[New] 6th Story: The Return Of Memories

WHOOOOOO *Blows balloons* HELL YEAH!

 

Btw @Sven007 , since there is another person named Sven in this story, please reply soon to what your new nickname should be in the story. Don't worry, you will appear in the story soon :)

This story is brought you you by Dragons. My favourite mythical creatures of all time.
Starring:
@LouiseXminerX
@ConnorFTW
@Cally8484
@Kazuke
@Suthos
@Katy9078
@John_0696
@MappyTurtle
@Dugee
@Xenohs
Enjoy :D
Chapter 45 - The Planet Of Opposite
I heard screaming from the mountain as I swung my head around, seeing flashing lights in the mountain.
"What is Xenoh doing?" Kazuke questioned.
"How are we supposed to know." Sutho hissed.
The flashing and screaming came to a sudden hold. Nothing.
Xenoh appear behind us, making me gasp.
"Umm... mountain occupied. Guess we'll find somewhere else to sleep." Xenoh suggested.
My stomach was burning. I layed on the ground, shaking and breathing.
"Louise, you really keep forgetting to get food, do you?" Mappy sighed.
"We can get food if you need." Someone said.
I opened my eyes, and noticed a man in front of me.
But as he turned his head and stared at the mountain, he looked back at me.
"Problem?" I asked.
"No... no. Just come this way." He smiled.

As Cally helped me get up, the man leaded us to some old house, much older and dirty then the other homes.
"Umm... why here?" Connor questioned.
"Other homes are occupied. Well, go in and there should be food in there." The man said.
As Dugee entered the house, Xenoh stayed outside.
"After tonight, I'll look for... stuff for whatever you need. I'll be back until tomorrow." Xenoh waved and disappeared.
As we looked around, all we saw were mossy and cracked walls, and not a single crumb of food was anywhere.
"Umm, I think some rats ate all the food, can we come out then?" John questioned.
But the man stayed in front of the door, then slammed it shout.
"HEY! Come on man! What did we do!" Sutho shouted.
I was starting to dribble, when the sun was going down.
"Umm... what is... hissss..." I was acting strange, like I was a puppet.
"You okay mate?" Mappy asked.
"Yes... flesh... he he he..." I giggled.
"Lou..." Connor gasped.
I turned into a wolf, and I was dribbling for food.
My feet the jumped, right at Connor, but then John made a iron shield around Connor, making my smash into the iron.
"Try not to hurt her guys!" Sutho commanded.
"I know! Arrgg..." John coughed as he kept protecting the shield.
That's when I shot a ice missile at the shield, breaking Connor and John free.
Sutho spawned some wolves, to perhaps calm me down, but I just grabbed them, ripping them.
"She's too strong!" Katy gasped.
"We can see that!" Dugee shouted.

As I ripped the last wolf apart, I was raging, and my mind was controlling me in evil ways.
"Guys... Help..." I gasped, but then my evil mind took over, and kept chasing the Gods.
That's when I felt my body get grabbed, and being held tighter and tighter by the second.
"Stop..." I gasped.
When I could see for a split second, something as tall as me, with wings beside its heads was the creature, grabbing me.
That's when I heard Connor say this:
"Hypno! Drool her to sleep!"
It did something to me. I couldn't tell how.
Then, I started to feel tired, and that's when I hit the ground.

"STOP! ARRRRRGGGGG!"
*click*
"Hoo hoo hoo... he he he... kill... kill... KILL!"
To Be Continued...
Mysterious ending again. *yay*
Remember to like, post those sun shining comments and any improvements or suggestions can help!
And yeah, fun fact. I like Dragons. I want a pet one ;-;
Thanks For Reading!!! :D

 

Suggestion: Maybe have next chapter or two be a "meanwhile" kind of thing where it shows what's going on with where capt. Jack took us.

 

Good suggestion, because sometimes you do get confused where you are and stuff.
However, sometimes some places are supposed to be a mysterious, like what I did for the end of Chapter 45 and 44, but I get what your saying. Whenever I do view on Captain Jack then I will say meanwhile.
Thanks for the suggestion! :D

 

Oke, What if I be like a secret agent... AKA Agent S007? And if that can't happen just call me Sem. (#Dutchnames)

 

Agent S007 is great! Sometimes in the story I might call you Agent S as well. Thx for the nickname!
When the next chapter comes, you'll be known as Agent S007! *hooray*

 

Another guy that want me dead. Gawd damned

 

Unless he's a double agent for you...

 

I own him? Kewl. I got a new pet :D
(No offence Sven)

 

You still want the last piece of pizza with some vodka? Well, call me one more time a pet and I'll WRECK you till every bone of your body is broken... #AgentSkills

 

Ok I shut up

 

Good boy, good boy...

 

If your scared @CaptainJackValdy , then here, have a jar of dirt. *gives a jar of dirt*
Seriously. here's a jar of dirt:

Including a new pet inside. (no, that's not @Sven007 in that jar ._.)
Staring:
@LouiseXminerX
@ConnorFTW
@Cally8484
@Kazuke
@Suthos
@Katy9078
@John_0696
@MappyTurtle
@Dugee
@Xenohs
@CaptainJackValdy
New Character:
@Sven007 (aka. Agent S)
Enjoy ^-^
Chapter 46 - The Little Spirit
Meanwhile, somewhere unknown...

