World of the Damned. (A chapters series + Custom characters.)

Oohoohoh man, I was laughing way too hard when Gooby sacrificed Nick. Idk why.

 

Alright, I decided to post part of Chapter two, seeing that I need to revive this for those who have been waiting. Note that Chapter two is expected to be at least 40,000 characters long.

Chapter 2: A mischievous Kitty.

New characters:
@KittyGoddess16


A few moments after, Shadow started to come out with his eyes glowing in a bloody red, with dark powers from his hands keeping Demon constrained, paralyzed, and he was starting to choke him. “You know, if I were you, I wouldn’t try to kill my comrades. It comes with quite the price if you do.” Shadow stated while constraining Demon even more. Demon coughed more blood before saying, “You… You miserable son of a bitch… I will kill you… Anybody who does this to me… will die by my hand… I don’t care how long it takes… I will kill you…” “You really are stubborn aren’t you? Look at the position you are in, and I am not even going all out on you. Anyways, I heard your name is Demon. To be honest, I hoped for a bit more of a challenge. Ah well… I suppose it is time to bid farewell.” Shadow stopped his powers of darkness, but kept him constrained using aura that people could tell was being used it his eyes were glowing a bloody red. “Farewell Demon.” Shadow lifted up his scythe and said, “I suppose having a soul like yours will be perfect. You had potential kid, but you didn’t show it. Too bad you didn’t show it.” Demon started to struggle, but he started to move. Shadow looked in a small sense of shock. Demon tilted his head and said, “You… do not know… who I am… to treat me like this… Forget the girls… You’re first…” Demon then broke out of the aura’s grip and broke free. He lifted his flare gun and shot it at Shadow. Shadow immediately jumped to the side and sheathed his scythe while bring out his sword. He signaled Gooby to come out and tackle Demon. Demon punched Gooby out of the way before going after Shadow. Demon brought out his two swords and the two of them had a fight of the ages, slashing at each other skillfully without taking damage on either side. After Shadow managed to stab his sword through Demon’s chest, he pulled his sword out and let Demon fall to the ground half dead. “You did have potential indeed, but I still swear that this is not the farthest you can go. You had your chance, but now it’s over.”


Another rustle was heard while Shadow sheathed his sword and brought his sword out and had it put on Demon’s chest. A small feminine chuckle was heard and a voice was heard, saying “You know, the guy you’re about to kill, is begging for mercy.” “Who are you?” Shadow said.” “That is nothing you need to know. The only thing you need to know is that you should spare that boy’s life.” “What makes you say that? He tried to kill my comrades. Get in my way, and you will die as well.” “Oh come on. I am not as weak as you think. In fact, I have something similar to your powers.” “What makes you say that? I am the only one who has the ability to take souls and use aura…” “No. Not that. I couldn’t do that if I wanted to. But I have something that I won’t show unless I need to.” “You are wasting my time. Get out of my way.” With that, Shadow used an aura like force that shot the girl into a tree. “Such a weak and useless girl. I have better things to do then waste my time on the likes of her.” When Shadow turned around, Demon was gone. “WHAT? WHERE IS HE?” Demon whistled. “I told you I am not weak. Now we can truly fight.” Shadow and Demon readied their swords, but at the same time, the girl that was shot into the tree started to grit her teeth and did something that sent Shadow flinging. Shadow grunted before getting up and said, “What the… What just happened? So this is pain… It feels better than I thought. Well then. Who did that?” Demon, Leila, Sera and Gooby stared at the girl, shocked. The girl replied, “I told you I wasn’t weak. Don’t underestimate a girl.”

