New Story: The Dragon Of Time

Sure, Plz wait til the next chapter :D

Yeah, like 2-3 more weeks :3

 

BRUH. My school just ended our first semester.

 

My prediction on the last chapter: 20
that means... *gasp* 6 chapters left D:
*screams*
Or is it??? DUN DUN DUN!
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX (Me :D)
@MappyTurtle
@Katy9078
@Nicki1337
@Lyncx
@Tristen690
@Xx_HaLl_Of_FaMe_xX
@BowlingMaster10
@TheBlackHamood
@connorh
@Sanadz
@nalaex
@TheUndeadBrave
And @hammiestar , you'll be in the next chapter RIGHT at the start ^_^
Enjoy ladies and gentlemen!

Chapter 14 - The True Identity
Before we could march to find the wizard thing, Nalaex and Connor unfroze. We were about to scream, while Nicki was staring into the air. "Relax guys, your cool, I'm cool, but Imagen if we were buds which would make us even cooler!" Connor cheered. I kinda was confused, but I guess Katy is a fan of vampires, so she let him in our team. But we had no idea what to do with Nalaex. "I guess you don't want me in the team since I almost killed your friends... so, I guess I'm going." Nalaex sighed. She was about to teleport somewhere, but before we could stop her, she left. Mappy sighed. "So... how do we like get back, we're out of purple powder." Katy wondered. Suddenly, Undead got out some weird GPS, and he showed it to us. "That red dot is the wizard thing, appears to be in Lync's hut. I can teleport you there." Undead explained. We nodded and we all teleported into Lync's hut. The wizard thing turned around. "Give back to stuff, or I'll suck the blood out of you!" Connor hissed. But it just laughed.
And the hood that was covering it's face came off, and you wouldn't believe it but it was LYNC! "WHAT? You mean you teleported us to hell and space, making us almost starve to death, getting defeated AND wasted out time?" BlackHamood shouted. "Nonsence, I was testing you. You survived starvation, you worked as a team. All of you as a team would be no match for Tristen and HallOfFame." Lync explained. Then he gave me the compass and map. We seemed shocked, but survived. I figured out we were a pretty good team.
"So ehm... now what?" Mappy said. Suddenly, we lagged for 2 seconds. "Oh no, the Dragon seems to can't take it no more, we need to get to it's location, FAST!" Bowling shouted. But Lync seemed sad as he lowered his head down. "I'm afraid it will be too late to get to it's location." Lync sighed. "It's location is up in space, taking about 2 weeks to get there, which is a good enough time, but making a vehicle to get us up there would take about month, which would way too late." Lync sighed. We all looked at each other. "We're just going to get out and get some fresh air." I sighed. Connor quickly put sun screen on him so he can't burn in the sun and we went outside.
We all were depressed, thinking all of this was a waste of time, but a huge shadow was in front of us, and when we looked up, we all had huge smiles on our faces.
To Be Continued...
Excitement is building up, wonders in our minds...
Will our hero's win, or will they freeze forever with failure.
Only a couple more chapters left, and get your popcorn and drinks ready, cause the final chapter is coming!
Thanks For Reading!!! :D


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Can't wait for the next chapter!

 

Keep up the good work Louise!!

 

Hopefully this isn't a bump >.<
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@MappyTurtle
@Katy9078
@Nicki1337
@Lyncx
@Tristen690
@Xx_HaLl_Of_FaMe_xX
@BowlingMaster10
@TheBlackHamood
@connorh
@Sanadz
@nalaex
@TheUndeadBrave
New Character:
@hammiestar
Enjoy ^_^