"It's done. Finally!"
*Door opens.*
"Listen to me, bring this Louise crap to me, but don't harm her. Got it?"
*stomp. stomp. stomp.*

Back in the village...

I opened my eyes.
My stomach was tying up in knots, strangling tighter and tighter.
I looked at my hands. They weren't paws. I was human again, which means it must be morning.
"Louise, why did you do that?" Someone asked.
I looked up, and Connor and the Gods had annoyed faces on them.
"Do what?" I questioned.
"You tried to KILL US!" John shouted.
"Why would I..." My stomach grumbled, interrupting what I could say.
"Agent S." Sutho said.
"Who?" I questioned.
Something tiny was in front of me.
"I know. I'm tiny. Here, eat it before my arms break."
It dumped some food in my mouth.
As I chewed slowly, it seemed to be a guy, tiny with a black jacket, sunglasses and all sorts of gadgets around his belt.
"Before you ask why I'm sized like an ant, Jack did this to me. Now eat it before you die." Agent S demanded.
As I swallowed, I felt better. I didn't know what I ate, but I didn't bother to question.
I realised he could also fly, and then he landed in my pocket.
"Oh me gawd. It's grandpa in meh pocket. Let me take a picture and put it on instagram!" Mappy gasped.
Kazuke burned Mappy's Iphone before she could take a pic of anything.
"No time to take pictures. Now Sven... I mean Agent S, can you explain to us everything about this village?" Kazuke questioned.
"Wait, are you Sven?" I gasped.
"I'm not the Sven you think. My name is Sven, but I am NOT Sven. So that's why these guys call me Agent S for short. Now then, let me tell you a tale I loved to tell my grandchildren. Cause you know, they love meh. Anyway...
When the peaceful times lived in this village, everyone was normal, happy and took care of any visitors that came past. When Captain Jack arrived, they were frightened and he threatened to kill them. He killed many, but left only 50 people to live. He demanded them to kill who ever comes here no matter what, otherwise they'll die. They had to obey without a choice to live. So whenever someone comes here, they must do their best to do what Captain Jack has commanded them, which is why they tried to make you starve to death in here." Agent S explained.

"That explains it, but where is Captain Jack?" Sutho questioned.
"Answer unknown. I heard about you Louise. I hear you're the girl who can save us from Captain Jack." Agent S said.
I nodded.
"Interesting... Hmm... oh yeah, let's get out of of here first. Mappy, use a laser to break us out free." Agent S demanded.
"I forgot I could use my powers... Hold on." Mappy sighed.
As the bricks were destroyed by Mappy's super nova laser, we escaped the house before it could collapse.
The villagers screamed in horror, thinking we'll harm them.
"Guys, calm down. I know, your controlled my Captain Jack. We can help you break free! Just trust us!" I smiled.
But they kept shivering, and took some steps backwards, away from us.
"Guys... we can help you! Why can't you believe us?" Katy said.
"It's... it's too late now..." A old man with a beard gasped.
"It's not. I can save you all!" I shouted.
They looked at the mountain.
"What? Never seen a mountain before?" Dugee questioned.
"What? No... no... we're... umm..." Someone said in the crowd.
That's when they broke free and rushed into their homes, locking their doors.
"Maybe their scared that Captain Jack is going to punish them..." Cally wondered.
"Of course their scared, we need to make them trust us!" Connor shouted.
"They won't..." Agent S sighed.
"What do you mean?" I asked as he stared at me in my little pocket.
"They won't listen to you. Their weak and scared. They haven't got a chance against Captain Jack. We need to go to another planet and see if Captain Jack is there." Agent S suggested.
"But... these people need us!" I shouted.
"We don't have a choice Louise. We must leave them if they can't trust us." Connor sighed.
"But..." I gasped.
Mappy patted my back.
"Ok guys! Pack up your gear. Better go to another planet, heh heh."

We all jumped as a loud voice was behind us.
Xenoh was there, smiling with suitcases around him.

Meanwhile, in Captain Jack's unknown location...
Captain Jack was smashing vases and glasses, screaming and trying to punch some of his soldiers.
"Aren't you happy their gone?" Soldier twenny wun questioned.
"No... I need them otherwise my plan will fail!" Captain Jack shouted.
"But..." Soldier twenny wun coughed.
"We'll need more soldiers to find them... alert the soldiers to pack their underwear and toothbrushes." Captain Jack commanded.
Soldier twenny wun nodded while shaking, and he ran to the other soldiers, hanging out somewhere...
To Be Continued...
Yay, welcome Sven007 to the story. Woohoo. *throws confetti everywhere*
Anyway, remember to like, comment and request any suggestions to help this story grow!
Thanks For Reading!!! :D

 

Ohhh, if that was ME in it, you wouldn't reach the end of the story Louise, you wouldn't reach the end...


(JKJK :D)

 

Sven, dont kill me pls.
Nice chap lol.

 

When will the next chapter come? Please reach the end of the story... Otherwise you won't reach the end...