Shadow looked at Demon and the girl. “You there. What is your name?” The girl looked at Shadow and said, “I am known as Kitty, and you are?” “Shadow.” Shadow looked at Kitty surprised yet interested. “You are the first one to have ever injured me. I will congratulate you on that, but you just made a fatal mistake.” “You’re scared.” She said. “What?” “I said, you’re scared.” Shadow thought in his mind, “What the… How does she know?..” “You are wondering how I know you are scared of my gender? Easy. I am able to read minds.” Shadow looked in shock and staggered back. “You are lying. This is just coincidental.” “I’m not.” Sera and Leila brought out their knives and placed it on Kitty’s neck. Sera looked at Shadow and said, “Give us the word, we’ll slit her throat so you don’t have to deal with her.” Kitty gritted her teeth once again and flung Sera and Leila. Sera hit Demon and the two of them fell unconscious and Leila hit Gooby and they fell over a cliff screaming. Shadow looked at Kitty shocked and surprised. “You… You are strong… But it is not enough to beat me now is it?” “I can tell you this much Shadow. I don’t want to fight.” “What makes you think I will believe that? I can already tell you aren’t exactly ‘sane.’ “ “Who said I was sane? Nobody in this world is sane. You, me, or those people that I flung.” “You use dark magic. I sense it in you.” “Oooh, there’s a smart one. I see you can use dark magic as well, but you can use it at any time.” “At any time? Of course I can. You don’t seem to be able to completely control it. It seems that your dark magic only activates if feelings of hate and anger are present.” “So you know me?” “No, I don’t know you. I only know what you can do.” “It’s sad you don’t remember me.” “What are you talking about? I don’t know you, you don’t know me. You even sounded like you didn’t know me earlier. You had to ask my name for it.” “How do you know I didn’t know you? How do you know this is not part of my plan? How do you know I am telling the truth or not?” “I don’t… That is why I have to kill you, because you are not someone I can trust. For all I know, you are part of the people who want to shed blood and all.” “If that is what you think, then kill me.” Shadow hesitated for a while, but he started to activate his powers of darkness. “As you wish Kitty.”

 

Hurrr.
This story is rad
Can't wait for the next part!

 

The point of each parts is to have a cliffhanger, as you can see... I'll be on that, but I am thinking that this is starting to die out.

 

Heheh Cliffhanger
get it cus
Me and Leila fell off a cliff
ehehehehe
ehehe
k,
I don't think it's starting to die out
I think it's just that not a lot of people noticed that part for some reason
like
I just noticed it today hurr.
Just keep doing what you're doing.

 

I see what you did there.
Alright then.

 

Looks like someone is a author too ;)
I'm gonna be a author too.
I've finished a book with over 50 pages in it with almost 8 thousand words in it.
I told everyone to right their comment on the back of the book.
My teacher even wrote something there xD

 

Meh, I'm not a really good author, let alone one. I don't have the makings of one, as you can see... I do like writing books, and the first book I made consisted of 351 pages and lord knows how many words. Sadly, it is now gone because of the torn pages from my cats.

 

This is still ongoing? Anyways, this is still looking interesting, and it's pretty impressive that you mold in other peoples' characters into a dark and somber story (as you always write).

 

It might stop soon, due to the fact that it is dying out.

 

Am I gonna die???? Lol that is so me though.. good job :)

 

Maybe, maybe not. If I were you:

Spoiler: I suggest looking at this.

What Kitty said.

 

Hmm... (gears are turning)

 

Kinda off-topic, but I do.

 

Hello everyone, today I am here to note that World of the Damned is back on its track. It's been a while, so enjoy Chapter 3.

Chapter 3: Remembrances.

New characters:

@Xadidax (Adam)

