New Story: The Dragon Of Time

Sorry, please ignore my spelling mistakes :P
Next chapter is coming soon :D

 

Made that mistake before :p

Great chapter, keep them coming! =)

 

can i be in dis storeh

 

Getting closer to the answer...
Thanks SO much for the support on the story, I kinda thought no one liked this story xD
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@MappyTurtle
@Katy9078
@Nicki1337
@Lyncx
@Tristen690
@Xx_HaLl_Of_FaMe_xX
New Characters:
@BowlingMaster10
@TheBlackHamood

Chapter 7 - The Most Wanted
We walked up the cave, back to Lync's hut. "Arg, I hope you have. Neigh. got the Kippy Slugs and Sather Ore, Katy could starve to death soon! NEIGH!" Lync said. I gave him the jar and sather ore. He dumped them in his pot, and then took a spoon out, and poored the juice into a small jar. "This this onto Katy, and she will. Neigh. Become free." He neighed. I took the jar and poured it on Katy's head, and when the juice leaked to her shoes, she unfroze. "Ehh, what's this stuff on me?" Katy asked. "Nevermind that. We need to get to the Dragon Of Time". Nicki shouted. "The what?" Katy wondered. "Ah! Yes, that's. Neigh. what is behind this! We must destroy. Neigh. it and return time!" Lync cheered. "Uh, someone is forcing the Dragon to freeze time actually. A guy named Tristen is the name." I explained. "Tristen? He's still alive?" Lync wondered. "What do you mean alive? It's not like they respawn, right?" Mappy wondered. "Oh no. Tristen is a man who is one of the world's most wanted man. He almost destroyed the world once you know. People tried to kill him, but he was impossible. But then one time someone punched him into the sea, and we never saw him again. Look's like he can swim for like 10 minutes without breathing, making us believe he is finally dead. But it look's like he's alive, and is ending the world soon." Lync said.
I felt shocked. "Well where is he and the Dragon Of Time?" I asked. "Ok, I'm so confused right now. Who is this Dragon Of Time and Tristen thing, why do we need to go to the Dragon Of Time?" Katy shouted. "Katy, The Dragon Of Time controls time, and Tristen is making the dragon freeze everything accept for us, I don't know why us though..." I explained. "Oh man, was I asleep for a day or something?" Katy wondered. "Anyway, It's going to be almost impossible to find the Dragon Of Time, you will need to go deep underground, and find a map showing space. Then we must find a special compass leading to where the Dragon Of Time is. Then we need materials for a spaceship with heaps of fuel, find the Dragon Of Time, destroy Tristen and. Neigh. return time!" Lync explained without taking a single breath.
"You will need. Neigh. 2 people for this quest. Take these 2. neigh. gentlemen". Lync neighed, He quickly got his phone and starting neighing, and 2 people came in the room. "Hi, I'm BlackHamood, And this is BowlingMaster." Blackhamood explained.
"TheBlackHamood and BowlingMaster, you go and find lots of iron and coal, We'll find the Map and Compass, got it?" I demanded. They nodded and zoomed out of the room, and dug straight down. We went and dug straight down too, into some dungeon...
To Be Continued...
Please ignore any wrong spelling marks
Thank you @TheBlackHamood and @BowlingMaster10 for requesting to be in the story ;)
If you want to be in the story, just comment below!
Thanks For Reading!!! :D​

 

Man I hate being the Enemy :/ but I like the story so far :D

 

The build-ups make me more and more eager for the next chapter, keep up the good work louise!

 

in the next one there should i a machinema or pictures

 

If you want, I can make you the good guy in the next or the chapter after :3

 

Sure I would like to be the good guy.

 

This is awesome!!!

 

Ikr. Louise is so talented :D

 

Thanks @connorh for such a nice comment that brightened up my day, you get to be in the story in the next chapter <3 and thank you too @Nicki1337 :D
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@MappyTurtle
@Katy9078
@Nicki1337
@Lyncx
@Tristen690
@Xx_HaLl_Of_FaMe_xX
@BowlingMaster10
@TheBlackHamood
Enjoy ^_^

