5th Story: The Planets Of Shadows

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  1. IAMINACTIVEBYE

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    Chapter 10! WOO
    This chapter will be extra long cause you know... 10 is a special number ^-^
    But anyway, here's the characters:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @Radii
    @xX0Sven0Xx
    @Ninjaman
    @nala
    @TheUndeadBrave
    @TheBlackHamood
    @Arelane
    @BunnySellz
    @IDeadlyFighterI
    @Kazuke
    New Character:
    @Blumeire
    Enjoy ^_^

    Chapter 10 - A Cruel Welcome
    As my eyes openned slowly, I realised I was in some sort of old jail. Vines hanged from the walls and bones were scattered around this jail. I was in a cage with BunnySellz, but she was still unconscious. The rest were also in some cages. BlackHamood woke up, looking like he's in more pain. "Louise... Where are we?" He coughed. "I'm not sure..." I sighed. The rest woke up, all frightenned and confused. "I hate jails! Oh, these jails frighten me..." BunnySellz screamed.
    I saw guards around us, all staring at us like we stole their cookies. NinjaMan kept shaking the bars in front of him. "LET US OUT! WE'VE DONE NOTHING!" He screamed. A guard pointed a gun at him, and he sat straight down. "We do not allow Alpha's on this planet!" He shouted. "We're not Alpha's! We're humans!" Sven shouted. "Tell it to the judge kid." The judge sneered.
    Suddenly, something caught my eye, like someone was just there for a second... but as I blinked, it disappeared. "Louise, what are you staring at?" Radii asked. "Eh? Oh. nothing." I sighed.
    I noticed some smoke in a cage that was in another room. The guards followed the smoke, and once they entered the room, they didn't come back. "Maybe there's a fire!" King Undead shouted. Suddenly, for 5 seconds, someone came to BunnySellz and I's cage, and the door openned. The rest of the doors openned, and I saw the weird mysterious figure nice and clear, and it looked like some agent with sunglasses and all sorts of gadgets stuck to his belt. "Agent Kazuke here, I have taken the guards out and have released the prisoners. We will now escape jail and complete the mission." He said. "Wooow... an agent! Can I have your autograph?" Radii said with glowing. "Not now ma'am, you need to escape. Follow my lead." Agent Kazuke said.
    We followed him to the emergency door, and entered it, and we seemed to be at the back of the jail. Suddenly, a guard spotted us, and was about to call back up, but DeadlyFighter got a knife and threw at him. "Nice work Agent DeadlyFighter." Kazuke said. "Agent? Ehh?" Bunny wondered. "Let me explain, when I was gone Agent Kazuke helped me escape, but he then had to leave me since he had some missions on this planet, also known as Planet Titans." He explained. "This planet do not like Alpha's coming here, or any people from Planet Kye, as they believe they are the one's who also told the God Alien to make earth, which made everyone on this planet leave... but we're unsure who's in charge of these guards and this jail." DeadlyFighter explained. Suddenly, the radio from Kazuke's belt said "Agent Kazuke, This is Blumeire, your boss. I have hacked into the security camara's on the jail, and I found Arelane in there. I hacked his identity and its clear that it said he's the one who's in charge of these guards, and is trying to kill us all." "Understood! Agent Kazuke, out." Kazuke responded. "Arelane... that pesky old rat!" I shouted. "Who?" Queen Nala asked. "He's the one who gave me that fire blade, and tried to get me killed... and he also bruned down the village and tree's." I explained.
    Suddenly, the guards spotted us and surronded us. Agent Kazuke kicked a guard, but before he could punch another guard, a guard got some sort of laser that froze him. "AGENT KAZUKE!" DeadlyFighter screamed. "Agent Kazuke! Answer me! Are you okay? AGENT KAZUUUUKEEEEE" Blumeire's voice screamed out of the radio. Then, in between two guards, Arelane stood there, smoking a cigarette. "Well well well, is it isn't the loser team. I'm quite surprised you arrived all the way here from Planet Kye all the way to Planet Titen. How cute." He sneered. "How did you get here..." King Undead shouted. "I was hiding in your engine room, but I escaped at the last second and the guards catched me. So surprise, nice to meet you all again." He said. "Guards, kill them." He said. "NOOO!" Radii cried, before their bullets could enter our body, DeadlyFighter did some weird shield around us, making the bullets bounce off. He walked backwards, and so did we. He threw some needles at the guards, making them all fall asleep. As Arelane stared at the guards, we fell into a deep, deep hole, and a rock went on top of the entrance. Arelane did not see where we went, and the guards searched the area, but never looked under the rock. "Find those pesky kids, or otherwise their lives will be done." Arelane sneered.
    The guards then took Kazuke's frozen body back to jail.
    To Be Continued...
    If you want to be in the story, please hurry and comment below because I will say no more characters soon...
    Remember to leave your feedback below, and I hope you enjoyed ^_^
    Thanks For Reading!!! :D​
     
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  2. TheUndeadBrave

    TheUndeadBrave Life's too short, make the most of it!

