A Story I'm Making - The 8 Gods Of Hell

dis is so op dat i fna

 

Wow, i never knew THIS many people would like this story xD
Maybe i might have 100 replies once i get up to chapter 10 or something xD
Characters So Far:
@Katy9078
@Oreo_Pug
@Rilakkumaloverr
@GoobyHasAnOpinion
@galladepow
New Character!:
@Slevin
WARNING: MAY INCLUDE SOME VIOLENCE AND SOME BLOOD! READ AT YOUR OWN RISK!

Chapter 5 - Growing Of Corruptions
"Oh no..." Oreo whinned. Galla then shot Oreo right on the chest, and she fell off the cliff. "OREO! NOOO!!!" Katy and I screamed. "This will be a piece of cake!" Galla cheered. I remembered we could fly. So i jumped off the cliff, then i floated in the air. All i saw was nothing but red clouds. I felt a tear go down my face. As soon as i landed where Katy was, she was already dead. I felt more tears go down. I looked up, and a arrow on fire was headed straight at me, and as soon as it hit me, i was on fire, then, blackness.
"HA HA HA! NOOBS!" Galla cheered. But then he didn't see a portal appear behind him, Because a guy, with some magical sword charged at galla, and hit him on the head. "ARRGG!" Galla struggled. The guy then stole his bow, and headshotted him in the head. Galla went down.
The guy went straight to me and Katy, then suddenly healed us.
"Arrrgg..." As i woke up, I suddenly saw the guys face, and he seemed so familar. So familar, then memories went in my head: How Slevin became missing one night when i was at his house for a sleepover. Katy seemed to also reconise his face too, how she was friends with him too. We both looked at each other, then a huge smile were on our faces. "Slevin, is that you?" I asked. "It was kind of a long story. I don't want to talk about how i became missing, anyway, you alright?" Slevin asked. "Alright? You made us come back to life! Speaking of coming back to life, are you jesus? how did you resurrect us? TELL US!!!" Katy seemed to be so excited that she was bouncing up and down like some basketball.
"Fine, i'll tell you how i came here, You see, the day i was missing because I was kidnapped by some guy who seems to be incharge of all these gods. He seems to be controlling them, he was about to make me an evil god too, but luckily i escaped. The angels you met rescued me actually. I was hurt though, i think my arm was broken, luckily, they gave me some magical power that can heal people, but i only have 1 use to it, so i used it on you. How i knew you were in danger is because i sensed it. I just had some hard feeling in my mind that felt like my friends were hurt. The angels heard it too, and they knew you were in danger. I was kind of excited to see you, but i was sweating hwen i heard you were in danger, so the angels made me a portal to get to you and also a magical sword that is only used for emergancys. Its great to see you but, wheres OREO?" Slevin explained. I suddenly remembered how Oreo fell off the cliff. "She... fell off the cliff" I choked.
Slevin looked over the edge, and he started sweating. "Oh no... oh no no NO!" Slevin started whinning. Katy seemed confused, but worried too. "So... is she alright Slevin?" Katy asked. "Alright? ALRIGHT! If anyone falls off the cliff of any god's home, they will fall into the guy i told you about who is incharge off all gods, and the guy might even make him into..." Slevin stopped. "Into what? tell us!" I shouted. "An evil god too..." Slevin suddenly shut his mouth like an old maths book. "The only way to rescue him is to fight all of the gods, and once we defeat them all, we are allowed to go to, let's just call him Night. Anyway, once we defeat all of the 8 gods, i can make a portal to Night's lab and rescue Oreo, but rescueing her is no piece of cake. I've heard Night can become a shadow, make you have a heart attack, and all other shadowy stuff. So we must be prepared." He explained. I looked behind me, An red orb was there, and once it floated to me, it turned into some bow. "Sweet!" I said. Galla then woke up. But once he did, he fell right back to the ground. All of us helped him get up, he seemed unconsious. Slevin openned up a portal back to the angel's palace, and once we went inside, all the angel's seemed more... worried.
TO BE CONTINUED...
Thanks @Slevin for requesting to be in my story!
Also, I need 2 more villians to be in the story :O
Will YOU be the next villian? STAY TUNED...
Thanks for reading! :D
Edit: PLEASE PLEASE, PLEAAASEEE just ignore the spelling marks!​

 

Can I be a villain? I just wanna hack things.