Shadow used his darkness and formed a spear. When he attempted to strike the spear through Kitty, she skillfully pivoted and went behind a tree and giggled. Shadow’s spear disintegrated, and he looked at Kitty and said, “You are faster than most others. You are a bit unusual.” “I am unusual, because you should know me. I am an angel,” she said before Shadow looked in shock. “You… I thought you left at that eve-“ Another rustle was heard, and a boy appearing to be 16, came out of the bushes. He wore jeans and a blue hoodie, 5’6 in height, and had short hair. “You there,” the boy said. Shadow looked at the boy and said, “What do you want?” The boy replied, “I need to ask you a question. Did you per chance kill an innocent boy and an old man earlier today?” Shadow frowned and said, “Yes. What about it?” “Then you are the one they asked for me to kill,” he said. “Asked for to be killed? They were already dead. How could they possibly ask you anything?” I asked. “Well, I tend to talk to those who have passed away… And the two you’ve killed have requested that I kill you,” he replied. “If that is even possible, then do so.” “Alright, but remember, you asked for it.” The boy walked towards Shadow and looked straight into his soulless eyes. He punched Shadow, and Shadow simply took the hit and kicked the boy hard enough to the point where he was flung into a tree and knocked the tree down from the impact. “You are weak… Although I must know who you are,” Shadow stated. “I am known as Adam… And you are a lot stronger than I thought… It’s not a surprise now that you were able to kill Grandpa Iroh so simply… I didn’t think I’d have to do this…” Adam brought out a device and pointed at Shadow. Shadow stood still and couldn’t move. “What is this? It’s not paralysis… Although I feel something unusual…” Shadow started coughing blood. Demon looked at Shadow and thought, “This is my chance.” He brought out his flare gun and pointed it at Shadow, and fired. Shadow caught on fire and started to have a pained look on his face. In no time, Demon brought out his two swords and stabbed Shadow through the chest before using the other one to cut Shadow’s head off. Shadow’s lifeless body fell to the ground… Kitty looked at the lifeless body and had a look of shock and a small hint of sadness in her face. “Not again... We have been separated yet again…” she said. “I will find you once more, and we can fina-“she began saying before Demon looked at Kitty and said, “You know him, don’t you?” Kitty looked into Demon’s eyes with hate and said, “Yes, I do. And you killed him. You do realize I am not going to let you get away with this, right?” Adam looked at Kitty and stated “If you know him, then we have to take you in.” Kitty looked at Adam and stated, “It is against the laws of heaven for me to do this…” “Heaven? What are you telling me you’re an angel?” Adam stated. “Don’t make me laugh,” he said with a mocking tone. Kitty sighed before revealing a halo and speeded her angelic wings. Within that moment, from the baggy clothes she donned, it became a beautiful red dress. She said, “Now you will believe me, and I will make you pay for killing him… The one person… That had a soft side within him…” Demon stood by Adam and said, “Rid her of her movement and I will knock her unconscious so we can take her in for interrogation…” Adam nodded in agreement and pointed the device at Kitty. Kitty was locked in place. She tried breaking free, but there was no hope. Demon put his weapons away and punched her in a vital spot, hard enough to knock her unconscious, but not hard enough to kill her. Kitty fell to the ground and said, “Please don’t leave me again Shadow…” before falling unconscious.


Shadow awoke in a fiery area. “I remember now… I was supposed to kill all of those who were insane… Take their souls and return them to Lord Satan…” He saw a path that led to the room of which Satan resided, and he walked it with no fear. A room of massiveness was revealed before Shadow, and a throne was at the end, a devilish man sat there, and Shadow said, “Lord Satan… I have failed… I’ve only been able to kill so many people you desired…” Satan looked at Shadow and stated, “You disappoint me, Elite Shadow. I expected more of my most trusted member of hell.” “I understand, and I will take full punishment for my failure.” “There is no need. In fact, I will grant you a new power in order for you to be able to accomplish what I want.” “So you are sending me back to the overworld? With memory of what I was to do?” “Memory? Pray tell, what are you talking of?” “I had no memory when returning upon the overworld. I only had the desire to kill and I was with 4 others, one being sacrificed by a fellow friend, the one who was sacrificed being Nick.” “Ah, yes… He is currently in purgatory, is he not?” “I would believe so.” “Very well. You already have your powers of darkness… I suppose you need physical appearances to prove you work for me, and are specifically one of my trusted Demon Chamber Elites.” Satan put forward his hand towards Shadow, and Shadow grew wolf ears and a fox tail, and black, demonic wings sprouted from his back, and his eyes turned red. “I will not fail you this time Lord Satan.” “I know you will not.” Shadow began walking towards a room, and when opened, a portal was revealed, and it was labeled “Overworld.” “So, I get another chance to meet my angelic… *Gulps* Girlfriend…” Shadow thought. Shadow stepped into the portal, and prepared to be in search of the one person he loved.

