1st Story Ever: The Key

You are next m8 (the reason i didnt pick you is that you didnt have good characteristics for this character
Ex: Suthos has 1 eye right now.
But i will pick you as soon as possible

 

Halo Ackan! (Hello Again)

Characters: @SameGuys

Chapter 10-the arrival to Cuba

Percy slept for a while, and when he woke up in about 12 hours am, he heard a man screaming:

-THE CUBA IS THERE!!! WE HAVE ARRIVED!!!-jack was the first to get on deck for check the land. Killy and louise came to deck as well. Percy came the last. When they finally docked their ship, jack Have taken a bottle from his cabin, Got back to deck and jumped to the dock’s planks. Louise, Killy and Perceisha have followed him. They already Wanted to Get in The City, But They didn’t walk too much because one man with papers have stopped them, he Started Talking To Valdy: For Dock the ship here, you will need to pay 1 shilling.-after the man sayed this, jack checked his pockets and has found EVERYTHING except any Shilling. He Has Found His Musket, The Key, The Compass and even The Map.

-Percy, got any?-asked jack. Perceisha gave him 1 shilling.

-…and tell me your names.-finished the man. After hearing that, jack immediately got in the Percy’s pocket and took two more Shillings.

-if I give you 3 shillings, will we still need to tell our names?-asked jack nervously. The man checked the pieces of gold, and accepted the deal.-Welcome To Havana, Ehhm... Mr.Hopkins!-Like This Jack Got his False Name. A moment after when The Man left, jack got strong punch in his face.

-you darn stealer!-shouted Perceisha.

-You…you broke my nose… is that an au way to say “thanks”?-asked jack Holding His Nose For It Stops Bleeding

-why would I say thanks? You Stole My Money!-asked Perceisha.

-Well, I just probably saved your life, you was left on that darn island for treason… and a lot of au members are here… some of them probably remember you… so yeah! No Problem!-finished jack smiling. After That, Killy Approached To Percy and Kicked him Under His Feet.

-That Will Teach Yah!-Sayed Killy Smiling.

Thx For Your Time... And Yeh Dont Mess With Killy :3

 

Nice job on Chapter 10 c:

 

Im Out Of Chapters ;=; I Have To Break My Arm Right Now.
Anyway, Characters: @Same.
New Ones: @connmeister

Chapter 11-The Execution.

They Soon Left The Docks, Percy still Felt The Pain Because Killy Kicked So Hard, That if Percy Would Be a Normal Man, He Would Get Knocked Out. The Exit From The Docks Led To The Small Village With A lot of Shops Around. Loads and Loads Of People Were Shouting Stuff Like: COME HERE!! BUY SOME GOOD FOOD!!! CHEAP ITEMS!! 1 SHILLING EACH, etc. They Walked Through The Village And Stopped in front of a Sign Which Said: Pirate, Ye Been Warned!, And Not Far From The Sign, There Was a Skeleton in a Cage With Blood.

-Should Be Careful From Now on-Said Louise.-After She Said That, One Man Not Far From Them Ran With The Sign And Screamed:

-THE PIRATE IS GOING TO GET KILLED!! FOLLOW ME TO SEE!!-Loads And Loads Of People Followed Him.

-Wanna Check One Unlucky Guy Being Killed?-asked Jack. All Of His "Friends" (They Weren't Really Friends, Except Probably Jack And Killy) Nodded. They All Followed The Man With The Sign And Soon They Saw a Sort of a Table With Soldiers And A Prisoner On it. Then One Of The Soldiers Started Talking:

-Mr. Connmeister Will Today Get Executed For The Following Reasons: Murder, Torture, Piracy And For The Attack Of on The Our Sweet King Ghe Cuevara. For God Bless You In The Skies.-after The Soldier Finished Saying This, One Other Took a Musket And aimed At The prisoner's Head. One Single Frame Before He Could Shoot The Man Who Attacked The King, Someone Stabbed Him In The Back. The People Started Screaming. A Second After That, Some more People Jumped On The Execution Table And Started Attacking The Soldiers. After A Few Bloody Minutes, The Soldiers Were Defeated, The People Who Watched Ran Away And Jack And His Gang Were Really Surprised.

