[New] 6th Story: The Return Of Memories

*Arelane has a secret rocket in a secret room that will secretly be used for secret things*

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Chapter 33 - The Chase Through Time
As the ceremony finally finished, Radii noticed the doors opened through a secret room.
She entered the room and noticed the rocket there.
"Isn't that the same rocket Louise is riding?" Radii asked.
"No. This is a new one and I will chase Louise and the gang and shoot their fuel tank and then the ship will explode. The End." Captain Jack explained.
"Does it have enough fuel in this rocket to catch up with them?" Radii questioned.
"I'm pretty sure. Now, get the most smartest and powerful soldiers on to the rocket!" Captain Jack cheered.
Radii nodded and went out of the room searching for soldiers, while Captain Jack went to a machine next to the rocket.
"This shall be the perfect secret weapon..." Captain Jack giggled.
He pushed a button on a remote he had and the machine minimised into a small cube, small enough to carry it.
He lifted the cube up and marched to the rocket, slamming the cube on the ground.
Radii came in with someone, and they seemed ready.
"Of course... you brought Soldier twenny wun. Why not Soldier 27 or the other guy who killed the butterfly?" Captain Jack argued.
"They ate some boggers and now their brain isn't wprking properly, so their just sniffing everyones butts and licking the toilets." Radii sighed.
"Fine. Now get in the back of the rocket. Computer, we're ready!" Captain Jack called.
"The ship will now launch in ten nine... one... blast off!" The computer called.
The flames burnt the floor and boosted the rocket up.
It smashed the ceiling above it into the clouds, and they were off.
"Oooohhh! He he he! It's like a roller coaster! Weeeee!" Soldier twenny wun giggled.

As a day past, the rocket was quite quiet, not much news was reported and it was just a boring day in a lonely metal rocket.
"I wish Twage spawned us a pool in this rocket, cause I'm getting bored." Ninjafoya sighed.
I was about to wet her pants since Undead was taking so long in the bathroom taking all the boggers out of his hair since Ninjafoya kept sneezing on him when he was sleeping.
"If I had my powers right now, I'll freeze you! I can't make these jeans get wet..." I panicked.
"Wet your pants. There might be spare pants in your cabin anyway. And oh my god, I found a bogger that's blue!" Undead gasped.
I looked at Ninjafoya with a annoyed look, while she just smiled while guilty.

Suddenly, we heard a explosion at the back of the ship.
"We've been hit! We've been hit! Everyone, go to your seats now!" Kono screamed.
"Where did it hit Kono?" Ninjaman panicked.
"Near the fuel tank, but the fuel is fine! Boost the rocket more!" Kono gasped.
Ninjaman smashed a button, and the flames were coughing, pushing the rocket centre metres away.
I looked at the window, and I realised a similar rocket was next to us.
"It's another rocket..." I pointed.
"Is that Captain Jack and Radii's?" Ninjaman called.
"Yes, I see their giggling faces at the front of the ship. Boost the rocket as fast as we can!" Kono screamed.
"I can't! The boosters are almost destroyed!" Ninjaman screamed.
Then another explosion was heard, and that's when Ninjafoya was hugging me tight.
"That hit the fuel tank, which means..." Kono realised.
"We're going to crash!" Ninjaman gasped.
That's when everyone screamed, while I was just the only calm one here in my seat, just staring at the window.
I admit it, it was a bit scary, but maybe we'll crash in water so we'll be fine... unless we don't.
When that thought entered my mind, I screamed as loud as I could, probably killing everyone's ears.