 

Woah. Calm your death signs.

 

Sorry, but I've been really busy with school lately >.<
Plus I was about to make a chapter yesturday but I couldn't connect to the forums (also the server as well...)
But the wait is over!
Staring:
@LouiseXminerX
@ConnorFTW
@Cally8484
@Kazuke
@Suthos
@Katy9078
@John_0696
@MappyTurtle
@Dugee
@Xenohs
@CaptainJackValdy
@Sven007
Enjoy :D
Chapter 47 - Trustworthiness
"What are you doing here? What's with the suitcases?" I questioned.
Agent S ducked in my pocket for some reason, and was shivering inside.
"Pretty sure one of you guys said your leaving, so I packed your underwear, your pants, yeah yeah. Connor spawn something so we can go to another planet." Xenoh smiled.
"Xenoh, now hold on-" Dugee covered my mouth before I could say anything.
"You know the Dragon trusts him. If we do anything that annoys him, then we've got a Dragon that controls the universe to deal with, so hush." Dugee whispered.
"But-" He let go of my mouth.
Xenoh threw the suitcases at us, making me fall down.
I opened the suitcase, curious what was inside, but there seemed to be nothing inside.
"Why do we have suitcases if theres nothing in them." Connor questioned.
The Gods noticed as well, and seemed quite suspicious.
"Idk. Just grabbed them at... you know what, nevermind. Anyway Connor, do as I command please." Xenoh commanded.
"My powers can only be used once a day." Connor explained.
"Your a fricken God. God's have no limits. Now hush and do what I say." Xenoh demanded.
"We all have limits. We're not perfect. You must understand that." Connor shouted.
Then Xenoh turned to me.
"Wait... I know you..." Xenoh gasped.
I backed away, slowly, realising he's caught me.
"You sneaky little-" Agent S jumped out of my pocket, onto the ground, using a gun that zapped Xenoh's entire body, then he disappeared.
"What the hell did you just do?" John shouted.
"I know he's trouble, so I had to teleport him back to where he came from." Agent S explained.
"To where?" Katy asked.
"To-" That's when the crowds of screams covered our hearing.
Everyone was running out of their homes, running in different directions, and after a minute, it was empty.

It was silent. Just a passing wind was the only thing we could hear.
"These people are weird." Mappy yawned.
"No, something must have caught their eye..." Connor wondered.
That's when 7 people jumped down from the mountain, zapping all kinds of powers at the village.
"Hey! Leave the village alone!" I screamed.
They saw me, and tried to zap my with my powers until Cally grabbed me into the sky.
"Ready?" Cally asked.
I nodded and he dropped me.
My wings spawned, and as I floated, I dodged all the zaps of powers by flying left, right, down, up and other directions.
I was about to spray my ice powers onto them, until a flash back stopped me.
My... my friends. They were there. In front of my eyes.
The flash back ended, and my wings were shot, and I was falling to the ground.
The Gods were too distracted, trying to kill they 7 mysterious creatures, but were too busy to catch me.
I landed on my back, and I was screaming as pain was spreading across my body.
That's when I grew. I grew higher then the houses, and almost as tall as the mountain.
I was back to my T Rex form, but before I could stomp the people with my rage, I stopped.
The flash back.

It was telling me something. I couldn't figure out how. Were they my friends? Or do they know where my friends are.
That's when one of them shot my heart, making me break out of my T Rex form, and I was back to human.
I was full of pain. My chest was beating with anger.
The Gods stopped, and ran towards me.
One of the guys was about to ran towards me until Agent S zapped one of them to an unknown location.
That's when the guys retreated, running away.
"Louise, are you okay?" Katy gasped.
"Does it LOOK like I'm okay?" I shouted.
That's when I was full of anger. No, I was raging.
"Agent S, why'd you zap them away?" I cried.
"They were about to kill you." Agent S explained.
"They could have helped me... help my find my friends!" I shouted.
"Wait... you must be working for JACK! Your trying to keep my away my friends, aren't you smart pants?" I screamed.
"What?" Agent S gasped.
"That's when I thought."
The moon came up, and I turned into my wolf form.
I tried to run away, until Agent S got some kind of hook and it caught me.
"STOP! YOU MONSTER!" I screamed with all my might.
"Snap out of it!" Mappy slapped me.
"NO! YOU MONSTERS! GET AWAY FROM ME!" I screamed.
That's when John spawned a iron bat, and hit my head, so hard I was unconscious.
Alive but not able to move.

"Welcome..." A voice called.
I opened my eyes. A bright light was shooting right at my eyes, making me almost blinded.
"It's... he he. Just a miracle."
"What? Who is this? Connor is that you?" I questioned.
That's when some door opened, and strangers came in. They smiled.
To Be Continued...
Why do I always make the ending a mystery xD
Anyway, leave your likes, comments and any suggestions cause you know, yay.
Thanks For Reading!!! :D

 

How are u still alive after this...?
Nice chap

 

You survived an exploding rocket, fell out of the sky onto solid ground, got shot in the heart with a projectile with unknown arcane properties, and were dealt a concussive blow to the head with an iron baseball bat. What are you, immortal?