one is a demon too! Alright Louise, you just stay behind me and let me kill them. If anymore demons try to attack you, scream as loud as you can, okay?" He explained.
"But they might be my friends..." I gasped.
"They can't be. Two of them are demons. No way." He said.

As we walked off the path and walked to where the hole is, that's when I noticed 4 people on the ground, wiping the dust of their clothes and legs.
"Do you think Louise will be here?" One of them said.
"Hopefully. I hope she is okay." Another one said.
They have to be my friends. I could even recognise Kono, Agent S, Elite and... wait who's the other guy?
"Okay, you stay and don't get hurt." Silent whispered.
"Okay... WAIT WHAT?" I screamed.
Then he ran towards them and whacked Kono with the spear, making him unconsious.
"SILENT! STOP!" I screamed.
Elite tried to get his sword out, but Silent knocked it off his hand.
Before Silent could stab him, his spear started to shrink.
I saw Kono with his white eyes again, and his spear then became as tiny as an ant.
I grabbed Silent on the back, trying to make him stop.

"SILENT! THEIR MY FRIENDS! MY FRIENDS I TELL YOU!" I screamed ontop of my lungs.
He then pushed me against the wall, squishing me like a pancake.
As he ran and grabbed the sword Elite dropped, he then turned to Agent S.
"Dude, stop!" Agent S cried.

Then someone grabbed me from behind and hid me behind the wall.
I was about to scream, but it then covered my mouth with its hand.
I looked closely... a human.
It took its hand out of my mouth.
"Louise... remember me?" It smiled.
...
And realisation hit me.
An enemy... an enemy I thought I lost.
But he seemed... nicer now. Something... changed him.
His face was from someone I knew. Someone I knew I thought was murdered.
"Xenohs..." I gasped.
That name just came out of my mouth without any thinking.
Xenohs... that name... that face.
He nodded gently.
"Xenohs... I thought you died." I realised.
"Louise... I'm okay. I'm back!" He cheered.
I didn't know what to say, I just smiled.
Then I heard a large sound. Like an explosion.

I peeked out of the wall, and I noticed Silent was shooting lightning bolts near Kono, Agent S and Elite.
"WHERE IS LOUISE? SHE WAS MY ONLY FRIEND!" He screamed.
He kept trying to shoot lightning bolts at them.
Then he shot a lightning bolt at Agent S, and he was knocked out cold.
Kono held him tight, wondering if he was still alive or not.
No... I don't want anymore CHAOS IN THIS WORLD.

Then I felt 2 things coming out of my back, like two spears just escaping my body.
I looked at my hands, and fire balls spawned.
I could see and hear.. but I wasn't able to control.
The dust Silent blew at me has worked, but I need to control myself...
I tried to hard to concentrate and move, but it was no use.
I saw myself then shoot a fireball in front of Silent, and he turned around.
He tried to shoot a lightning bolt at me, but I dodged and flew straight at him, grabbing him to the ground.
He then was turning back to normal, and stared at me with shock.
"LOUISE! WAIT! I DIDN'T KNOW!" Silent screamed.
I was about to throw one large fireball in his face... until I didn't feel anger anymore.
The anger just... fell. I felt guilty, so then I was about to move myself again and control myself.

"Silent... I'm sorry." I gasped.
I looked at Agent S, and he just woke up. He just survived.
"ARRRG!" Someone said.
I looked behind me, and a demon was chewing on Elite.
"STOP!" Xenoh screamed.
More creatures crawled out of lava and popped out of walls, and kept on trying to eat Elite.
Then I looked behind me again, and Xenoh was floating... with deep blue eyes.
"Death is here." Xenoh said in a deep voice.
To Be Continued...
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Chapter 7 - Stranger Danger
As we stared at Xenoh, his skin started to disappear...
And that's when he completely vanished.
Then I heard screaming from behind.
As I turned around, a creature was screaming in pain, then another one did.
The creatures were getting hurt somehow and scared, so they then left Elite and ran away.
Then I saw Xenoh appear again in front of us, and smiled at us as he turned around.
"It's another demon! KILL-" "Dude, you need to chill." Kono sighed as he covered Silent's mouth.
When Kono let go, Silent sighed.
"You don't know what has been happening here..." Silent said.
"Well we're trying to help, and killing everyone you meet isn't going to help!" Agent S argued.
As they kept on arguing and fighting, I noticed a creature in the distance, staring at us...
It looked... strange. Weirder from the others and much smaller.
It then ran away... I must follow it.
So I left everyone and ran after it as it kept on running in the distance.

