A Story I'm Making - The 8 Gods Of Hell

Enjoy my little book i made! I will keep adding chapters to it until its done! Sorry for spelling mistakes though :p
Starring:
@Katy9078
More characters will come in each chapter!
Wanna come into the story? Ask below and you might be in my next chapter :O

Chapter 1 - The Grave
I heard a knock on the door. I rushed to the door and when i openned it, my best friend Katy was there. "Yo Louise! Wanna do something?" Katy asked. "I've been wondering if we could go to the museum, i've heard a new item is there!" I said. "Alright! We'll head there." I cheered. As we went to the museum, we searched until a dark door was standing infront of us. I read the sign beside the door. "The Portal To Hell" I read. "We should check it out." Katy suggested. We went in the door and saw a old grave with some werid language on it. "A portal? More like 'The GRAVE of hell!'" Katy laughed. I looked around. Then suddenly i saw a huge sign with some words on it.
"I know this language on this sign. I've been researching it." I said. "Well, read it then!" Katy shouted. I read it. "'Kelsavia to nevtri tooba eli, Soo garlia te soula' It has something to do with holy spirits." I explained. Suddenly, a huge light appeared right behind us. Huge wind filled the room. "Whats happening!" Katy screamed. Suddenly, a huge portal appeared infront of the tomb that sucked us in.
"Arrgg... Katy, you okay?" I felt like my legs were going to break. I saw Katy trying to push herself up. As we got up on our feet, we then suddenly saw bright golden angels. We saw a big angel with a beard sitting on some golden throne. Me and Katy's mouth's were wide open.
TO BE CONTINUED...
Feel free to comment belong what you think of it! (No harsh comments please :()
I'm looking for a person to be in my next chapter. I will also need 8 villians too (Don't worry, you will turn into good guys! Also to put in what power you have! Example: Ice, Fire, Can turn into a wolf, Can run extremely fast, etc. Bascially anything!)
Thanks for reading ;)

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Can I be in your next chapter? I'll have the Ice ability then c:
The story was short but it was nice xD

 

Alright! Villian 1: Rilakkum The Ice Ruler! And sorry if that was short , i will make my chapters longer hopefully ;)

 

Can I be in your story also? :>

 

Amazing <3
Can't wait for the next part =)

 

can I be iamdeoxys the pokemon fire master? if not another villan pweease

 

Awesoem :D
I don't really like reading. but I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)

 

Sure!
You want to be the hero that helps us or a villian?

So do you want to be the hero i guess?
Sorry, my eyes are tired :P

 

May I be in your story?
You can call me Oreo.
Nice story btw. c:
Edit: I would like to be a hero.

 

Can I be in it? :)
Name: Gooby
Power: Uhh Music? c:

 

Can I please be im it too? c:
so far the story looks good btw, gj.
Name: Galla
Power: Extremely high accuracy.
:p

 

Thanks! You are
Gooby the music God!

Thx! You are Galla the bow champ!

Finally! Someone wants to be a hero xD
Thx!!
Thanks all for asking to be in the story, now i can FINALLY start my next chapter!

 

Can i be a flying dolphin villain in the story? Nice job on the story, those are just too short chapters for me :P Also the dolphin will be afraid of non-ocean water.
My previous post got deleted by my brother ._.

 

Thanks everyone for asking to be in the story!
New characters:
@Oreo_Pug
and
@Rilakkumaloverr

Chapter 2 - An Ultimate Quest
I was about to scream and run away, but then the angels said "Do not be afraid, we need you, we have chosen you to help us save your world." I was confused then. "What me? Why! I'm just a normal girl! I'm not a queen or anything!" I screamed. "We know you are something Louise, And you also Katy, you are special." The angels said. "So why do you choose us then? What do you want us to do?" Katy asked. "Let us explain, A long long time ago, back in 1022, We used to be humans like you. We used to have many friends who were strong. But then they were corrupted by mysterious darkness. No one knows who did it, but 8 of our friends became corrupted, and they are called THE 8 GODS OF HELL! They got evil powers like ice and dreadful music! They came out of control! They made us die, but luckily we are now angels, since we were their friends, we were given powers too, and we turned into angels, but the 8 gods of hell took the powers away. Luckily though, they disappeared but they said they will come back in over 1000 years. And now, yesturday we got a message saying they are coming next week, so we have chosen you 2 to help us defeat them! And if we defeat them, they will become good." The angel explained.
"But, we don't have weapons or any powers!" Katy whinned. Then suddenly some mythical white orb floated in a angels hand. Then suddenly, the orb grew bigger, then suddenly everything was white, and when everything was clear, i felt something strange in me. I could fly! Me and Katy flied and cheered. "Enough! We do not have enough time!" An angel shouted. "But before you go, take her" Then an angel moved away, and a girl was there. "This girl is named Oreo, she will help you on your adventure." An angel said. "Hello miss oreo! So your gonna help us on our adventure huh?" Katy cheered. But Oreo looked serious. "You better be ready for this." Then she suddenly openned a portal. "She can also make portals to the 8 god's worlds." An angel said. "Now, farewell hero's. Goodluck! You only have a week to defeat them all!" An angel cheered. The angels cheered as we entered the portal.
As we went through, there was a mountain with a ice castle on it, just like the one in Frozen. "Wow." I said. "Our first enemie is Rilakimm, the Ice Ruler. She is just like Elsa in the movie Frozen. But she is much stronger then that". Oreo explained. As we climbed the mountain up to the castle, as we entered, we saw a girl, standing there on the stairs. "How did you get here humans?" Rilakimm shouted. "I'm Oreo, this is Katy and Louise, and we are here to DESTROY YOU!" Oreo shouted. "Is that so? Well then, meet my powers of DOOM!" Rilakimm shouted.
She then swinged her hands up, and a giant ice dragon was there, crushing the roof. Me and Katy stood there, sweating.
"Ice Dragon, ATTACK!" Rilakimm shouted. The ice dragon roared, and breathed some light blue fire that would make everything into ice on whatever it touched. We ran out of the ice castle. As i looked back, the dragon flew, right at us looking like it will freeze us.
TO BE CONTINUED...
Wanna be in my story? We need 5 more villians and a main villian that has corrupted the gods of hell!
Thanks for reading ;)​

