Tales of the Egyptians (STORY)

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The egyptian one. yes that one, remember it? Yeah? well too bad because i'm not finishing that version.
I found the whole part of the story on the old forums, and i'm going to be coninuing it from where I left off there, but don't worry I'm not going to go on without telling the story before it. I'm going to copy and paste each part of the story in the first post, and then when I get some feedback i'll continue it down below. sound good? k. let's get started.

EGYPTIAN DESERT, 2013

The desert. Hot, dry, absolutely no water. Dunes, hundreds of thousands of millions of billions of dunes. Time ticks by slowly, like the sun going down.
The desert is quiet, quieter than a mouse. All you can hear is the wind.

Until now.
Copyright WynnCraft 2013
TOWN OF MALTIC, 2013

I hear my alarm go off, put it on snooze, and roll off the bed. Another tough day of school, I think. I go downstairs and get some cereal in a bowl, but there's no milk.

VGG: MOM, THERE'S NO MILK LEFT ;-;
Mom: Have a waffle then...
VGG: Uggghhhh

I decide to suck it up and have the usual breakfast, waffles. I eat it quickly and head to the bus stop. While i'm waiting, something catches my eye. On the tree, there's a little symbol of something carved into it. But I ignore it, since the bus stopped in front of me. I find that my best friend is sick from the bus, and plop down in the seat by the door. There's some other people on, but I don't want to talk to them much right now. I sit there until we get to school, then get on the bus and go inside. Walking in the door, some people welcome me back from my vacation. They asked where I went and if it was fun, and I just told them I went to Disney and Universal, because I did. A couple of other people come in, asking me the same things, and once again I say the same thing. I go to my locker and get my stuff, then head to class.

Teacher: Hello class! today instead of our normal things, we're going to learn about Egypt!
VGG: Oh goodie.
Teacher: But, to do that, we need to put in a movie instead since this isn't in our textbooks!

She inserts the tape and the movie starts up. Its name: Tale of the Egyptians.

The tape turns on but all we got was a fuzzy screen, so the teacher goes to push the reset button, but accidentally bumps into a red button when sitting down.

Teacher: I never remember that button being there...

Suddenly, the doors bust down and people dressed in white clothes with a hawk in a medium-sized circle on their uniforms, and a helmet with tinted plastic covers that come down to their chins. I couldn't see the rest of them, though. Because I had a sudden stabbing pain in my back, and then everything went Dark. I opened my eyes for a bit, barely hanging on, and I could just see more and more soldiers coming into the door and taking people. I'm about to try to help when I get more sharp pain almost everywhere. Then everything went black. After what seemed to be a long time, I finally wake up, hot. I open my eyes a bit more, and i see the sky. I'm not sure i'm dreaming or not, since I know I was in school before. I finally have enough strength to open my eyes, and I see where I am.
Egypt.


I get up and realize i'm not alone, a few of my friends were carried here with me, but i'm not sure about the rest of them. I can only name a few, since the sharp pain actually wasn't a taser, it was a knife, I know this from people's marks... a few of them are deadly. I think: they won't be waking up soon. maybe never. Suddenly I hear something moving around me, and knowing I have no weapons or strength, I just ask:

VGG: Who's there?
???: ......
VGG: Speak up! Who are you and what do you want?
???: Where is the treasure....
VGG: What treasure?
???: Don't play dumb with me, you obviously came here for the Mummy's treasure.
VGG: Listen, I was dragged here by some weirdos. I don't even barely know what a Mummy IS!
???: Hmmm.... Where are you from?
VGG: I'm from Maltic, why?
???: Hmm... say, have you seen any temples?
VGG: No... actually, I think. I saw something when I was being dragged here, but only a glimpse.
???: Hmmm... what way were you being dragged?
VGG: If you see a trail of blood, that way I guess.
???: Okay. Shall I introduce myself?
VGG: I've asked it twice....
???: Well, my name is Aru. I come from a town in Egypt.
VGG: What town?

Almuj.

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Alright that's all I wrote apparently. so I'll wait for some feedback and write new parts c:

 

Ooh scury, awesome story!

PART 2 OR DAI

 

soon.