When my friends realised I was gone, of course they had to follow me.
"LOUISE! *breathe*. Where are you *cough* going!" Elite screamed.
I refused to answer to save more breath.
Then I finally saw it go into a giant fortress, with flying demons protecting it on each corner.
As I hid behind a rock, my friends did as well and realised the fortress as well.
"Good find." Kono giggled.
The flying demons also looked strange. More darker with... is that bolts in them?
I get that these demons are evil, but putting bolts into them is just cruel.
Maybe that's why they hate humans... I've got to find out who did this and why.
"How do we go inside without getting caught?" Elite whispered.
"We could ask one of those demons to take us inside and pretend we're already caught..." Agent S laughed.
"That sounds like a horrible idea, but for some reason it might work." Kono smiled.

As we kept on waiting behind the rock, I then noticed a demon about to walk past us.
"Ok... I'll grab it and cover its mouth, and Silent, you threaten it to help us otherwise we'll put more screws in it... got it?" I explained.
Silent nodded slowly without a smile, in fact a frown. Is he even considered as a friend still? He's acting like... a foe now.
When the creature walked past us, I grabbed it and held onto its mouth.
"YOU BETTER BRING US IN THE FORTRESS NOW OR WE'LL KILL YOU!!!" Silent screamed on top of his lungs.
However, he was too loud, and the other demons started to come closer, wondering what the noise was...
Then the demon I was holding on then got a tiny signal come out of its head, then started to shine with bright lights.
"ITS AN INTRUDER ALERT SIGN. INTRUDER ALERT! INTRUDER ALERT!" A demon behind us said.
We had no choice but to run.
So I left the demon and we just ran without looking back.
"OKAY AGENT S! THAT IS THE WORST IDEA I HAVE EVER HEARD IN MY LIFE!!!" Kono screamed.

Then in the distance I noticed a huge hole in the ceiling disappeared, and some demons fell out of it and... a horse?
"It's Flames! *WHISTLE*" Elite exclaimed.
As we kept running, we then saw Flames the horse, come galloping towards us.
We quickly got on, and Elite commanded Flames to run as fast as it could.
When I looked behind me, some demons we're still chasing after us and then... lasers came out of their hand?
These demons are so strange...
The laser were shooting towards us, then Xenoh screamed somehow.
I looked forward, and a large pool and lava was in front of us.
"It's small enough for Flames to jump over. Don't worry!" Elite laughed.
Then before Flames could take a big leap, a laser shot its back leg, making it fall as its head fell in the lava.
We quickly got off before the fire could spread to the rest of its body.
"FLAMES! NO! DRAG HIM OUT!" Elite cried.
We grabbed Flames and tried to drag him out, but it was too late.
His eyes were wide open. It died.

"If I didn't shout so much before... he couldn't have... died... its my fault!" Silent cried out.
"It's not Silent, don't think so neg-" "I'LL KILL YOU ALLL!!!" Silent screamed before Kono Xenoh could finish.
He then was floating, and shot lightning bolts at the demons who were getting close.
However, the lightning bolts aren't doing anything to them... so Silent charged right at them, charging them at a wall.
He pushed it so hard, the rock on top of it was about to fall off.
So he got another demon and pushed it against the wall, then ran away as the big rock crushed it, making them die.

