World of the Damned. (A chapters series + Custom characters.)

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  1. DMachine487

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    In case you haven't looked up that weapon name yet...

    Noun 1. Fenrir - (Norse mythology) an enormous wolf that was fathered by Loki and that killed Odin.
     
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    Xadidax Willy the 2nd

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    Well, I have a lame idea.
    You know itachi's genjutsu?
    When someone kills him, it turns out to be a genjutsu?
    Like when sasuke stabbed itachi during there fight, it turns out to be a genjutsu and itachi was behind him the whole time?

    Maybe you should make it that i was never killed you, and you and kitty were under a genjutsu.
    By the way, you don't need to add me, when i finish studying i can give you more ideas if i cam think of one.
     
  3. Shadow_Folf

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    Ah yes, that fight was my favorite of them all. I know exactly what you're talking about, but why not have some type of reanimation type jutsu for those who have fallen. Although genjutsu seems like an interesting idea. I'll give it some thought.
     
  4. Shadow_Folf

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    Whew, here we go.

    Chapter 7: An Interesting Rendezvous between Two Parties, and an Unusual Event...

    New Characters:

    @HDestroyer787 (Hsan)

    @KittycatplaysMC (Snow)

    @Myskittles10 (Jack)

    @kritter124 (Alaska)

    @DMachine487 (Dim)

    @VinceofCoke (Vinnie)

    @Jaina (Zie)

    @Durske1 (Durk)

    @Creeper5484 (Aaron)

    @Heatdude Da Waffle (Jasper)

    @Leopard_Lover21 (Leo)

    After staring into the beautiful jade for a while, Jordan grabbed Kitty’s shoulder and led her back to the pizzeria, looking at the dead body of Sera. Jordan picked up the shattered knife pieces that were scattered amongst the ground, and put them in Sera’s lifeless hand. They mourned for a couple minutes, before setting off to find the dead Gooby. Gooby’s body was found inside a trashcan, upside down, head inside the trash bin and legs sticking out, bended. Obviously, it was not very well disposed of, but nobody noticed it until now. Jordan and Leila brought out the lifeless body and laid it across, flat on the ground. With broken headphones in his hand, they put it around his neck as a reminder of how much of a hard rock music fan he was. They mourned for him as well, for about the same time as they did with Sera before setting off. Kitty was walking unusually slow, not because of weariness nor sicknesses, but rather an emotional problem that seemed to be of sadness. Everyone tried to cheer her up, but nevertheless, nothing worked. Around midnight, they began setting up another tent, and Kitty just slid into her tent and zipped up the hole to get in the tent, signaling she wanted to be left alone. Jordan, Mappy, and Claire were about to head inside their tents, until Mappy sensed a sound coming from the other side of the trees and fences. Mappy jumped across the fence and Jordan, along with Claire, followed Mappy, after hearing something go boom.

