[New] 6th Story: The Return Of Memories

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  1. IAMINACTIVEBYE

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    Lol, nice picture :D
    Anyway, just to let you know this story is going to be about 30 chapters, cause you know... its 5 stories in one o.o And maybe also around... 30 characters or 40? Not quite sure, but I know that there will be more then 20 characters ;)
    Characters:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @xX0Sven0Xx
    @Ninjaman
    @Konohito
    @nala
    @Ninjafoya
    @Arelane
    @TheUndeadBrave
    @Cally8484
    @Kazuke
    @Suthos
    @Katy9078
    @John_0696
    @MappyTurtle
    @RichieOrCraziiR
    New Character:
    @Silent_Arrow
    Enjoy ^-^

    Chapter 12 - War 3.0 Begins
    "Now how are we going to get down there without falling to our death?" Kono asked. "There's a small lake down there, maybe we could land in it..." Ninjaman suggested. "Umm... I don't really know how to swim." I said scratching my head. Ninjaman face palmed himself. "Plan B. We could all grab onto Cally's wings and he could gently hover to the city." Undead suggested. "Fine. But if one of you rips my wings, your going to hell." Cally hissed.
    We grabbed onto Cally's wings, and he spread out his wings, and slowly hovered to the ground. We landed, and we were in the town, and people escaped into their little huts. We walked unto we saw someone at the end of the path, quite confused. "Who are you? How did you find this city?" He asked. "Listen, we heard that the 8... I mean 7 Gods are going to come here and destroy this town, and it's our duty to protect it." Ninjafoya explained. "I sounded so classical, didn't I?" Ninjafoya whispered to me. "We do not allow strangers in this city. I demand you to leave. And these 8 Gods of Heaven certainly don't exist here!" He shouted. "But we saw them with our very own eyes!" I shouted. "Enough. Leave at once!" He shouted. Then, someone screamed, and one of the hut's were on fire. "What? Simply impossible!" He said. "Cally!" Undead shouted. He went up to it and flapped his wings, and the fire disappeared. "You see? That was one of the Gods!" Ninjafoya shouted. "Hmm... I guess I can't decline that." He said. "My name is Silent Arrow, but just call my Silent. I am ruler of the Lost Town. Reason why this is called Lost Town? Because this town used to be the greatest town of all, until our grateful king died and a evil one took over. He wanted to make the town a modern place, but the people liked the oldish look, so he created a new town but he wants to expand it, so he wanted to destroy this town so his town can expand, but the people declined it, so there's been a war between the towns ever since... and we're losing." Silent sighed.
    Then, a flashback entered my mind: When I tried to protect this town ever since against the Evil Town. The flashback withered away, and the real world was in my view. "Louise, I believe you remember this and the other town now, right?" Undead questioned. "Yeah... However I can't remember how we defeated the other town..." I wondered. Then, a missile landed just outside of this town, creating a massive explosion. "The evil town is still trying to destroy this town, but we're just hanging on." Silent sighed. "We'll protect this town!" I cheered. "I'm quite glad to hear that... but I need you to do one thing so I can fully trust you." He replied. We nodded. "Please go and see what the evil town is up to. Avoid them knowing your protecting this town, okay?" He suggested. We agreed and walked to the evil town.
    "Louise, how's your memories going?" Ninjaman asked. "Quite normal I guess... Nothing new is coming." I replied. "Louise, your memories might collide as well. So the Gods might try to destroy Lost City as well." Undead explained. "I'm guessing Arelane demanded the God's to destroy Lost City as well..." Kono wondered. "Wow, look at this town Louise!" Ninjafoya pointed, and tall black buildings reached the clouds and people that looked quite... evil were also scattered around the city. Then I sort of felt down. "Louise, something wrong?" Ninjaman asked. "I wonder if... Sven is okay." I sighed.
    To Be Continued...
    Hope you enjoyed this chapter!
    Also, I need one more character in the story before the next chapter begins, so please comment below to be in the story.
    If no one replies in time, I'll just choose one on the forums.
    Leave your feedback below and a like ^-^
    Thanks For Reading!!! :D​
     
  2. CaptainJackValdy

    CaptainJackValdy I got a plan to save the server, just have faith

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    Gud Chapter :)

    (I am Master Drawer i Guess? xD)
     
  3. TheUndeadBrave

    TheUndeadBrave Life's too short, make the most of it!

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    Another good chapter as usual Louise!
     