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    I'm lovin this story so far!
    It's really freakin good.
     
  3. Blumeire

    Blumeire slave at the local school district

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    This has inspired me! :0
    I'm honestly really inspired to make a story now. If I do
    make one, I will 100% Put you in the story and give you credit for the inspiration!
     
  4. IAMINACTIVEBYE

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    It's true, but almost everyone's stories are inspired by mine, and I'm so glad you are too ^_^
    Good luck making your story, I can't wait to see yours :D
     
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    Agent DeadlyFighter in your command xD
    Lovin It !
     
  6. IAMINACTIVEBYE

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    o.o I'm getting famous for making these stories...
    Characters:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @Radii
    @xX0Sven0Xx
    @Ninjaman
    @nala
    @TheUndeadBrave
    @TheBlackHamood
    @Arelane
    @BunnySellz
    @IDeadlyFighterI
    @Kazuke
    @Blumeire
    I'm not sure if I need anymore characters, sorry ;-;
    But if you REALLY want to be in the story, fingers cross.
    But anyway, enjoy ^_^
    Chapter 11 - The Fun Crusher Meteorite
    As I landed, I realised I was on some squishy and soft floor. Then my face landed in it as well, while everyone was landing on top of me. When everyone finally hopped of my back like a trampoline, I looked around, and this base looked so... beautiful.
    Diamonds hanged from the ceilings, gold covered the walls, and robots made of diamonds and golds worked through the base, cleaning every corner. "Welcome to heaven. Also known as, Mother Base." DeadlyFighter explained.
    "If you need refreshments, just go to your left. If you want to have some massages, take a right. You can explore the rest." DeadlyFighter said.
    BlackHamood was still quite hurt, and some robots took him to the medic room. Everyone was all over the place. Me, Radii, BunnySellz and Queen Nala were in the massage room, and it was really like heaven. "If I could live here, this is would be the best life ever." Radii cheered. Some robots gave us from drinks, and the drinks were sprinkled with gold and diamond, which made it taste better. Deadky Fighter was just relaxing in the refreshment bar, while NinjaMan, Sven and King Undead were hanging out in the pool. Yep, it sure was heaven.
    I bascailly fell asleep while in the massage room, because that's how good it was, but I was interrupted by a huge scream.
    As I walked with my eyes half open to where the scream was heard, I saw Queen Nala, freaked out while in the computer room, where 100s of computer laid. Everyone crowded her, all confused. "Your Majesty, is something wrong?" King Undead asked. "Look..." Queen Nala pointed at the screen. Then, we saw 6 meteorites, heading to earth, Planet Kye, planet Titan and three other planets. "Queen Nala... it says these meteorites are heading to all these planets in... 5 days." Sven said. "Holy Cheeseburgers!... I forgot to feed my dog." NinjaMan said. "Didn't you even listen? Your dog might even die cause of the meteorite!" I shouted. "Oh..." NinjaMan sighed. "I'm sure Kazuke and Blumeire know what to do!" BunnySellz cheered. "Your right BunnySellz. We must rescue him quickly and nicely... Who volunteers?" DeadlyFighter asked. We all put our hand up, accept for Queen Nala, shivering. King Undead grabbed her hand and threw in up.
    "Agent DeadlyFighter, Your guest is fully healed. Have a nice day." A robot came, and 4 robots carried BlackHamood to where we were, and he looked really happy. "Those robots were awesome! They gave me a massage, free drinks, and look at me! I look like I just came out of a treasure chest!" BlackHamood laughed. We all frowned. I explained to BlackHamood what was happening, and he frowned as well. "I see... BunnySellz, get the sword." He said. BunnySellz hurried to the weapon room and came back with like a Katana. "It's time to free a missing soul..." He said holding his sword up.
    To Be Continued...
    Hope you like this chapter!
    Leave your feedback below, but if you REALLY want to be in the story, I'll try my best to fit you in. I will let you all know when I am definitely not going to add any more characters, so hurry and ask :)
    Thanks For Reading!!! :D
     
