New Story!: War 3.0 (Need Characters)

Thanks for so much support :O
Anywoo, Characters atm:
@LouiseXminerX
@MappyTurtle
@ItsStartheFox
@Rilakkumaloverr
@Shadow_Riolu
@tisha070703
@ProCraftz
@hammiestar
@Bfrizz
@Sanadz
Sorry, no new characters in this chapter
Important (Okay, maybe not really...): A part in this book is what i actually think In Real Life...
Enjoy ;)

Chapter 6 - Really Friends?
"Louise, I don't even know why I'm friends with you." Mappy said. I couldn't believe my ears... "What?" I shouted. "Fox is a better friend then you. I don't need you in my life." She said. I felt tears go down my cheeks. "I don't need you." Mappy said. "WHAT ARE YOU SAYING?" I shouted. I ran.
Meanwhile, back at the evil city...
"He he, I made Mappy betray Louise. Now Mappy is the only one to ruin and our plan is back on track!" Sanad laughed. Suddenly, Mappy's eyes turned back to normal, and she was confused. "What happened?" She said. "SANAD! YOU POOP! WHAT HAPPENED?" Shadow shouted. "Looks like the spell has ended. My power has a limit, however, my power can regenerate in about 2 days." Sanad said. "2.... DAYS?" Shadow shouted.
I ran back into the village, and went in a spare house. "Louise? Yo you okay?" Fox asked. "Go... Go away! You don't need me!" I shouted. Fox sighed. "Maybe she had a rough day." He suggested. I saw some paper on the ground, and i picked it up, grabbed a pencil and i starting writing this. (This is the part what I actually think...)
'Here's the truth, I want to be friends with Mappy cause I think she's cool. She plays tf2, and so do I, but the thing is, I don't think she need's me as a friend. She has Fox and Roc. Why another girl? I added her on steam, but we hardly said anything to each other. Before, I guess she knew I was no use to her. I'm going to leave... and join the Evil City. From Louise.' I wrote. I left the note there and left. "Louise, where you going?" Fox asked. "Evil City." I said. Fox kept shouting more questions, but I ignored him, and i headed to Evil City.
Fox went into the house i went in. He picked up the note, and he almost passed out. He ran out of the house, and he saw Mappy also running. "Have you seen Louise?" She asked. "No, but I've heard she's going to Evil City. Read this note." Fox said, and he handed the note to Mappy, and she also almost passed out. "What? I did nothing to her." Mappy shouted. "Maybe she is true. Maybe she thinks we're better without her." Fox said. "THATS NOT TRUE!" Mappy shouted. "You hardly talk to her..." Fox said. Mappy felt a tear go down her cheek. "But... But..." Mappy choked. Mappy ran. "LOUISE! WHERE ARE YOU?" Mappy screamed.
I kept walking. The sun went down, and i finally found Evil City. I went into the lair, I just wanted to turn myself in and make e a slave or I don't care. "Lou-Lou- LOUISE? What are you doing here?" Shadow shouted. "Turning myself in". I mumbled. Sanad and Shadow were surprised, then had a huge smile on their face. "Just put a spell on me." I mumbled. "Sure thing Lou-""Stop... This might be a trap" Shadow inturrupted. I sighed. "Just kill me." I mumbled. "No, we've got a better place for you." He said. hammie, Riley and Bfrizz grabbed my arms and lead me to a cage. They threw me in. "Stupid girl". Hammie laughed.
TO BE CONTINUED...
Mappy, If you have read the part that I think in Real Life, can we be friends? :(
Thanks For Reading :)
*Sigh* Can someone be my friend so I don't have to be so depressed?

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I honestly thought we were o-o
But, of course.
Now continue this story ;)

 

YAY

 

All i know is you have a base ball bat and i have a 100k super car we can be buddys JUST DONT TOUCH THE CAR

 

But she never said that she was gonna be friends with you...

 

That face doe XD

 

Bit weird to like the fact that you are sad, but i obviously don't mean it that way :). Nice story!

 

Cool story!!!

 

Kinda had a borring day plus my mind not working, thats why :\
Kind of did over react too how I said i was a bit sad... Allwell ;)

 

These stories are really good! Keep up the good work!

 