  4. IAMINACTIVEBYE

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    Listening to 'Ori Lost In The Storm' Song, its so... sad ;-;
    Anyway, enough of the sadness, hello ^-^ Here's Chapter 13.
    Btw, sometimes listenning to music changes how I make chapters, so since I'm listenning to sad music, this chapter might be a bit... emotional ;-;
    Anyway, here's the characters:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @xX0Sven0Xx
    @Ninjaman
    @Konohito
    @nala
    @Ninjafoya
    @Arelane
    @TheUndeadBrave
    @Cally8484
    @Kazuke
    @Suthos
    @Katy9078
    @John_0696
    @MappyTurtle
    @RichieOrCraziiR
    New Character:
    @Radii
    And yes, I know I didn't message you or anything, but as soon as I saw that you were online, I had to choose you xD
    Enjoy this... emotional chapter ;-;
    Chapter 13 - The Town Of Darkness
    As I walked down the main path, and the tall black skyscrapers covered the sky. The people around us started to follow us, strangling, while punching their hands and getting their knives out, so I guess this city wasn't called 'Evil' for no reason. I noticed someone at the end of the path, and it was sitting on a dark throne, with people with ripped clothes fanning her with giant leaves. One of them stopped, and the person on the throne whipped the person with a whip, making the person's back fill with sweat and blood. The person on the throne saw us and hopped out of the throne. "Welcome to the city of darkness! I am Radii the queen of this lovely town, and I welcome you!" She cheered. "Hello there your majesty, we're just visiting." Ninjaman politely said. "Okay! Look around, but don't you DARE touch anything!" She shouted. Something was just covering my whole mind, nothing else I could think of, but Sven. I had to ask, I couldn't stop it, and I said. "Where's Sven." I said. "Him? Oh he's dead. Killed him the other day, he touched one of the skyscrapers." She laughed. "What?" I cried. My friends also seemed shocked. "Louise, he'll be okay in heaven." Ninjafoya said, patting my back, but I shoved her hand off. "WHERE IS HE!" I shouted. "Calm down." Radii said calmly. "WHY! WHY'D YOU DO THIS! I NEED HIM! I NEED HIM!" I shouted. "Enough!" She shouted. "He's alive, I know it. I know he's there! you just won't tell me you dirty rat!" I shouted. "Calm your butt down!" Cally shouted. I wanted to punch Radii, but Kono grabbed me. "Louise, get it together!" Kono slapped me. "I won't stop! I need him!" I cried. "Guards!" Radii shouted. Some guards grabbed me and dragged me to jail, while I kept squirming. "I WON'T LEAVE UNTIL I FIND HIM!" I shouted. My friends couldn't stop the guards, so they stood their, worried. "We need to get her out of there." Cally said. "We can't. Those guards look like they can hurt us with one slap." Kono pointed. "Kono, your right." Undead sighed. "What do you mean?" Kono questioned. "Cause there already surrounding us." Kono said, and there were big, bulky people around them, preparing their fists and knives.
    The guards threw me in jail and locked the doors and I sat down, staring at the wall. "Sven... don't go... I need you..." I sniffed. I held my hand in front of me, patting the air, imagenning that was Sven. He was always there for me, he always made me happy. I need him, but... the world doesn't need him. Tears kept falling down my cheeks, and I tried to stop it, but it just kept falling like a hail. That's when I cried out loud, and, no one was there for me, not even the guards wanted to see what's wrong, I was alone, and that's how my life will forever be.
    Kono, Undead, Ninjafoya, Cally and Ninjaman had no weapons, so they couldn't fight or do anything. Not even the strongest punch could knock out even one of the people around them. Cally tried to stab one of the people with his claws on his wing, but their bellys were like steel, so they couldn't do anything. "Looks like we're gonna have flesh for dinner..." One of the people said.
    I knew my friends were in danger, but I couldn't do anything. I sat there, thinking, but not a single idea would come. We were finished. The city and world will die, and so will I. I was nothing, just like Arelane said.
    To Be Continued... Or Is This The End?
    Yes, the first time in any of my stories, I actually changed the 'To Be Continued...' so is this the end, or is there still hope?
    Leave a like, a comment, whatever is good, okay? ;)
    Thanks For Reading!!! :D

     
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    ;-; Where's Sven
     
  6. CaptainJackValdy

    CaptainJackValdy I got a plan to save the server, just have faith

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    Cmon, we all know that someone (or something) will save you :3
    BTW Radii is my clone here, Same way of talking :D

    In short, good story
     
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  9. IAMINACTIVEBYE

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    Chapter 14 - ???
    I stared at the wall, until I noticed Arelane, opening the door behind me, then, a spear entered my body, and all I saw was blackness.
    The End. ?
     
  10. Kono

    Kono Former Staff Donator

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    Ooo Death!
     