 

What kind of hacking? ;)
Like you can build infinite blocks or
Can run extremely fast
or can turn into mobs
Bascailly anything i guess ;)

 

Whew! I thought I was dead :D

 

Anything :)

 

That was the end for me xD

 

You might make a comeback ;)

 

Just stay tuned... ;)

 

I cant wait ;)

 

I'd like to take part in this story :)
Name: Mats
Power: Thunder and Electricity
And add (if possible) Pikachu as my villian sidekick please :)
Thank you!

 

Love it :) Thanks for including me.

 

Nice choice!
However, please be patient though :)
You are... Mats The Thunder Lord!
And i'll try and add pikachu too ;)

 

(Sorry for double post :\)
Yay! Chapter 6 is here!
Characters so far:
@Katy9078
@Oreo_Pug (Might not come back... Or will she??? )
@Rilakkumaloverr
@GoobyHasAnOpinion
@galladepow
@Slevin
New Characters:
@Andior
@jentoschaf
@DiamondCraft
Enjoy!

Chapter 6 - The Oceanal Strike
"Galla!" Rilakkum and Gooby screamed. They both had worried faces on them. They took him back to their house. I frowned. "So whats our next god Slevin?" Katy asked. "Seems to be Andior the dolphin striker. He can turn dolphins into evil and his slaves and make them attack us, And he can swim extremely fast . I hope you know how to swim, because i think his home is like an small ocean around us." Slevin explained. "I'm sure we know how to swim, right Katy?" I smiled, but Katy seemed to be shaking. "Ocean... Water... We will have to... SWIM?" Katy shouted. "Don't you know how to swim" Slevin asked. i saw Katy sweating. "Nn... no" Katy choked. I frowned. "Maybe you should just stay here and let us handle this one." I suggested. She nodded, still freaking out. "Gg... good lll... luck" Katy shivered.
As Slevin openned the portal, we went in and landed in water. I looked up and saw an dolphin, swimming around, but as soon as he saw us, he got mad, real mad. "Dolphins! We have got visiotrs!" Andior crackled. Then about 6 dolphins swam up to the top of the sea. I felt a chill go down my spine. "Dolphins, ATTACK!" Andior shouted.
The dolphins swam right to us, I swam as fast as i could, but a dolphin then bit my leg. "ARRGG! GET OFF! GET OFF!" I shouted. Slevin got his sword out and hit it on the head, and it went down under the water. Andior called more and more dolphins. I got my ice sword out and i hit one dolphin on the head, then i used the instrument i got back at Gooby's world and played it. The dolphins all covered their ears. They swam back down under the ocean. Now Andior got so mad, i saw his eyes go a bit red. "I guess I'll have to deal with you myself!" He shouted. He swam so fast, he was really blurry to see. He shoved Slevin and I off the edge of the water, I saw Andiors head just pock up, so i headshot him with the bow i got before from Galla's world. He suddenly went down too. As we passed the clouds, we teleported.
I openned my eyes in some lab. I looked up and saw some guy on a throne. I saw Andior also behind me, he seemed normal, but he was unconsious since there was no water anywhere. "Looks like you have fell into my little trap!" The guy said. Slevin seemed to reconise this guy. "Its..." Slevin choked. "Oh you, Slevin. Its me, Lord Nightshroud, looks like you brought friends with you huh?" Lord Nightshroud chuckled. "You..." Slevin mumbled. "Stephano, destroy them!" Lord Nightshroud shouted. Out of nowhere, some girl appeared. She stared at unconsious Andior. Then he suddenly woke up, with super dark red eyes. "Grr... ARRRGG!" He screamed. Stephano then spawned some sword, and it floated to Andior, and he was crazy! He was swinging around the sword like a maniac.
There was one question that still bobbed around my head: Shouldn't Oreo be here?
TO BE CONTINUED...
I need 1 more villain to be in the story! Hurry and ask now!
Thank you all for supporting me to keep this series up! Maybe once i finish this story, I'll so another and of course you can ask to be in it too!
Thanks for reading! :D
And PLEASE just ignore any bad spelling marks!
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I want to be the villain of space. Pleeaaase.

 

Woo, i have a sword!
Story idea

Spoiler: click :)

It's a master sword that will help them later :P

 

Perfect! xD
Since you will be the last god to be defeated, space is a awesome choice!
You are.
Wheatly The Space King
Thanks for requesting!