Silent became normal and wondered what he has done.
"No... why do I have to be cursed with this stupid demon power! ARG!" Silent screamed.
Elite then quickly covered his mouth, and we then ran to a wall.
"Shhh... someone's coming." Xenoh whispered.
I peeked out, and I noticed someone marching towards us, but then stopped and realised the big rock on top of the demons.
"I, Gooby, the one who rules this place will find whoever killed me slaves... and I'll burn them in lava! HAH!" It screamed.
"Who is this guy?" I whispered.
"I'm not sure... but Gooby sounds like it is someone may cause some trouble..." Xenoh sighed.
To Be Continued...
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Chapter 8 - The Loss And The Found
As we all kept still as Gooby kept looking around, Silent then through a rock at her, which made her look at the rock we were hiding behind.
"What was THAT for? We're going to get caught!" Agent S whispered angrily.
Silent didn't say anything, then threw another rock at Gooby, then he ran away from us.
"SILENT! SERIOUSLY?" Elite screamed.
He was too loud, and Gooby knew we were here.
"You better come out before I get my guards to strangle you..." Gooby came closer.
We had no choice, so we stood up and looked at Gooby.
"I will kill you for using your guards to kill FLAMES!" Elite screamed.
"Ooohh... that horse. You must be the ones who also killed my guards then." Gooby giggled.
I was getting nervous and tried to actually make myself angry to transform into a demon again, but I might hurt my friends accidentally and I didn't feel angry at all, I just felt fear...
"DEMONS! Take them to... the flesh chamber." Gooby laughed.
Some demons that looked strange like the other ones then grabbed us all, and took us in the fortress.
The fortress was covered in blood and skeletons, with some dead bodies inside as well.
The bricks were dark red, some with cracks and moss as well.

Then they trapped us in cage, and we were then getting carried and were about to get thrown into lava.
"WAIT! STOP!" Xenoh screamed.
"Just let us out!" I screamed.
Gooby then punched me.
Then I noticed one of the cages were empty...
A demon opened the door, looking inside, then it was suddenly getting thrown into the lava pool without anything grabbing it...
Then all of the doors of our cages opened, and demons kept on jumping into the lava.
Gooby retreated and ran out of the chamber, then Xenoh appeared.
"Damn, this invisible power is damn awesome!" Xenohs laughed.
"Ssshh..." Agent S whispered.
We heard large stomps coming from the hall way, then 100s of demons covered the entrance.
Then I saw Gooby march in front of them.
"How dare you try to kill my rob- ... I mean demons, then try to escape the chamber! Now this will be your last second to live... KILL THEM!" Gooby commanded.
But then before lasers could come out of their hands, a giant laser from the hall way shot them all, making them fall.
"Imp... Impossible!" Gooby screamed.
"Now let us go before we throw you into the lava as well!" Kono shouted.
"You'll never leave this place... I'll call more demons and-" Then Gooby stopped talking.
She then... just fell to the ground, like she had a heart attack.
Then someone came into the chamber and looked at me.

"Don't tell me you don't remember me!" He said.
"Can I tell you I don't remember you nor know you?" I sighed.
Then his hands started to glow. A... a wizard.
Wait... I had a wizard as a friend before... wait.
"Twage... that name." I wondered.
"Louise, it's me! Twage! I also noticed Kono, Agent S and Xenohs is back! Waddup guys?" Twage laughed.
They seem to don't remember him though...
"Seriously? The word Twage doesn't ring a bell?" Twage gasped.
No answer from them.
"What ever. Anyway we better get out of here before Gooby wakes up from my sleep spell." Twage said.