  11. CaptainJackValdy

    CaptainJackValdy I got a plan to save the server, just have faith

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    O_O

    U FAWKEN WOT M8?! (no offence) Cmon, dont make us cry... :'(
     
  12. JuniDaBawz

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    Very interesting stories! I love them!
     
  13. TheUndeadBrave

    TheUndeadBrave Life's too short, make the most of it!

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    This can't be the end!
     
  14. IAMINACTIVEBYE

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    Hewo ^-^ Your probably all shocked and sad cause you think this is actually the 'end'. Well... read this chapter to find out what REALLY happens
    Sorry to scare you all xD
    Characters:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @xX0Sven0Xx
    @Ninjaman
    @Konohito
    @nala
    @Ninjafoya
    @Arelane
    @TheUndeadBrave
    @Cally8484
    @Kazuke
    @Suthos
    @Katy9078
    @John_0696
    @MappyTurtle
    @RichieOrCraziiR

    @Radii
    Enjoy :)
    REAL Chapter 14 - The Save
    I woke up while my heart was punching my chest. 'Oh... just another nightmare of me dying.' I said in my mind while sighing. I was thinking that maybe that nightmare men't something... maybe a chance of me... dying? I looked around, and I didn't see anything, just the wall and bars I stared at. Maybe... death WAS really coming.
    Meanwhile, my friends were crowded, and the people got their knives and fists out. A guy was going to stab Ninjafoya, and Ninjafoya covered her eyes with her hands, until something went in front of her. And when Ninjafoya opened her eyes, the knife was stabbed in the guy's STOMACH, and he fell to the ground. Then before any other guys could stab them, the mysterious creature was jumping, grabbing the knife in mid air, then stabbing the others. "That thing is too powerful! RETREAT!" They said. They ran off and the mysterious thing took of it's mask, and it was Silent. "Louise is kidnapped, perhaps you can help us free her?" Ninjaman questioned. Silent nodded. Kono leaded the way while Silent was behind them.
    I stared at the wall, and that's when I realised Arelane was there, with a spear. Great, the nightmare was true. I closed my eyes to prepare for dominating pain, until I heard something and Arelane shouted "Arrggg!" I opened my eyes, and Silent, Ninjafoya, Ninjman, Kono, Undead and Cally was there. Arelane was on the ground and the spear was on the ground. Before he could grab it, the claw on Cally's wing stabbed the spear in half, and also chopped off the top of the spear so the spear didn't seem like a spear at all, maybe a small pole and a pencil now. Silent kicked the door behind me so hard, it just fell down, and I stood up and Ninjafoya grabbed my hand and escaped the jail. The guards were behind us, but Cally flapped his wings so they could fall to the ground.
    When we were half way to the Lost City, we were all puffed out, and we couldn't take a single step. Ninjaman heard the guards approaching, so we had to move, but our legs were stiff. "We can't stop now!" Silent shouted. But we just breathed, coughed and puffed. Cally's energy seemed to fill up quickly, so we grabbed his wings and he soared through the sky about 2 metres off the ground. The air breezed through our faces, and in less then 10 minutes, we were at Lost City. "Louise, I did sense you having nightmares, is this true?" Undead asked. I nodded. "Arelane might also place nightmares or memories in your mind as well, so some false memories could enter your mind as well." Undead explained. "But the nightmare I had was true, does that mean some false memories ARE real memories... or visions?" I questioned. "Memories are from the past Louise. He must have placed that nightmare to warn you and scare you, just to say your weak." Ninjaman explained. I sighed, then Ninjafoya put her hand on my back. Then a spark of flames suddenly appeared on one of the huts, and people were running everywhere. I looked up, and the 8... I mean 7 Gods appeared, blasting their powers on the huts and were also preparing to fire their powers at us.
    To Be Continued...
    So no need to upset, its okay, you can cry but hey, I'm okay :)
    Hope you enjoyed this chapter!
    Please remember to leave some feedback and a like, and to the people who has already requested to be in the story but has not appeared yet: Please be patient: Maybe in 2 or 4 chapters you'll appear ;)
    Thanks For Reading!!! :D​
     
  15. CaptainJackValdy

    CaptainJackValdy I got a plan to save the server, just have faith

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    Question, WHY A SPEAR?! LOL i would pick the pistol or something and would shoot at you all, xD

    Jk, gud chap Louise
     
  16. IAMINACTIVEBYE

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    Why no one like spears ;-;
    Don't worry, you'll get a gun soon, you just used a spear cause you wanted to test it to see if it was strong.
    Anyway, hi, how are you? Good day? Me too. Chapter 15 is here *yay* and uhh the feedback below is lacking and makes me think if the story is getting boring and is sort of making me feel a bit down, so maybe some extra feedback would make me feel better? K? Okay.