  7. CaptainJackValdy

    CaptainJackValdy I got a plan to save the server, just have faith

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    *gets banned for a week*
    *thinks that i am a dumb good guy*
    *comes back*
    *reads everything*
    *becomes happy because he is a smartass villain :D*
    Nice chapters
     
  8. IAMINACTIVEBYE

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    I was about to not make a new chapter today due to homework, but I just wanted to make a chapter for you guys :)
    Characters:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @Radii
    @xX0Sven0Xx
    @Ninjaman
    @nala
    @TheUndeadBrave
    @TheBlackHamood
    @Arelane
    @BunnySellz
    @IDeadlyFighterI
    @Kazuke
    @Blumeire
    Enjoy ^_^

    Chapter 12 - The Returned Soul
    "We first need a volunteer for someone to distract the guards. So any volunteers?" BlackHamood asked. Sven pointed at Queen Nala. Queen Nala tried to run, but Sven already grabbed her hand and she hopped out of the hole, and of course the guards spotted her. So they chased her into the forest. "I had to have some revenge of her for almost killing me." Sven frowned. "Okay, we'll need to split up into groups so we can find Kazuke faster. Louise, BunnySellz and Sven, your group 1. Ninjaman, Radii and BlackHamood, your group 2. King Undead, your coming with me." DeadlyFighter explained. As we sneaked out of the hole, my group went to the main entrance, group 2 went to the emergency exit and Group 3 dug a hole next to the jail.
    As I looked around, I heard someone, crying for help, so I went to where the voice echoed. Bunny followed me but Sven didn't notice.
    NinjaMan heard whispered on the east side of the jail, so he headed that way while Radii followed him cause she was hopeless at finding things, but BlackHamood saw someone at the west of jail but it then rushed into a room, so he followed it. King Undead and DeadlyFighter mistakenly fell into a under ground basement, and found some computers that seemed suspicious...
    As I stopped, I saw Kazuke in a jail, but he seemed a bit different. Suddenly, Bunny noticed something and cried "Louise! That's not hi-" "But then, needle shot at our back, and we fell asleep. Turns out Kazuke was fake, and it was just disguised as a guard. Sven saw me and Bunny get dragged away, but before he could rescue us, the guard almost spotted him, so he ran.
    NinjaMan and Radii found the real Kazuke, who was whispered since half of his mouth and body was still frozen. "Kazuke! Are you okay?" Radii cried. "Radii? Thank goodness your here! Free Agent Kazuke and bring him back to the base before the guards could find you!" Blumeire's voice crackled through the radio. NinjaMan got his little knife from his pocket and cut the lock in half, making the door open. Radii and NinjaMan held Kazuke's body and walked to the exit.
    BlackHamood got his katana out in front of him, ready for any danger to occur, and Arelane then appeared. "It's nice of you to visit BlackHamood." Arelane smiled. Arelane got a flame blade that was twice the size of the one I got, and BlackHamood held his katana in front of him, preparing for a battle.
    King Undead had a fiddle with the computers, but then something popped up. The computer said on it's screen "PLAN". King Undead clicked 'PLAN' and paragraphs of words appeared. DeadlyFighter saw the words and realised the words were in a secret code. DeadlyFighter hacked into the computer making the code's unlock, and it said "Plan: Find the legendary god alien and kill it so no life form will live ever again. Progress to developing map of space: 60%". King Undead seemed surprised, and DeadlyFighter seemed mad. "If the map reaches 100%, they would find the legendary god alien and end life!" DeadlyFighter explained. "We must warn the others, until-" King Undead was inturrupted, as the speakers in the corner of the room shouted "WARNING! WARNING! INTURRDER ALERT IN COMPUTER ROOM! WARNING! WARNING!" Then guards filled the room.
    BlackHamood kept fighting Arelane, but BlackHamood fell down. He kept defending himself, which made it almost impossible for Arelane to finally found his weak spot. "I'm sure your afraid of heights, right?" Arelane asked. "How did you know?" BlackHamood widenned his eyes. "Cause that's why I developed this." Arelane got a remote from his pocket and pressed one of the buttons, and the floor under BlackHamood sprung him out of the ceiling into a lake. He didn't know how to swim so he drowned until he reached the floor of sand, until something grabbed him.
    Radii and NinjaMan escaped with Kazuke in peace.They then saw DeadlyFighter and King Undead, come out of a hole. "We must warn the others and find the Legendary God Alien. Where Louise, Bunny and BlackHamood?" DeadlyFighter shouted. "I don't know... They might have gotten captured!" Radii cried.
    To Be Continued...
    Hope you enjoyed this chapter!
    Remember to leave your feedback below and if you want to be in the story, I'll try my best to fit you in!
    Also, please remember to comment because I hate double posting, so if no one comments, I may not be able to continue the story, because I hate breaking rules ;-;
    Thanks For Reading!!! :D​
     