 

(Sorry for double post...)
Sure! You are
Andior The Dolphin Striker!

 

Can't wait for the music villain :D

 

i like how you spelled my name wrong but whatever xD
lsdfsf i want more.

 

Nice story Louise. It's amazing C:

 

Thanks for the support guys!
Characters:
@Katy9078
@Oreo_Pug
@Rilakkumaloverr
@LouiseXminerX :P
New Character:
@GoobyHasAnOpinion

Chapter 3 - The God Returns
I thought this was the end, but then Oreo got out a sword and swinged it at the dragon, and the ice dragon suddenly snapped off. As it landed, it was crushed to pieces. "Catch!" Oreo shouted. She threw Katy and I swords. "Awesome!" Katy cheered. "Grrr! Time to make you meet your grave!" Rilakkum shouted. She threw ice shards at us. I ducked. Suddenly, i saw the broken pieces of the ice dragon's head, which gave me an idea.
I picked them all up, and i threw them at Rilakkum. "Arrgg! You pekish humans!" Rilakkum shouted. She then made a huge wall and she pushed it at us. I looked back, and we were about to fall off the cliff. Oreo, Katy and I pushed the wall as back as we could. Oreo then kicked the wall at Rilakkums face. Then she was about to rage. "AARRRG!!! YOU WILL PAY FOR THIIIS!" Rilakkum then was making a giant monster, the size of the mountain. I looked around, then suddenly i saw 2 sticks sticking out. I then got an idea. I grabbed the sticks, and i rubbed them together. My hands felt like they were going to fall off. I used the last bit of energy on me, then some smoke was made. I rubbed faster, then a burst of fire was made! I got the stick, then i threw the stick at the giant monster that she was still making. The giant half-built monsters was melted. Then i threw the other piece at Rilakkum. She then bursted into flames. "ARRGG! YOU RATS! YOU ARE NOTHING! ARRRRG" she screamed.
Suddenly, a huge light surronded her. Then she fell on the ground, and a blue orb appeared. It surronded Katy and I. Suddenly, some ice sword appeared in our hands. "AWESOME!" Katy and I cheered. "Wait, how come you don't have one Oreo?" Katy asked. "I don't need it." Oreo said.
Then suddenly, Rilakkum came back to life, and she looked more friendly and... an angel! "Arrgg... Wait, who are you?" Rilakkum asked. "I'm Louise, this is Katy and Oreo." I pointed. "We have freed you Rilakkum. We will return you home to your friends." Oreo explained. "Freed what? I was in a deep dream where i turned evil... Then i saw you three breaking my curse. WAIT! you DID free me!" Rilakkum said. Katy and I smiled.
Oreo created a portal back to the angels palace. As we went inside, the golden angels looked really happy to see us. "Rilakkum! It's been such a long time!" An angel said. "Guys? Oh my god! It's so good to see-" She then suddenly fell. Katy and I picked her up. An wise old angel with a beard was standing there. He placed his hand on Rilakkums forhead. "She is still cursed! Angels, Help her!" The wise angel shouted. 2 Angels came rushing in to help Rilakkum. They carried her to a small house. "Will she be okay?" Katy asked. "We hope." An angel said.
"Alright, our next god is Gooby the music god." Oreo explained. "A MUSIC god? Whats it going to do? Sing a song for us?" I joked. Katy and I laughed. "This is SERIOUS! Gooby will make dreadful music that will fill your ears with fear and will make some songs put you to sleep and make you stay in a mightmare forever!" Oreo shouted. I frowned. Oreo made a portal to the next world.
As we went inside, we saw a man on a piano playing scary music. I covered my ears. He suddenly turned around with some black instrument, then played it. The music filled my ears, i felt like my ears were going to explode! I tried to cover my ears as much as i can, but it just kept ringing in my head! "Suffer from my MUSIC, humans!" Gooby shouted.
TO BE CONTINUED...
I need 4 more villians and also a main villian who is behind all these gods :O
And sorry if you see any spelling marks, just ignore them :P
Thanks for reading!
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-You still spelled my name wrong ;-;-
i want moar
I came out to have a good time and I'm honestly feeling so attacked right now