New Story: The Dragon Of Time

Great story Louise!!

Mind if I cut in on the story maybe?

 

So many people want to be in the my story xD
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@MappyTurtle
@Katy9078
@Nicki1337
@Lyncx
@Tristen690
@Xx_HaLl_Of_FaMe_xX
@BowlingMaster10
@TheBlackHamood
@connorh
New Characters:
@Sanadz
@nalaex
And don't worry @TheUndeadBrave , you'll probably be in the next chapter.
But anywho, enjoy ;)

Chapter 10 - Betrayal
Meanwhile, Tristen and HallOfFame were still bothering the Dragon of Time. "Once he finally runs out of energy and becomes dead, EVERYTHING will freeze and the world would be ours!" HallOfFame laughed. "Wait, you mean us gentlemen would be also frozen too?" Tristen wondered. "Don't worry about it, my monster will defeat the Dragon Of Time soon." HallOfFame cheered. Tristen felt worried. "I... I don't want to defeat the Dragon of Time anymore." "Well too bad. Sanad, take him to the dungeon." HallOfFame shouted. Then a guy appeared of the shadows, and grabbed Tristen. "Let go of me! I'll offer you a cup of tea." Tristen suggested. But he just got thrown into the jail. "Maybe I should be on the kids side. But HallOfFame would kill me... Arg." Tristen choked.
Back in Hell, BlackHamood called me again. I answered the phone. "How's things going?" "Not bad, this vampire dude called Connor is going to help us find the purple powder." I said. "WHAT? NOT CONNOR! RU-" Suddenly Connor plucked the phone of my hand and threw it into lava. "What was that for?" Mappy shouted. "Oh you don't need to listen to them with their useless information." Connor smiled. I felt a bit uncomfortable. Katy felt worried about Nicki. "We better hurry, I could feel Nicki dying." Katy screamed. "Oh we have plenty of time." Connor said. "Arg, quit all this 'Oh don't worry this' and 'don't worry that' stuff, your evil and we know it!" Mappy shouted. "Oh... too bad." Connor laughed. He grabbed Mappy and threw her into a lava lake. "NOOO!" I screamed. But some mysterious figure grabbed her before she fell in the lava, and ran away. "What was that?" Katy wondered. Connor hissed. Then we finally found some purple powder.
We went into a cave, filled with purple powder, there was like 100s. "Just grab as many as you can!" Katy said. Suddenly the cave's entrance closed. "You'll never save your friend now!" Connor shouted. "HEY! You better get us out or Mappy will come back and whip your butt!" I shouted. "Oh, I'll just let her join with you in this pitiful cave." Connor said. He kept laughing, and me and Katy felt extremely annoyed.
"Wake up." Mappy woke up. "Am I in heaven yet?" Mappy said. "No. I'm nalex, and I'll save your friends, but it won't be easy." Nalex explained. "Let me guess, your just going to also betray me and my friends and then game over, right?" Mappy said. "I saved you, how could I betray you? Anyway Connor is a huge monster here in hell. Hell actually used to be quite peaceful, where prisoners had to stay here. But once Connor arrived, he turned the place upside down. He turned everyone into demons, making them his slaves, and killing everyone who comes here. I luckily hid here for a long time, I wish I can go back." Nalex explained. "So how will we save my friends?" Mappy said. "I hope your fast, cause this could be really difficult." Nalex said. "If you save me friends, I'll let you come with us." Mappy suggested, and Nalex smiled.
To Be Continued...
I think we're about half way there through this series, or maybe 60% through. Who knows, but we are pretty close to an end.
My prediction on how many chapters are left: 6
Don't worry, I'm not quite sure yet, so you can keep asking me to be in the story ;)
Thanks For Reading!!! :D
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Ty for saving me, @nalaex

 

Np

 

Can't wait to see what I'm like!

 

A like plz? ;-;
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@MappyTurtle
@Katy9078
@Nicki1337
@Lyncx
@Tristen690
@Xx_HaLl_Of_FaMe_xX
@BowlingMaster10
@TheBlackHamood
@connorh
@Sanadz
@nalaex And btw @TheUndeadBrave , your in the next chapter, don't worry ;)
Enjoy ;)