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    CaptainJackValdy I got a plan to save the server, just have faith

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    Its nice to pick me as a villain. Im the only smartass villain in forums :3 Nice chapter
     
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    This is beautiful <3
     
  11. IAMINACTIVEBYE

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    Happy Chinese New Year everyone! I forgot to say this earlier, but here I am ^-^
    Characters:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @Radii
    @xX0Sven0Xx
    @Ninjaman
    @nala
    @TheUndeadBrave
    @TheBlackHamood
    @Arelane
    @BunnySellz
    @IDeadlyFighterI
    @Kazuke
    @Blumeire
    Enjoy ^-^
    Chapter 13 - Mother Base's Grave
    As I woke up slowly, I was confused and I had a blank mind. I saw BunnySellz also waking up, and as soon as she saw the view, she shuffled back against the wall, scared. "Louise, where are we, I forgot what happened!" BunnySellz cried. "I... I don't know. All I remember is going into this base until..." Some guards arrived, so I shut my mouth. They unlocked the door, but before I could punched them, I realised my hands had hand cuffs, so I couldn't move my hands very well. They leaded us to a room with blood in every corner and some skulls and dead bodies on the floor. I shivered. I then saw a chair with a basket in front of us, and that's when a horrorfying thought entered my head: Our head's are going to get chopped off.
    Meanwhile, Radii was about to go straight into the entrance of the jail, but Sven bumped into her, making them both fall down. "SVEN! Where's Louise and BunnySellz?" Radii asked. "Some guards took them! Follow me!" Sven said. Radii followed Sven, but before NinjaMan, DeadlyFighter and King Undead could follow as well, they saw one of the robots from Mother Base, dragging BlackHamood to the rock that leaded to Mother Base. DeadlyFighter rushed to BlackHamood, while sweat covered his face. "BlackHamood! Are you okay?" DeadlyFighter asked. He seemed unconsious. "Robot's, bring BlackHamood to the medic room." DeadlyFighter demanded. Before the robots could continue to go to the base, they hesitated to. "DeadlyFighter, why aren't the robots going to the base?" NinjaMan asked. "Robots, I demand you to take BlackHamood to the medic room is Mother Base!" DeadlyFighter shouted. Then 20 seconds later of DeadlyFighter shouting, the robots finally replied saying "Unable to find Mother Base's location." King Undead picked up the rock on top of the base, and he seemed shocked. "Guys..." He choked. The hole's ladders were ripped and burnt. They all jumped to the buttom of the base, but instead of falling into some sort of pillow, they instead landed on some ashes. They looked around, and Mother Base was destroyed. All the diamonds and gold on the walls were stolen, and the robots all disappeared apart from their eyes. DeadlyFighter's cheeks started to be covered in tears.
    Meanwhile, Sven and Radii ran, all sweating and puffing, but they didn't give up. Radii peeked through a door, and they saw me and BunnySellz. "LOU-" "Shh, the guards will hear you. We can't go in and fighter ourselves, we'll be dead." Sven whispered. Then, out of no where, Queen Nala rushed past Sven and Radii with HUNDREDS of guards chasing her, and Sven tried to laugh.
    Queen Nala entered the room where me and BunnySellz were, and the guards were just about to chop off our heads, until the guards behind Queen Nala missed their bullets and killed the guards behind us, setting us free.
    Then, BunnySellz gave me a flame blade. "I found it... and I just wanted to return it to you." BunnySellz smiled. I smiled as well, then I unleashed the flames from the blade, and it spiralled around the room, burning all the guards.
    The guards then melted into ashes, and Queen Nala could finally breathe. Radii hugged me. "Oh thank goodness your alive! I thought I'd never see you again!" Radii cried. "We're fine... Where's the rest of you guys?" I wondered. "Possibly at Mother Base, come on." Sven leaded the way, but we noticed BlackHamood with a robot holding him. "BlackHamood!" BunnySellz cried. He finally woke up. He coughed and some water came out of his mouth as well. He bended down on the ground. "Oh lord... What happened?" BlackHamood coughed. BunnySellz put her hand on BlackHamood. "It's okay... Let's go back to the base. As we went to the base, we landed in some ashes, which was strange, and the base didn't look like heaven at all, it looked like hell.
    I saw DeadlyFighter, kneeling while tears dropped onto the ground. "The years... I spent... *sniff*, Making this base..." He cried. "We made this base god dammit! Then they played us like a damn fiddle!" He shouted. Kazuke then fell down into the ashes. He spoke into the radio "This is Agent Kazuke, I'm finally free, but the base has been destroyed, any suggestions Blumeire" He asked. "Aye, leave the planet and we must find the God Alien. I found out in about 4 days the meteriotes will be landing. So you better make a rocket ship soon." BluMeire's voice crackled. "Understood, out." Kazuke replied. "Citizens, do not worry of finding a way to get to the planet where the god lies, A space ship has been found!" He cheered.
    To Be Continued...
    Liked this chapter/story? Feel free to comment below your feedback to brighten my day,
    I'm not sure if I'll accept anymore character requests... sorry ;-;
    FUN FACT: The quote from the story: "We made this base god dammit! Then they played us like a damn fiddle!" Is from the quote from Metal Gear Solid Ground Zeros. Just wanted to point that out.
    Hope you enjoyed this chapter, and beware: This story may come to an end soon...
    Thanks For Reading!!! :D
     