    When Jordan and Claire emerged from the remaining trees, Mappy’s body was scattered across the field, assuming it was from an explosion of a sort. Claire was shocked and said, “Zis is unacceptable! Gah!” Jordan looked to see smoke coming from a rocket launcher, held by an unusually large and muscular man. In fact, the man was abnormally muscular. 10 other people remained behind him, with weapons in their hands, battle-ready from the looks of it. Jordan let down his gun and signaled Claire to put down that bone saw. Claire hesitantly sheathed it, and Jordan put the gun back in his belt. The others put their weapons away, and the man dropped his rocket launcher and said, “This guy your friend? Cause if he is, he is looooong dead. But hey! Look on the bright side. AT LEAST HE WENT OUT WITH A BANG!” And the man laughed heartily. Jordan looked at him and said, “Introduce yourself, and your friends. Then explain why you blew up our friend.” The man immediately stopped laughing and put on a stern look of hesitation, but relaxed and said, “All right you little meat puppet. The name’s Jack. I’m a ladies man, and the ladies deny it, but they know they LOVE my muscles.” Jack then kissed his muscles and said, “I’ll let the others explain themselves.” First, a girl with long, blonde hair and light blue eyes stepped up. She appeared to be a tom-boy, and is somewhat tall. “My name is Leo. I am not one for talks, but I’ll tell you this; don’t mess with me.” Next, a man who appeared to have reached the age of 18 stepped up. He gave Jordan a death stare and said, “Like the girl said, I’m not one for talks. I’m Hsan, and that is all you need to, and ever will need to know about me.” Following Hsan, was a girl appearing to be 17 years old from the way she looked. She had a hoodie that covered her head, and she said, “My name is snow. There is nothing of me that is very notable, and therefore, I will not state anything about myself anything more than my name…” Following Snow was yet another girl, appearing to be 15, and appears to wear rather dark clothing. “My name is Alaska. No, I am not the founder of Alaska; don’t ever ask that, please. Let’s see, I like singing, I can be really tough even though I don’t really show it, I am smart, although I am scared of ghosts, and -----“Alaska began saying until being cut off by a 15 year old boy. He said, “Don’t mind the talkative one there. I know how to get into anything, so trying to hide anything from me, won’t work. I also tend to get what I want. People refer to me as Dim.” Yet another 15 year old came up and said, “There is nothing you need to know of me except my name is Vinnie, and I am very… Unusual at times.” Another boy came up, appearing to be 17 years of age, and seemed to be 6’4 in height. “My name is Jasper. Some people think I’ll betray everyone, but that’s not true. I just want to help others too, you know?” A man at the age of at least 20 started walking up, and could barely speak. The only things he said, yet struggling, were, “Hi… My name… Is Aaron…” Aaron appeared to be both mentally and physically retarded. Another boy came up, appearing to be a teenager with an approximate height of 5’7 came up and just said, “My name is Durk. I like knives.” Last, but not least, a girl appearing to be 16 years old came up. She appeared to have a mask over her mouth and didn’t speak until Jordan looked into her eyes, implying that she has to talk. She closed her eyes for a moment before opening them again and saying, “I am Zie.”

    Jordan sighed and looked up before saying “Enough introductions. Now, you. Jack. Why did you kill our friend?” Jack looked at Jordan with a stern face and said, “It was sort of on accident. It was by surprise, so I had a natural reaction of killing, since there were a bunch of people who tried killing us by surprise a few states back.” Jordan raised an eyebrow. “A bunch of people? Did they chant anything?” “Yeah, some weird shit about bloodshed and that stuff.” “Hm… All of you, come with me. We are going to talk.” Back at the first party’s camp, everyone gathered around except for Kitty, and Jordan began talking. “We all face a common foe, we have lost some to those who are insane, and the 11 people here are going through the same thing. We will need to team up and survive with each other against an entire world’s worth of people if we even hope to stay alive.” Everyone agreed simultaneously, and they apologized for killing their friend. Jordan and Claire sighed but stated they felt that Mappy hasn’t left.

    When dinner came around and Jordan left fish on Kitty’s plate at the table, Kitty came out of the tent. Jack looked at Kitty and gave a wolf whistle. He looked at Dim and said, “Watch. She’ll be mine, ohohohoho…” While Kitty was slowly walking to the table, aware of what was going on due to her psychic ability, she was stopped by Jack who said, “Hey girl, want to kiss these sexy pecks? You have to admit, you love ‘em.” Kitty looked at him with eyes of hate and disgust, and said, “Get the fuck away from me you creep.” Jack was shocked and walked back to his seat next to Dim and grumbled. “Little bitch isn’t she, she’ll be mine, you’ll see.” Kitty looked at the jade and shed one tear before taking her fish and eating it. An hour later, an explosion was heard, and screams of agony was heard amongst the horizon. Curious as to what it was, everyone, armed and ready for battle, headed towards the death-piercing sound that was heard amongst the horizon. After approximately 4 hours, they came up to see someone who was able to sprout wings of a sort, but with diamonds of a sort… The person turned around and said, “Hey Claire. How is it? And you Jordan?” Claire dropped her bone saw onto the ground with her mouth gapped wide open, and Jordan stared in shock. “You… I saw your scattered dead body earlier… How…” “Is that really important? Or is the fact that I’m here more important?”
     