 

Sorry for double post... ;-;
OOO, i wonder if @Oreo_Pug will come back? Is she dead or alive?
Characters so far:
@Katy9078
@Oreo_Pug
@Rilakkumaloverr
@GoobyHasAnOpinion
@galladepow
@Slevin
@DiamondCraft
@Andior
@jentoschaf
New Character!:
@jerkboy2006
Enjoy! :D
WARNING: SOME VIOLENCE IS IN THIS CHAPTER! READ AT YOUR OWN RISK!

Chapter 7 - The Lab
I looked at Slevin, and he seemed to be scared too. "If Katy and Oreo was here, this would be a piece of cake." Slevin said. "But i guess it's oing to be just a piece of failure..." I mumbled. Suddenly, Stephano's eyes turned red, and so did Andior's. He charged at us. He pushed me against the wall, and before he would slice my head off, Slevin stabbed him on the back, but that did NOTHING! Andior just pulled the sword out of his back and threw it at Slevin, It missed. But then Andior quickly punched Slevin in the head, and Slevin became unconsious. "SLEVIN! NOOO!" I screamed, but i should have kept my mouth shut, because Andior turned right to me. He held my neck against the wall, choking me. Before i was out of breath, I saw a portal appear.
Rilakkum, Gooby, Galla and Katy came out of the portal! They then all got bows out, and shot Andior on the back twice. Now there were 8 arrows on Andiors back. Andior let go of me, then charged at them. I was sweating. "What a great show!" Lord Nightshroud laughed. Rilakkum, Gooby and Galla went down. Katy was freaking out, I saw Slevin just move his head up, looking at the unconsious Rilakkum, Gooby and Galla. Then Stephano stared at Slevin, and soon he turned evil! Now were doomed. Katy then luckily sneaked out in some door. And Katy found some cages, and she found Oreo and another guy! "Katy!" Oreo cheered. Katy looked around and saw 2 keys on the ground. She picked them up and unlocked both of the cages. "Thank you, I'm jerkboy. I'm friends with Oreo, I shall help you in your adventure due to your strongness." Jerkboy said. "We better hurry! The others are getting beaten down by Slevin and Andior!" Katy shouted. As they went out, I was the only one left, and i was getting punched by Andior and Slevin. I felt blood go down my nose. Then Katy, Oreo and jerkboy charged at jerkboy and Andior, and slashed them with some magical sword. Suddenly, they went down, and they woke up with normal eyes. "No.. NOO! Impossible!" Stethano screamed. Then jerkboy raised his magical sword and shouted "HEAL!" soon the blood disappeared from me, and Rilakkum, Gooby and Galla woke up too. "Oh yeah, Slevin, this is jerkboy, another friend we just met." Katy explained to Slevin. "Hmmf, atleast i know how strong you are, but be prepared humans!" Lord Nightshroud said. Before he turned into a shadow he said "Stephano your useless!" And he punched Stephano. Soon she turned normal.
Oreo made a portal back to the palace. "Andior! Stephano! Finally your normal!" An angel said. Rilakkum, Gooby, Galla, Andior and Stephano then went in their homes. "So, whos our next boss?" I asked. "Hmm... Looks like Cakesquid the Squid Overlord is next." Slevin said. Before Slevin made a portal , iheard a shout from Andior and Stephano. "Oh yeah, heres your orb you were suppost to get." They said. Then a orb appeared, and it floated around me and Katy. In one hand, was some dolphin whistle which can spawn dolphins to protect us, and one is some magical hand which can turn people into slaves. "These would be great for our next god. But be prepared!" Jerkboy said. He made a portal and we went in.
TO BE CONTINUED...
Ignore the spelling marks please!
Sorry guys, looks like I don't need anymore characters ;-;
But once i finish this series, I'm sure I'll make another story, and I'll make sure there are requests to be characters!
Thanks for reading! :D
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I'm so so sorry for making a triple post, i couldn't help it.
Thank you all for so much support! I should do this more some time! :D
Characters So Far:
@Katy9078
@Oreo_Pug
@Rilakkumaloverr
@GoobyHasAnOpinion
@galladepow
@Slevin
@DiamondCraft
@Andior
@jentoschaf
New Character!:
@CakeSquid
Enjoy! :D

