Short Story - Voices, by Shadow_Riolu

Note, this is not the CreepyPasta that I was inspired to do because of ItsStarTheFox. Instead, this is a thing that I decided to do, just because. Well, enjoy.

Voices, by Shadow_Riolu. A story I decided to write because of boredom.

I was just hanging around a shady corner, innocent, but vengeful. A boy was playing basketball, horrible he was, but still acknowledged for being “Popular.” I stared at him with feelings of hatred and clenched my fists. Under my breath, I muttered, “You… I swear under the seven hells that I will exact revenge on you one day, for ruining my life as it is now…” I left my shady corner and turned around. Afterwards, I left school grounds and went to an area that contained a cliff. I stared down at the cliff and said in my mind, “I wish you would just die from the fall from here boy… You have no right to live, for doing what you have done, not only to me, but others…” In no time at all, I snapped back into consciousness and turned around, only to see a man, standing there, looking at me… Deep into my eyes, without making a sound…



He just stared at me… After a few moments of pure silence, I heard whispers. He just continued to look at me, and raised his hand as if he were controlling the voices. He raised his hand up immediately and the voices intensified. They said, “Kill him… KILL him… KILL HIM…” And it only got louder and louder until I fell unconscious onto the ground…


After lord knows how long, I woke up. I awoke in a gray, lifeless area. I saw one hill and a dead tree. When I walked up there, not aware of what was going on. I noticed that I worse some sort of bear head, with a cape of royalty. When I stood up on top of the hill, voices heard me, and I howled in pain.



I fell onto my knees and tried to get the voices out of my head. Short after, I fell unconscious once again.

After another set of unknown time, I awoke on the bleachers of my school gym, with a suit on for some reason. I saw my friends and they beckoned me over and said, “Finally! You’re awake! Dude, you know how long you were knocked out for? At least you made it just in time for the prom dance.” “Prom dance? Oh yeah. You dared me to ask her to dance with me, correct?” “Yeah, go on. She seems to actually be waiting for you.” I sighed with no time and went over to her. I got down onto my knees, took her hand, kissed it, and said, “Ma’am, would you do me the honor of allowing me to have the next dance with you?” She giggled and said it would be her pleasure. The DJ switched it onto a more soothing, dance kind of music. Whilst we danced, I caught someone in the corner of my eye, at the corner.



I swore to god, it was the same person from the cliff. All of a sudden, I heard the voices again, intensifying, stating, “Kill him… KILL him… KILL HIM…” I fell to the ground and caused a scene. I clasped my hands onto my ears and screamed in pain. A sword was shown to be attached to my back, and everyone gasped as they looked at the seemingly crippled me. I saw him, the boy who made my life miserable for so long. I grabbed the sword and charged at him while the voices intensified and cut his head off.

I felt a moment of pleasure as I saw his lifeless body fall to the ground. I grinned maliciously, before going into a state of confusion. I clasped my hands onto my ears once more, as the voices continued intensifying, even after I did what I longed to do. “You have only done so much my slave… Alas… Your time is up…” With that, an evil laugh was heard, and I fell unconscious once more, and the man who was at the corner, faded away. I felt like I was losing myself, and I fell to the ground, and my eyes started to close as I started to stop breathing. My final words, “You… Helped me… Only to kill me…”

 

Wow this is amazing! Your such a good writer, I love this story. Good job :3 :D

 

To be honest, this is one of my worst, but I do enjoy writing them nonetheless. I just made this since I was severely bored earlier. However, since I noticed that CreepyPastas were starting to be made here, I may work on one later. I will need people to help me with it later. ;)

 

Gj

 

no offense but i have no idea what happened except a boy cutting a jerks head off who he hated then died that all i understood can u exeplane the rest

 

Alright, the boy and the jerk was representing an in real life, bad blood relation between a person and I. This story, showed me, walking to a cliff a bit away from the school, where I met a man, that suddenly began whispering voices into my head to kill the jerk. Everywhere I went, I would hear the voices, and they would keep intensifying until I have done what the voices have said, as shown in this quote here:

Thereafter, I finally gave in to the voices and did what he said; kill the jerk. Once I did, he proceeded into killing me, since as you can probably tell, he wasn't human.

Any other questions?

*EDIT* Do not worry of offending me. I take in what people say quite well, so long it is questionable, reasonable, and not hate induced. If it is hate induced, and you said something like, "omg u suck writing stories go f0k urself," or whatever, that's when offense takes in.

If one were to actually criticize my work, then it would have to follow these guidelines:

• They are not hate induced.
• You have experience writing stories as well.
• Your criticism actually makes sense.
• You support your statement with anything else.

So yeah, simply put, don't think you offend me unless you put hate induced comments.

 

Dont
Look
At
The
Pictures
At
12am
Because
You
Will
Not
Be
Able
To
Sleep

 

Which one? First, second, third, or which?

 

Almost all of them. But to be more specific the third one.
It was really huge on my screen.

 

The second one seemed more cool to me. To be honest, if I had to choose which one would be the creepiest, it would be the first one.

 

Thanks for explaining i really appreciate it

 

This is great! You did very well! You should write some more, you have a great mindset. I love your style, it's unlike anything I've seen. Fantastic.