"That could have been the scream of Louise dead... let's go back!" Captain Jack cheered.
"Yaaaaay! We killed her! We killed her!" Soldier twenny wun cheered.
"Wait... maybe she isn't." Captain Jack wondered.
"No! She's dead! I saw her dead body on the floor in that rocket through the window. She's dead, now let's go back and celebrate! Heh heh." Radii cheered.
"Okay, we're going to have the greatest party ever!" Captain Jack cheered.
The rocket zoomed back to earth, while the nose of our rocket pointed down to a mysterious planet below.
The nose of the rocket looked like a meteorite and we were heading straight towards the planet.
Kono and Ninjaman tried to lift the plane as much as they could, but the plane wouldn't respond.
We past the breezy clouds, and Undead just came out of the toilets.
"Hey, what's with all the screaming, I mean my hair isn't that messy..." Undead wondered.
Then, the nose entered some water, and the water poored into the rocket.
"Everyone! Get out of the emergency door! Go!" Kono shouted.
We smashed the door open, making more water get in.
I also realised Sven went out of his cabin, and he seemed disgusted, not at the water, but at US.
"That's not how you treat a damn plane!" Sven screamed.
I grabbed his arm anyway and swam to the top of the water using my last breath.
I was crawling to the sand with everyone else, while Sven shoved his hand out of mine.
"Ehh, germs." Sven pointed his tongue out.
I got up, finally breathing again, and everyone went up as well.
We saw something in the distance, large and looked like it was battling something.
To Be Continued...
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Chapter 34 - The Dragon Of Time.
As I looked closer, it was very large, probably as tall as the clouds could fly.
"Could that be..." Kono gasped.
"Yes... it's the Dragon Of Time." Undead explained.
"Hold on... I sense someone alive is there. A human perhaps, a girl too." Undead wondered.
"Nala! She must be there! Come on! We've got to get her now!" Sven shouted.
He bolted there while we were left behind.
"Wait! The dragon might-" That's when I stopped, as soon as the Dragon stomped on Sven by mistake, and he seemed unconscious, possibly starting to die.
"HE'S DEAD! NO!" I cried.
We rushed to him, checking him.
Ninjaman put his ear near his heart.
"It appears your friend is only 'mostly dead'. Please open his mouth." Ninjaman explained.
"Why?" Kono asked.
"Nevermind. Look out!" Ninjaman screamed.
The Dragon's foot was about to step on us again, until we got transported next to the foot.
Then, someone spawned in front of us, and it was Twage.
"Go and help the Dragon! Kill the beast behind it. I'll heal the Dragon and try to calm it down." Twage demanded.
We nodded and went to the beast.
The beast wasn't actually a beast, it appeared to be a huge robot dinosaur, like MechaGodzilla, accept stronger, bigger and much powerful.

Ninjafoya tried to punch it, but it just hurt her fist since it's skin was made of cold, hard metal.
"How can we take THIS robot down?" I wondered.
Then time froze again as the robot punched the Dragon.
When time resumed again after 10 minutes, the robot dinosaur tripped since the Dragon Of Time punched it.
The dinosaur was about to land on us, until Twage teleported us again.
"My power is running out..." Twage gasped.
The Dragon of Time noticed us, and seemed to recognise me...
It looked at a cave behind the robot, and something happened: My hands started to glow again.
I stared at my hands, but everyone seem to have run out of the way, since the robot was about to step on me.
I held my hands in front of my face, until my hands sprayed a ice globe around me with spikes ontop, which made the robot step on the icy spikes, perhaps even stabbing it's foot, because it began to gain dominate pain.
"Louise... the ice powers are back! Run!" Twage screamed.
My hands seemed to be glowing even more...

I didn't understand, but I had to use this power to protect me, my friends and the universe.