As we got out of the fortress and hid behind a wall so Gooby can't find us again.
"You know... these demons are actually made out of metal. They are actually robots. Mind... blown." Twage explained.
"That explains why lightning bolts don't effect them and why they have bolts all over them and how they have lasers and... yeah you get it." Agent S said.
"By the way, where the hell is that Silent guy? I want to punch him in the face for trying to make us get caught!" Elite shouted.
"I feel like he isn't a friend anymore... he's trying to get us killed." Xenohs sighed.
"Whoever he is, we have to find him before he does start more trouble. Buut... this place is like as big as the earth, so it may take... like years to find him." Twage sighed.
Then I noticed more holes in the distance are appearing, with more demons coming out of it with I'm pretty sure flesh in their mouths and hands.
"Earth is starting to get beaten up like a damn boxer. We have to find out who's in charge here and find out why it is doing this." Kono cheered.
"You mean the great demon who rules this place? Dude, as soon as your eye catches him, you'll burn like a fire in less then seconds. We really need to get stronger and get better weapons if we do need to take on this guy. Seriously you have no idea how strong it is." Twage explained.
"We'll first have to find Silent. Maybe he's hiding something about this great demon..." I said.
"Good idea. Let's go on that path we found before and follow it. I wonder where it does head to..." Kono suggested.
We agreed with the idea and started to walk forwards to try and find the path to find Silent... and find out what he knows about this place and what secrets he's hiding behind those tears and lies.
To Be Continued...
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Chapter 9 - Betrayal After All
As we were walking down the path, I didn't bother to join the chat they were having.
"I wish I have a dog so I can use it to track down treasures on the beach... what about you Kono?" Agent S said cheerfully.
"Ehhh, I like cats better though..." Kono said in a low voice.
They just kept chatting as I kept walking beside them, thinking about all this chaos...
Wait... what if Silent was evil? He tried to make us get captured... but he did make us get captured.
I was about to seriously crack something as my mind was raising through all these clues...
"SO Louise, have you ever got a dog before?" Elite screamed, startling me.
"What? Oh, heh... I did have a dog once." I said, trying to sound confident.
"Really?" Xenoh asked.
"His name was Sandy, but he became missing when I was like, 8. Which was a while ago. I wish I can see him again." I sighed.
"Loosing something you love is hard. Yeah... but at least he's resting now in peace!" Twage cheered.
"I don't know I he is alive or not... I wish he was still alive though." I sighed.
"No way a dog could still be alive after this long." Kono said in a serious voice.
"I guess..." I sighed more.

"AAAAAHHHHHH!" A sudden screamed echoed through the area.
"What was that?" Twage questioned.
"It sounded like it was coming from over there." Xenoh pointed.
I noticed he was pointing at an area with dead tree's and bushes, making me freaked out.
"Ma-maybe that isn't a good idea. Lets just keep following this path." I said with a wobbly voice.
"We've got to help whoever is screaming there. Let's GO!" Kono commanded.
Everyone followed Xenoh as I stood there, shivering.
The area we're going to go to looks untrustworthy. We have to go around it.
But before I could tell them to follow another path, Agent S grabbed my arm and made me follow him into the area.

As we walked through the area, everyone seemed pretty calm as I was the only one shivering.
"This place isn't that spooky. Its just a bit dark with a couple of dead plants on the ground." Twage laughed.
"Uhhh.... yeah, sure doesn't spook me out." I tried to say feeling confident, but it just made me show I was terrified.
Xenoh stopped, making us all bump into him.
"Sssh..." Xenoh whispered, pointing at something in the distance.
A lump was seen in the distance, looking like a person there laying on the ground.
"I think it's a person... do you know if its alive?" Kono whispered.
"Louise, you should check him." Elite pointed at me.
"ME?" I screamed.
"SSSHHH... Just go." Twage said angrily as he pushed me in front of the group.
I slowly shuffled towards the body, pausing then taking a step, then repeating.
I sped things up a bit and walked without pausing, then I saw the body in front of me, and the body was actually breathing.
I raised my hand out, extremely slowly and carefully towards the body.
And when my finger touched it, it moved immediately
The head turned towards me then took a leap at me, pushing me against the ground.
When the dust moved out of my view, I saw the face... the face of someone I knew.
"Silent... let go of me." I whispered before I could choke.
When his eyes widened slightly, he jumped off me, finally making me breathe.
I got up, and noticed he was more smaller and pale then usual.
He then ran, but luckily Elite grabbed him just in time.
"Silent, what happened to you?" Elite gasped.