Chapter 11 - The Rescue... Or Is It?
Mappy and Nalaex whispered for an hour about their plan, and they were ready. Nalaex threw a baby demon on the ground, which made connor interested in it. "Oh, look who's for dinner?" Connor said. He grabbed it and sucked all the blood for about 5 seconds, while Mappy used a silent drill to break the door in the cave. Finally, a hole was made, and me and Katy cheered. "Quickly, squeeze through this hole before-" but Connor quickly grabbed Mappy and shoved her through the hole, and then he covered the hole with obsidian. "Nice move kid, but nothing can beat the almighty CONNOR!" He laughed.
Meanwhile, Nicki couldn't take it. "Arg, goodbye world." Nicki said, before she fell to the ground, a portal behind her showed up, and someone stuffed her mouth with Purple powder, making her alive again. "Are you Jesus?" Nicki asked. "Psst, It's Lync." Lync whispered. "Can you help me find my friends?" Nicki said. "I know where they are, their trapped. We better hurry." Lync explained. They ran and hid behind a rock near Connor.
Nalaex suddenly saw Lync and Nicki behind the rock, but she thought they were bad, because she quickly sneaked up on them and threw Lync into the lava lake. "LYNC NO! YOU DIRTY PIECE OF-" but Nalaex just threw her away, near lava. Nicki cried. We didn't know what was going on outside the cave, since the door was pretty thick. "Maybe Nalaex is saving us!" Mappy cheered. "Who's Nalaex?" Me and Katy wondered. "A girl who saved me." She explained. "Oooh, I was thinking how you survived." I wondered.
Nalaex then kicked Connor, making him unconsious, and broke the wall. "Let's get out of here!" Katy screamed, suddenly Lync then was swimming in the lava lake. "How?" Nalaex wondered. "Fire potion, your going to pay now." Lync said. "What? YOU threw him into the lava LAKE?" Mappy shouted. "He's evil, he was helping Connor. Also his little friend too." Nalaex explained. "NO! They were about to help us! YOU BETRAYER! WHERES NICKI?" Mappy screamed. Nicki then walked slowly towards us. But then Nalaex spawned a portal behind her, making her get sucked in. "I should have never trusted you..." Mappy screamed.
Suddenly, Nicki looked around. "Where am I?" She wondered. "NICKI!" A familiar voice was heard.
To Be Continued...
Remember to comment below if you want to be in the story and you might be in the next chapter or the chapter after!
and Pwease like ;-;
Thanks For Reading!!! :D​

 

As usual, another exciting chapter! Keep up the good work Louise!



Yea boi!! I'm almost in the story. just 1 more chapter!

 

Love it Louise!
Keep up the good work =)

 

Thank you all for such nice comments ^_^
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@MappyTurtle
@Katy9078
@Nicki1337
@Lyncx
@Tristen690
@Xx_HaLl_Of_FaMe_xX
@BowlingMaster10
@TheBlackHamood
@connorh
@Sanadz
@nalaex
New Character:
@TheUndeadBrave (See, told you you'll be in the story x) )
Enjoy :D

Chapter 12 - Friend Or Foe
Nicki turned around, turns out BlackHamood and BowlingMaster was there. "How did you get here?" They asked. "Some girl saved my friends cause they were trapped, but tried to kill me though, I don't understand why though, I was about to give her some chicken." Nicki explained. "Nalaex... an old enemy of ours." BowlingMaster said. "She must have thought you were evil." BlackHamood. "We must quickly go to hell and quickly tell her that your not evil, who knows if she'll also think Louise and the others are evil too." BowlingMaster explained.
Meanwhile in hell, Nalaex kept fighting us, and we were already getting seriously injured. "I knew you were just Connor's slaves." Nalaex said. "We aren't Connor's friends or slaves! He trapped us!" I shouted. "Not enough evidence." Nalaex laughed. As she was about to finally kill us with her magic, a portal appeared, and Nicki, BowlingMaster and BlackHamood appeared!
"Nalaex, stop! They are not evil!" Nicki screamed. "They are trying to save the universe before it freezes!" BowlingMaster explained. "What?" Nalaex seemed confused. "The universe will freeze forever?" Nalaex said. Before Nalaex could realise we were innocent, Connor was about to drink the blood from her. "NALAEX! LOOK OUT!" Katy screamed.
But out of no where, some weird spell appeared making Connor freeze, and made Nalaex freeze too. Then out of the shadows, someone familar came. "Undead?" Mappy said. "Oh you two, thought I'd never see you again." Undead said. Katy seemed confused. Me and Mappy explained how we met him before in the War 3.0 thing, and Katy understood. "Unfreeze Nalaex now, she was just about to heal them!" BowlingMaster shouted, like he thought he was bad. "Can't do that I'm afraid." Undead said. Before they could keep shouting, I was wondering about something. "Where is Lync? Pretty sure he was here somewhere." I asked. Suddenly everyone froze. "Lync?" Nicki screamed.
"Listen, are you a friend or a foe?" BlackHamood shouted. "You'll have to find out yourself." Undead said.
"By the way, aren't we suppose to get the purple powder now and return it to the portal?" Mappy said. Me and Katy reached to our pockets with all the purple powder. "Excellent, but we're not sure how we can heal you. The only person who can heal you is Lync or Nalaex, but they seem frozen." BowlingMaster explained. BlackHamood quickly got his phone and called Lync's hut, but no answer.
"Where is he?" Nicki wondered.
To Be Continued...
Sorry if this chapter wasn't so exciting >.<
And remember to comment below if you want to be in the story, aparntly I need I think one more person to be in the story.
But anyway...
Thanks For Reading!!! :D

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Oooohh baby! I like my character!