Okay, last chapter I put in a thing about how I really think, and I TOATILLY <-- I can't spell ;-; Anyway... I toatilly over reacted, I just got a bit bored :\ ANYWHO, Here's the characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@MappyTurtle
@ItsStartheFox
@Rilakkumaloverr
@Shadow_Riolu
@tisha070703
@ProCraftz
@hammiestar
@ItsRiley44
@Sanadz
Note: Why not so much likes on the last chapter? Was it bad? Werid? Awkward? :(
Here are some new characters that need to be chosen, and I will INCLUDE the characters that has been chosen yet:
Slave Keeper:
The slave keeper captures us, but then he/she becomes good. He/She is quite shy though and not really confident...
1 Evil King/Queens Assistant:
The assistant will help the evil king/queen such as spying on LossCity and other things. The assistants is quite clever and smart, and a genius when hiding
2 Helpers: @TheUndeadBrave
These helpers will be in a secret lab and can communicate with us. They can put security carmara's in evil city to spy on them too. They are smart and will do anything (Almost anything...) To help their village and friends.
The Weapon Maker:
The Weapon Maker can make weapons for us and other useful stuff, but we have to do quests for him/her in order to get weapons.
Spyer: @ItsRiley44
The spyer is an expert at spying and hiding, even better then the king/queen assistants. If the helper's camara's are broken, they can also call the Spyer, But the spyer is real greedy, you got to give him about 20 diamonds for him to spy on evil city.
Mad Scientist
This crazy guy lives in a lab far away form LossCity and EvilCity. He has a special item there that we are looking for, but his cray gadgets are real hard to take down... He is seriously crazy.

IMPORTANT NOTE: Someone MUST be the slave keeper soon or the story can't continue after the 8th chapter! Also someone must be the mad scientist for the next chapter. If no one be's the mad scientist eather, I won't make the next chapter until someone be's him/her. Sorry if I'm asking so much :(
Anyway, Enjoy :)

Chapter 7 - The Rescue
I wiped my tears away as i sat in the stinky cage. I looked where tisha was, getting hurt on the back while cleaning the huge missile. I heard some laughing. I looked at the window of Shadow's lair. "Louise was seriously fooled! Man that spell is like paradise! We should do it again!" Sanad laughed. "Mage, you think you can put the spell on Mappy again?" Shadow asked. Suddenly, I realised what I have done. "YOU MONSTER! YOU DIRTY MONSTERS! DON'T YOU DARE HARM MAPPY!" I shouted. "Oh, looks like you want to get out? It's your fault, not ours. You got in, now try and get out... Which will never happen." Shadow chuckled. I kept screaming and shouting at them, but they just laughed. "Louise... Rilakkum is also in danger. Save her for me." Tisha suddenly whispered at me. I couldn't believe it, she was about 10 metres away, and she just whispered, and I could hear it as loud as ever. "How did you..." I said. "Tell Sanad to come to your cage and say you have surrendered and you want to be a slave." Tisha said. "But..." I mumbled. "It's the only way... To save the village, to save Mappy, to save... My sister." Tisha said. I took a deep breath, then shouted. "Sanad! I can't take it anymore in this cage! I'll be your slave! I'll make the missile stronger! It will kill anything, I'm tired of sitting in this stinky old cage, I'll be your slave, I don't care if i get whipped 100 times, I want to help you. That stupid village is so weak! We can actually destroy NOW!" I shouted. Suddenly, it got Sanad's and Shadow's attention. "This better not be a trap." Sanad said.
Sanad openned the cage, and hammie, Riley and Bfrizz guarded me to the missile where Tisha was. "Can i go to the toilet?" I asked. "Fine, only 3 minutes." Hammie mumbled. I ran to the toilets, then i saw a window on the other side of the toilets. I pushed it open and I ran.
I suddenly saw Rilakkum, running straight at LossCity. "GRRARRRG!" She shouted. "Yo stinky breath! You want to eat me? Go ahead!" I shouted. She turned her head, and chased me. "You can do better then that lazy pig!" I shouted. I ran into LossCity, straight at the missile. "3...2...1... Alright that 3 minutes!" Hammie shouted. Suddenly, the knights saw me and Rilakkum. As soon as Rilakkum saw Tisha, Tisha acted. "Oh the horror... Please help me! I'll die... My family and my friends will be miserable forever! The world will be in shame... OOOOH!" Tisha then fake cried a bit, but it looked so real, and I almost fell for it. Then Rilakkum's sharp teeth and claws disappeared, and when she saw Tisha, she screamed. "TISHA! I'LL SAVE YOU!" Rilakkum shouted. Rilakkum slapped the Slave Keeper and set Tisha free, and we ran. "STOP!!!" Riley shouted. They got their horses and was about to catch us, but Mappy then sliced a horse leg off. "MAPPY!" I screamed with delite. "There's no way I'm leaving you here budd." She smiled, and I did too.
We ran out of EvilCity, back into LossCity.
"I was getting worried that you wouldn't return." Fox said. "Also I collected enough iron for you ProCraft." Mappy said. "Wonderful! This will be the base of the missile I'm making. Now we need tihs special engine in a far away place in a lab with a mad scientist in it. This quiest will be dangerious. You must get the engine and return it to me." ProCraft explained.
I saw Rilakkum being as excited as hell around Tisha. "TISHA! OMG MY LOST SISTER! HAVN'T SEEN YOU IN YEARS! YOUR SO PRETTY! Accept maybe you should change clothes, and you look like a zombie..." Rilakkum suddenly stopped. Tisha looked at herself. "Man, your right. Anyone got a doctor?" Tisha asked. "Don't worry, I've got spare clothes and healing potions at the back of my house, you can go and get it." ProCraft said. While Tisha was healing herself and putting new clothes on in the house, I was just glad I knew Mappy will be my friend... Forever.
To Be Continued...
Please ignore any wrong spelling marks.
Let me know some improvments, ideas or your comments down below ;)
Thanks for Reading! :D​

 

amazing your story's are great

 

are we allowed to change charecters? cuz the spy sounds Purdy cool xD

 

Awesome stories! Can I possibly be the spy?