"L-let go! GO AWAY! HELP!" Silent screamed.
"Calm down!" Agent S shouted.
"HELP ME! GUARDS!" Silent screamed once more.
Guards? Who are his guards?
Then something grabbed us from behind, and when I turned my head, it looked like those robot demons from before that Gooby had.
"Just... just leave me alone! I'm weak and... *sniff* small... and other stuff." Silent sniffed.
I realised a tear came down his cheek. Oh no...
He's going to turn into a demon again and shoot lightning bolts at us.
My friends knew that too and tried to wriggle out of the robot's hands, but they were too tough.
When I kept wriggling, I stopped and looked at Silent. Wait....
He kept on crying, and more tears came down his cheek.
There was no sign of him transforming or anything, just tears.
"Silent, how come you can't turn into a demon any more?" Twage questioned.
"Cause... I won't tell you! GUARDS! Kill them!" Silent screamed.

Then some more robot demons came and each one of us had a demon in front of us.
Then it held both of its hands in front of us, and its hands started to glow...
"LASERS! CRAP!" Kono screamed.
The laser were about to be shot, until something as fast as lightning some how pushed all the demons apart from the ones behind us.
Before the demons behind us could attack us, they were also taken down extremely quickly.
"Uhh... got to go! ARG!" Silent screamed as he ran away in the distance.
The mysterious creature has then disappeared into the distance...
"What was that?" I gasped.
"Whatever it was, it saved us. Maybe we could use it as an ally." Elite suggested.
"This creature could help us perhaps due to its strong strength and speed. Twage, do you know where it went?" Xenoh questioned.
Twage pointed to an area that was bright red like most of hell. Finally, now I won't be so freaked out any more.
"Hopefully we can find it... even though it maybe hard due to its speed." Agent S explained.

I wondered if that creature was someone I lost but was then turned into a demon, like most of my friends... maybe speed is its power. It all makes sense.
"Guys, it must be someone I lost but then came back to life with some sort of power. Its massive strength and speed could be its power. Its got to be." I explained.
"That explains what the mysterious creature is... we must find it!" Elite commanded.
To Be Continued...
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Chapter 10 - Catching The Beast
As we followed Twage to where he thinks the creature went to, I tried to think of the many people who I've met that could be it.
"Maybe its Ninjaman... or Undead! Whoever it is, it must be my friend and I seriously can't wait to finally meet them again." I cheered.
"But be alarmed, whatever this thing is, be prepared it may attack us." Xenoh explained.
"But... it must be my friend, and my friends can't hurt me." I gasped.
"Anything is possible. Like when I threw a tomato at the wall and it didn't break. That would one tough tomato." Agent S giggled.
As we kept walking, I then bumped into Twage, who strangely stopped.
"What's going on? Why have you stopped?" Kono whispered.
Then he looked at where everyone else was staring at, and we saw Silent with some of his robot demons carrying a cage made of silver with someone in it...
As we all kept still, Elite just charged at Silent for no reason.
But then Silent noticed him and one of the demons shot a laser at him, but it missed his hair by a centre metre.
So he froze as he knew they were too strong.
Silent then noticed us, and laughed.
"Heh heh, trying to catch me again eh? Demons, kill them!" Silent screamed.
Then suddenly they all just fell to the ground like they just fell asleep.
"WHAT THE?" Silent shouted.
Then I noticed a hole in the cage, and the thing must've got out and defeated all the demons in a flash, but how could it move so fast?
Wait, it must be who we're looking for.
"Arg, that wet dog ran away!" Silent hissed.
"D... dog?" Xenoh gasped.
"Yeah, it was a stupid dog, how is it so powerful? ARG! I must find it, and use it as a slave and kill ALL of you! HE HE!" Silent laughed.
"GUYS! Its over there!" Twage shouted as he pointed at a direction.
Then I noticed something in the distance...
"THE DOG! GO!" Xenoh screamed.
We all then ran straight at it, but then it disappeared in a blink of an eye.
"What the... how can it run so quickly?" Agent S gasped.