I really liked this chapter!
Definitely not because I was in it.

 

Wait wait, so you said "I really liked this chapter" but then you said "Definitely NOT" does that mean you didn't like the chapter?

 

Nah dude, I said "I really like this chapter!" Then I said "Definitely not because I was in it."-That was a sarcastic way of saying why I liked it.:D:D

 

Need.
More.
Chapters.

 

Well your wish just came true :3
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@MappyTurtle
@Katy9078
@Nicki1337
@Lyncx
@Tristen690
@Xx_HaLl_Of_FaMe_xX
@BowlingMaster10
@TheBlackHamood
@connorh
@Sanadz
@nalaex
@TheUndeadBrave
Enjoy :3

Chapter 13 - Finally A Escape
"Nevermind that, we really need to get out of here." Nicki shouted. "But Louise, Mappy and Katy are still injured!" BowlingMaster said. "Don't worry about us, just go." I said. Nicki seemed shocked. "I've got an idea, once we defeat the weird thing that's defending the compass and map, we'll force it to heal you!" BlackHamood suggested. "Fine, I'm coming too but that doesn't mean I'm still on your side." Undead grumbled.
They left, but Nicki still seemed uncomfortable leaving us, and that's when she just couldn't take it. "I'm staying with them, a demon might eat them!" Nicki shouted. "Alright fine." BowlingMaster said. Nicki grabbed the purple powder out of me and Katy's pocket and gave it to BlackHamood. "I'm sure this is enough to come back heal you, stay strong people." BowlingMaster said, and they quickly went to the dungeon, used half of the purple powder and hopped into the portal.
Meanwhile, Tristen was still wondering what to do. "Arg, I have no choice. I've got to call Louise and tell her I want to join her team, but I'll have to keep it a secret to HallOfFame." Tristen wondered in his mind. He got his phone and called me.
"Hello?" I said. "It is I, Tristen, and I've made a discition to join your team and help you, but you must keep it a secret to your friends." Tristen said. "How can I trust you?" I said. "Who you talking to?" Katy asked. "Uhh, BlackHamood." I quickly said. "Ok, so one time I ate a green jelly bean, but it was actually a booger! Isn't THAT funny?" Nicki joked trying to entertain us, Mappy burst out laughing while Katy chuckled.
"Alright fine, but you better not betray us or your dead." I said. "Ok, I'll come asap in hell." Tristen said, and he turned off the phone. "How does he know where we are?" I wondered. "Eh?" Mappy said. "Nothing. Nothing." I quickly snapped.
Meanwhile, they finally hid behind a corner to where the weird thing was guarding the compass and map. "Ok, you distract it, we'll quickly get the compass and map and we'll force it to heal Louise and her friends." BlackHamood said, and they agreed. Undead popped out of the corner and started waving and doing annoying stuff. "Yo ugly face! Bet you can't catch me!" Undead laughed. And of course the thing started chasing Undead, but the thing was no match for him. BowlingMaster sneaked up and grabbed the compass and map, and once the thing was out of breath, BlackHamood held the thing on its back, but it quickly made a portal to hell behind him, and they all got sucked in, but BlackHamood was still holding the thing on its back, so it got sucked in too.
As they arrived, they quickly ran to us. "Heal them. NOW!" BowlingMaster demanded. It quickly healed us but then grabbed the map and compass BowlingMaster was holding and quickly ran into a portal he quickly made, and the portal disappeared. "It's going down I tell you. We're so going to make it give back the stuff!" Mappy shouted, and we agreed.
To Be Continued...
Thanks @MappyTurtle for reminding me to make a chapter, I almost forgot xD
Thank you all for the nice comments too that brighten up my day :)
Thanks For Reading!!! :D
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hehehe
eww-wees x3 @Nicki1337

 

The thing is no match for me and my speed!!

 

ARE YOU JESUS!? xD

 

Sorry guys if it's taking longer then usual for these chapters to come, you see school is coming to an end soon, and that mean's I'm going to be extremely busy, so please be patient, probably next chapter will come out in the weekend :3

~LouiseXminerX

 

Can I be in it plz ^-^

 

Wait, your school year is ending soon?