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    I thought that its me who will be there to... you know, have fun of you? XD nice chapter anyway
     
  13. TheUndeadBrave

    TheUndeadBrave Life's too short, make the most of it!

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    TheUndeadBrave Life's too short, make the most of it!

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  15. IAMINACTIVEBYE

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    Welcome to Chapter 14 :)
    By the way, there's a possible chance that this would be my longest story I've made since I have many ideas I should add to this story :P
    Characters:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @Radii
    @xX0Sven0Xx
    @Ninjaman
    @nala
    @TheUndeadBrave
    @TheBlackHamood
    @Arelane
    @BunnySellz
    @IDeadlyFighterI
    @Kazuke
    @Blumeire
    New Characters:
    Chazzvid
    Brynstar
    Yes, I know these guys don't have an account on this website, but I promised them to add them, so hopefully you readers won't mind
    But anywho, enjoy ^-^
    Chapter 14 - Planet Kreen
    As we walked past the bushes and tree's, I noticed a very old ship, half tipped into a small lake. Vines we're hanging from the ship's body and insects scattered around the space ship. "It maybe old, but I'm sure it will work." Kazuke explained. NinjaMan got a knife and hopped on the ship, cutting all the vines off and squishing all the bugs.
    As he finally cleaned up the ship, all that was left was the muddy water surrounding the ship. I noticed a remote on the floor that was covered in dust. I blowed up the dust and pressed a button and the doors openned from the ship and a little bridge came to our feet. "Excellent. Well, hop in. I'm sure you know how to ride a space ship, right Sven and NinjaMan?" Kazuke asked. "I'm sure we can." Sven nodded.
    Radii saw BlackHamood, crawling to where we were. She couldn't believe we almost forgot him. Radii carried him on her shoulder and slowly walked into the ship.
    While everyone was ready, Sven turned on the ship, and the ship slowly floated off the water. "Good afternoon everyone, this is Sven speaking. We are going to fly to where the God Alien is and please hold tight as this ride will take 1 day. Thank you for boarding this ship." The speakers crackled. We all took our seats while BunnySellz took care of BlackHamood in the back. Suddenly, I looked behind and the window at the back showed Arelane, with people with huge missiles, just about to shoot at us.
    DeadlyFighter ran and then made a shield around the ship, which made the ship almost impossible to hit.
    However, the missiles were pretty strong as the shield started to fade out. The ship then started to glide through the air and boosted out of the clouds. Then a missile hit the shield, and the shield faded out. NinjaMan made the ship go at 100% speed, and the ship zoomed out of the planet. Suddenly, a missile hit the engine room, and the ship started to slow down. "WE'VE BEEN HIT! ALERT! ALERT!" NinjaMan screamed. We all started to panick. Queen Nala held onto King Undead as they cried and Radii started to hug me. Everyone was screaming, thinking this was the end. The ship started to point down. It zoomed across the stars and headed in an unknown direction.
    Suddenly, a huge thud was heard from the ceiling. The ship seemed silence and the speed decreased. I looked through the window, and a massive claw was taking our ship. "What is happening Agent Kazuke. Is the crew safe?" BluMeire asked. "The ship seems to be held by a massive claw..." Kazuke said in his radio.
    Suddenly, I looked at the other window, and a massive space ship was there, almost the size of earth. The claw brought us into the openning of the ship, where many spaceship were also being held.
    The doors openned, and we slowly walked out, and people surrounded us. "Welcome to Ship 105, we welcome you aboard. Next destination, Planet Kreen." The speakers shouted. This space ship looked like the ones in Star Wars, and it felt amazing. People leaded us to the hallway, which leaded to the front of the ship, and I saw a robot and a guy working on 100 controls. "Is the ship here?" The robot asked. "Yes sir." The person in front of us said. The robot and guy turned around. "Welcome citizens. I'm Chazzvid, and do not worry, your safe." Chazzvid waved. "I'm Brynstar. I'm Chazzvid's buddy. Welcome aboard." He welcomed. "How long did it take this make this masterpiece?" King Undead asked. "Decades, but now its fully complete." Chazzvid explained. "Okay, next destination is going to be Planet Kreen. Power starting to increase." Brynstar explained. They took their seats and started to touch the controls. The people around us then leaded us to a small room with about 20 beds. "The ride will take about 30 minutes. If you need anything, call us." The people said. They left us and we settled in. "This is so cool." NinjaMan cheered. "Why can't we live here..." Radii sighed.
    30 minutes past, and we looked out the window, and we seemed to be in a different planet with a huge city in front of us. The bottom of the ship then thudded, and the doors openned. People walked out of the ship and Chazzvid and Brynstar leaded us out.
    "Welcome, to Planet Kreen!" Chazzvid and Brynstar cheered at the same time.
    To Be Continued...
    Hope you enjoyed this chapter!
    However, I'm sorry but anyone who wants to be in the story may not appear. Sorry
    But theres a little chance I'll find a little slot for you.
    Remember to leave your feedback below and stay tuned for more chapters!
    Thanks For Reading!!! :D​
     
