[New] 6th Story: The Return Of Memories

No, she's Louise.

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Main-character-is-forced-to-survive-any-shit-until-the-end-of-a-fantasy-story cliché

 

I'm fabulous :)
But anyway, I do get what you mean. I'll try and make myself weaker next time. But seriously, that is why I was chosen to steal your little jar of dirt @CaptainJackValdy >: )

 

Don't forget me Louise...

 

wait... you have a jar of dirt too?
GIMMIE! O.O

 

Happy Monday everyone! The greatest day ever.
Staring:
@LouiseXminerX
@CaptainJackValdy
@ConnorFTW
@Cally8484
@Kazuke
@Suthos
@Katy9078
@John_0696
@MappyTurtle
@Dugee
@Sven007
Enjoy ^-^
Chapter 48 - Trusting The Foul
The light switched off, making my eyes feel better, but it was pitch black.
"Great work guys. Now then..." A voice echoed.
The lights switched on, and my vision was clear.
The strangers at the door were the same people who tried to destroy the village.
But where were the Gods? All I remember was something hitting my head, real hard.
But then, the people came closer, examining me.
That's when I saw it. The faces of these strangers... were like my friends.
"Ninjaman? Kono? Ninjafoya? What?" I gasped.
"Yeah I know. Pretty sweet." The same voice called again.
"Screw you Captain Jack! Let me go!" I screamed.
"Wrong name." He called.
"What?" I gasped.
Then, I saw him. Agent S, walking towards me on the ground.
"Why'd you do this... Your working for Captain Jack, aren't you?" I cried.

"Man, you forgot everything." Agent S sighed.
"Eh?" I coughed.
"Let me refresh, your working for Captain Jack. Your trying to destroy the world, yeah yeah..." Agent S explained.
"I'm trying to DEFEAT Captain Jack! Did YOU loose your memory?" I cried.
"Shut your mouth missy!" Ninjafoya slapped me.
"Ninjafoya... why?" I cried.
Everything was messed up. My friends are weird, an agent just betrayed me an thinks I'm working for Captain Jack.
I'm dreaming... yes I am. This is a dream. Captain Jack is mocking with my brain again.
I looked at my hands. They were tucked to the metal seat I was sitting in.
My hands were covering in blood. Strange...
No signs of the Gods anywhere. Just some dark, empty cave with a little guy and my friends... or should I say, my enemies.
That's when I realised... I can get out.
"Go ahead! Punch me! You poop bags!" I screamed.
Sven punched me, but nothing was happening.
"You know what, your all weak. Try and show me how strong you are, you sick rats." I screamed.
Twage then punched me stronger.
"A... again." I coughed.
Ninjaman kicked me in the legs.
No T Rex form?
I spread my hands out, trying to spawn ice, but nothing.
I could even see the moon rise up from the exit, but no wolf form.
"She tougher then I thought... Put her in the water tank." Agent S commanded.
Ninjaman and Kono grabbed me, making me wiggle and scream.
They pushed me into a tube, locking the doors.
I tried to punch the walls, but they were too tight.
Then, a pipe from above sprayed water at me.
The tube was getting fuller, and was up to my neck.
I tried to swim to the top, but then the water was up to the top, and I held my breath.
The icy water was making me weak, and the water was pushing me down.
My mouth opened... blackness.

*Craaaaack*
My eyes opened.
I pushed my head up, so I could see.
Water was around me. Shattered glass was also around me.
Some glass scratched my skin, making blood juice out.
I saw a T Rex. The face was familiar.
"Cap... Captain Jack..." I gasped.
He was there, and seemed to have broke the tube free.
Agent S was grabbed by one of my friends and they ran out of the entrance, out of Captain Jack's sight
But then he saw me.
He grabbed me.
He was squeezing me, making me not breath.
I held my breath, but at the tip of my eye, icy water was sprayed at Captain Jack's face.
ROOOOOOOOOARR!
He let go of me.
I waited for my wings to appear, but nothing happened.
I was falling, until someone catched me.

I was tired, lazy, and cold.
"Katy, spawn hot water on her!"
I felt warmth... and I gasped and opened my eyes.
I saw Connor's face, and also the Gods.
"Guys?" I gasped.
"Louise, are you okay? Why didn't your wings spawn?" Kazuke asked.
Before I could answer, John quickly made a large ceiling above us, protecting us from Captain Jack's foot
"Run!" John screamed.
Connor ran, and threw me on top of a lion, and it ran.
As I finally got my head up and was fully active, Captain Jack kept chasing us.
"Connor, now!" Sutho screamed.

Connor showed his to the land of dust.
Then, out of the ground was a huge creature with giant wings.
"Behold, Dragon... eliminate Captain Jack!" Connor called

It roared with might and rage, and battled Captain Jack to the ground.
"ROOOOOOOAAAR!" Captain Jack screamed.
Everyone, including the lion was running as far away from the battle.

As we were gasping and breathing, we seemed to be in a peaceful, quiet zone, away from any danger.
"Roooar!" A roar echoed through the air.
"The dragon was defeated... Captain Jack is still alive." Connor cried.
"Not even a damn dragon can defeat him? What is he, immortal?" Dugee shouted.
"That is one made pirate, I'll say." Mappy said.
To Be Continued...
And forgoodness sake, of course I didn't draw that dragon. All I can draw is little pixelated comics... can't even draw a good dragon too.
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*gasp* I love your artwork Louise
*reads bottom* oh. Nice job with the story btw.
tbh, I haven't really caught up because I forgot to check the thread to receive alerts :/

 

Im overpowered.
Nice chap. :)

 

I wonder where I am in the story.