Once the dome defrosted, I showed my hands to the ground and it sprayed and I was using the ice like a jet pack, so I was flying towards the robot dinosaur.
"Louise! What the barnacles are you doing?" Kono complained.
"You'll see!" I beamed.
I then landed on top of the robot's head.
I kneeled down and looked down and I saw the robot's glowing eyes.
It noticed me and it tried to scratch me, but I fell backwards, making it scratch its eye, making one eye unable to see.
It was confused, because it was getting used to seeing with two eyes, so it started to walk backwards, then it tripped on a rock, and I jumped off and shot snow on the bottom of the floor, and I landed on it, safe and sound.
It landed, and it was about to get back up, until I froze it's other eye, making it even more confused.
I then froze it's entire body, making it unable to move, and the machines inside of it shut down since the cold was too much for them to take.
My friends cheered and hugged me, and couldn't believe what my powers could do.
"Pffff, I bet if I had powers I could kill you." Sven sneered.
Our celebration was interrupted, when I saw another ship land ontop of ours, crushing and destroying ours.
"Now we can't escape!" Ninjafoya cried.
The ship's doors opened, and Captain Jack, Radii and soldier twenny wun came out.
Captain Jack giggled and threw something at the Dragon Of Time, and it landed on top of its head.
It seemed to be some kind of head bandanna, only made of metal. But that's when I realised that when Captain Jack pushed a button on his remote, the head bandanna sparked and shivered, making the Dragon roar with pain.
We were lagging so much, every second we would just lag.
"Arg... We... must... help... the... dragon!" Kono screamed.
Then, the head bandanna and Dragon was calm, and when the dragon looked at us, its' eyes were red with blood and rage.
"Now you'll see the greatest scientist of all!" Captain Jack laughed while the Dragon roared.
To Be Continued...
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Chapter 35 - The Dragon Of Death
The Dragon tried to punch us, but we jumped out of the way, just in time.
While the Dragon were fighting us, Captain Jack entered his ship and got the cube.
"What... is that?" Twage pointed.
Captain Jack dumped the cube on the floor, and the cube expanded into a machine.
Captain Jack pressed the button, and then in 5 seconds... 100s of soldiers appeared behind him.
"Radii, protect the machine... now soldiers, kill them!" Captain Jack demanded.
The soldiers charged and shot bullets at us.
I created a ice dome around all of us, while the bullets deflected from the ice.
But then the Dragon stomped on the ice, making the ice shatter and become weaker.
It stomped on the dome one more time, and the ice shattered on our heads.
Everyone ran, but I was too shocked to move.
"Louise! Run!" Ninjafoya screamed.
I felt like I was glued to the floor, I just felt like I couldn't run.
The bullets then were heading towards me... until a huge wave came in front of me and flushed the bullets away.
I turned around, and the 7 Gods and Connor were there.
"I had to get here as soon as I could, I sensed you were in danger, so I had to bring the Gods here. I also found a way to make the Gods escape. Now God's kill the soldiers!" Connor cheered.
Mappy, Kazuke, Dugee and Sutho charged, throwing lasers, fire missiles, lions and wolves at the soldiers, killing them one by one.
Captain Jack went to the machine and spawned more soldiers, and there were about 1000s of them now.
John, Katy and Cally threw metal bullets, waves of fury and great, gushing wind at the Dragon, but it didn't have any affect.
"The head bandana... Cally, bring Louise there!" Katy pointed.
"Fine, you better not weigh so much!" Cally sighed.
I grabbed onto his arms and he pulled me up using his strong wings.
The Dragon noticed us as we were about at its soldiers, and tried to punch us, but John spawned a iron wall in front of us, making the fist miss.
Then the Dragon used its wings to blow us back, Cally fell and let go of me, and I was falling, until I spawned a ice platform under me.
I spawned another one and jumped on it, and kept going until I reached the Dragon's shoulders.
I jumped on its shoulder, climbed its neck and reached its head.
The Dragon shook its head, but I grabbed onto the wrinkles on its head.
I spawned a ice sword, which was cool, then I stabbed the huge head bandanna, making it spark and shiver, then explode, covering the Dragon's eyes.
It tripped forward on a soldier, and landed on all the soldiers.
I jumped off and landed in the snow I spawned, and my friends cheered again.
"This isn't the end..." Captain Jack giggled.
"Radii! Push the button." Captain Jack demanded.
Radii became worried, but pushed it anyway, and this time, a million soldiers spawned.
"Oh crap..." Sutho gasped.

All the Soldiers laughed at the same time, burning out ears, then starting shooting.
The Gods kept using their powers, killing the Soldiers, but more kept spawning.
Radii kept pushing the button as Captain Jack kept demanding her too, and that's when I realised that's what I have to do.
I spawned a giant ice bridge over he Soldiers and it ended in front of the machine.
I ran on the bridge, while the bullets kept going through, but the bridge remained stable.
I kept running through it, but I started to kept tired.
That's when Dugee spawned a lion under me, and it ran across the bridge.
Once that lion became tired, Sutho spawned a wolf and ran as well while I was on top of it.
Once I reached the end of the bridge, I got my ice sword and stabbed the machine, making all the soldiers get transported back to the fortress.
Everyone cheered, but this wasn't the end.
Captain Jack got his pistol out and pointed it at me.
My friends were too far away to save me or spawn anything, so I was trapped.
"Goodbye... failure." Captain Jack smiled.
I covered my eyes, getting ready to be shot.