Chapter 8 - A Wateral Rival
As we went inside, We seemed to be on a beach. "What kind of place is THIS?" Oreo shouted. I looked behind, and some kind of astranaut suits were behind us. "What? Why would a god give us something that won't let us drown! Its like hes helping us! Come on, The god's are suppost to kill us, not save us!" Katy shouted. "Maybe Cake Squid just wants to fight us instead of sitting there watching us drown, it kind of made sence though." I explained. katy sighed. As we all put on the astronaut suits on, some note was behind it. Slevin read it out. "Dear visitors, beware of the almighty Cake Squid, He will be waiting for you at the bottom off the ocean. And prepare to meet your graves." We then hopped into the ocean and swam to the bottom, We saw some amazing views though of some creatures swimming. As we stood on the sand, We saw some dungeon. "Kind of like the 1.8 version thats coming to Minecraft" Jerkboy said. As we went through the pillars, Some guy was sitting on a throne, with 2 squids next to it. "I've been expecting you humans." He said. "We are here to destroy you almighty squid! To free you from the curse of evil, now prepare yourself for mercy!" Oreo said. I was kind of impressed however because of his wise words. Sometimes i wish i had wise words like her...
"Hmmf, as you wish, prepare to MEET YOUR GRAVES!" Cake squid shouted. The 2 squids beside him got their spears out. I got my sword out and i pushed one against a pillar, suddenly the pillar fell. "My dungeon! GRRR! GUARDS!" Cake Squid looked like he was about to explode. Then suddenly 20 squids were there. I got my dolphin whistle out i got from Andior and i blowed it. I looked behind me, and 10 dolphins arrived! They the squids and dolphins attacked. About 5 dolphins were alive, but al the squids were dead! Katy got her ice sword out and she held it near Cake squid's neck. "it's over, now prepare to die!" As she was about to slice his head off, his eyes turned red. Katy backed away, terrified. Then, his head started to change in a shape, his legs started to stretch, and soon, he became a giant squid! "Muahaha! You think thats all i got?" He shouted. I got the magical hand out i got from Stephano, and i held it infront of all the unconsious squids. I saw all their eyes turn purple, then they stood up, holding their spears up at the Gaint cake squid. "Now... ATTACK!" I shouted.
All the squids threw their spears at him, but all it made were scratches. "Muahaha! FOOLS!" He then pushed his tenticles against the squids, an then they became unconsious, again. Cake Squid then held all off us in his tenticles, i felt him sqeezeing me, i pushed my arms out with my ice sword and sliced some of his tenticle off. "ARRRG!" He shouted, all off us sliced their selves free with their swords, accept for Slevin. His arms were too tight. "Muhaha! I shall take him to my master and he will make him a god!" He shouted, he then swam away. We were too slow, but before he was out of sight, i used my bow and shot him in the head. The arrow must have made it into his BRAIN, because he was unconsious just like that, he fell, but when he fell into the sand, the sand just became like a sinkhole! It created a huge hole and the giant cake squid and Slevin fell. "SLEVIN! NOOO" Katy screamed. I looked down the hole, but it looked like the hole would have teleported to the lab. jerkboy wanted to jump in there, but i stopped him. "We arn't ready, we almost died the last time we went to the lab, we must defeat the other gods to get stronger. Before Oreo made a portal, a orb floated up the hole, then surronded me and Katy. Soon we had some sort of magical tenticle. "What does this do?" I asked. "Looks like it can turn you into a squid, perfect for swimming!" jerkboy explained. "Eww..." Katy said. Suddenly, i saw my air tank behind me go empty, and so did everyone else. Katy and I used our magical tenticle, soon we turned to squids. I felt a bit werid being in this shape. I quickly grabbed Oreo and Katy held jerkboy. We swam back to the beach. Oreo and jerkboy spent the last 5 minutes coughing trying to get the water out of their mouth. Oreo made a portal back to the angel's palace. But they seemed mad somehow! "We onlyy have 1 day to defeat the last 2 gods and the god who is behind this!" An angel shouted. "1 DAY! WE'VE GOT TO GET MOVING NOW!" Katy shouted. "But wheres Slevin!" An angel said. Oreo made a portal. "Hes somehow got teleported to the lab i think, Once we defeat all the gods, we'll get him! Now bye!" I said as fast as i could, and i rushed into the portal with the others.
TO BE CONTINUED...
Thanks so much for reading my story!
Please ignore any wrong spelling marks though!
Thanks for reading! :D
EDIT: I should have made this chapter shorter xD
Also, let me know what you think below and maybe some tips or ideas to make the story better! I can't post 4 times in a row D:​

 

Can I be in it, I would like to be able to run super fast, call me Nacho, btw I would want to be a villan if not a hero I guess