 

Suddenly I've become evil. Huh. Fun ;P

 

I own u noooow.
(Dont rage like Sven did pls)

 

Don't worry, I haven't forgotten about you! I'm gonna make you have a new, special role in the story :)

I will get my revenge... be prepared to protect that jar of poop of yours.
And I hope you scream like this now:
(Like always)

 

It'd be hilarious if one of us (the people that Jack captured) became more evil than Jack himself and then took over as the main antagonist *wink*wink*

 

Maybe... maybe...
I'm not gonna say I'll do it, but thanks for the idea though ^-^

 

U dare. Insult. My fucking. Jar. Of dirt.

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Yeh u right, I am screaming of fear now. (Like always)

 

Awwww yeeeaaaa!

 

Wow. 199th post. Whoever gets the 200th will get a giant cookie! :D
Starring:
@LouiseXminerX
@CaptainJackValdy
@ConnorFTW
@Cally8484
@Kazuke
@Suthos
@Katy9078
@John_0696
@MappyTurtle
@Dugee
@Sven007
@TheUndeadBrave
@Xenohs
And finally, @nala your back in. (I seriously almost forgot about you... sorry ;-; )
Enjoy ^-^
Chapter 49 - Evidence
I wondered for a second... how did I get there in the first place.
Wait a second... I remember.
I shoved John to the ground, while Mappy gasped.
"Woah, what was that for?" John shouted.
"Why'd you hit me with that bat? Seriously I could have you know, died?" I screamed.
"Umm that's why you were chosen to save the world?" Katy sighed.
"But seriously, what were you thinking? And why'd you guys give me in to Agent S and leave me?" I cried.
"Listen... We'll tell you the truth. We thought you were crazy, so we had to hit you. But then, Agent S made us disappear far away, back on earth. Luckily I spawned another Phoenix just in time before you could burst from Captain Jack. I'm pretty sure Agent S then took you to the mountain after he transported us. We didn't give you in, we were just trying to protect you." Connor explained.
"Arg... next time, don't hit me ever again." I sighed.
"Now hold on, I realised you didn't turn into a angel or wolf at all." Sutho wondered.
"I have no idea. I didn't even turn into a mermaid when they placed me in a tube with water and I didn't turn into a T Rex when they punched me..." I explained.
"Because he took your powers away." A voice familiar called.

We turned around in less then a second, and it was Undead.
"Undead! Holy... your not evil!" I gasped.
"Listen, I know what Agent S and Captain Jack are up to." Undead said.
"What come on, explain it to us." Kazuke said.
"Okay... when Captain Jack was taking us away, he made us go in a secret base and we also saw Agent S, that guy. He was normal sized, but Captain Jack activated a new machine he got and made him tiny and also made him evil. But he was too evil. He then transported us to the mountain with his gun thing, leaving Captain Jack to rage, stomping the ground almost making a earth quake since he was still in his T Rex form. Once we arrived at the mountain, he then made us become the 'second' Gods and made us have powers, but luckily I was smart enough to escape before I could get powers without him looking. Now your friends looks like are still evil. We must make them change back otherwise Captain Jack AND Agent S will take over the world." Undead explained.
Mappy was already asleep however, but Dugee spawned a lion to bite her leg.
"OUCH! Umm... oh I was listening! I was..." Mappy giggled.

"Do you know where Agent S and my friends are now?" I asked.
"If I knew we would've found them by now." Undead pointed out.
"Also, someone gave Captain Jack that T Rex form. Someone with powers did. It couldn't have been Twage, someone who is our enemy..." Undead wondered.
Then Xenoh spawned behind us.
"You still heaven't left? Seriously hurry up!" Xenoh shouted.
"Why do you want us to leave SO badly? Is there something your hidding?" Undead shouted.
"Eh, no? I'm trying to make you leave so you could not... I mean find Captain Jack. Now get your underwear and toothbrushes. And Louise, give me those-"
"Seriously, their already gone! Arg, why do you need my powers so badly anyway!" I screamed.
"Oh... oh... He must've. Okay. Yeah. Umm... I'll come back." And as soon as he clicked his fingers, he was gone.
"He must've what is that supposed to mean?" Katy wondered.
"I know he's hiding something. Oh yeah. I found her." Undead said.
"Who?" I questioned.
"Nala. She was in the mountain. I remember. She'll know where your friends are." Undead smiled.
I cheered. Finally!

Day time came, and Dugee spawned some lions to run as we rid them, while Cally was just flying above us.
"I almost forgot who Nala was. Wait who is she?" Cally wondered.
"Sven's friend. I don't know. I met her in the beginning too. She was strange." I wondered.
"We're here." Undead said.
"Already? Man that was fast!" Mappy laughed.

We reached the mountain, but half of it was destroyed.
Cally carried everyone to the mountain, one by one taking a couple of minutes.
As Cally finally landed me on the mountain, we stared at the broken glass and stone around us.
"Was that where they tried to drown you?" Cally pointed at the half broken tube.
"Yep. That's the one." I responded.
I realised a camouflaged door with a stone handle and the door was made of stone, almost impossible to recognise.
Mappy used a laser to break down the door, and we saw her, at the very back, chained up with more blood on her.
"Nala?" I called.
She didn't move.
Undead came closer and placed his heart gently on her chest.
"No heartbeat. Dead. We're too late." Undead sighed.
And we all gasped while Mappy was already crying.
Great.
To Be Continued...
Only 11 more chapters until the finale. We're getting close.
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200th post!
GJ Louise with this chapter

 

Congratulation!

Oh yeah, here's a little happy gif for you!

^ you ^-^

 

Nice job Louise! I almost spelled "Nice" wrong lol. I need to go to sleep