The gun has been shot, and the bullet has been unleashed, and it shot me.
To Be Continued... Or Is This The End?
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Chapter 36 - Friend
I opened my eyes, and my body was fine, but another body was in front of me.
It was Radii. She coughed, then fell down.
I gasped and kneeled down, I held her and she seemed to be still breathing.
"I'm... I'm sorry. I didn't... *breathe* I didn't betray you... I wanted to save you from Captain Jack's plans." Radii said silently.
"But..." I gasped.
"I had to protect you from Radii... I'll always be your friend... and-" That's when Captain Jack shot her for the last time before she could finish.
"NOO!" I cried.
Her eyes were still, her body is down, she's dead, and I couldn't believe it.
"Muahahaha, you see? THAT'S when you don't believe how I'm a awesome scientist. It's your fault, you could have left everything it could have been and everything would have been fine. But you just couldn't help yourself." Captain Jack complained.
He aimed his gun at me, but when he shot, no bullets came out.
He threw the gun away and got his sword, and before he could kill me, the Dragon grabbed him and dropped his sword.
The Dragon roared and Captain Jack got teleported back to earth.
My friends finally reached me, but they knew it was too late.
"I... I should have known Radii was good the whole time." Connor sighed.
"It wasn't your fault." I replied.
"Then who's fault is it?" Ninjafoya questioned.
"Captain Jack." I said as I scrunched my hand up into a fist.
Something touched me on the shoulder.
I turned around, and the Dragon seemed to have touched me.
"Umm..." I coughed.
The Dragon pointed to the cave behind it, and someone came out of it.
He had a hoodie, and when he pulled it hoodie down, it was a man.
"The icy powers was from me." He explained.
"Why'd you give them to me... sir?" I questioned.
"I'm Xenoh. And I gave you those powers to help you." Xenoh said.
"What about that bloody time when she froze my legs? Don't you like me or something?" Sven argued.
"That was an accident. I was suppost to give you the powers later, but the powers were struggling to go to you... I wonder why." Xenoh wondered.
"The thing is, having you have powers was a huge mistake. Now please give them back." Xenoh raised his hand.
"What? But you said those powers were suppost to help me?" I complained.
"Only that time. I can't allow you to use it to harm people." Xenoh said.
"I don't WANT to harm people!" I shouted as I was about to loose my temper.
"But you don't know how to control your powers, now give them now or I'll do it myself!" Xenoh shouted.
"NEVER!" I screamed.
I ran as fast as I could, to the edge of the planet.
"Louise! Wait!" Kono screamed.
A wolf grabbed me. Sutho must have spawned a wolf to stop me.
I shot some ice at it and jumped, and when I was about 1 kilometre away from the planet, I was floating.
"NO!" Ninjaman cried.
I seemed to be breathing fine in space... what was going on?
I shot ice behind me, making a jetpack and it boosted me to earth.
The closer I got to earth, the more I seemed to float less, and that's when I fell through earth.

I past the clouds, into the blue sea.
I needed to make a ice platform, but it would break my legs.
So I covered my eyes, and the water hit me.
I was floating around in water, wondering if I was dead or not... again.
I was breathing... I was breathing fine actually!
I looked at myself: My body seemed fine: But my legs were... transforming.
When the glow around my legs disappeared, my legs joined togther... into a fish tail.
And that's when I discovered... I was a mermaid.
To Be Continued...
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These moments when... you are about to shoot.
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Chapter 37 - Swimming For Freedom
No. Only dreams could show me this view.
I felt the scales on my fin, and no, it must be reality.
"Dammit... Should have given these powers to Xenoh anyway..." I argued in my head.
I've never seen the sea this... close before. It seemed like a whole new planet to explore now.
I was breathing fine in here, and I could swim easily, so what could I find?
I waved my fin up and down to boost me through the seaweeds and many fish and creatures.
I felt like Ariel from The Little Mermaid, and really I seriously don't understand why she left this beautiful place.
I could just sing, this feeling was just powering my heart, but then I realised I was near the bank of a beach, and I heard voices.
They seemed familiar, like these voices has been heard in the past, but the past came in my mind, and it was my friends.
"Louise can't be far away from here... We must search high and low, and bring me those powers, they could be dangerous!" Xenoh argued.
"Hmm..." I wondered.
These powers were too incredible to be stolen, so I tried to swim away, until Ninjafoya spotted me.
"I saw like a huge fish in the sea!" Ninjafoya pointed.
I swam faster to escape the prisons of Xenoh, but everyone noticed the tail, but not my body.
"Is that a shark?" Ninjaman wondered.
"Well... I'm pretty hungry for not eating for a while, we could have it for lunch." Kono suggested.
"Of course I'll get it by spawning a cage on it. Stand back, hmmm...." Twage summarised the water for any creatures with fins, and of course he detected me. Of course his summarising skills couldn't tell it was me, he seemed to think I was a shark.
"Found it..." Twage whispered.
A cage spawned around me. I tried to escape by weaving through the poles but they were too close.
I knew that if this cage brings me to shore, Xenoh would steal my powers and I'd be hopeless... against Captain Jack.
"No, these powers were here to protect me... I shall protect it from anyone!" I cheered in my mind.
The cage moved, pulling me to the surface.
I remember: I had ice powers. I spawned a ice pickaxe with my mind and smashed a hole in one of the poles.
I kept smashing the pole, and once it was free, my tail reached the surface and swam down.
"What kind of fish was that? It could break metal!" John gasped.
"There has to be a way to disguise myself..." I wondered.
But then I gasped, when my view changed into a flashback.
It was me, running away, as a wolf...
"Of course!" I gasped.
I just didn't know when this wolf disguise would come... just when.
I had to be patient. These powers were given to me for a reason even if it was an accident. I must use these powers carefully to save my friends, the world and universe.
And so I swam on, but the Gods zapped there powers through the water, and I was dodging them, but these were getting closer...