    Characters:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @xX0Sven0Xx
    @Ninjaman
    @Konohito
    @nala
    @Ninjafoya
    @Arelane
    @TheUndeadBrave
    @Cally8484
    @Kazuke
    @Suthos
    @Katy9078
    @John_0696
    @MappyTurtle
    @RichieOrCraziiR
    @Radii
    New Characters:
    @NINJANAYLIN123
    @CreeperInHD
    Enjoy ^-^
    Chapter 15 - The Fun Never Ends
    Cally tried to flap his wings so the powers could deflect, but the powers seemed stronger and went through the wind, heading straight towards us. We quickly went in a hut, while the roof exploded and tiny bits of wood and stone tapped on my head. The sirens screamed, and it was chaos. "Everyone! Retreat!" Silent shouted. We ran out of the half destroyed hut, away from the city that was tearing apart. "We must run away, as far as possible away from the Gods. Let's move!" Ninjaman shouted. We nodded, accept for me. I kept staring at the city, while the water, fire, metal, wolves, lions, lasers and shadows ripped the walls of the huts. Ninjafoya grabbed my hand and tried to run, but I just sat there. "Louise, get your legs working! There's no time!" Kono shouted. Then, a flashback dominated my mind: The 2 Giants slept below, the only ones who could destroy any power or missile. Undead slapped me, and the flashback disappeared. "Quit sleeping!" Undead shouted. "It's not over!" I screamed. I ran to the city, and the others tried to run after me, but I was too fast for them.
    I entered the mayors hall that was on fire. The roof fell in front of me as iron claws were attached on it. I hopped over it and I saw some emergency tools at the back. I grabbed a drill and some buckets and escaped the mayors hall. The lions and wolves surrounded me, but I activated the drill, scaring them off. I went to the lake next to the city that were shot with lasers from Mappy, who was next to it. The water was disappearing, and Mappy noticed me. "Enjoying the fun, eh?" Mappy laughed. She shot a laser heading straight towards me, but I dodged it. However, it shot the bucket and it bounced away, but it wasn't damaged. I ran to the bucket, but Katy threw a puddle in front of me, making me slip. Soul then spawned a shadow in front of me, ready to kill me, but I got my drill and activated it, stabbing the drill into the shadow making it fall to the ground. I got the bucket and ran to the lake, but the water was already gone. Katy charged up a super wave, surrounding me. Then John got ready to shoot a spear of metal straight at me. When the water then headed straight to me, John shot a giant metal spear at me but I jumped, and when the water was just about to get me, I held on tight to the metal spear, pulling me out of the water. The Gods seemed surprised, and I quickly got the bucket and just got some water from the waves and ran. Suddenly, fire spawned around me, but I had to save the water from the bucket. Before the fire could reach me, Cally flapped his wings, only making a 10th of the fire disappear. I ran through the small gap of fire before it could reach me, then I ran to a nice, soft ground. "Louise, what are you doing with my tools?" Silent questioned angrily. I didn't have time to answer, and I stabbed the drill onto the floor.
    The drill twirled and the dirt escaped, making a giant hole for about 10 people to fit in. My friends hopped in and the drill kept digging. The Gods surrounded the hole, ready to charge their powers, but Arelane stopped them. "Now now, let me handle this." Arelane laughed. He got his pistol out, and shot a bullet down the hole, but then I got the drill on top of my head, making the bullet deflet from the drill, heading straight up, heading to Arelane. Richie and Sutho grabbed Arelane back until the bullet could reach him, but he just missed it. Arelane looked down to the hole. "Awakening the Giants huh? Can't wait to see that." Arelane giggled. Arelane pointed at the half destroyed city, and the Gods continued destroying it, while Arelane kept giggling.
    To Be Continued...
    Hope you enjoyed this awesome chapter! :D
    And to the two people who has wanted to be in the story, you'll be in it in the next chapter.
    And PLEASE remember to comment below, because the feedback is getting a bit empty, apart from @Arelane beautiful comments :p
    So to make me happier, please remember to comment below :)
    Thanks For Reading!!! :D​
     
  17. Kono

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    I want to see Giants!
     
  18. Ninjaman

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    DESCRIBE THE GIANTS
     
  19. CaptainJackValdy

    CaptainJackValdy I got a plan to save the server, just have faith

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    Yay, i got a gun! :D thx louise and gud chap!
     
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    Nice!