Chapter 15 - The Universe
"When did this rocket ship appear?" Mappy shouted. A huge rocket ship was standing in front of us, but we were unknown who was the owner of this, until someone was standing beside it. "I just wanted to help you save the universe... So good luck." Nalaex sighed. "You can come with us if you want." I suggested. "But I've always been afraid of space, my little sister can come though, she can build you weapons and stuff." And a girl popped out of the window in the rocket ship. "HI! I'm Hammie, but don't think I'm a hamster, but I love hamsters, like do you want a cookie or something?" Hammie shouted. "She can get excited alot, now take care, the rocket ship has 1000s of power inside of it, making it last for 2 weeks, now fair well hero's, hopefully we can meet again." Nalaex waved. "May faith be with you always." Lync smiled. Suddenly, we all froze for a second. "The dragon can't take this anymore! Find the dragon and save the universe, now hurry!" Nalaex shouted. We nodded and entered the ship. "Power is OVER 9000!!! Preparing to launch to space. Have you got the map and compass Nicki?" Hammie asked. "Uhh... Yeah." Hammie chuckled. She quickly ran into the bathroom. "WHERE IS IT! WHERE IS IT!" Nicki screamed.
In 1 hour, we were in space, it felt so weird. Bowling then came with good news and bad news. "Bad news, HallOfFame is really making the Dragon Of Time weak, making it freeze time. There maybe not enough time unless you can make the power of this rocket ship OVER 20000!!!" Bowling shouted. "Fiiine, but I need to cut out the gravity in order to do that." Hammie groaned. Then we were all floating. "it's like being underwater you know, it's such a strange feeling." Katy explained. "Well, what's the good news?" Connor hissed. "Since the gravity is out, this is perfect for us to train so we can get ready, because HallOfFame is super strong, and Tristen aswell." BlackHamood explained. I looked down.
"Louise, is there something wrong?" Katy asked. "Uhh... No, I just need to go into the bathroom." I quickly said.
I waited outside the bathroom door, then finally Nicki ran out crying. I quickly zoomed in and locked the door and I called Tristen. "Thank goodness your alright, thought you were in trouble." Tristen wondered. "Bad news, my friends think your still bad, should I tell them your on our side?" I asked. "No, you can't. Just protect me, then I'll destroy HallOfFame and free the dragon." Tristen explained. "But how?" I wondered. Then Tristen explained, and I understood, so I walked out of the bathroom and Nicki was crying on the ground, with everyone surrounding her.
"The universe is doomed because of you!" BlackHamood shouted. "I'm... I'm So-orry!" Nicki sobbed. "You must go into the dungeon!" Bowling shouted. "Please! I didn't mean to!" Nicki cried. "Connor, take her to the dungeon now." BlackHamood demanded. "Sorry bud, co-captains' orders." Connor sighed. He grabbed Nicki and threw her into the dungeon. "Don't you think this is too far?" I shouted. "She doomed us all. She needed to bring just 2 things, but of course she failed to." Bowling said. I sighed.
I sat next to Nicki near the dungeon. "Will I have to d-d-die?" Nicki cried. "I'm not sure, let's hope they won't kill you." I sighed.
To Be Continued...
Don't forget to comment below on what you think of the story or suggestions ^_^
Only a couple more chapters left! :O
Thanks For Reading!!! :D


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Farwell Heroes....

 

Can't wait for more :D

 

Can't wait for the next chapter!

 

Meep :3
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@MappyTurtle
@Katy9078
@Nicki1337
@Lyncx
@Tristen690
@Xx_HaLl_Of_FaMe_xX
@BowlingMaster10
@TheBlackHamood
@connorh
@Sanadz
@nalaex
@TheUndeadBrave
@hammiestar
Enjoooooy :D