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    Hoooooly mother of goddess.
    Not only did you squeeze in 10 people at once, but YOU DID IT WELL.
    That usually is an impossible feat, but I doubted you would somehow mess up.

    Also updated my person a little, not sure if you checked or just had to give a basic outline of everyone without going into detail.
     
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    There is a reason I stated ONLY their basic outline. As more and more chapters come, their personalities are slowly put into detail, slowly, and slowly. I honestly thought I did it a bit choppy, but thank you. If there is a way you WANT to appear, like say, for example, Alaska is shown as singing in the tent for someone and appears to enjoy it, being watched by other people, not giving two shits just because she enjoys it, then tell me. Notice how in the early chapters, only the FIRST FIVE were immediately shown with their immediate personality traits? *Wink* *Wink*
     
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  7. KittyGoddess16

    KittyGoddess16 The Goddess of Kittens

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  8. Xadidax

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    That's a really good idea, but who will be the caster of the reanimaton? xD
     
  9. Shadow_Folf

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    Well, I take souls and use them as an undead army... Well, during my SoulKeeper Era, but remember, even though I am now the Devil's Demon Chamber Elite (Strongest one), I still retain the powers I had as a SoulKeeper.

    But, I have a more interesting idea. I'll PM it to you.
     
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    :D I blew up Mappy.
     
  11. Shadow_Folf

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    You blew up Mappy RED Scout* (Reference from SoulKeeper Era).
     
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    Rila Pyro is top bae

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    Day 420: Still isn't in the story



    I don't need it... I don't need it...
    I NEED IT.
    MAKE MORE STORIES PL0X
     
  13. Shadow_Folf

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    Just an FYI, you didn't even make a little entry thingy. Just PM it to me to avoid bumping.
     
  14. KittyGoddess16

    KittyGoddess16 The Goddess of Kittens

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    Chapter 8? PLEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSEEEE!!!!!!!!!
     
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    It'll come out soon. Not tomorrow, maybe Wednesday, most likely Thursday.

    *EDIT* If someone can guess something correctly. I'll have to bring Chapter 8 out today. X3
     
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    Woo, nice, short, quick chapter. I'll get Chapter 9 sooner or later. Good night, but still, enjoy nonetheless.

    Chapter 8:
    Mappy Scarlet and a Reunion.

    The figure just stood in the setting sun, with people who appeared to be insane killed and dead at her feet. She looked at Claire before looking at Jordan and said, “Well? Don’t you think this would be a much better form for me to kick ass in?” Jordan pulled himself together and replied, “Yes, true, but what happened?” Mappy laughed and said, “That’s a story for another time.” Mappy stopped laughing as soon as she saw Jack. “So, you’re the bastard who killed me earlier, huh?” Mappy began walking towards Jack and said, “I have my eye on you. Don’t try anything funny.” Jack gulped in fear for once and said, “Alright. Alright. Don’t worry. I’ll be nice.” Mappy then stepped back and asked, “So. What now?” They all returned back to camp and informed Mappy about the current situation. Jack, still trying to pull the moves on Kitty, went up to her and said, “Yo my pretty. Want to ditch these people and get a fine dinner area and have some dinner? I’ll be sure to make it worthwhile. Heh.” Kitty seemed to get agitated. “I told you earlier. Get the fuck away from me you creep.” Jack, refusing to leave, continued on with his flirting, before Kitty lost it and slapped Jack before kicking him away. “If you get near me one more time, I promise in the name of all that is holy…” Jack crawled up to Dim and said, “You see that? First sign that shows a girl is warming up to ya’. She makes physical contact in any way. Heh, she’ll be mine.”

