Love Story Made By Olle

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  1. Jakt

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    @Katy9078
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    Story Love:
    Katy was going home from school she was sad becuse she did not find her loved by anyone not even her mom or dad. The most she wanted it her life was someone that love her for what she was not for what she do or have done she wanted to get accepted by someone and someone did accept her Marco her best friend from long time ago did love her but he never told her becuse he was to sceard to say anything, but one day he did dared to tell her.

    Eh katy did Marco say a quiet, Yes katy did say, I,,emm Marco did say with a stund voise, What is it Marco, emm ee I Kindy Love you, you love me how can you love somebady like me i'm not special at all i'm just a girl that is not good looking I don't have friend or anything how can you love something like me, I love everything with you you'er maybe not special in some way but in you don't need to be you'er perfect how you are and nobady can deny that.

    Are you kiding me i'm nothing like the other girls they are much betther then what i'm, no your the best girl in the world that is the truth and the other girls are just jealous of you, How can they be they have more money, cloths, makeup they are much better them me, Your the most special pesson in the world for me you need to understand sure you don't have the same money or makeup like them but that don't matter.

    but, they are not but they is only love and you don't need to cere about the other girls they don't have someone like me that can take cere of you and if that is not enough then sorry but I will do anything for you thats how much I love you, oh so you did not joke about that you did love me I did think that everyone do that to me, Thats becuse they know you to good for them.
    Maybe, It's not a maybe it's a fact you'r the most beautiful girl in the world, if you say so *sound of uncertainty*
    Can you understand that your the best girl in the world and you can't deny it no one can if they do they must be retared or just lieing, I know it now and I fell the same marco I love you too.

    The End
    I know that there is some grammer misstakes and I can see it.
    This story did take 4-6 hours to make and I hope that you like it
    If you want one Pm me and I will look at it. This is all from me -Olle
     
  2. Ninjafoya

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    Nice story. :)
     
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  3. ImJustMrpie

    ImJustMrpie Farewell

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    Awesome Story
     
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    Thanks If you want one pm me usernames and What the story will be about
     
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  5. Ninjafoya

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    I'm good, but good luck with others. :)
     
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    Fawn as if

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    Amazing Story!
     
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    Beautiful but...
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    D'awww...

    Lovely story you there.
     
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    Thanks I hope that @05ocram05 and @Katy9078 will like it
     
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    anytime :3
     
  15. Yomc

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    I'll be honest and say that it's really difficult to comprehend, given the grammar. But I get that the intent is there.
    It's a ... different idea. I guess it's cool.
    (I still prefer writing love poetry though, that's the only thing I use love for anyway)
     
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    I don't see any Hodor
     
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    Will Work On One Special Soon With Hodor Only
     
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    Hodor Aproves

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  20. animelover999

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    I was,
    The Beta Tester for the story!
     
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