OITC Montage

Discussion in 'One In The Chamber' started by NdianX, Jun 3, 2015.

  1. NdianX

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    Hey guys here is my first OITC Monatge. I still have a lot to learn but this is where i am so far. enjoy and please don't hate D: Also check out my youtube channel :D


     
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    Curving Factions Veteran ~ Quantum <3 Donator

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    Love the pack from 0:29 to 0:49 <3
    Nice edit. <:
     
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  3. NdianX

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    thx :3
     
  4. ~Swish

    ~Swish lol

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    It's ok. Seems a bit bland IMO. I would recommend to add more visual effects and to do better trickshots. I see 360s and some 720s that you hit the ground.
     
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  5. gamermonkey46

    gamermonkey46 Videographer, Photographer, Editor

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    The songs a bit heavy and the montage is really short, continue on your editing skills :)
     
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  6. CaptainJackValdy

    CaptainJackValdy I got a plan to save the server, just have faith

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    What do you record with?
     
  7. left4lag

    left4lag Moderator Plus Staff Member Mod+

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    Show off! jk <3 Nice shots though. ;)
     
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  8. killer_YT

    killer_YT wat

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    Nice but you need to work on your editing the gameplay was good!
     
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  9. nixisawesome

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    Im in this :D
     
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  10. SlackingToaster

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    Overused intro and outro
    Gameplay was okay, although it was short and some of the shots were not montage-worthy (you hit the ground on many) . Otherwise, nice first attempt, looking to see improved montages from you in the future! :D
     
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  11. TremmFTW

    TremmFTW ApolloTheKing!

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    You always have something to say. May i see your montages?
     
  12. SlackingToaster

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    Okay. Let me teach you how a "forum" works. First, someone posts a new thread for others to view. Second, people give feedback by replying to the thread. Third, the thread creator reads the advice and usually benefits from implementing what was said into their next post. Hope this helped, you seemed confused.
     
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  13. TremmFTW

    TremmFTW ApolloTheKing!

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    I'm just saying you're criticizing everything hes basically doing, his intro, his trickshots, he probably put a lot of effort into this montage and i don't think you should be criticizing him like that. I'm just saying.
     
  14. Tsolay

    Tsolay Artist Donator

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    You should read the other posts. Those posts are considered criticism too. Sometimes, it's necessary to be harsh.
     
  15. TremmFTW

    TremmFTW ApolloTheKing!

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    Yh i understand the sometimes but when you don't make montages yourself its kinda... i don't know that word for it ;/ Hopefully you know what i mean though
     
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  16. SlackingToaster

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    Not trying to be harsh, just trying to give him the facts. I would rather not lie. In the end, I'm just trying to help NdianX out :) Nothing more was intended
     
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  17. Apse

    Apse ♥ OITC ♥

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    SlackingToaster is just trying to help by giving advice.
     
  18. Bwsp

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    Looks good, the only error I saw was hitting the ground on most of the shots and if you could please explain what the 5zig mod is that would be great because if it was a mod that invloved cheating/hacking in the game that wouldn't be too good.

    But other than that it was a good first attempt c:
     
  19. SlackingToaster

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    It's just a gui mod. It shows coordinates, biome, fps, ping, etc. nothing illegal.
     
  20. ConnorFTW

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    Do you no what pack it is?