Chapter 8 - Dimensions
I landed pretty hard on my face, with people landing on me. "Seriously?" I shouted. "Your fault for sleeping there." Nicki laughed. BowlingMaster and BlackHamood landed on the other side of the maze. "This maze is creepy, hopefully Slenderman won't appear or anything." Katy shivered. "Just stay together, and we'll be fine" Mappy cheered. We walked slowly, figuring out where to turn, we kept going into dead ends, and we got really annoyed. But I guess BowlingMaster and BlackHamood were like maze geniuses, cause they were like almost half way through the maze. "Can't we just mine through this cave?" Mappy shouted. "Not a bad idea actually." I said. Nicki got out a pickaxe and dug through the maze, all the way to the end, where some weird guy was a black face, yellow eyes in some sack suit. "Grrr... No one gets the compass or maze!" He shouted, and he openned up a portal, sucking us in, and we were sucked inside.
Meanwhile, BowlingMaster and BlackHamood finally reached the end, but then got into a portal to like space with dangerous aliens everywhere. "Was this our plan?" BowlingMaster asked. "Nope." BlackHamood said.
I opened my eyes, with a view of hell. My heart pounding, I stood up, and the rest did. "Are we still sleeping?" Nicki asked. "I don't know..." I wondered. Suddenly, something was shaking in my pocket. My hand shot into my pockets, grabbing something. "A phone? When did I have a phone?" I wondered. I answered it, and BowlingMaster answered. "Before you ask, I put it in your pocket incase we get seperated. Anyway, We're in space on a weird planet with aliens everywhere, where are you?" "In hell..." I replied. "Oh no..." BlackHamood shouted in the background. "Ok, in order to get out of here you must listen to all my orders, or we're stuck here." Blackhamood said. I listenned. "Ok, first go to-" Suddenly, some weird demon with wings grabbed the phone and fled away. "HEY! GET BACK HERE!" I shouted. We ran, but they we lost track of it, and there was a huge lake of lava in front of us. "Great, we're stuck here." Katy winned. "How about making this place our home, and calling it 'Red's Base'." Mappy suggested. "Dude, there's no food here with hungry demons here looking for humans to eat, there's no way this place could be our home." I shouted. "We've got to find that stupid demon, who knows what BowlingMaster and BlackHamood are doing now." Katy panicked.
Meanwhile , in space, BlackHamood kept panicking, while BowlingMaster kept shouting in the phone. "WHAT LANGUAGE ARE YOU SPEAKING? I TOLD YOU TO SEARCH FOR THE-" Then the phone had a horrifying scream, like a demon. "Arg, I give up, good luck." BowlingMaster turned off the phone. "That sounded like a demon..." BlackHamood suggested. "Wait.. maybe a demon took their phone away..." BlackHamood wondered. "Wait... WAIT!" BowlingMaster shouted. "I've got the best idea in the world." BowlingMaster cheered.
To Be Continued...
And don't worry @Tristen690 , in the next chapter you'll start becoming less evil ;)
Hope you enjoyed, and another huge thanks for the lovely comments that makes me smile whenever I see them :P
Thanks For Reading!!! :D​

 

Amazing! Absolutely stunning!
Can I be in it, if I may?

 

I like how I'm the genius

 

Your welcome

 

Nice story! Can I be in it?

 

@Sanadz and @nalaex don't worry, you'll be in the story too, it's just I can't figure out how you should be in the story >.< Please be patient though ;)
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@MappyTurtle
@Katy9078
@Nicki1337
@Lyncx
@Xx_HaLl_Of_FaMe_xX
@BowlingMaster10
@TheBlackHamood
New Character:
@connorh
Enjoy ;)

Chapter 9 - Plan B
"Okay, here's the plan." Bowling whisper to TheBlackHamood. Meanwhile in Hell, we were starving. "Is demon meat nice?" Nicki wondered. "It's impossible to catch one anyway." I moaned. "I hope BlackHamood and BowlingMaster knows how to get us out of here." Mappy whined.
Before I could give up thinking, the same Demon with the phone in its hand appeared. "YOU... I'm going to beat you up for this you stupid little..." "Wait." I inturrupted. The demon handed me the phone. "Hello?" "Louise, we just got our translate up and translated in Demon languauge telling the demon to bring back the phone to you. Now, turn left and go straight." We cheered. So we went left then right, then straight, then backwards... "Dude, when will this end?" Nicki whined. "And when you take a 360... infront of you is a fortress." Bowling said. We we did a 360 and I saw the fortress. We went inside, and some obsidian portal was there, but not active. "I've heard that we need like some purple powder to open this." Katy suggested. Also, I noticed some food sticking out of a chest. There was only little food, which I guess was enough, so we ate it all, but didn't realise there wasn't enough for Nicki. "Oh snap!" I shouted. "It's ok, you don't need me anyway. Who wants some weird girl thats no use for the team..." Nicki cried. Suddenly, the phone rang again and I picked it up.
"Ok, I realised there wasn't enough food in the chest, right? Well when you find purple powder, its possible to eat it, so if you have around 9 purple powder, give you to Nicki and she won't starve for like days." BlackHamood explained. "Maybe we should find 100s of purple powder and we'll never starve!" Mappy laughed. "Not possible. Only around 15 purple powder exists in hell. Find them all just incase, but don't let the demons eat it, or they will become super powerful. good luck." BlackHamood then hung up. "But where!" I shouted, but they didn't answer.
"Oh I can answer that." Some guy appeared out of no where. Nicki screamed. "Listen, purple powder is super easy to find, I can help, and the name's Connor." Connor explained. "Sweet!" I cheered. "And another thing." Connor said. We then saw some baby demon, crawling on the floor. Connor grabbed it and sucked all the blood from it, making is turn grey. "Eww..." We all said. "Yep, a vampire. But don't worry, I think you guys are cool." Connor said.
"I don't trust him..." Mappy whispered to me. I facepalmed. It's the second time she said that. "Oh you don't trust me huh? Well I guess you don't need my help then." Connor said. Nicki's stomach grumbled. "OK OK, you can help!" Nicki shouted. Mappy did a grumpy look at Nicki. "Ok, follow me." Connor said. Then huge demon wings grew on his back and flied out of the fortress. Mappy still seemed annoyed. "I bet you that he is evil. If you don't believe me then you'll be sorry." Mappy shouted.
To Be Continued...
Hopefully you won't mind being a vampire @connorh ;) If you seem bothered, just tell me and I'll probably turn you to normal.
Ignore any wrong spelling marks >.<
Thanks For Reading!!! :D
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Nice story! And okay.

 

Great story so far!
Can't wait for more :D

 

Yay I'm the genius again
Put sanadz as our ally me and Hdestroyer