Then I heard barking in the distance.
"I don't have time to chase after that thing. I'll kill you later..." Silent hissed as he ran away in the other direction.
We didn't bother talking about him and ran to where the barking was coming from.
As we finally ran to where we heard the barking extra loud, I saw a robot demon holding something in its arms that's wiggling a lot and... Gooby is there.
"The thing in the demon's arms must be the dog. We'll have to get it and find out who's dog it is." Kono whispered.
But then a robot demon noticed Kono and shot a small laser to his head, making him unconscious.
"OH JEEZ! Kono, wake up!" Agent S screamed.
"Oh... you... I can't believe your treating me like this. Now I'll treat you the same... I guess this is how wars begin. ROBOTS! Kill-" Gooby was interrupted when she heard her robots fall to the ground.
"WHAT THE! ARG! I'll take care of you then..." Gooby hissed.
She then got out a gun and pointed it at us.
But then it was... shrinking.
I looked at Kono, and his eyes were white again.
"ARG!" Gooby screamed then got out a sword.
But that just got smaller and smaller then looked like a tiny needle in her hand.
Then Kono finally woke up.
"What the... wait... oh hi Gooby, lovely day isn't it? heh heh..." Kono coughed as he saw Gooby's furious face.
"That's it... luckily I have my emergency knife with me." Gooby giggled as she got a long knife.

"Your lives... end... NOW!" Gooby screamed.
Before she could stab me, something made her fall and something zoomed past her.
It took her knife away then it came close to her and scratched her in the eye.
"ARRG! WHAT THE?!" Gooby screamed as she covered her eye with her hand.
The creature hissed, scaring Gooby which made her run away.

The creature was finally still and looked at me, then walked around me, sniffing my legs.
When it was done, its serious face then turned into a happy face.
"Looks like we tamed the dog. Sweet!" Xenoh laughed.
"Wait, something is weird about it... like..." I looked closer.
I stared at its eyes as the dog stared at me too.
"Sandy... Sandy what happened to you?" I gasped.

To Be Continued...
I just got the outline of the dog first then just added the brown pattern, blood, etc.
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Chapter 11 - Sandy The Demon Dog
He seems to notice the word Sandy, because he then stuck his tongue out and started licking me on the cheek.
"He probably is your dog Louise... but why does it look so... demon like?" Kono gasped.
"Its possible that it died but was then brought back to life and got a demon power some how. That's my theory." Twage theorised.
"Its demon power is probably extreme speed and strength." Xenoh also theorised.
"He... he looks so bigger and creepier now." I sighed.
I reached my pocket, and realised something stuffed in there.
I got it out, unwrapping a scrunched up paper, into an old picture of someone...
"Look, this is what Sandy used to look like, now he looks like a noxious giant." I screamed as I waved the picture around in front of them.

