Book: Mystery of my death * Chapter 3

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  1. Odi

    Odi

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    Chapters
    Chapter 1 -> Click me!
    Chapter 2 -> Click me!

    Starring...
    @Odi as Michael
    @ItsSeb as Norman
    @Turtwigzz as Keven

    Previously...
    Mr. Jonathan Gordan has been found. The deadly serial killer was found in New South Wales; near the sandy beaches. He has been sent to a death sentence; and will be sentenced to death on the 29th of November, 2004. Mr. Jonathan Gordan killed Michael Gordan (aged 14) on 4th October, 2004.

    Blurb

    After Michael dies, Keven his best friend goes to the library to study Jonathan Gordan as a book was made about him. Then, Keven studies everything about Michael's death, and tries to solve the mystery. Meanwhile, somebody is writing in Michael's diary.

    1st November, 2004
    “Hi, Mrs Gordan.” said Keven. “Hello Keven.” replied Mrs Gordan (mum). “I'm sorry about, Michael. He didn't deserve it. Anyways, I'm going to study this murder.” Keven whispered. “Alright; don't go to deep. Please, you can use his room though. Be careful, don't break anything please.”
    Keven, is a smart, detective type of guy. He was Michael's best friend, pretty nice. He was always looking out for me, except that one day. He has brown hair, pretty short hair, likes to have swag in his outfits.
    “This is his room, be careful.” said Mrs Gordan, opening the door to Michael's room.
    “Thank you.” Keven said, thankfully. “Is that his diary, I'd like to read it.” said Mrs Gordan.
    “Sure, go for it. I wasn't really intending to look into it.” said Keven.
    Keven looked, and looked through my draws and everything. He wasn't crying, until he saw my favourite quote on the wall..
    “If only, we all understood each others feelings and thoughts.” - Michael Gordan, 2003
    He started to cry, and he seemed sad. I can't blame him, the quote is truly amazing. It is very inspirational, you have to think about it.

    Then, he looked at Michael's book; what made him cry even more. It was a great book, he defiantly understood the meaning behind it.
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    This book, was amazing. Keven read it, and was sad as could be.
    “If only, we all understood each others feelings and thoughts.” he thought, he walked into the room of Mrs Gordan. He said, “Thanks for letting me use his room. It has been a sad moment.” Mrs Gordan couldn't reply, because she was shocked what she saw. I constantly heard them crying, reading through the diary of Michael. But she was shocked. “Thomas! Get in here.” Mum said. “What?!” replied Dad. “LOOK!” Mum replied, “WHAT THE HELL?!”.. Somebody has been writing in Michael's diary, and making diary entries..
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    “Who, what, when, how? HOW is this happening?” said Mum. “I'm not sure, but why?!” said Dad. “It may be a fake, how could Michael just reappear?” Keven said. “But, he has the same handwriting. Look; at his other diary entries! It's the exact same.” Dad said, “Look! At this entry, right here..”
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    “I don't understand.” Keven said. “Who knows, maybe it's a troll?” said Mum. “As you said, it might be from 2003.. Not 2004. He might of messed up the date.” said Dad. “It's on the last page, and he's already made an entry for 31st October, 2003. I read it all. Plus, he's talking about he's dead..” said Mum. “Hold on, Mr Gordan you have a point- how could this be possible?” Keven replied.

    3rd November
    Keven could not, would not give up. He kept on searching, searching and searching. Libraries, book stores, buildings, Michael's house etc for more answers and clues.

    5th November
    I'd like to see anybody try and stop, Keven. He is searching after school, for like 3 hours then he takes a break and goes back to keep on searching.

    6th November
    "Welcome everybody to MyNews on Channel 5! Now, we all know about the tragic death of Michael, right? Well, the mystery still unfolds of how this happened, but we have a special guest on the show tonight." said Jennifer (MyNews host), *Audience clap...* "Welcome to the show, Keven Lambus!"
    *Audience clap.* "Hi everybody. It's an honour to be here. We're all very sad of his death." Keven said.
    Jennifer: We know how you're feeling!
    Keven: It's been pretty tough, but I'm going to keep searching.
    Jennifer: So, you were Michael's best friend?
    Keven: Yes, I was.
    Jennifer: So, we've heard that you're currently investigating the mystery of his death? Tell us a bit more.

    Keven: Well, it's pretty mysterious this problem. You know? I wasn't expecting to be finding clues, to solving this mystery. I understand, that there has been a bit of it solved, but that's not good enough. I'd like to solve the whole mystery, including why he was killed and what was he killed with. I've been going through security cameras, books, magazines, book stores, libraries, internet, TV channels everything to get more clues.
    Jennifer: WOW! That is amazing, let's give him a big clap for loyalty to his best friend!
    Audience: *clap with amazement*
    Keven: *says emotionally* Honestly, I'm so sad of his death. It truly means the world to me, of other people understanding the situation I'm going through as the best friend. Life, feels extremely empty without him.
    Jennifer: We totally understand, your situation. I am so impressed, with friendships! Why don't we give him another round of a clause to support this young feller!
    Audience: *clap with amazement, audience scream*
    Keven: I am truly thankful, of all the helpers who're still helping and not giving up to find more clues!
    Jennifer: Now, MyNews has really enjoyed this story of yours. And, we're completely touched with your story. So, MyNews has put together a cheque to ensure that you're able to continue the search. We want to keep the hope alive..
    Keven: Oh my god, thank you so much! This means the world to us.
    Audience: *clap with amazement, audience scream*
    Jennifer: We're happy to give your team, including you a total of $250,000.00
    Keven: Oh my god, *cries in relief* *wipes tear from eye* this is absolutely amazing, I can't get my tears out. Thank you so much, if Michael was here he'd be flattered. I'd just like to thank everybody, who has volunteered to help us find more clues and finish this investigation.

    Audience: *clap with amazement, audience scream, with happiness
    Jennifer: We're so happy to support you, and we hope this mystery is solved sooner or later. Because, we truly support this community event.
    Keven: Once again, thank you so much. We're completely flattered.
    Jennifer: And, we're putting a search team of exactly 50 adults to help look for more clues and evidence.
    Audience: *clap* and say WOOOOOOOOOOO!
    Keven: Oh my god, is this a joke?
    Keven: Thank you so much! My tears just keep on coming! *wipes tear from eye*
    Jennifer: No problem! :) If you'd like to help solve the mystery, send in any information you have to Police asap. All clues will help solve this mystery, and gather more information. Call 000 or 911, depending on your location.
    Keven: Thank you so much for having me! I'm completely flattered.

    6th November
    Every day, we're getting closer and closer to solving the mystery of... Michael Gordan's death.

    To be continued...
    ~ I hope you enjoyed, the third chapter of...
    Mystery of my death! (Special edition)
     
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    oH No WHY Is mY NaME KeVEN?
    Anyways, great story. I can't wait for the next chapter!
     
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    HAHAHAH, I felt like it.