 

Sure thing, I'll change it now
In the next chapter I'll make you quit your job being a knight then you can become a spy :)

 

Then can i be one of the helpers?

 

I was one of the gods, so i will pass on being in this one :)

 

Sure thing, I'll edit the list right now :P

 

*Sorry for double post :P*
Ok guys, I won't be making another chapter in about 2 weeks, if your confused just go to the Introution/Farewell's section and find my thread, then you will understand.
Anyway, Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@MappyTurtle
@ItsStartheFox
@Rilakkumaloverr
@Shadow_Riolu
@tisha070703
@ProCraftz
@hammiestar
@ItsRiley44
@Bfrizz
@Sanadz

when I come back, someone better please request to be the mad scientist, or this story can't continue :(

Chapter 8 - The Long Journey
At Evil City, The 3 knights were hanging out talking about borring stuff while Sanad and Shadow were working on their next move. "I know a spell that would be perfect on those pesky kids. It would make them go onto our side and become a expert at hiding and great!" Sanad suggested. "It's perfect! We'll have our revenge for them for taking our slave away. Without her our missile would take an extra week to get ready." Shadow said. "Now, just to figure out who to put this on..." Sanad wondered. Shadow yawned while stretching his arms up, but his arms accidently knocked a potion off a shelf. "OH NO! SHADOW, RUN!" Sanad shouted. They ran behind the lair, leaving the 3 knights in there. Then suddenly, the liquid in the pot where they make spells and potions then sneaked up on Riley, and suddenly, he changed. "No... NO NO!" Sanad screamed. "What?" Shadow seemed confused. "You idoit! That potion makes the spell go towards the closest one near it, and it appears Riley was the nearest, and now..." Sanad suddenly stopped.
"Wait... Maybe he might be a expert at hiding and be our slave!" Sanad cheered. But then, Riley just walked away and hid somewhere, and it looked like he disappeared. "Oh no. He might join the stupid kids now..." Shadow said. "Yo Riley! Where you at?" Hammie shouted. "RILEY! COME BACK! Hamm, what happened to him?" Bfrizz asked. Hammie just shrudded.
Meanwhile, back at LossCity, Tisha came out of the house, looking brand new. "Man Tishy, your like as bright as the moon!" Rilakkum laughed. "Without the pain, now I can finally be who I really am." Tisha smiled. "Alright kids, better go to the lab now." ProCraft said. We went off heading West, and the sun went down. "Mapp, when we save LossCity, want to play Team Fortress 2 at my place?" I suggested. "Sweet!" Mappy laughed, I smiled. Suddenly, I heard something behind me and I turned around, nothing.
"What was that?" I asked. "Beats me." Rilakkum said. I cornered my eye at Tisha, and I saw a guy about to backstab her. I grabbed the guy, and the face was familar when I took off his mask. "Arn't you one of Evil City's knights?" I asked. "Yes." He mumbled. "WHY DID YOU TRY AND KILL ME TISHY! I'LL KILL YOU!" Rilakkum screamed, before she was about to charge at him, Mappy stopped her. "He seems different... A spell must have gotten into him." Tisha suggested. I looked at him. "I'm Spyer by the way, secret agent, at your service." Spyer said. "Riley, Can you help us find a lab?" I asked. "Are you crazy? Why would you trust that guy! He almost killed my sister!" Rilakkum shouted. "Oh sorry, Was that your sister? I thought it was someone from EvilCity, forgive me. Anyway, this way." Riley pointed the way. Mappy was a bit confused. "You sure we can trust him?" Mappy asked me. "We'll just have to see." I said.
Meanwhile, back at EvilCity, Shadow kept throwing chairs and tables around the lair. "THOSE STUPID KIDS! NOW THEY HAVE SERIOUSLY MESSED UP OUR PLAN! ARRRGG!" Shadow screamed. "Sir calm down! Just hire another knight for us!" Hammie suggested. "Another knight..." Shadow thought for a second. "Don't worry sir, I already called 2 people to come here asap." Sanad said. "Asap?" Shadow said. Sanad facepalmed, then suddenly 1 guy came through the door.
"Umm... Hi" The guy said. "Your joking..." Shadow said.
TO BE CONTINUED...
Alright guys, you will have to wait 2 weeks now for the next chapter, or even longer if no one becomes the mad scientist.
I'm probably going to be back on the 10th of September.
Thanks For Reading, Stay Tuned! :D​

 

You could call me Jf or cactus if you want since JFMULI isn't the best name for in a story.