My friends looked at the picture then back at Sandy.
"Yeah... maybe a little bit different, but look how bad-ass he is! He's like a fricken lion! Heh heh." Twage laughed.
"First of all, I hate lions, and second of all, he does not look bad-ass, he looks like a mutant snail." I screamed.
Sandy then whimpered a bit.
"I think Sandy can understand ever word your saying, so you better watch-" "I don't give a damn about him!" I screamed my head off, not literally while I interrupted what Agent S could explain.
"Umm... there is blood coming out of Sandy's eye... it sorta looks like he's crying." Kono quaked.
As I kept on arguing with almost all my friends, I realised I couldn't hear Sandy whimpering anymore.
I looked behind me, and I noticed he was gone.
"Great, you scared him. He could've help us so much due to his such great power. Plus you said you wanted to see him again, and now your just complaining about him." Kono shouted.
Then I heard a loud roar.
"That sounds like Sandy... we have to save him." Agent S crowed.
"Lets go! We have to save him! Cause you know, he's so bad-ass and stuff, heh heh..." Twage giggled.
My friends ran off, but they stopped and turned around, looking at me as I stood there.
"Well are you coming?" Xenoh questioned.
I didn't say a word.
"She doesn't want him anymore... come on, let's go." Kono sighed as he walked off.
The rest ran off and I then collapsed onto the ground, looking down.
I got the picture of Sandy again, wondering about him...

What if he is still my little puppy? Maybe he still loves me.
More and more emotional thoughts hit me, and I started to cry.
There was no time for crying as I held a yelp behind me.
I got up and turned around. I have to save him.
So I got scrambled to get on my feet, and ran like a leopard through hell.
I started to hear shouting and barking that was so loud, they have to be near.
As I slowly walked, I noticed a couple of my friends, in demon form.
Xenoh was invisible punching some demon robots, while some of the weapons that the demons were holding were getting smaller.
Twage was also zapping some powers at them, but I noticed not much of their attacks were really effective.
Agent S noticed me and stared.
"I'm guessing you want Sandy back? Well help us!" Agent S screamed.
I then noticed a robot demon holding Sandy, running away. I had to save him now.
As he kept barking, I then ran after the demon, dodging all the lasers coming in all directions.

I stopped running as I was out of breath, I stared at the back of the demon as Sandy kept wriggling in its arms.
Then suddenly, the demon just ripped in half like a piece of paper.
I saw Sandy jump out of its arms then looked around.
Then it noticed me in the distance.
It backed away a bit as I came closer, then suddenly giant demon wings just popped out.

He then had a little worried face on him, then he flew off as fast we he could.
"WAIT!" I cried out.
My friends heard me and also saw me.
I then ran after him as my friends were tagging behind.
"LOUISE! *huff* WHERE ARE *breathe* YOU GOING?" Agent S screamed.
"He's running away!" I shouted.
Then Sandy looked back at me in the distance, but wasn't looking where he was going as he slammed into a wall.
He then fell down to the ground, and I ran faster.

We finally went to a spot that had a dent on it, looking like someone fell there. But Sandy wasn't here.
"But... he fell right here! Impossible!" Xenoh shouted.
"Looking for something?" A voice said.
We turned around, and Gooby was there with a giant cage made out of some kind of metal.
"The material is made out of graphene, the strongest material on earth, its impossible to break!" Twage gasped.
"Looks like your little dog is mine..." Gooby giggled as Sandy kept barked while inside the cage.
To Be Continued...
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Chapter 12 - Rise Of The Beast
Then suddenly out of no where, Elite appeared behind Gooby and got a knife and held it in front of her throat.
"Release him... NOW!" Elite screamed.
Gooby just giggled, and I saw a demon start to get ready to shoot a deadly laser at him.
"ELITE! DUCK!" Twage screamed.
Elite looked at the demon, about to strike.
Elite held Gooby in front of him, which made it look like the demon was about to shoot Gooby.
Gooby just smiled, like she wants to die.
But we should have known that little smile of her's was no good.
The laser just went above Gooby's shoulder, into Elite's head.
Elite went backwards and let go of Gooby, and fell on the ground.
"He's dead!" Xenoh sniffed.
"No... NO!" I screamed.
It was too much. Rage reached me, and I turned into a demon again.
Xenoh then also went invisible, and I started shooting fire balls at Gooby.
She kept running, hiding behind demon's as they were melting.
Some demons we're dying randomly. Could've been Xenoh who did the work.
When all the demons were gone, I was about to strike, but then I heard loud stomps from the distance.