-Thanks For Getting Me Out-Sayed The Prisoner Who's Name Was Connmeister. After Saying This, The People Who Attacked The Soldiers Left As If Nothing Happened.

-Where The Heck Did You Get Those Guys Conn?-Asked Jack. Connmeister Turned Around and Recognized His Old Friend.

-Jackie!-Shouted Connmeister And Approached To Jack, But Here Happened Something That Jack Wasn't Expecting, He Got an Another Punch In His Face.

-OUCH!!!-Shouted Jack After Conn Punched Him.-WHAT's WRONG WITH THE WORLD THESE DAYS?!

-The Revenge Is Sweet.-Said Conn-This Will Teach You, You Won't Abandon me Here Again! Let's Go in Tavern, I Heard You Got An AU Key.

-Who Told You That?-asked Jack Nervously, The Only People Who Knew Were Percy, Killy And Louise, And The Soldiers He Left in Tortuga.

-The Soldiers You Left In Tortuga, They Somehow Got Here And Told The News To Everyone They Met, The Whole Havana Knows That Some Jack Valdy...-But He Got interupted By Jack

-CAPTAIN Jack Valdy...

-Alright...-Continued Conn- Captain Jack Valdy Have Stole The Key From Them. Be Happy Man, Your Popularity Grows, You Are Even More Popular Than Black Beard Here.

Thx For Your Time! :)

 

Yey I didn't die :D

 

You Shouldn't Have... if You Would We Will All Die Thrice in a Row. :3

 

I don't know what did Sam Sung. I Think he thinks he's better than anybody else.

Anyway,
characters: @SameDudes

Chapter 12-Tavern

A few Minutes Later, Louise, Killy, Perceisha, Jack and Conn have found themselves in front of a Huge restaurant called: Captain's Daughter. Pretty Mysterious Name isn't it? Well, Some people say That here Works one Woman That was a Daughter of a Popular Captain. But it's Jack's Story, not Her. As soon as They Came in, There were TONS of People Fighting Each other With Bottles, Chairs and Some even With Swords! The Gang Didn't go in the Fight zone, instead they sat on a Pretty long table that Could keep atleast 10 people at once! When they sat, One woman came to them and asked:
-What will you Drink today?
-Same as everyone in this Darn place!-answered Jack-All These Idiots have Probably all drank Some really Strong Rum, Well, after a Long travel that's the best we can get!-After he Finished Saying this, Everyone on the table agreed except Perceisha.
-A Glass of Cider please.-Said Percy.-after saying this, The Woman wrote Everything on her Paper and Disappeared in The "Battlefield".
-Hey! I Remember Yaw!-Said Someone Not Far From Them Pointing at Jack.-Are You That guy That Succeed To Steal The Key? The fabulous Jack... Or Should i Say, Captain Jack Valdy?
-No You are Probably mistaken-answered Jack Nervously, but before he could actually finish Saying This, the man Already Shouted to everyone:
-JACK VALDY IS HERE!!! WHO EVER WANTS SOME MORE STUFF IN THEIR POCKETS, GET HIM!!!!-Literally a Second After This, Almost Everyone Jumped On The table The Jack's Gang Was Sitting. One Of Those was Close on Stabbing Jack, But Louise Shot him before he Could do it. Killy Took his Sword And Moved the Table upside Down So Everyone who jumped on it fell. Conn Took a Sword too and attacked everyone around and Perceisha Started Punching every single person that Came in front of him. In Short, Jack was the only one To Not Do anything...a Few Minutes Later, someone Called The Spanish Soldiers And They came in And Instantly, Everyone stopped fighting.
-What Is Wrong With you People?!!-Shouted one of The Soldiers.
-It is Jack Valdy!!!-Said The man That Told everyone Who Is Jack, After saying this, he pointed his finger at Jack.
-Really?-Asked The Soldier Surprised.
-Yes!-Agreed Jack Smiling.-These Half Drunk People Have Recognized the Fabulous Jack Valdy From a Distance Of 10 Meters Without even Knowing How I Look Like! That's Right! I Am Jack Valdy!! For Drunk idiots Like you i am, But for Normal and elegant people like them I am Mr.Hopkins, The Fisherman, That came here For trading.-After Finishing saying this, the man That Sayed that he Was Jack Got So Angry That He Jumped On Him but The Soldiers Stopped Him.
-You'll Sleep In Prison Tonight!-Said The Soldier Holding The Man And They Soon left. And The Fighters Have Stopped the fight. Jack was Really Surprised, the Man That Said he Was Jack Was in fact the Man from The Beginning! Remember The Guy That Said: IF I WONT CUT SOMEONE's HEAD IT's GONNA BE YOURS!!! It Was Him. Conn Was Right, His Popularity Grows.

