The Invasion (Custom Characters)

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  1. Kaylyn

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    Ok, I have been wanting to write a story for a long time, but I didn't know what to write about. I thought about it and decided to make one now. If you want to be apart of the story, please use the format here -->http://itsjerryandharry.com/threads/im-making-a-story-d.26328/#post-283951 be grateful, this will be one of the only things will not use lavender for. (lidia will be my younger sister. k)
    People in this story (main characters)
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    @Leopard_Lover21 as Leo
    @Trollestia as Lidia
    @Shadow_Riolu as Shadow
    @Vaicun as Leila
    @RocWolfTheHunter as Roc
    @Rilakkumaloverr as Rila
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    @ProxKipper as Eli


    Prologue
    It was like any normal day. You wake up, get ready, and go to school. The most hated place on earth. Like every morning, Leo woke up around 6:35, and got ready for the day. Ate breakfast, an went to school. She meet up with her friends Lidia, Shadow, Leila, Eli, and Rila. They were so close of friends. They could tell each other anything. But, they're different ages. Lidia is 11, Shadow is 17, Leila is 16, Rila is 13, and Eli and Leo are 15. "Hey guys." Lidia said as she walked up to Shadow, Eli, Leila, with Leo behind her. "Hey, where's Rila?" Leila said, fixing her shorts. "Eh, she probably woke up late." Shadow relplies. "Haha, like always." Eli adds on, laughing. Right when the bell rings, Rila comes running up. She trips on her shoe and falls to the ground. Leila helps her up while Lidia laughs. They all go to their classrooms. Around 10:00a.m, they all heard a loud boom. Teachers said to stay down, but Leo runs over to Eli. Leo and Eli run for the door. They can see all the people with guns. They get back to the side of the room. The only thing Leo could think of is her friends and family. Mr. Mark says everything will be alright, but then a soldier walks in the room, gun in his hand. Everyone looks at him with fright. "No one move. You are all our slaves. Come with me or be shot on spot." says the soldier. They did as they were told. They walked out of the room with him, not knowing anything. Then, Eli saw it before Leo did, Roc was running through the school. He had Rila, Leila, Lidia, and Shadow was right behind him, holding his sword he always keeps, hitting any soldier that tried to hit Roc. Roc grabs Eli and Leo, pulls them close, and runs out of the school. Still holding everyone but Shadow, they all ran into the forest nearby.
     
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  2. Fawn

    Fawn as if

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    Sounds cool!
     
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  3. Rila

    Rila Pyro is top bae

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    fkjgdifjdu so cool
    moAR
     
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    Awwe ty <3
    It wasn't very good ;-;
     
  5. Trollestia

    Trollestia

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    si
     
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    I was left behind? What happened to the saying "Leave no man behind?" (Kidding, but seriously, good prologue. Did you know I am making a 40k character count for chapter two of mine? Just a heads up. c: )
     
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    I really didn't specify it, but you went in the forest with them haha.. x3
     
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    Shadow_Folf

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    Let me show the part you may want to check:

    Maybe it was just me.
     
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    "they ran into the nearby forest" THEY. :P
     
  10. Shadow_Folf

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    It said But Shadow, so I was sort of confused. >.<
     
  11. Trollestia

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    i actually hate reading o3o but i read dis anyway

    I FIT MYSELF SO WELL >:DDDDYEYSYEYSEYYESYGSHEFPYHWnefpjawpeifhyna[wrgha[wuggahpurgpiasughisg
     
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    Rila Pyro is top bae

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    u so r00f
    when i tripped yOU LAUGHED
     
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    Trollestia

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    <3
     
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    Rila Pyro is top bae

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    i feel so broken <\3
     
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    Trollestia

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    ┻━┻ ︵ヽ(`▭´)ノ︵ ┻━┻
     
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