I froze, and I saw my friends freeze too, getting more frightened the louder the stomps were getting.
Then a giant demon robot was in front of us, probably as tall as tall as a building.
"Behold my latest creation... GIGA DEMON!" Gooby laughed.
It looked like it was covered in armour, still looking like a mutant demon too.
Twage tried to spray some spells at it, but it just deflected off the armour, straight at Twage.
The spell seemed to be a sleep one, because it just put Twage to sleep.
"How long do you think will it last?" Agent S gasped.
"No time for questions! This damn giant knight is going to squish us!" Kono screamed.
I tried to throw fire balls at the demon too, but it also deflected off the armour, which made the fireball almost hit me.
I didn't know where Xenoh was, but I'm pretty sure he was too weak for this thing as well.
Gooby climbed onto its back and laughed as she knew we were too weak for this guy.
Then it held out its hand and tried to shoot a mega laser at us.
Agent S grabbed Twage and we all jumped out of the way and escaped, but caught my back a bit, which made me fall onto the ground.
I turned my head, and noticed the cage Sandy was in.
He looked at me, and his eyes widened like he knows everything in the world.

Out of no where, a golden axe spawned in his mouth.
That must be why he's so strong... but is it strong enough for this knight?
He sliced the cage in half, making him escape.
He ran to the knight and sliced one leg in half, slicing it so perfectly, it was like cutting an apple.
The giga demon was starting to loose balance on one foot, and was about to fall into a massive lake of lava.
"No... no no NO! ARGGG!" Gooby screamed.
She jumped off its back, landing onto the ground on her face.
She got up and shook her head, and saw Sandy in front of her.
She growled and tried to punch him, but Sandy just scratched her hand with his incredibly long claws, making blood spit out of her fingers.

As I finally got up, I then saw some flying robot demons pick up Gooby and tried to make her escape.
Sandy noticed her in the air and grew demon wings and chased Gooby.
He grabbed onto a demon's leg with his mouth, but the demon just shoo kits leg, making Sandy loose grip and fall into a pond of lava.
When Twage finally woke up, Agent S grabbed him and we all ran to the pond.
"Honey... I'm ho- WOAH WHAT? This isn't my home... Agent S what are you doing?" Twage shouted.
"Sandy just landed in a pond of lava!" Agent S explained.
"WHAT?" Twage screamed as he jumped out of Agent S arms and ran faster then all off us.
We filially reached the pond, and no sign of Sandy anywhere.
I fell on my knee's and stared at the ground.
I heard a loud gasp.
I looked at the pond, and Sandy was paddling towards us.

We grabbed him out of the lake before he could become too tired to paddle anymore.
He didn't have any burn marks on him or anything that melted off him, but he seemed to be breathing loudly like he was holding his breath for a very long time.
"He is probably immune to lava, but he cannot breathe in it, like how we can't breathe in water but we're fine swimming in it." Xenoh explained.
"But just what is that axe made off..." Kono came closer to Sandy.
He seemed to recognise what Kono was talking about, so he spawned his axe.
Kono was about to grab it, but Sandy growled.
But when I was about to grab it, he seemed fine about it.
"I understand how he only trusts Louise since she is his owner." Kono sighed.
I looked at the axe. What material is this made off...
The axe was smooth and covered in blood a bit. I've never felt or seen this material before...
Xenoh looked extra closely to it, examining it.
"This material... is a new one no human has seen before..." Xenoh explained.
"Since we're the first ones to discover it, lets call this material... Lum. A material that is truly stronger then grapheme or any material on earth. I wonder where he found this material from... I'm curious where he got it!" Twage giggled.
As I kept looking at the axe, Sandy barked, warning us about something.
He was growling at me.
"What's wrong?" I gasped.
My friends were also looking at me like they were scared, then I looked behind me, and the hideous face of Silent appeared.
To Be Continued...
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