Thx For Your Time! :) (It's Probably The most Detailed Chapter so far...)

No feedback ;=; (I Draw Better Than I Write i guess?)
Chapter 13-The Resources
New Characters: @@TheBlackHamood
WARNING!!! LEVEL OF BAD LANGUAGE HAS GOT UP TO 1!!! (Some bad Words Will be in the Chapter)

The Woman Finally Brought what the Jack's Gang wanted. Everyone except Perceisha got Bottles of rum.

-We should probably finish this shit faster.-Suggested Killy.-The Guy Knows you, The AU Will soon Find this Out And we Will Be Hunted.
-Well, first Watch your language-Started Jack-And second, We Will Finish this "shit" as soon as Possible.
-Killy's Right!-said Louise-We Almost Died Right Now! I don't Need More problems!
-I Said...-Started Jack but He got Interrupted by Louise.
-WE DON"T NEED PROBLEMS!!!-Shouted Louise, after Louise Said this, Jack Started:
-As one Wise Man once Said, The Problem is Not Problem, is Your altitude About the problem. I Convinced These Guys that i am not Myself, And do you really Believe that they will Believe the Drunk Idiot That they just Captured?-after Saying This, Louise Took a Bottle and sat on the table.-And About the "shit", Do You know Where the AU Office is? Me Neither. We Need Resources...-After Finishing Saying this, He looked Smiling at Connmeister. Connmeister Smiled back.
-Are you thinking about What i am Thinking?-Asked killy.
-Hamood!-Said Conn.-After saying This, the Whole Gang Left the tavern.
-Who is That Hamood?-Asked perceisha.
-The Most Important Bureau Of Information In The Whole Pirate History, Mate!-Answered Jack.
The Gang Got far in the Village Until They arrived To One Shop That Sells Weapons. The Shop Was called: "Soldier's Right Hand". They Entered In and Saw a Man Looking at The Swords, there was only one man in the shop.
-Hamoodeh, the buddy!-Shouted Connmeister.
-OH CONN!!!-Shouted Hamood Back. He Started Smiling but a Second after he Saw Jack's Face, he Stopped Smiling, approached to Jack and... You Probably All Know What Happened don't You? That's Right! An Another straight Punch in His Face.
-Ahh.... When Will This Stop?-Asked Jack himself.-I Understand Conn, BUT WHY YOU WOULD PUNCH ME?!!-Shouted Jack.
-Because The info Is not Free, And the Last Time You Forgot to Pay me, Well This Time, You Payed forward, So what's the Deal?-Asked Hamood. After Hamood Asked this, Jack shown The Key.

Thx for Your Time :) (WHEN WILL THE PUNCHING STOP?!! :()

 

No Feedback Again ;=; (COMMENT OR I WILL DIE)
Characters: @SameGuysIPresume
Chapter 14-The AU Office.