Chapter 16 - The Find And Discovery
"Alright, time for training, everyone in a line!" Bowling shouted. I walked in line, while I kept turning around at Nicki. "Alright, we will first have to dodge. Find a partner and one of them has to punch the other, while the other has to dodge." BlackHamood demanded. Everyone got a partner accept for me. I looked around, and only Undead was standing there. I sighed and tried to dodge his punches. "Do you know where the compass or map is?" I asked. But then he punched me. "Ops, sorry. And uh, not sure," He said. "I have some feeling that it isn't Nicki's fault." I sighed. "Oh come ON! It's so obvious that it's her fault." Undead shouted. "I guess your right." I sighed.
Suddenly, Nicki saw something that caught her eye. Undead's back pack was next to her cage. She suddenly saw a compass and map in there until she realised...
"UNDEAD! WHY IS THE COMPASS AND MAP IN YOUR BAG?" Nicki screamed through the room. Everyone froze. Mappy walked up to the backpack and grabbed the compass and map. "I knew it wasn't her." I laughed. "Undead, is there something to say?" Mappy sneered. "I was about to let you guys know I had it." Undead shouted. Katy unlocked the cage Nicki was in. "I told you it wasn't me fault!" Nicki stuck her tongue out. "I'm sorry for this misunderstanding, but why did you have the compass and map in your back pack Undead?" BlackHamood demanded. Suddenly, we all froze for a minute, then we unfroze. "WARNING! WARNING! SHIP IS STARTING TO LOOSE POWER! WARNING! WARNING!" The ship announced. "Oh snap-a-doodle! We have got to land somewhere asap!" Hammie screamed. Connor quickly went to the front. "Land on that weird crystal planet!" Connor demanded. "Landing now! Everyone, hold onto something tight and don't let go!" Hammie screamed.
I held onto the cage, while the others grabbed the wall, while Nicki was hugging Bowling as tight as she could. "Really Nicki?" Bowling sighed.
Suddenly, we heard a huge thud. We all looked through the window. "This is a weird planet." Katy wondered.
Nicki just went outside. "NO NICKI! THERE'S NO AIR!" Connor shouted. "I'm breathing fine." Nicki said. Suddenly, we all went outside, there was actually air here. "How weird..." BlackHamood wondered.
Then, we heard a huge roar, and then we froze for 2 minutes. "Could that be..." Mappy wondered. "Yes it is." Undead said.
To Be Continued...
About 2 or 3 chapters left guys :O
Note: I'm sorry but no more people can be in the story since it will end soon, but I will start a new story once I finish this one and I'll accept people to join in the story.
Also, leave suggestions on what my next story should be :o
Thanks For Reading!!! :D
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I was gonna tell you guys I had the compass and map, but things happened...

 

Add me =3
N can't wait for the next one

 

More pls!!

 

Well, you asked for it, Chapter 17, THE SECOND TO LAST CHAPTER!!! :O
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@MappyTurtle
@Katy9078
@Nicki1337
@Lyncx
@Tristen690
@Xx_HaLl_Of_FaMe_xX
@BowlingMaster10
@TheBlackHamood
@connorh
@Sanadz
@nalaex
@TheUndeadBrave
@hammiestar
Note: This chapter is slightly longer because hey, its the chapter before the final chapter, so I guess it makes sense xD
Enjoy ^_^