  16. CaptainJackValdy

    CaptainJackValdy I got a plan to save the server, just have faith

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    2 Really Important Things.
    1-Why Do i Want To Kill You all? I Know I am A Villain... But even a Villain Wont Kill People For No Reason...
    2-This Is Awesome Story, But Pls Check Mine if It's good.
     
  17. IAMINACTIVEBYE

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    1- I'll explain in the next chapter, thx for requesting this suggestion btw :)
    2- I'll check it out now :)
     
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    I'm incredibly sorry for the double post ;-; Please don't kill me.
    But anyway, Chapter 15 is here, and our story is coming to a close end.
    Characters:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @Radii
    @xX0Sven0Xx
    @Ninjaman
    @nala
    @TheUndeadBrave
    @TheBlackHamood
    @Arelane
    @BunnySellz
    @IDeadlyFighterI
    @Kazuke
    @Blumeire
    @Chazzvid
    @Brynstar

    Enjoy ^-^

    Chapter 15 - Attack Of Titans
    The place looked beautiful while the sky shined with joy. The people smiled as we walked past. "We shall lead you to your new home." Chazzvid explained. We went to the last house that was seperated from the others, which looked even more beautiful from the other homes. As we looked inside, the walls looked so bright, it was like made of gold. We all had
    separate rooms, and this house was about 5 stories high. "Please enjoy, if you need anything, we'll be in the Mayor's Hall next to the sea." Brynstar said. Chazzvid and Brynstar then marched out of the door, and we all felt so excited. Kazuke went to the back where there was a pool, and he looked through the telescope. "Louise, I need you for a minute please." Kazuke asked. I walked out of the house and I saw him frown as he looked out of the telescope. We pointed at the telescope, which I guess is a sign of him saying to look through, and as I looked through, 100s of mini ships headed to this planet. "It's Arelane." He sighed.
    I was mad, and I ran out of the house into the Mayor's Hall. "Greetings Louise, is there trouble?" Chazzvid asked. "Do you know Arelane?" I asked. They both frowned. "I'm guessing you wish to know why he doesn't like you people. Let me explain:
    Aye, King Undead may have explained before, but the people of Planet Kye told the Legendary God Alien to make earth due to the population of Kye increasing rapidly." Brynstar explained. "But when Earth was made, they were made and turned the God into stone and kept him away far away on an unknown planet.
    You see, Arelane was... great buds with the God, and was heart broken when he heard the God was turned to stone. His hate turned to the people of Kye, and started to try and kill every one of them, burning there homes and many lives were done." Chazzvid sighed.
    "He doesn't kill the people in earth since he does not want to disrespect the God's creation, so he only killed the people of Kye.
    He then ruled Planet Titan as a prison area, and a
    horrifying fact is..." Chazzvid held his breath. "There are no more Alpha's left." Brynstar sighed. "That means... King Undead and Queen Nala were from EARTH?" I cried. They nodded. "Alpha's can live for 100 of years, and no one from the past remembers how to tell Alpha's and Humans apart, so its quite possible there are still some Alpha's, but its quite unlikely." Brynstar explained. Before I could ask me, I heard people scream. I looked outside, and ships surrounded the town. "Enemies detected! Bryn, lead the people to safety, I'll destroy the Titans!" Chazzvid shouted. Chazzvid's arms turned into missiles and shot them at some ship's, but more and more kept coming.