-Holey Merry!-said Hamood.-So you Need to get In The AU office I Guess?
-Yeah,-Started jack-But I would wait till the night, Loads of guards Looking around, The night Will be More Safe for us!
-True-Agreed Louise.-After she said this, The gang has waited for 3 Hours till the Night Comes! Of course, They weren't Simply sitting and Waiting, they were playing Poker, sleeping, practicing Sword battles and etc. When the night has finally Come, they left the shop and followed Hamood. They Went far through the village and came in The Forest, Until they have arrived To a Kind of a Cave blocked with rocks.
-There's an Another Entrance.-Said Hamood and Walked around the cave until He Stopped, and Kicked the kind of a Wall. It was So Unstable, that it broke from One Hit!
-Ladies first!-Said Conn Smiling.-Louise Entered in Without a Word or Smile, Or anything... Then everyone Else Got in.
-They Moved the base I Guess?-Said Perceisha.
-Yeah, and it's Not the First Time!-Confirmed Hamood. The Entrance Led To Stairs That Went Down underground. It was Really Dark Inside, you could Barely see your Own Hands inside. Longer they Walked, darker It was. They walked for a Few Minutes Until someone with a Torch stopped them.
-Who Are you?-asked the man with a Torch.
-And who are you?-asked Jack.
-I am The main Leader Of the Assassins Unity.-answered the Man With a Torch. After he Said that, Jack Showed him the Key.
-I Guess Your Jack...-Continued The Man With a Torch.-Follow me. And we Discuss about it.-The Gang followed him, They walked Some more Minutes and they finally arrived to a Huge Room, With a Huge table, With loads of food and Drinks.-Take a Seat.-The Man With a Torch Has blew On The Torch Because There Was a Lot Of Torches Around, And There was Enough light For Everyone.

FEEDBACK OR I DIE!!! IF I DIE, NO MORE CHAPTERS!!! IF NO MORE CHAPTERS, NO MORE STORY!!! IF NO MORE STORY....ehhm... No More Story?

 

YOU EVIL!!! YOU FORCE ME TO DOUBLE POST ;=;
Anyway:
Character: @Me, @LouiseXminerX, @Killy_Kiid, @TheBlackHamood @Perceisha @connmeister
New Characters: @MappyTurtle
Chapter 15-The Proof.

The Gang Sat on The Chairs infront Of The Table. Killy And Conn Started Eating And Drinking Everything That Was on The Table, they both were pretty Hungry.
-So, If i Give The Key Back, What Will Happen?-asked Jack Smiling.
-Well,-started The Leader Of the AU-Remember the Island, We have Taken you to There, Called Island of The Skull. Do You remember that Island That Had Loads and Loads Of Gold In its Caves?
-Yeh, Was Pretty spectacular... but!-Shouted Jack with Such a Great Suspense that Conn and Killy Have Instantly Stopped Eating.-I Don't Remember Where it was. You Have taken me There as a Prisoner, And I Could Barely see The Island.
-I Will give you The Map, That leads you There.-Said The Leader of The AU. After he Said That, one 20 years old girl Entered In The Room. she Was Dressed Properly.
-Hello There, Sir!-Said The girl. When She Saw the Jack And His Gang, She Started Smiling.-Jack Valdy! I Heard You Have Succeed To Steal The AU Key!-Said The Girl Smiling.
-Actually...-Started Perceisha-It was Me. I Stole The Key.
-Probably...-Started Jack Smiling at Mappy.-But! It was ME who Got You There, And it's ME who is a Captain, And it's to ME that She Is Talking to! By The Way, Long Time No See Mappy!
-Alright.-Continued The Man.-We Will give You The Map That Leads You There.
-Where's The Proof?-asked Jack Still Smiling.
-Proof Of What?
-That It Guides To The Island But Not Somewhere Else!
-We Have Captured you Not Far From Tortuga The last Time, And We Were Not That Far From it. The Island Is To West From Tortuga. We Will Give you The Map, and If it Shows That It's Not Where Tortuga is, We Are Lying.
-Great!-Said Killy-Now Give us The Map, we Give you the Key And We Leave this palace Like if Nothing Happened!

(You Should Probably Read Everything From The Beginning for Know What Is Actually Happening. x3)