Chapter 17 - The Search Ends
"Does anyone know which direction that sound came from?" Katy wondered. Hammie walked to the left. "I think it came from... CRAAAAAA-" Suddenly Hammie just fell into a hole that she must have not seen. "Ham, you okay mate?" Connor wondered. "Uhh... I think." She whined. I charged to the hole, and I saw Hammie on the ground, looking like she's confused. "What do you see infront of you?" Undead shouted. "Some locked iron door." Hammie said. Mappy just hopped into the hole, and had some huge smile on her face, as big as her hand maybe. "Come down here!" Mappy shouted. We all hoped in one at a time. We froze for 2 seconds. "This has got to be it." Undead said. Suddenly, my pocket started shaking, also making noises. My hand shot into it, grabbing my phone. "Hello?" I answered. "The iron door is where we are. Quickly, you must get in there before the Dragon-" We froze for 5 seconds again. "Anyway, Before the dragon freezes everything... FOREVER!" Tristen shouted. "How do you open this door though?" I asked. Everyone seemed suspicious about me. After Tristen told me how to open the iron door, I placed the phone in my pocket, but as I looked up, everyone had some serious faces. "What?" I wondered.
"Well... How do you open the door, didn't your friend tell you?" Mappy demanded. "Hmm, I could hear the voice you were talking to, sounded like someone we met in a... cave?" Nicki wondered. Everyone was thinking about someone they met in a cave, and I was beginning to hear my heart beat like three times each second. "Let's not worry about who I was talking to and just open this iron door." I said trying to look like it was no big deal.
I went up to the iron door, and whispered some random words to it, then it openned. Nicki then clapped 4 times a second. "Interesting..." Undead wondered. We went inside, and I saw HallOfFame and someone else behind a huge glass door of a huge dragon, getting beaten up by a huge monster. "Aww yes, isn't it the 'Louise And Friends' club. Welcome to our little testing area." HallOfFame chuckled. I then remembered about Tristen. I saw a door that looked liked a dungeon, so I bolted into it, making the other even more suspicious. "Where do you think YOUR going?" Nicki shouted. I ignored her and looked around this dungeon, and Tristen caught my eye in a cage. "It's about time you know, now you better protect me from your friends." Tristen said. I nodded and walked out of the dungeon, with Tristen behind me. "Well well... Isn't it the charming Tristen..." Nicki sighed. "YOU'LL PAY YOU DIRTY TEA RAT!" Mappy charged at him. I winked at Tristen. I stepped aside from Tristen, and put my leg out, making Mappy fall. Hammie giggled. "What was that for?" Mappy screamed. "Ops, looks like my shoe lace is untied." I laughed. Mappy seemed quite annoyed. "Tristen? Grr, nevermind him, Sanad, kill those pitiful children!" HallOfFame shouted. "Yes sir." Sanad got his sword out and bolted at Katy. "KATY! NOOOO" I screamed, before Sanad could slash her into pieces, everyone froze, apart from Katy. "Uhh..." Katy wondered. She stepped out of the way, plucking the sword out of Sanad, making him fall as soon as we all could move again. "Connor... he stole candy from you when you were 4." Katy said. Connor's eyes went red... his claws grew. Katy threw him the sword, making him catch it. "YOUR NEW DESTINATION WILL BE YOUR GRAVE!!!" Connor screamed.
When Connor was busy chasing Sanad, we quickly ran into a door, making us go in where the dragon was. "This has to be the Dragon Of Time, we must free him from that monster!" Undead shouted. "Nope." HallOfFame replied. Then he pushed a button behind some boxes, and the Dragon suddenly changed, and started to look at us, with angry eyes...
FINAL CHAPTER COMING SOON...
Thanks for being patient ^_^
Remember to comment so I wouldn't have to double post or bump this, or I can't continue this story >.<
I'll also possibly make a little trailer poster for the final chapter too for your kindness.
But anyway...
Thanks For Reading!!! :D​

 

I can't wait for this finale!

 

Hey guys, last chapter will come soon, But I'm just gonna make a little sneak peek on maybe what one of the characters in the story looks like.
Yes, the final chapter won't be coming until over a week, but it will come!

Please keep commenting, cause when this starts to get forgotten, I may not finish it >.<

 

At least we'll be getting it before Christmas.

 

Why do I appear alittle bit in the stories, I'm the least to appear on it

 

Sorry ;-; I'll try and make you appear more in the last chapter

 

I'm so sorry for double post, but I've made an announcement:
I may not make another story after this one has been finished OR I might not even finish this.
Just people aren't liking these any more. The first time I made a story, everybody loved it, but this one... not as much.
So I'm not really sure if I'm that 'happy' to make another story or even FINISH this story.
Your all probably gonna hate me now, or not even bother to look at this story no more.
Anyway, I'll make an announcement soon on what I'm going to do, either I just leave my stories and not make any new ones or continue them.
Thanks.
~LouiseXminerX