    People screamed and ran all over the place while the people from Titan were killing many people. I saw my friends being leaded by Brynstar. I screamed as a guard behind Brynstar was about to stab him, but DeadlyFighter just shot him with his gun. Everyone went underground in a little room, and the doors locked, realising I was stuck with Chazzvid. "Louise, run!" Chazzvid screamed. "I won't leave!" I screamed. A guard came in front of him and almost stabbed me, but Chazzvid shot bullets at him.
    Chazzvid's arms then turned into mini guns, and 100 of bullets came flying out.
    I looked in my pocket, and I remember BunnySellz giving me a blade of fire, and when I unleashed the flames, it suddenly caught onto the houses, making them burn. "LOUISE! TAKE THAT WEAPON AWAY NOW!" Chazzvid cried. I threw it without thinking, and the flames bursted, and before the flames could reach Chazzvid, Kazuke chopped the blade in half with his knife. I realised all my friends came out, fighting the guards. "COME BACK!" Bryn shouted, but they just kept fighting. "Bryn, there not weak. Let them fight!" Chazzvid shouted. Bryn understood and started fighting. I had no weapons, so I ran. I hid behind a building and Radii also did as well. "I thought you were dead!" Radii cried. but then, the building was also caught on fire, so I jumped out of the way so I didn't get burn't.
    There were too many people, and I saw BlackHamood fight Arelane. "YOU KILLED MY BEST FRIEND!" Arelane shouted. "HE GAVE YOU EARTH!" He shouted again. "ARELANE! CALM DOWN!" BlackHamood shouted. I realised all my friends were getting tired, and soon the people from Titans would kill them, so I went on the ship, while Radii went on. "EVERYONE! GET ON! THERE'S TOO MANY!" I screamed. No one heard me, so they kept fighting. Brynstar heard me as well, so he went to the Mayor's Hall and the speakers played the emergency tone. Everyone screamed and then headed to the ship.

    The doors closed, and everyone was in, but none of the people of the town lived. Chazzvid knelled down, full of sadness, while Brynstar patted his back. "I... I don't understand..." He sniffed. Sven and NinjaMan went to the pilots seats and drove out of the planet while everyone on the planet was getting killed by the people from Titan.
    BunnySellz took care of King Undead and Queen Nala as they were a bit hurt. The ship remained in a sudden silence, and a sudden question popped up: Where exactly are we going?
    To Be Continued...
    Hope you enjoyed this story!
    If your wondering what kind of story I might make after this one, its going to be
    SPOILER ALERT
    Its gonna be all the stories I've made like: The 8 Gods Of Hells, War 3.0, The Dragon Of Time, Soulless Powers and The Planets Of Shadows all together into one story, so the Dragon Of Time, my Powers, the Gods Of Hells, the Lost Town and the planets are coming, back, so if you loved my stories, your going to see them AGAIN! :D
    But anyway, leave your feedback below, and stay tuned for the next chapter! :)
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  19. CaptainJackValdy

    CaptainJackValdy I got a plan to save the server, just have faith

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    TheUndeadBrave Life's too short, make the most of it!

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    I can't wait for the next story, that's gonna be awesome!