"The God's are still free..." Soldier twenny wun explained.
"I know that! But luckily I still have my machine here... Time to trap them again and this time, no ESCAPING until this machine is stopped." Captain Jack giggled.
Captain Jack pressed the button on his machine, and the machine shook and spazzed, until it was complete.
"TELEPORTING SELECTED TARGETS TO 'HELL'." The machine responded.

That's when I saw a shining bright behind me, and it was Mappy and the God's sharing there powers into one.
I was locked on, which means no escape, and now I'm done due to my friends... How stupid.
But before the powers could hit me, the powers didn't even shoot me.
I turned around, and saw them, on the ground, and their bodies were disappearing, even Connor was disappearing.
"It's happening again!" Undead screamed.
"Remember... to save some shark meat for uuuussss" Mappy screamed before her head disappeared.
Ninjafoya cried.
"That wicked Jack has done his plan again... curse him." Ninjaman scrunched his fist up.

I was getting tired swimming for so long. I couldn't sleep here otherwise a REAL shark might gobble me out, so I had to get out... I had to.
But I had to go 'around' my friends. So I'll get out of the water about 30 metres away from them, so they can't see me. Yes, perfect.
As I stared at where my friends seem to be, I estimated where 30 metres is, which I pointed to where I needed to go.
I swam to there, and before I went up shore, the sun seemed to be going down.
My head pushed against the sand and felt the breeze, and as I pushed myself up, my legs transformed into normal ones.
"Ok... when to be a wolf." I wondered.
Then when the sun was down, the moon raised up, and my arms seemed to be getting... furry as my hair on my arms were growing instantly.
"This... this must be it." I smiled.
To Be Continued...
Btw, I just finished reading 'Hatchet' which is a book we read in school which gave me heaps of ideas for my story, so be prepared for many plot twists and mouth dropping moments.
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Chapter 38 - The Wolverine Chase
As my fur started to grow, my teeth were getting sharp and deeper.
My back was pushing me down, unable to make me stand like a normal person
As my claws has grown and my body was complete, I went to the sea and stared into the reflection.
Yes, I'm a wolf. How wonderful. Now they can't find me, until I heard this.
"It's a wolf... wait that's one of Louise's powers! Bring her to me then I can finally get her powers out of her!" Xenoh called.
Okay, being a wolf has just backfired. I ran for my life as my friends chased after me.
"Louise! Wait!" Ninjafoya cried.
"Never!" I shouted.
Hold up, I can talk normal english... now they definitely know I'm no ordinary wolf.
I howled, calling for help in anyway, but I heard some stomps heading towards me.
A group of wolves heard my call and has created a circle around me.
As my friends got closer, I told them "Get them away from me, but don't harm them!"
They seemed to understood and charged at my friends, and they screamed.
Suddenly, Undead stopped, possibly frozen.
"Argg... Nala... she's alive!" Undead said.
The wolves seemed to be charging at Undead as he concentrated where Nala was.
I knew the wolves were about to attack him, they must have not understood me maybe...
I charged at Undead, as I seemed to be the fastest out of the herd.
I went under Undead's legs, then he was sitting on me.
"Woah! What?" Undead gasped.
"Hang on tight." I said.

