My probably amateur deep poem series: 'And when the light falls...'

So, hey there, people.
This is my first text-based creation on the forums.
Judge it as much as you want, I want actual critique. Thanks.

Prologue: "Mistakes erased, forgotten."
"Mistakes erased...
Everything's forgotten..."

"All things depend..
on last thought.."

"And all I knew was fake...
everything in this world was just to break.."

"What is the aspect?
And everything'll fall."

"Mistakes erased, forgotten.",
he spoke....

TO BE CONTINUED.

 

Nice "deep poem!"

 

Thank you, kind sir.