*Meanwhile, at the bottom of a cliff two people fell off of…

 

Rekt xD
be lucky i didn't use my sharingan

Nice story man, but.. how did you know my height and that I had short hair?

 

Riolu is psychic



Who knew it could get darkerdarker. It was a good chapter, real nice, and I don't mean to nitpick, but Demons entrance wasn't well explained, he just kind of popped up, it might have made it better if you stated where he was.

Another thing, I know the story is dark, and Shadow is evil, but Idk, "Satan" seems a bit extreme for this character to me. Shadow seems like the kind of character to talk to "The Lord of the Underworld", "The King of Darkness", etc rather than "Satan" himself, that's just me, though. Especially since Shadow has an emotion of love, meaning he has some good intent.

I'm probably just too critical, sorry. Overall it's a good chapter :D

 

No, no, criticism is very well appreciated. And the way you did it was not hate-induced, so that is why it's so good, yes I do know I do have some good intent, but I gave myself talking to Satan because Heaven and Hell: God and Satan.

As for Demon, yes, I see. I'll try to make it so that it seems a bit more smooth rather than sudden and such.

You explained it on the character recruitment thread.

 

All.... Of... The.... Feels... >3<

 

Decided to go ahead and make Chapter 4.
Chapter 4: A Meeting and a Parting.
New characters:

@Mcc457 (Jordan)

@BossClaire (Claire Lokimedic Orange)

@MappyTurtle (RED Scout)

Meanwhile, at the bottom of a cliff Leila and Gooby woke up after a seemingly long slumber. “That was fun. Let’s do it again!” Gooby said. Leila looked at Gooby, dumbfounded and said, “You really are mentally retarded aren’t you?” “Hey, you two. What are you doing there?” A voice was heard. A man in a cop’s uniform was standing above them. “You two don’t seem to be savagely vicious compared to the others back there. Do you know how dangerous it is out here?” he asked. Leila grabbed Gooby by the shirt and backed up before asking, “Who are you?” “You can refer to me as Officer Jordan. Most elite and well trained cop of the forces,” Jordan said. “There are only so many people who aren’t insane and just want to kill, and you two are part of it,” he stated, and Leila replied, “We know others too, Demon, Kitty, Adam, this guy, called Gooby, Sera, and Shadow.” Jordan gave her a shocked look. “Shadow?.. He doesn’t by chance wield a scythe, does he?” he asked. “Yes, why?” Leila asked suspiciously. “I am afraid I am going to have to take you in. You have the right to remain silent,” Jordan said. “Wha? Whoa! Hey! Don’t do that! Let go of me!” Leila began screaming. Gooby looked at Leila and just followed her not aware they were being arrested due to his loud music.

*In Alcatraz*

“Alright you two, listen up. Tell me everything you know about Shadow.” “I don’t know anything about him, except he has the ability to wield a scythe and kill relentlessly.” “Any relationships with him?” “No…” “Inconclusive… Mappy, Claire, come out here and get some answers out of these two.” A person dressed in red came out with a bat, and the other came out with a doctor’s apparel and had a saw on a belt. “Time to get some answers out of ya’ losers...” said Mappy. “No, no, no… Help me…” Leila whimpered.

*Back at the forest*

“Hm… Nobody is here except for Sera…” *Nudges Sera* Sera opened her eyes and coughed before getting up. “What happened while I was gone Sera?” “I don’t know. I didn’t see anything. What happened to you? You look… A bit more evil…” “It’s nothing to worry about. Sera, I want you to go and find the othe-“ Shadow said before being interrupted by the moans and screams of the insane ones. Hordes of people with lethal weapons and improved arsenal. They began charging and screaming “Die for our pleasure, we need blood!” Sera took out her knife and began charging towards the horde. “Go Shadow, find the others, I’ll hold them off!” She yelled. Shadow looked and nodded, seeing that Sera look like she could handle them. Shadow flew off into a direction and sensed a wave of distress from the direction of where Alcatraz is located. He headed there.