    After Mappy was fully informed about everything, she noticed that Kitty was sitting on a rock, still sad for an unknown reason for as long as she knew. Mappy went up to Kitty and asked what was wrong. Kitty looked at Mappy before turning around, facing the other way. Mappy simply went to the other side and asked the same question. After about a cycle of three times, Kitty gave in and said, “I want to see Shadow.” Mappy chuckled, tapped Kitty on the shoulder and said, “If it pleases you, I might know where Shadow is.” Kitty jumped up and asked, “Where? Are you fooling with me?” Mappy shook her head, signaling that she was being honest. Kitty asked where he was, and Mappy pointed into a direction of which seemed to go through a barren wasteland. Kitty was unsure for a moment, and doubted Mappy. “How can I trust you to not be pranking me?” Mappy sighed and said, “Your heart will tell you if I am telling the truth or not. If your love for Shadow is strong enough, then you will do whatever is necessary to meet him.” With that, Mappy turned around and walked to her new, recently set up tent. Kitty stared at the direction she was given and sighed. She thought to herself, and within her mind, she said to herself, “I’ll go there tomorrow.” After smiling with the thought of reuniting once more, Jack came back up and said, “Hey, still considering the offer? I really want to spend some time with you. If you spend time with me, I’ll carry you to the pond and out.” Kitty got agitated once more, turned around and kicked Jack in the area. “OH #@$%!!!” screamed Jack. “I warned you earlier.” Kitty went to her tent and zipped up the zipper in desperate attempts to avoid Jack. Jack looked at his tent and sighed before saying, “That’s going to leave a mark.”

    Early, next morning, before everyone else aroused from their slumber, Kitty packed up all her stuff and left off in the direction that Mappy gave her, suggesting that the direction would lead to Shadow. She smiled and said, “I’m coming Shadow,” before heading off.

    When everyone else woke up about 5 hours later, Jordan took up a procedure of roll call. After marking everyone’s presence, he said Kitty’s name, receiving no response in return. Jordan opened up Kitty’s tent to see all of her stuff was gone. Jordan was shocked and said, “Kitty is gone! Organize a search party immediately!” Jack immediately sprung up and said, “I’ll be leader!” And within his thoughts he said, “And maybe if I rescue her heroically, she’ll finally open up to me.” Jasper got up from his seat and raised his hand. “I’ll volunteer.” Everyone began murmuring about how he may just backstab Jack. Jasper looked at everyone with eyes of disapproval and sighed before heading to the gate, awaiting orders. After a few moments, nobody else volunteered, so Jordan sighed. “Alright, then Jasper and Jack. I trust you two will be safe and ensure success to this rescue?” They nodded and they set off.

    *On the other side, where Kitty traveled*

    Kitty continued walking and continued saying, “Sleep is fur the weak. Sleep is fur the weak. Sleep is fur the weak.” She continued repeating that phrase before sensing a dark and vengeful aura. She jumped and ran towards it. When she turned around the block, she saw Shadow, leaning against a worn brick wall. In attempts to revive an old thing they did before they dated, she snuck up on Shadow and jumped into his arms. Hugging Kitty back, Shadow asked, “What? Kitty? Why are you here?” Kitty snugged Shadow and said, “Do your really think I could live without you?” Shadow smiled once more after a while and said, “Depends, from the way you are looking at it. No, probably not.” They caught up for a couple hours and Kitty brought out his necklace and put it on Shadow. “There, back to normal,” said Kitty before giggling. Afterwards, Kitty said, “Come on! Let’s head back to camp!” Shadow’s smile immediately disappeared, and he said, “No. I am not going back.” Kitty looked at Shadow with a confused look on her face. “Why not? Can’t you let one thing go?” “Kitty, it’s hard to explain. Jordan and I… Go a way long back. We had such a tainted history, it’s not even funny.” “If you wish to go back, then do so.” Kitty shook her head in denial and said, “No. Where you go, I go. What you do, I do. Remember. We are two different faces on the same coin. Wherever the coin travels, so do the two faces.” Shadow nodded his head and smiled once more. They snugged each other just because, and waited for the sun to completely rise. Shadow’s wolf ears made a jolt-like movement and Shadow stated, “I hear someone.” Kitty tried her best to listen and said, “I hear someone too… But I don’t think that person’s alone…”
     
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    KittyGoddess16 The Goddess of Kittens

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    (Feels) (and snugs) X3
     
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    Oh no, Mappy RED Scout is back!
     
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    Mappy Scarlet* You killed Mappy Red Scout
     
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    KittyGoddess16 The Goddess of Kittens

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    R.I.P
     
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