As I ran with the weight on me, I seemed slower, because the wolves were chasing after me.
I looked behind, and behind the wolves not so far back were my friends... still chasing me.
I sighed, wondering if they'll ever stop.
I stopped. A massive hill was in front of me, too steep to climb.
The wolves walked slower towards me.
"Back off! Okay? I didn't say to hurt them! Scram!" I shouted.
They hissed.
"Undead, get off..." I sighed.
Undead went off, wondering what I was doing.
I remembered. I stared at my hands, and they were ready.
I showed my paws to the wolves and sprayed ice and snow, centre metres away from their claws.
They backed away, confused to what I've just done.
They ran away into the woods, and I smiled at Undead.
My friends finally arrived, and knew it was me.
"Louise, did you tell those wolves to seriously attack us?" Ninjaman shouted.
"Ummm..." I lowered my head.
"You should be ashamed of yourself! You could have killed us!" Kono cried.
"But... She saved me." Undead explained.
"What?" Sven gasped.
"You tell them. She saved me from those wolves, maybe it was a mistake, since wolves don't really understand english." Undead explained.
I let out a deep sigh, and my friends seemed to agree with Undead's truth.
"Just don't talk to wolves ever again, okay?" Ninjafoya said.
"I know... I know." I sighed.
"Guys, I sensed Nala... she in... Captain Jack's fortress, really injured." Undead said.
"No..." Sven gasped.
"We won't make it in time, unless you can transport us in front of his fortress Twage." Undead said.
"I guess I can." Twage smiled.
"Wait, where's Xenoh?" I questioned.
"He stayed behind, he told us to bring you to him, but..." Ninjafoya said.
"We don't really trust him." Kono sighed.
"Hold up, the Dragon trusts him! If the Dragon trusts him, then we should." Ninjaman argued.
"We need to save Nala first." Sven scrunched up his fist.
"Okay, as you wish." Twage threw his hands in the air, then we got transported, in front of Captain Jack's fortress.

The towers inside it were as high as mountains, and there were 1000s of soldiers inside.
I looked through the gates, and I saw Captain Jack, cheering, probably thinking I'm dead.
"Ok troops, I've got a plan, You go inside and freeze all the soldiers as wolf form so you can run at the speed of light. Me, Kono and Sven will look for Nala while Ninjafoya, Undead and Twage will try and capture Captain Jack and put him in a cage. Is that clear troops?" Ninjaman said.
We nodded, but as the sun got up, my fur, claws and teeth were shrinking.
That's when I stood up, back in human form.
"Hmm, without your wolf form, you won't be able to be fast enough to freeze all of the soldiers..." Ninjaman wondered.
"How about we attack next night. How about we camp in the woods behind us." Kono pointed into the woods.
"Good idea, let's go and find a good place to camp." Twage said.
To Be Continued...
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Awww yeeeee bout to capture Jack!

 

Lel Arelane goin down

 

*nervous voice*
We'll see who's going down...

Spoiler: Calculations

Ok, they have a mage, a sort of wolf, but I have 1000 of soldiers....hmmm... mage counts as 500 of soldiers and Louise as 400 of soldiers. 500+400=900. But wait, there's more! Louise is a main character so already she has 50 soldiers more... and mage... (I hate tomatoes, i mean the vegetable, or fruit?) Is a tomato so he has 50 soldiers more. 550+450=1000. OH FAK! But wait, My
power of improvisation gives me 7 points more :D, but wait. You have 7 idiots (Jk, U de most awesome peeps ever) more that have 1 point each. 1000+7=1007 and 1000+7=1007. OH FAK!!! Ehm, Parlay?