*At Alcatraz*

“Nein. They aren’t budging,” said Claire. “Yeah, they’re freaking stupid. We are screwed,” said Mappy. Jordan looked at them and sighed. “I just don’t get it…” A crash was heard and dust was flying all around. Where the rubble and dust mainly was, a figure was standing there. When the dust cleared out, they saw Shadow. “Shadow… I thought I sealed you away…” “Yes, you did, but in that time, you sent me to the place I originated: hell.” “Hell? You mean the SoulKeeper is…” “Yes.” Jordan pulled out a gun and pointed it at Shadow. “I cannot afford to have you make our situation any worse.” “How could it possibly be worse? Let’s face it cop. Unless we work together, all hope is lost and we will end up losing ourselves to the insane state these corrupt people are in.” Jordan looked shocked and turned to look at Mappy and Claire. They nodded, suggesting teaming with the Devil’s Demon Chamber Elite, who was originally known as the SoulKeeper. “I suppose you will release my comrades now?” Jordan nodded and stuck out his hand. Shadow looked surprised and shook his hand with his as a sign of trust for now. “Anyways, we need to find the others and unite each ot-“ A scream was heard in Shadow’s head, a familiar scream. “Kitty!..” Jordan looked at Shadow and had a confused look on his face. “Who?” “No, nothing. Keep yourselves safe while I attend to help a… very close friend if you may call it that… I will be back.” With that, Shadow flew off into the sky and headed towards where the scream came from.

*In an uncharted island*

Kitty was being beaten by Demon for answers, and Adam kept the device pointed at her so she couldn’t move. “Tell me where Shadow is. He must be killed.” “I will never tell you…” They then poured water on her and electrocuted her. “The pain will only be worse as time progresses. It is in your best interest to tell us everything about him.” “ N… Never…” Demon got his flare gun out and pointed it at her. “Don’t think I will hesitate to use this.” With that, a sound was heard, and a crash was heard. The building ceiling fell to the ground and an enraged Shadow emerged from there. “If you think I will just let you by, torturing the one person I love…” Shadow looked up with brightened red eyes of pure hatred and darkness. “Then you are solely mistaken…” Adam pointed the device at Shadow, and Shadow gripped his hands, broke free of the device, grabbed the device, threw it in the air and burned it by throwing a fireball that emitted from his hand. Adam looked shocked and his eyes became red with black marks in it. “Sharingan…” Adam said. Shadow looked straight into his eyes and stopped. Shadow awoke, being stabbed countless times and could not move. “Game over Shadow,” said Adam. Shadow broke free of the genjutsu and looked into Adam’s eyes. “Wrong move.” Shadow grabbed Adam by the neck, formed a sword of darkness and cut Adam’s head off. Then, he burned the remains of his body, including his head. Shadow slowly turned and looked at Demon. Demon pointed the flare gun at Kitty, and Shadow stopped. He didn’t move. “I have your weakness, submit yourself to me, or the girl dies.” Shadow clenched his fists, looked into Demon’s eyes, and emitted a dark aura. Shadow flew so fast in front of Demon, it was almost as if he teleported in front of him. He punched Demon into the brick wall, rushed in front of him and kicked him in the gut. Demon, coughing blood, shot Shadow with the Flare gun, but Shadow simply took it and used it to his advantage. Shadow used his burning body and grabbed Demon by the neck as well, causing Demon to burst into flames. “You are the worse of them all, and you will die the most miserably…” Shadow punched his fist hard enough into Demon’s chest and pulled out his heart, then other internal organs. Demon, still alive, was losing a lot of blood, while Shadow cracked bones one by one, before taking his sword of darkness and slicing Demon’s head off. He took the soul of Demon and sent it to the cruelest part of hell… “You will suffer for all eternity…” said Shadow. Within that moment, Shadow rushed to Kitty’s side and helped her up. Kitty looked at Shadow and gave a weak smile. “I knew you’d never leave me… I’ll be fine… Just let me take a nap…” With that, Kitty fell sound asleep on Shadow. Shadow looked and for the first time in a long time, smiled with a sense of happiness. Shadow put Kitty on his back and flew back to Alcatraz with a sleeping Kitty.

However, it doesn’t seem like Alcatraz is as empty as it was when he first was there…