Nice chap lel

 

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Chapter 39 - The Hunt For Victory
We encountered a nice, shady tree, perfect to stay.
As we sat there, chatting and planing for the huge plan, I wondered what other powers I might have.
"By the way, will Xenohs get mad for leaving him?" Kono wondered.
"No, we'll just say we're still trying to find Louise, that's that." Undead suggested.
"Guys, Xenoh has a big dragon behind his back that can control time. If he catches us lying then we've got a dragon to deal with." Ninjaman argued.
"By the way, how did you get on the shore so quickly? Did you fall to earth as well?" I questioned.
"The Dragon teleported us back to earth without saying a word. I feel sad for the guy to not understand english." Ninjafoya nibbled on her booger.
Then behind us was Twage, that just came back from spying on Captain Jack's troops.
"We have a problem. Captain Jack installed a new giant claw to pick us up and drop us to our death like a rock. We've got to be careful. Louise, you have ice powers, right? Try and freeze the claw so it can't get anywhere near you or us." Twage explained.
"I guess I can try..." I said.
"Excellent. If any of us messes up in any way, we're doomed. So think about what you do." Twage said in a serious tone.
"I'm nervous I might mess up..." Ninjafoya wondered.
"You'll be fine. Stick with me and Twage, then you'll be fine." Undead winked.
As we kept chatting, building our nerves up, sunset came, and the moon has spawned, and I turned into a wolf.
"Ok, you all ready?" Twage said.
We nodded.
"CHARGE!" Ninjaman screamed.
I froze the two soldiers at the front of the gates, switching the switch which made the gate open.
Ninjaman, Kono and Sven went left, while Ninjafoya, Undead and Twage went right, while I headed straight forward.
There were soldiers scattered around everywhere, all standing, sitting or upside down.
I sprayed my ice on most of them, while they tried to shoot they guns at me.
I ran, jumping on some soldier's heads and even used me sharp claws to stab some soldiers.
Things were turning out great, but the thing that worried me was the claw.

Captain Jack was too busy to notice the soldiers screaming and getting hurt as he improved his claw, making it's accuracy better.
Ninjafoya, Undead and Twage were sneaking behind Captain Jack, until... Twage put a sleep spell on Captain Jack, making him fall back into a deep slumber.
"Good, let's go and put him in a cage." Undead pointed.

Sven, Ninjaman and Kono went in a room with empty jail cells and dangling hooks.
"Nala... are you here? It's me, Sven." Sven whispered.
Ninjaman looked around, looking for clues of any sign of Nala.
"GUYS!" Kono screamed.
Sven and Ninjaman ran to Kono, looking at where Kono was pointing.
At the last row of jail cells, there was one at the very back, with a girl, on the ground with blood all over her body, maybe even dead.

Hours past, and I wiped out half of the soldiers while there was still more to deal with.
Ninjafoya, Undead and Twage were doing great as they carried Captain Jack's body to the jail cells.
And Sven, Ninjaman and Kono freed Nala and we're unsure if she was alive or not, but carried her through the fortress, but the fortress was huge, so they were getting lost.
That's when things started to go down hill.

Ninjafoya tripped and dropped Captain Jack, making him wake up immeditetly.
"What the... you..." Captain Jack sneered.
He looked at his wrist and some sort of watch was on it. He pushed the button on it, making the claw turn on.
He ran for his life while Ninjafoya, Undead and Twage chased him. He was too far away to cast any magic on him and he was twice as fast.
Captain Jack went to his computer room, locking the doors behind him.
He looked at his security camara's, and saw me, killing almost all his soldiers.
Then he saw Sven, Ninjaman and Kono, with Nala almost to the exit, until he pushed the switch and the gates crashed down.
And then, his claw grabbed me.

I was strangling for my life, but the claw was too big.
The claw was attached to one of the towers in this fortress and was 5 metres wide to grab a car.
The claw was extending, reaching about 30 feet above the fortress, then it went side ways, aiming me to the hard, rocky ground.
Then the claw released me, making me drop to the ground.
Captain Jack went to his speakers and called "Intruders near the gate and in front of Computer Room."
The soldiers crowded my friends and Nala, while the soldiers got ready to shoot, and I was almost there to hit the ground.
To Be Continued...
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I got 1 part and I'm not in them now I cri

 

If you wanna appear in the story more, just tell me and I'll make your role stand out more ^-^

 

I swear Louise, you're on track for making the longest page on the forums ever xD

 

Can i please be in all the storys and stand out?

 

I know... this is the 4th most replied thread in Creations o.o Still can't believe it...

Ok, when a new chapter comes, I'll make sure your role becomes more important :)

Anyway, I'm not going to make a chapter today sadly because I'm going to make my chapters more neat now.
What I mean is, I'm going to start making chapters only about 3 times a week.
Why? Because I want your excitement to build up more.
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